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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Tsubasa Unabara 2018 Revamp   Fri Aug 10, 2018 3:11 pm




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Basic Information

Name: Tsubasa Unabara
Age: 1000
Titles: Demon Eyes Tsubasa, The Pale Horse of the Unabara. Head of the Unabara Clan.
Marital Status: Divorced
Alignment:Neutral
Affiliation None
Race: Shinigami
Appearance: Known for his eyes that look demonic almost even among Shinigami he's known for his very odd eyes, some people speculate that he was a monster when he was a human and got sent here to torment most people. His blonde hair is messy at times and seems to fall into the path of those demonic orbs that he see's with. He has a very athletic build, making him a fine and fit male. He appears to be in his late twenties at the very best estimate. The clothing he wears tends to change depending on what he's doing. Sometimes he'll wear the clothing of a Shinigami, his kimono when wore is a white kimono with red and black checkered trim around his chest. Above that is a coat worn that has black and gold trim. This makes him stand out a bit more than other people who dress in a more regular way, though the Unabara method seems clear still to those who look upon the male. Most of the Unabara are well aware based on the image when he arrives what his mood is.

It's been many moons since he'd wore himself in a certain way. Tsubasa's image and mental state are often well linked. The enigmatic scientist seems to stay to his lab coat and devices these days. Deciding that perhaps it was time for him to move on from previous clothing lines. No longer bearing his Clan's symbol on his clothing he is now an individual known as Tsubasa Unabara. He's made himself a known man before departing. Seeking to hide and enjoy himself with the time he has now. Deciding that Ibiki's exile meant it was time to step away from fighting. To step away from trying to lead and be a leader wear symbols. This was the conclusion he came to and his clothing reflects it. No longer truly wearing a third of what he did as he moves on. Tsubasa has tended to step away from this world's cold nature. Deciding tinkering and inventing will be more amusing.

Family Matters: Death, the title which was given to the man known as Tsubasa. The name he took shortly after a while, Tsubasa's real name was once Jubei but for some reason, it was changed. Jubei Unabara was the name he originally was given. But the way he acted when he was born was so odd that his parents changed his name at the last moment. Unabara was not a fancy people, but they were decent folks in the Zaraki District. It's here through the Demon was born. Tsubasa's parents came whom to a group of bandits having been slaughtered by their son who was only a couple weeks into his time here. His strength was undeniable, if only they knew what sort of monster was brewing. Tsubasa grew quiet and seemed to be withdrawn from most, he spent days at times focused on sword movements. His clan slowly formed around him, it wasn't known why. Perhaps the mysterious charm was something that few could deny.

Even Damien Crow paid a visit to spar with the young boy whom barely aged beyond his youth. Damien didn't say much on the topic, but he accidentally did something he'd never intended on. His very first pupil was created. The one whom he created may have indeed been the deadliest, not the best for a student. But as a killer, he was very good at the things required of him. The quite charisma of the young Tsubasa became clear to those around him, the Unabara clan was known throughout the Zaraki District. Even during Ringo's injuries, nothing seemed to perplex or bother Tsubasa. For the fact remained that despite Ringo's injuries some cases indicate that Tsubasa was perhaps the greatest member of the Clan's History. Like Damien he founded something, but he unlike Damien did it without doing anything. His powers are considered something that very few have, but he's a balanced killing machine with a lot of miles on his belt. Tsubasa Unabara, the Demon of the Clan. The Pale Horse of the clan, Death.

This Clan has seen it's day and battles as a leader he did nothing but bring about shame. Perhaps this is why he's left behind the visage of such a thing. He isn't fit to be a leader or guide people and his family may not see it. But he clearly witnesses and understands the pretense before him. Tsubasa is no longer the man who willed himself to the front. He no longer emerges to battle people for others. Now his interest is perhaps more selfish. Tsubasa's desire to help others has come to its end. Finding himself more interested in tinkering with devices and swordplay. Practicing the final lesson Musashi left outside of his family. He'd gone through periods of strife and beliefs. It had come time for him to quit that life. His mentor and clan are better without him. Much like the Quincy losing their Emperor this is in effect a better turn. Something attainable for him that doesn't require him to do it anymore. His family though their close is now upon them, it's clear to him he wasn't ready for it all. He couldn't guide Tetsuya or the family in a direction suitable since joining that place.

Personality:

Enigmatic: Somethings are just not things we can understand. Tsubasa's mind and ideas are outside the box these days. He used to be quiet and rather reserved with things. Preferring to take action and let the results speak for themselves. But in doing this it had side effects that made him alienated from those around him. Tsubasa couldn't truly jump in or be someone he was anymore. He couldn't rush to the front and be understood as to why he did it. So in these twilight years, he seems to of lost that quiet edge. Losing much of his familiar ferocity that came. The silent assassin side of him has long since been put to rest. Often times wearing a rather calm smile and seeming to be very relaxed about the world. Tsubasa's altered mental state is partly due to his understanding he can't anymore. The serious side that came from the years of being a killer. It seems to of gone away as he's known to work humming things occasionally. Smiling and often times going out of his way to avoid certain elements.

Perhaps the strangest thing about him is he seems almost at ease in any location. Describing him is something difficult for anyone attempting to do so. Tsubasa just seems like a mirage at times in one place and not really there. Reading him is difficult for even friends who've known him. So far only his mentor has been able to peg him properly. Few others have really made an effort to see beneath the layers. They take one look and think they know him. They see blood stains and the history of his clan. His deeds as a Captain Commander or a man who stood before the war. A man who clashed blades with many foes notable in many names. But they really don't see him the man behind it all. He is just a man perhaps strange and weird in many ways. But legends don't exist in truth only the harsh reality before you. Men can believe what they want too about him. This is, of course, the way this world has always worked. Tsubasa has merely come to terms at last with a sense of helplessness despite his power.

At Peace: Tsubasa's changes have come through trial and tribulations that most would never undergo. He's changed slowly and found a zen state of peace. He sees things in a calm way and has taken to smoking from a Japanese style pipe these days and has found his peace finally. Tsubasa's nature is relaxed and laid back a sense of peace seem's to come to those around him. Though his old ways are still present and he remain's rather quiet unless needed to speak. His enigmatic ways have helped the Gotei 13 more times, but his children have brought the old Shinigami peace. His presence and growth have been things few others would imagine. His peace has brought him to the state of nirvana. Tsubasa's calm wisdom is often applied to most situations where he can provide them. His eyes are much kinder most of the time, but beneath that surface exists the monster within. Tsubasa is still the pale rider if but calmer about the situations around him. He smokes his pipe and normally stay's out of most problems within the world, he feel's he has earned the right to live peacefully. As his family became nobles from farmer's it's been a; the long road that few have the bravery to travel.

Tsubasa's road to prosperity was bathed in blood and sweat. But he's left his family everything he could. Leaving them in the most capable hands he can. This being those of his teacher furthering his peace. Tsubasa decided to leave behind the family he fought for. So often he put himself on the line for them over and over. Be it the Raven's Nest or Yggdrasil. He always tried to do more then he was capable of at his station. Always reaching out to accomplish things as he reached for the stars. Much like Icarus, his wings of wax melted and he came crashing down. The reality was a clear thing for him to accept in the end. Making this entire thing more fo a truth for him to behold. He did not have the power to move a mountain or be the front line anymore. He could only invent and give nudges to the future of those heroes. The Pale Rider had long since left behind that life. This peace was something to be far more everlasting then anything else brought before or after.

Wise:To say Tsubasa is a wise man would be the understatement of the year. Wisdom takes many forms and for him, it's no different, he's created the race known as Shinigami Dolls. They are one of the most dangerous creatures's ever forged as they simply have so much skill to them. The crafting and design of them is a rather interesting path he took, Mayuri created his own child as well. In some ways, it was similar to the way Tsubasa built Tsubaki. She was the first and the oldest of her kind, two hundred years in two weeks. That was the aging process he designed for them specially. It all came together in its own ways, he has shown wisdom in the later years. More then most would ever dream of making him a dangerous and strong warrior without many to call his equal. Tsubasa's grown into something of a wise and understanding warrior. He's loved and lost and gained it all through nothing, he's much on his mind at all times. Everything must come from something, Tsubasa has earned his place of wisdom.

His skills have shown tremendous growth as an inventor rivaling many of the previous ones. Tsubasa's inventions of the Shinigami Doll as a people have provided a boon. But also his creation of a Soul Based A.I have made things far different from previous forms. This A.I is highly intelligent and doesn't run into the issues typical ones would. Tsubasa's considered them a pretty good useful device. Often times relying on inventions when practical skills fail him. Perhaps it was this nosedive that saw the decline of his purity as a swordsman. But it saw growth of a scientist who was sharp. Tsubasa's journey alone has only made him wiser and seen growth. Humility and man things have become very clear to him. He's seen the error of many ways and things he did. Tsubasa couldn't see himself as the man rushing to the front. The one to make a difference every moment something went wrong. It was naive to think he could fix this world when he was only a singular piece.


Relationships

Nistelkov: The friendship between these two is something few are able to comment on, it's strange to think that anyone would consider Tsubasa a friend with his strange nature. Tsubasa is known to be such a hard person to know, but it seems that Nist is one of the few people who are aware of just how great Tsubasa is. Some people do get the wrong read of the situation, though Tsubasa doesn't seem to claim Nist as a rival or any such thing. He seem's to have total faith in his skills. But the relationship with Nist and Tsubasa can be described as simply a mean's to an end by many. Tsubasa is known for his power to draw people to him. The question is, is Nist one of the many draws to the mysterious Tsubasa or perhaps something more. Only time will tell what star Nist was born under.

Damien Crow/Soan: He had a match with the male before, when he was younger. Damien was someone who had trained longer then Tsubasa had ever done. Damien in some ways became a teacher and passed on moves to the young Tsubasa and showed him things that normally one wouldn't teach a young warrior like this man. Damien and him simple crossed blades it wasn't a matter of anything of teaching, the problem was the accelerated learning rate that Tsubasa picked up things. He was able to figure out moves that would take others many years to figure out in a simple day. Tsubasa has a very high rate of learning and understanding it makes him an extremely dangerous warrior. However he has few relationships outside his clan and Nist, this one was simply an accident. Though Damien is aware of how his meddling changes the young swordsman into what he would become later. This fact remains simple Damien without meaning to pass on things to someone else by mistake.

Pestilence Unabara: A blood brother someone Tsubasa looked up to in many ways as his older brother. He took much he learned from him and owed him many things. Tsubasa's prowess and skill surpassed him some time ago, but it was due to his love for his brother. That he did what he did for the punishment, Tsubasa has always worried about his brothers more than anything else. He didn't care about the approval or anything, he was simply protective of his family. It can be surmised that in having to punish Pest, it hurt him in a way few would know. Tsubasa having to punish him tore a hole in his heart that didn't heal till recently. He made promises to never kill or harm his family. Yet here he had to do it to his own brother. In some ways, it fixed the problems of people going against him. If a man will rip off his brother's arm and sentence him to life in the Maggot's Nest. It's hard to imagine what Tsubasa would do to someone he didn't love.

Tsunashi Unabara: His younger brother someone he protected very dearly, he was proud in a way when his brother became War. Sad in a way when his blood relative decided he'd had enough blood. Tsunashi chose a path that Tsubasa just couldn't understand at that point in his life. Love and trust with someone outside of the Unabara just couldn't be fathomed to him. He'd been hurt and betrayed to often to see that happiness as anything more than chains. Tsubasa's point of view did change later after his children came along. Tsunashi's happiness was nice something some people were meant to have. It made him look inward more if he would ever have such a thing. Tsubasa was hardly an attractive catch for a woman, in some ways he was like Yamamoto. But his brother's strength and power to find a woman who accepted and made him better. That was truly all that mattered, Tsubasa has a high level of respect for Tsunashi. For going for his dreams no matter what the cost.

Senso Unabara: Senso Unabara the new War, his brother among riders someone who he does care for. Tsubasa is the older of the two and much like before he takes care of his siblings very closely. Though some things were different, Tsubasa had grown far calmer and in some ways relaxed. He could be a big brother who looked out for not only acted as a cold element of disapproval. Senso is something of a precious new age in Tsubasa's eyes, that one day his son will stand beside guiding them. But for now, everything the Unabara stand far are upon War and Death. The other two still don't exist within the rider's as they've both laid down that mantle. Tsunashi's war ended upon meeting his wife, Pest's ended upon being taken from them. Senso is a new and perhaps stronger war in Tsubasa's eyes. He really does embody the rider far more than the bloodthirsty nature his brother had. Though they all had that, Tsunashi's just simply went to pure homicide. Tsubasa's very proud of Senso and respects him as a brother above all else, a love exists them like it does for all brothers.

Tetsuya Tachibana/Unabara: His adopted son or perhaps he would of been. Tetsuya had been someone Tsubasa saw a future in that quickly fizzled out. His son was too focused on surpassing him or getting out of his shadow. He never focused on his own individual journey to take him. This was perhaps his own failure for being the way he was. Tsubasa didn't understand things that were commonplace. That his son would struggle so much against the idea that his father was something. Or he would fight against his shadow so much to escape it. This in a way was a failure on his part while he cherished his children. Tsubasa perhaps had been too protective of them. Putting a veil over them instead of letting them grow. Wanting to train them personally instead of reaching them. He failed many of his people who joined him. This was perhaps his single most devastating failure as a parent. Proving perhaps Tsubasa should remain the last Unabara by blood. The one to fall before the sands of time came to claim it all. That was the reality he would accept at this point.



Passives

Warriors Focus: Tsubasa's intense training and focus have improved greatly, he's able to see things coming at him and figure out the exact angle they are coming at an intercept with his sword at the speed of sound. Tsubasa's many moves are done while standing still, the focus is a sphere around his person he can tell exactly where something is going to go by looking and focusing in on it. Tsubasa's able to tell if it's a dangerous element coming at his person or something that should be avoided at all costs. The training he's done since the war to improve his focus and mental deduction on such things has been extremely effective. While standing still Tsubasa can move his sword at the speed of sound to deflect or strike targets coming in range. This training has made him an extremely effective fighter in the close range area. Using his focus and skill to tell the exact position an enemy will come in than moving his sword at high speeds to intercept.

Accelerated Learning: No matter how often his mother and father visit the subject he picked things up at such an insane rate. Some people were better than him at some things, but when it came to combat. Tsubasa's mind could grasp things at such a rate that even experienced fighters claimed he was simply a genius. In his youth when the boy appeared around seven or eight he was capable of killing an entire group of twenty men without any training in swordsmanship or Hakuda. It is recalled of them coming home to him covered in blood and no bodies being around. He'd learned at such a quick rate and realized his powers all too quickly, Tsubasa was a rare gem that couldn't be described as anything less than that. His quiet nature that came after the incident seemed to be more calculating than before. He studied things by watching and did them. He truly was a creature all his own among his family, the Unabara Clan wasn't yet known but soon would be.



Radar: Many have claimed this comes at the fault of Damien, Tsubasa through his fight learned how to use a rather strange version of Damien's move. Tsubasa is able to sense things in an instant, be they object or people if they come into a 20-meter range. Hiding or not he is capable of sensing them and pins pointing their location through the electrical energy within the air, using static electricity it allows him to do it even better. This works even greater in the air, he's got this power for the reason of catching those who are hiding from him. However, it also allows him to calculate the exact location of a person and detect them despite how fast they may be moving. Ringo has claimed Tsubasa has eyes in the back of his head due to this, he's capable of the following anyone through this method. Tsubasa is known as the Demon for a reason and without a doubt is considered one of the stronger Shinigami who roams free right now of the Gotei 13.

Master Swordsman: Tsubasa has shown such skill with a sword that many people believe him to be one of the best, his family stated he practiced in the rain for days. Moving slowly through it, going into forms and out of them. He seemed to have a focus that most people didn't have, through this he began gaining skills within the fighting realm of Swordsmanship that many do not have. Tsubasa fights with simple swordsmanship most of the time, however it can be stated among his clan's strange sword styles he's considered a true killer. Tsubasa is capable of doing amazing things with the sword, he's an artist with it and more over. A true killer without equal in his clan at the moment. Tsubasa's pure sword skills make him into a lethal and deadly weapon that can cut through even energy without effort. Tsubasa is known as one of the Unabara's Four Horseman, for this reason, however, he is also their leader. The title of Death is not given out lightly, however, Tsubasa has no interest in titles.

In Tsubasa's hands alone a sword doesn't become anything less than a weapon capable of slaughtering thousands. He's capable of making his weapon feel heavier or lighter on a whim. It's a passive skill due to just the sheer amount of skill the man has with a sword that he is capable of bringing even some true greats down to their knee's. Tsubasa isn't new to the world of fighting and taking things that he wants. Tsubasa's swordsmanship allows him to copy things he see's through his advanced learning of just watching things. It normally takes him a couple posts to figure out a method to do things that shock and wow the people around him. His sword strokes are said to be legendary among even his clan, one stroke of his sword is one paintbrush upon the paper of the Mona Lisa. Tsubasa truly does seem to connect with his weapon very well enjoy the use of a sword over something like his hands. The Unabara Clan's Leader and perhaps one of the greatest Swordsman in generations.


Enhanced Spiritual Pressure: Tsubasa has immense spiritual pressure, to the point he puts shackles on that is hidden beneath his kimono. The shackles are simply used for keeping his immense power in line. Just to make it easier to control. There is no chain between the two shackles, Tsubasa can easily break them when he does decide to fight all out. However Tsubasa's spiritual pressure was so huge when he was a child that he inflicted damage on people and had put up a mental block to prevent himself from using them all, he's decided to keep up the mental wall, he designed it and built it around his Zanpakutō allowing him and it to communicate with one another. He's shown a great deal of skill in his own ways and due to the massive amount of reiatsu he claims to or spoken to his sword when he was but a small child before the event when he slaughtered the group of men. Tsubasa's nature has evolved and changed due to the great amount of pressure he has.

Enhanced Regeneration: Tsubasa is able to restore lost organs and injuries at an extremely high rate, his power within this field makes him a frightening person to deal with. It's never been looked into on what it would actually take to bring him down. Tsubasa is capable of regenerating the limbs on his body in a fairly quick manner. Tsubasa is capable of using this power on other people if he desires. Not this is what makes him an extremely versatile fighter who has many choices when fighting enemies whom he comes across, it's unknown how he does fight with people when he decides to do so. Some people believe Tsubasa is one of the more cunning fighters, the truth is simply that the male whom in many cases are known as simply the Pale Enigma isn't someone one can read or come up with an answer for simple, His body is immune to any poison that it comes across, if he's come across it beforehand his body learns much like him how to adapt around the poison or seal. Tsubasa uses his Nanobots and Electrical powers to achieve the regeneration that he does, each is capable of more.





Kidō/Energ

Binding Tigers: The kido spell designed to create four tigers that come from where ever Tsubasa wishes, these tigers bite into the arms and legs of the person. They can emerge from the ground or come from the air itself, these are a special binding kido that can create more than simply one or two. His special spell he came up with on his own time. These tigers are used for a binding purpose but can be used as offensive Hadō if need be. The tigers which bite into the enemy can be exploded at will, causing a large amount of damage to the target. Tsubasa simply needs to decide if he wishes for the enemy to be blown up on top of everything else. The amount of energy the Tigers explode with is entirely up to him, showing a great amount of control of the kido based element as he trained.

Kido Cuffs: Tsubasa came up with a variation on Damien Crow's move after witnessing it, these cuffs are far more intense than the pair Damien puts on. Like carrying around mountains on your body and energy. These are specially made for those who have reached 0 tier. Tsubasa uses them to teach people and put their bodies in a place they desire them to be. These can hide the energy of those wearing them fairly well and even make it appear they are weaker. These cuffs are much like Damien's invisible but are far more intense. The practice of putting heavier cuffs on the energy of someone is dangerous and isn't something most would do. Tsubasa's method of training with these heavier cuffs is purely for those he can aid in growing stronger. The tier upgrade will be slow, but if the cuffs are worn for five threads improvements will be seen, this depends on the characters strengths physically and spiritually of course


Electric Cage: This is a move that he uses fairly often, it allows him to fight at any place he desires a trap people within and keep those outside of it from fighting. Tsubasa can make the size of his cage miles wide if he wants, he's capable of cutting off a city from the outside at times if he wants. However this takes a tremendous amount of power, the cities size does come into question. He can make it small enough to capture a person within its confines, the power of the electrical cage shocking them into submission, the amount amps can be controlled by him to the point he could quite literally make someone explode from it. He is not limited to making just cages though. He can make walls of electrical energy and hold people back with his power over the power of Lighting. This makes him a strong and dangerous shinigami among the ranks of his race to be feared by many.




Hakuda

Electric Death: Tsubasa is a very skilled fighter within the hand to hand realm unlike most of his clan, he is a capable fighter in both aspects of ranged and close range. Sword or no sword he is capable of using high charges of electrical energy to fry those who get to close, he can imbue his punches with electric energy. This makes him a fatal enemy for anyone whom may come across the males diverse style of fighting. He is capable of creating electrical projectiles and attacks from his body and making them enhance his fists alone. Causing an electrical static field around his knuckles which act as though a device for him to pour amps into when he's fighting an enemy who takes him on in the hand to hand realm of things. Tsubasa considers this style of fighting only one method of doing things, however, the Electric Death is a single dance of a long night to come for those who see it.

Kinetic Fist: Much like his kinetic sword style, Tsubasa is capable of using his hands to perform the same task. This makes him a deadly fighter as he can punch holes in buildings and people with his hands, Tsubasa has shown a tremendous amount of skill with his power to perform hakuda and switch to swordsmanship. Using his bare hands he can blast his kinetic force within the body of a person then it will erupt within the form of the person's body. Tsubasa is a simple fighter and in many cases is considered a simple warrior that many people have seen before, the silent Unabara does scare some of those who are not careful around him. The kinetic fist combined with his electric allow him to kill people in a majority of methods others have yet to come up with. Tsubasa is known for the special skills that he has shown over the years, despite not being a fan of fighting hand to hand he can more then do so when he decides to truly try it shall be an interesting day.

Shunpo

Static Clone: Tsubasa can turn a shunpo clone into static energy leaving behind a special trail of electrical particles he can use for a bigger attack if he wants. Using this gets him out of danger and these particles will stick to whoever touches them, allowing him to use the clone in a way that most people wouldn't have expected, he can heal a friend with this clone. Or use it as an impressive explosion against enemies whom he comes up against. Tsubasa has used this clone before and isn't pleased about having to do so, allowing him to use this clone but once is dangerous as those who are enemies get the particles stuck on them will find out. These particles through small and invisible to most who cannot see electrical particles on such a scale will find out. Tsubasa is capable of creating a small Electrical cage or use his zanpakutos many powers to fight against his enemy, this makes him a very hard fighter to read at times.

Electric Step: A move Tsubasa uses to move just a bit faster than most people whom he encounters that are capable of moving fast. This allows him to move at the that is just a bit beyond Shunpo and Sonido. To say he is capable of doing this with such ease that most of his clan just consider him one of the better killers that have come from the Clan of deadly men. Tsubasa's nature has given form to one other type of shunpo that is rare, perhaps one that the assassins of the 2nd Division would want to see used frequently. Tsubasa is known to be an extremely quick and cunning man, the electric step allows him to use his energy to increase his regular shunpo. This allows him an immense amount of power and movement, he's capable of using this step to create a path of electricity from point A to point B. The step is not one he considers great, there is only one other that Tsubasa keeps for the purpose of allowing him to fight at these remarkable speeds.


Afterimage: Many may end up saying Utsuemi is the highest regard one can make for this. Saying it is in effect an afterimage in its own. Tsubasa's special Hoho allows him to create more than a single use of the technique. Able to use it in rapid fire with his clones and even himself. This permits him to dash through and do things few could accomplish. By moving at such a high speed he is capable of leaving behind shadows and reflections in a sense. Creating a double of himself to take and trick his enemy into believing he's fallen. He is able to create ten of these using his step technique. Allowing him to make use of many of them. While others may be able to perform this skill on their own or even passively. Tsubasa does believe he's created a rather effective means to channel his speed. Utilizing the full force of it and continuing to lay traps and make plans.


Speed

Rajin: This is something Tsubasa found he could accomplish with his unique body type. Tsubasa has always generated high amounts of electricity outside of his energy. His body is much like a highly trained electric eel. Allowing him to control the current and send it through his body. Creating a discharge similar to a taser or higher at times. This perhaps could be accomplished by some other people. Tsubasa's body is able to fire waves of the energy off at an extremely fast pace. Allowing him to speed himself up from the head down to extremely quick speeds. This allows for him to impart some degree of speed increase. Tsubasa's body generates a discharge of electricity when he activates it. Sending sparks crackling on his body. Inside it's going through his nervous system and bloodstreams. Speeding things up and increase the production of his body's insides. Allowing him to think fast and even move quicker. His eyes are also getting a rather effective increase in perception. Able to detect and see things far more clearly distinctively then normal. This effect in his body lasts while he is able to control and release the electricity through his system. Tsubasa's been able to create tornados from his hands similar to those weather makes. Though smaller on the scale as he can create extremely fast cyclone level speeds. Quick thinking and trapping down are the trademarks of this skill that Tsubasa hides within himself.




Soul A.I


Hermes: The second and only other A.I Tsubasa created before handing off Nobunaga to his teacher. This one was designed with a fairly interesting concept in mind. Hermes is linked inside of Tsubasa's spiritual domain. Brought to be one with his very soul and connected inside and out. The two share a link beyond others and Hermes provides detailed scanning. Almost like two people are observing the fight so things can be given greater detail. Hermes doesn't run Tsubasa's equipment or other things. Though he is able to with the processor that Tsubasa built doing it for him. His own A.I is free to utilize what it's truly meant for. Flipstream travel at insane speeds allowing Tsubasa to utilize his powers to the fullest extent. Hermes is able to sense life forms through Tsubasa's electricity and detect them. Giving his wielder a warning while also providing high-speed capture. Giving Tsubasa details on enemies as he moves to check their energy flow. Hermes is able to see and observe the flow of energy at extremely high speeds. Sharing this skill with Tsubasa allows him to see energy strands when hidden. Even allowing him to judge the skill of the attack in greater detail. Now despite this Hermes is limited and can't interact directly with enemies or Tsubasa's other equipment. Those are run by a different progress and set up from the previous one. Making him a functional in a sense he can only perform a small set of actions. Involving Tsubasa himself interacting with him and taking care to inform him of changes. These are scanned through the body as this being is similar to a Zanpakuto spirit or hollow. This doesn't make it quite like a ziamichi as the bridge isn't broken. Tsubasa doesn't gain transformation or further power from it. He's still bound by the same old powers that a shinigami is. He's merely invented his away around a few flaws that bothered him in the long run.





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Zanpakutō Basic Information

Zanpakutō Name: Byakko
Zanpakutō Shikai Name:Inazuma Byakko
Zanpakutō Bankai Name: Byakko Shen
Zanpakutō Shikokai Name: Kami Nishi Byakko
Reiatsu Color: White
Release Command: Feast Byakko
Reiatsu Power: When powering up and unleashing the massive reiatsu within the first couple things that become clear is that the electrical energy around him begins to spark in a savage manner. Tsubasa's calm and cool method of staring at people seem's indicate a deep amount of power he has that sleeps within him. However his electrical power seems to surge all around, those who are unlucky enough to get toasted by the male's reiatsu can claim burns equal to the third degree and beyond. Plus some minor to severe nerve damage that could be a sign of being struck by several amps of lighting. Tsubasa's body is covered in electricity and the massive reiatsu of white lighting that pours around the area is a sign of his absolute strength that Nist has called ruthless. Byakko his Zanpakutō also carries such a ruthless strength that so few can match if he wasn't considered a hero by many. He would be a villain by thousands most likely. The question will always remain why the power he has exists.

Zanpakutō Appearance: Byakko takes the appearance of a large tiger with white fur that seems to be sparking with lightning as his mouth roars like thunder. The creature seems almost alive to the extent that it is a very capable killing machine. Tsubasa and it share a very strange close relationship, one with a little talking in the communication between the two. Byakko has the fierce voice that goes with growing and anger behind it. This Zanpakutō claims to be the mightiest lighting and metal Zanpakutō, though it does acknowledge a few others as worthy enemies. Nist's Zanpakutō to Byakkos words was something he considered a little too close, perhaps because his young master's friend had trouble with a woman. Byakko's nature has become a stern and almost quiet point similar to its master. People do wonder if it was at one point a very outgoing creature which was playing pranks on those around him. His opinion of his master's best friend being an example.


Sealed Power



Static Manipulation: While sealed Tsubasa has shown the power to manipulate the power around his body of the static electricity that is forming around his body and clothing. Tsubasa can only do this for 2 turns while sealed. His powers are limited to manipulation of static electricity while in sealed form. However, the majority of the problem fighting him is his natural power within the realm of electricity.



Raging Rajinto Claw: This is used in sealed form as a technique for Tsubasa to use. He’s already been unconsciously using the technique without realization. He channels a large amount of electricity to his finger controlling the polarity and output he’s able to send massive discharges or blasts. This attack can cut and cause massive damage. Along with frying the nervous system of those hit by it. Tsubasa’s not bound to just use it a singular method as he’s able to output this from his body and send out the information from himself. While controlling this is difficult Tsubasa has gotten into the practice of generating voltages from his fingertips. He is capable of generating roughly in this form one megavolt of electricity at it’s highest. This allows him to do a massive amount of damage to an enemy and add other effects to it if desired. Tsubasa’s capable of using a railgun effect on this attack to speed it up at his enemies. This, of course, makes him a deadly combatant.

Shikai Powers

Lightning Manifestation: He brings the static electricity up to such a level all of a sudden with the activation of his Zanpakutō, the air around him and for several miles quickly shows sign of electricity being built up to a point where if he explodes it. He could level an six or seven city blocks. Tsubasa's electrical generation of the static in the air only causes it to build up, most people aren't aware of it being built up. He's capable of cloaking the build-up from people's eyes till he's ready to release the blast. Tsubasa's Zanpakutō is considered pure destruction in some cases, this makes him a man whom very few can combat without losing limbs. Tsubasa is known to of done many bad deeds during his time in the Soul Society. However, he did things to keep peace within the world around him. His Shikai is considered a destructive weapon that few people can ever fully acknowledge.



Raging Rajinto Roar: Using in shiaki this move is a bit more brutal as Tsubasa creates a field around himself. Using it to fire a massive blast around the area, he is able to make a shockwave of energy. Controlling it or condensing it to a small size or large one. Allowing him to cover a portion of a small city with this alone. While activating this is extremely tiring it’s not empty or without meaning in its own ways. Tsubasa’s capable of producing this attack from anywhere on his body. Changing the polarity of his electricity at will. He’s able to send the voltage back at others when they touch or react to this. While the Roar is active it’s almost like an armor around his body. Capable of shielding him and guarding him against further injury from others. He can wear this lightning army of three megavolts around his body without causing damage. The voltage is clearly visible so people will notice it when worn, but must be careful to avoid contact with him as well. The damage could be severe when activated by him.

Bankai Powers

Lighting Manifestation: Tsubasa can still use the static electricity that he generates passive now. However he's capable of summoning lightning bolts from anywhere he desires, using them sometimes to generate large amounts of lighting that few people have ever seen before. Tsubasa's powers are not perhaps as frightening as some peoples. Tsubasa is capable of using his own body as a Lighting bolt generator, making him able to fire bolts from his hand now. That is simply one point on his body that he has shown the capabilities to fire them from anywhere. However, his lighting bolts are extremely dangerous, inside the electrical energy is pieces of metal that are 2x more explosive than they were in his Shikai at full power. This is why Tsubasa's Bankai is rare, just his normal Bankai power is nearly fatal for those who face him. Tsubasa is considered a demon without an equal among even the people around him.




The Tiger: Tsubasa takes all the metal and electricity in the area and combines them into several tigers, these creatures move at shunpo speeds above his. And are able to inflict high levels of damage, these explosive tigers will reform from most damage. They allow Tsubasa to simply stand still, though Tsubasa admits one other aspect of fighting with them exists that he doesn't use. Nist himself has never laid eyes on the evil that awaits those who push Tsubasa too far. He's known to be able to go a step further than most people would expect of the Leader of the Unabara. But not one enemy has seen the Final Tiger which he claims that none have shown him to be worthy of its immense power. Tsubasa doesn't speak of it too frequently, the makeup of the Tiger he designs will all depend on his enemy. He is perfectly capable of using custom metals that are effective against other races. Tsubasa claims metals exist on all planes of the world, one merely need to look.



Raging Rajinto Blast: This is the bankai move and is something akin to creating an area with special polarity. Tsubasa’s able to change the area around them into a lightning field that conducts high amounts of electricity. Causing it to pour from the skies and area around them in an explosion of massive amounts of voltage. The amounts have not been considered but the entire area is struck from the skies and area around him and those desired to be within the zone. He turns his blade sidewise and calls the storm upon those in the area. These blasts have been known to vaporize things upon contact. Byakko claims they are capable of destroying an entire city when put towards it. This, however, is more of a voice of opinion from a proud tiger. Though within Tsubasa’s hands perhaps some truth lingers into this statement.

Shikokai




Saigo no Tengoku Tora:When this activated his body turns into a tiger-like demon form. His hair turns white as lightning sparks and fangs grow. Along with something like horns coming from his head. While entering into this form Tsubasa's able to layer several Railguns and perform things. Touching his body will cause damage as the electrical discharge. Tsubasa's body has accelerated into a far faster plan of movement. In this mode, he's capable of taking tremendous amounts of punishment as well. But by accelerating his body he is able to move in forms of accelerating his body at unimaginable speeds. By keeping the form of his Shikokai in this small form he's able to fight with devastating effectiveness. If he's in this state for a prolonged period the surrounding area may be destroyed. The zone of destruction is one to two or miles. Tsubasa is able to access and tap into the full potential of Suzaku while in this mode. His body is also able to project light-based attacks as well with his lightning. Suzaku being the blessing he can give out from his kido skill the Cardinal Mark. This marking allows a transformation of a physical nature to happen. But this white demon tiger form is something specialized to Tsubasa.








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Childhood

Like most stories, the beginning is the key to understanding. Tsubasa wasn't born a murderer or an assassin, he was born a happy child. Who was outspoken and kind, however, something did linger in his mind. A voice that called out to him from even his youngest of age. Tsubasa was said to have an I.Q that was so high that to claim him to be a genius alone would be considered a low rating. Tsubasa' strategy and calculating nature seemed to evolve as he watched. His parents remember him being happy and outspoken for many years, despite living within the District of killers, thieves and so on. Tsubasa by all claims was a normal child, until one faithful day where he changed. A group of twenty individuals came to raid his home when his parents were away. Tsubasa's powers were released at this time, Tsubasa claimed that he'd been hiding them for his parent's sake. He wanted them to enjoy an ideal child. But it seemed he couldn't hide it any longer, some people think this was just a sign of how far ahead he was. He formed a mental block by himself and could deconstruct and rebuild it at will. Tsubasa slaughtered the twenty people effortlessly at the age of Eight in appearance. It's known that no bodies were seen, blood stained everything. Tsubasa sat quietly not speaking or smiling.

As his childhood went on his feats of amazing strength only improved, showing signs of his genius from a young age. Tsubasa swore he would protect his family, which for some reason began to grow rapidly. The Unabara Clan an unknown family from the district of vipers. Tsubasa became the Leader of the Clan at a fairly youthful age. His skill and power to lead were astonishing, he said very little to nothing but people did follow and respect him. Tsubasa made his own Zanpakutō when he was only eleven years old. Creating it on his own without help from the Shinigami Academy, making him a rare gem. Tsubasa's feats of strength only continued, he crafted strategies for fighting out numbered and showed his genius intellect more as time went on. As he continued to grow, Tsubasa showed his strength as well he began hiding some of his powers unless he was away from eyes. Designing a place special that hid his reiatsu and allowed him to train his Zanpakutō and his skills. Tsubasa had a great deal of understanding for his Zanpakutō's powers.

His followers only continued to grow, the young child had a way of motivating people at the age of Eleven in appearance. It was around this time he would meet his best friend for many years, Nist and he fought of course. Nist met him at his younger age when he was still fairly young, the two had a matched that took several hours before the conclusion was met that was a draw. Another famous warrior would fight him soon, Damien fought Tsubasa despite his youthful nature. Tsubasa was able to fight as his equal and showed a great deal of cunning, his fast learning rate seemed to only show more as he went on. Tsubasa's strength was becoming something respected to the point people stopped questioning him, he had an unwavering confidence in himself that was something to aspire to for those who didn't know him well enough. Tsubasa's next act would cement him as a child without equal in the terms of his skills. Some compare him to some of the greatest names that are spoken among them.

Tsubasa was getting ready for a war in the North Rukongai with another clan, however, he told his clan and Nist to stay back. Tsubasa took a walk, something he rarely did. His clan was out numbered ten to one and the odds looked bad for anyone who didn't have faith in him. Tsubasa walked through the camp and killed one thousand people without being noticed at any point in time. His name as Death of the Four Horseman was brought forward without any hold by his clan. Tsubasa hasn't created the titles the clan itself decided to name him this. Tsubasa's skills as an assassin are of a master level. Tsubasa does knowledge his Zanpakutō's bankai and other forms are not suitable for such things. Tsubasa had cemented himself firmly as the one his clan would trust no matter what, not one person has doubted him since that day hundreds upon hundreds of years ago. His strength has improved since then and he's been polished even greater then anyone could imagine.

Tsubasa spent the rest of his time as a child training and practicing swordsmanship, learning the art of death while killing from shadows. Tsubasa's skills seemed to only grow and expand as he exited childhood into his teenage years. Most clans were too frightened to fight him, due to his actions the last time. Tsubasa was able to freely engage people as he pleased. But he decided the Unabara clan would stop its fights, for now, he wanted them to prepare for something he sensed would be an issue soon. Tsubasa was looking several hundred, perhaps thousand years ahead. He could tell the clan would need to prepare for what was to come even as a child. His crimson gaze seemed to stretch on forever even among Shinigami. Tsubasa had desired to face the Former Head Captain before he'd passed away. Tsubasa hasn't been all that interested in challenges anymore, he more or less lost a goal he'd set for himself in the future to defeat the former Head Captain Yamamoto some day. That was a goal Tsubasa had but never got to realize.

Teenage

As his youth faded more, Tsubasa showed signs of being a practical and very wise leader for his clan. Expanding when needed too, but also careful about some details. His friendship with Nist seemed to only expand over the years as the two seemed to grow more. Tsubasa wasn't known for his nature of speaking. Even Nist didn't hear more than four words a day sometimes, Tsubasa just wasn't a talking sort. He only spoke when angry it was a strange sort of person to deal with. Tsubasa liked the quiet nature of things and would have enjoyed things to remain that way for him. Tsubasa's strength in battle had been shown, but it was his fierce strength outside that would really prove him as a strong and perhaps great leader of the Unabara Clan. Tsubasa hadn't asked for this, but it was something he'd been given. So he would attend to it as though the sheep of a flock. Tsubasa designed fighting styles and strategies for his clan that made them effective killers.

He also designed policies that some people considered to be amazing thoughts, Tsubasa perhaps one of the few genius people whom may have been an amazing person. Tsubasa is currently capable of speaking all languages within the living world. He's well educated, spending his time studying tactics and things to strengthen his mind and body. He spends days reading books and other days he'll spend outside practicing swordsmanship and philosophy of the sword. Tsubasa is a far deeper person then most would know, his writing is said to be amazing as are the artistic works he is capable of painting. Tsubasa is considered a master of the crafts he decides to touch, the colors and such he can create for a picture are sometimes just amazing. Tsubasa's teenage years were spent studying and growing into a fine man, he is knowledgeable in all subjects. Some people believe that his mind is the most deadly weapon the young man has besides his skill.

Tsubasa and Nist grew more and more in the years they spent, Tsubasa does trust Nist but doesn't show more than he has too. Nist perhaps doesn't know about the strength that Tsubasa's mind has. The only reason is the lack of speech Tsubasa seems to have, he only shows his patience for the ideas that are deserving of it. The Unabara clan soon had a structure that few other clans did and it was built around a fine system. Ringo is one of the younger children who came in after Tsubasa built the system and had aged into an adult. However, his entire clan is fully aware their leader is a genius among the ranks of whatever he decides to do. Tsubasa is a fearless man, capable of doing great things is the claim of his clan. As the teenager seemed to grow and understand things that few others did, he was able to decode some of the harder things to understand and find points of view that very few could argue with. Nist like his friend most likely was growing well, Tsubasa wasn't known to be anything but an elite.

The question was raised if Tsubasa should enter the Shino Academy to test his strength, Tsubasa didn't see a reason to do it. Most Shinigami skills were the second nature to him. He studied them all and attempted to do his best to master them, Tsubasa was an excellent user of Kidō magic and was said to be capable of using any spell he saw upon seeing it just once. His growth as a champion among champions was something few people couldn't help but acknowledge in his clan. Though the question was left to him, what would he do if he went through the Academy of the Shinigami? Tsubasa didn't really care about that sort of thing, he had a fair education on most of the topics they taught and saw little reason to do that. Besides it was his clan's thoughts that often animated the situations around him, however, he pondered about something every once and a while. Tsubasa seemed able to do anything he set his mind to, the male could play the piano as well among his many talents.

Adulthood

As he finally left childhood and had left his mark on the Unabara Clan, he began to set out to impress the rest. Tsubasa has been said to have an intellect near that of Kisuke Urahara's, but Tsubasa does decline this. He's such a fast and quite learner among some of the better members who are around him. Tsubasa's roots as an assassin show often with his fighting style. He seems to keep in mind things like that when dealing with enemies. While he is a talented Kidō and fighter all around, Tsubasa does prefer an up close exchange to that of a long range. He claims it's harder to hold back at a distance then it is up close. He showed this to one enemy who had a group of Menos at a high level attack him. Tsubasa merely shot through them as though they were mere fodder, this allowed him to obliterate the creatures without a second thought. Tsubasa's motives and some people from his past have asked him what he plans to do next with his life.

His artistic skills and creative talents that lay hidden beneath the surface alone are things worth touching on. Tsubasa has studied the works of both Mayuri and Kisuke Urahara closely, taking what he could form both members of the Research and Development, they both are fascinating men in his eyes. Tsubasa finds the skill of each very interesting, one of the divisions he'd pry be capable of leading is the 12th as many people have asked. Tsubasa does what he desires however, this makes him a strong and somewhat dominating man at times. His quiet nature is something that people find hard to grasp, he spends his days now as an adult writing out calculations that most men even Nist cannot understand. Only a select few can follow him, his matured nature has affected his Zanpakutō as both have grown to be powerful and deadly enemies to those who try. Tsubasa has been working on a Manuscript about the way of the warrior, the novel is one he wrote as he got older, it has blossomed into a best seller.

Tsubasa's nature to touch things and understand them makes him a talented inventor by nature. Tsubasa does invent things from time to time, but to doubt his skills as a warrior would be the undoing of those who attempt to fight him. Tsubasa is known to be a strong and cunning fighter now as an adult, his strength of mind has caught up with his massive reiatsu at last. Byakko and he held a special bond above the average bond, but lately, something has been on the mind of the successful Tsubasa. The Human World seems to be in a severe amount of damage from the constant fighting, it bothers him slightly. Tsubasa has settled it to himself, he will fight whomever he must protect the innocent souls. However Tsubasa will do it in his own way, he doesn't care if he becomes a villain in the process. To protect what is important sometimes we dawn the mask of a villain. Tsubasa has accepted it, he doesn't mind looking like the villain if he must for a time. For a mask is but a mask that one dawns.

Tsubasa's genius within Kidō is still growing which some people do find fascinating because he doesn't seem the type to go in for such things. Tsubasa's nature of learning has him an extremely complex fighter that is deceiving to most people who come across him. Tsubasa has strangely enough not joined anyone just yet, he's kept himself off the field of fighting against or for anyone yet. He's been getting ready and setting everything up, his clan isn't aware of what's going on in their leader's mind. Tsubasa has been preparing them for hundreds of years for a single object, the days are drawing near as the genius prepares himself for it. Tsubasa has spent his days as an adult practicing the arts and becoming a very talented young man with many skills as there are stars in the sky. Tsubasa shall only grow more as the journey continues on, it's unlikely the Unabara Prodigy shall ever fall short from the path he has chosen, the only question is what will he do next?

Tsubasa's objective when joining the Gotei as their Twelfth Division Captain was simple. Return fangs a tiger had lost in the Gotei at the time. Joining those in the Captain's meeting he was unveiled as Damien's plan. A figure who could bring violence and success to the Gotei. He made his journey to the Iramasha seeing if they were ready. Voicing his desire to surpass Yamamoto as a Shinigami. Such a naive and childish goal lead him to Australia where he fought. Partaking in the battle against Nami the sister of Mana. It was here he would win a battle hard fought against her. Ibiki, Nis, and Tsubasa held the Golden Coast. It became clear after this he would soon become the Captain Commander. He thought for a moment about the weight of the duty put on his shoulders. The sacred trust he had to take in as he went forward when demons invaded the Gotei. He fought with every ounce of his power and soul. Bringing out his entire being to simply fight them as much as possible. Killing his own men because he lacked control. It was here he tasted his first ascending into a higher state. He attempted to foolishly destroy hell's gates. A mistake that not even Yamamoto would make and it broke his soul. Khala leveled the entire Seireitei and much of the Gotei. This clash within his home brought a clarity to him. That he could not do what he set out to do. His dislike of Zero Division sitting behind and observing. Was sadly a bargain he made with the Soul King.

Save the Gotei with extra healers at the time. Tsubasa named Iriko Crow his successor as Head Captain. He thought at the time it would be the best course of action. How wrong he was when he returned from his duties as the Zero Division's member. He began to see that the world shifted and the Soul Society's world was changing. Iriko leads them and Tsubasa parted to visit the Demon World and meet Inami. His student with whom he shared a bond similar to that of a daughter. She was special to him in more ways then numbers existed to count. But it didn't compare to Ibiki. He and Ibiki held a bond that he wishes he'd not been so broken for. Tsubasa didn't know love or understand that concept. When he marched into the Dark World to handle the creatures and beasts. He came to prevent her troops from losing a life. Using experience from the events of his previous endeavors. Tsubasa settled the world's core without hostility. Bringing it a peaceful closure and ensuring the stability of the Soul Society.

Anger drove him when he got the news down the line while away. His family had been murdered by some demons. This seemed to come as a result of a Shadow Fall member acting out. Tsubasa didn't take much for it at the time and slaughtered hundreds of them. His cold demeanor showed a regression to his youthful Pale Rider. Willing to chastize others for his own failures and did so. He went to the Vanguard so full of himself and making promises. He journeyed to Hawaii and completely got in the way. Tsubasa didn't belong here any further and it became clear. Rebuilding the family with Mirja and Henrex he told himself he did it for the right reasons. This was a selfish desire to establish his family again. Tsubasa would make a choice to finally leave this place having a clash with Stefan in Hueco Mundo before disappearing. Only Stefan knows the events of what happened and since then Tsubasa's been on a journey of discovery. Learning what he was missing from himself.

Putting too much faith in himself and not trusting in others. That was the downfall of Tsubasa as he didn't try to be something else. He simply remained a thorn in the paw of others. This journey of his would need to proceed even further. Though he still tinkered and invented he didn't take part. Tsubasa didn't jump into conflicts or battles anymore. He's lost the will for such endeavors and believes he must stay out of it. Perhaps someday in the future, someone will prove to him he is wrong. This will remain to be seen for the former Pale Rider. He is waiting to part with Despair and perhaps passes her down to Henrex or another. His time as such has long since passed him by. Thoughts of running perhaps a small shop or something of the like has had appeal. Tsubasa's adventure is perhaps not over entirely. But he is willing to see where it goes now. Having lifted the weight on his heart and finally accepted it. Tsubasa's eyes are open for the first time in many years. His emotions feel reconnected at last.


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Special Kido

Cardinal Seal:The spell allows the caster to mark people with a Cardinal Mark. Of one of the Four Directions the fifth being center and the caster. By the casting this spell on someone it engraves it into their being. The spell allows the person with the mark to undergo a special transformation. The effects depend on the person entirely and aren't something you can ascertain. They are completely different from expectation so trying to show would be hard to say. The person who holds the seal must write up their transformation and how it works. These marks are special and may only be cast on five people. The caster must be willing to accept the Center role when putting them. A great deal of power is also required to implant the seal on someone. This isn't a kido done lightly or without considerable measures taken. Only the Unabara's Retainers have them for just such a reason.

Black Coffin Asylum:Upon activating this kido the entire area becomes dark. As walls of black from around Tsubasa and his intended target. Spears and chains bind the box as they are locked inside of the Coffin. Creating a large dome like area capable of taking blows from the outside and inside. Within this space, the caster has control of the effects of this kido. Time is distorted within this Asylum and what seems like days or hours. Can be mere minutes outside of the Asylum. The inside appears like a Roman Gladiator's arena. Around the sides of it spears of onyx color float around in a clockwise motion. These may be shot at his target by his focus or will when desired. However, the true purpose of the Asylum is to allow a true one versus one battle. Tsubasa's invention of this kido doesn't end with merely it. Upon his defeat or ten posts, the Asylum will vanish allowing both parties to exit freely. Now, this can be avoided as people can see the sphere closing around them. If they act fast enough they can dodge being trapped inside of it. Allowing them to be free of its place. This kido uses the power of the level 90 kido Black Coffin into a different form. Thus why it has no number within the kido chart as the kido number 90 has always been Tsubasa's favorite.

Black Coffin Burial:Upon activation Black Chains shoot from the area around the victim. The chains have spikes which lacerate the victim and try to chain them down. As the traditional Black Box forms around the victim. Slowly spears impale from all sides piercing the person as they are struck by this. Avoiding the chains and box are part of the struggle. As the chains have a pulling and gravitational pull on them. When struck the kido ends similar to the effects of one without chant. Destroying or getting around it is fairly simple to those who know how to do kido. By performing it with both hands Tsubasa does show a dark mark around his fingers. If the chains are avoided the user is basically capable of completely negating the effects of this spell. Meaning if they dodge the chains with speed or break them with strength. They will be able to avoid the spell entirely, these chains aren't unbreakable. And the spell level is 90 as this is also an alternate form on the Hadō number 90.




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Susanoo: It's said often that the creation process once it begins truly evolves. By experimenting with Nanobots and using the Izanagi process. It became clear the Nanobots could be used to form a fiber-like skin that was applied through a liquid submerging. The tests indicated that the skin would act as a layer of the skin comfortably. It's capable of absorbing a megaton of force at its peak. This allows it to take the blow instead of the user. Acting as a cocoon for the wearer and protecting them from its effects. The impact is felt but the user isn't physically damaged as the cells take it.

Now on its primary objective, the Susanoo acts as a cellular layer around the skin. Even masking hair and eyes due to the nature of its application. This defense allows it to absorb high impact but also endure high levels of speed. It lets it take the strain off the user's physical body. The cells are capable of absorbing high levels of speed making the strain instead fall on them. While they won't fracture from the speed. Due to their design to take high amounts of endurance.

The second trait which became clear by making these was that the physical body could be strengthed through the skin. By bathing in the solution these are applied in. The user is exposed and letting the skin absorb the nature of them. Allowing these to create and strengthen bone and tissues inside of the body. Making organs and other things far stronger. This allows the user to tap into much greater strength especially with the Izanagi processor equipped with them. The function is increased when tied to it. As they are programmed to work flawlessly with that feature. This trait is by no means limitless but will help in curing and creating new methods to heal the body from merely this container.









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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Tsubasa Unabara 2018 Revamp   Fri Aug 10, 2018 3:19 pm




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The Fool's Sword


Background: This is the journey of life in becoming a Swordsman. There are many births and naive moments in which you encounter the truth. We run away and cower in fear of it even when previous endeavors prove to go nowhere. Styles are things so stationary or practicing a single stance or movement. So often is the time when Tsubasa would go to them or execute them. Never realizing or dreaming that they weren’t needed. That stances and styles and all these things were just information. Just knowledge and skill he could use at the drop of a hat. By learning and understanding the true nature of a sword. By understanding the path and realizing it’s potential. By understanding his own failures and shortcomings. He’s realized the most important thing in his life. Not is stationary, no style remains the same. No technique or sword swing is the same as the last one. No matter how much control you have no two raindrops or snowflakes are identical. Reality comes in and often times displays its fury to those unaware. Techniques and such things are the patterns of growth. They are what mark us as those who’ve grown as mere memories of styles. Kierudo and the Unabara Lotus are merely the Emperor and Empress on this Fool’s journey with a sword. The time to venture out of his home and truly grow has begun. It’s time for him to completely rewrite what it means for Tsubasa Unabara to be a swordsman. What it means for him to attempt and become the world’s greatest swordsman. Nothing else lingers in his mind now as he has awoken and accomplished inner peace on a scale unlike anything before. The Fool’s Journey and Sword Style is born here from understanding and learning. There is no stance or form defining it as it requires none and is simply mastery being shown at the highest level. The Magician, The Priestess, and the Empress and Emperor have been seen. Now the future awaits. Poliro helped him realize this limitation greatly in their combat.


Hierophant:The journey out of what he knew but into something new and familiar at the same time. Tsubasa swings his blade creating feints at times throwing them to catch his enemy off guard. By doing this he moves at an accelerated rateable to produce massive speed and create almost afterimages of his attacks. These aren’t real and won’t harm a person but can confuse a person. With high enough mental deduction or Focus one can detect them. As for the number with his speed and skill he can create up to ten feints at a time. While this does mean his footwork required is excellent and thus it can be used with Hoho. Hierophant was the realization that he could do more with a pure swordplay. Tsubasa’s realization that he could do these things and go outside of the normal became clear. Poliro opened his eyes to how much he’d used other things and gotten away from his core belief. This was truly his awakening thus the name of this technique is Hierophant.

Lovers: This technique is a counter based on fencing that he came up with at a young age. Love filled his heart and he’d been blinded thus leaving it behind. He’d seen it down with a Rapier based weapon finding out it was called a Passata Sotto. This allowed him to realize the blade could be used this way. The movement for this is fast and fluid ducking under an attack through extensive body control. The person is able to avoid the blow and instantly counter an enemy's attack. Now some people may take advantage or use a bait system to catch people. This, of course, is intended also as he learned other Rapier moves from watching. Fleche and Riposting are optional for him in this form. Using skills he learned from his first wife despite the bad memories. He does seem to of grown and come to terms with things by accepting this technique and those attached to it.

Chariot: This doesn’t truly have a form enough to be a technique. But does exist in its own place. He’s able to rapidly spin or move his blade at high speeds. Able to create small wind blasts and other techniques through this. By creating high-speed kinetic force Tsubasa’s able to produce some interesting effects. This is his defensive techniques, in a nutshell, he can use them this way with his blade. Finding different methods to protect himself and fight while staying true to his purest belief of the blade. While wielding it he can thrust it rapidly to chip away an oncoming attack. Other choices exist within the Chariot as he can use it defensively as a blocking or method of deflecting blows. He’s able to lessen power from attacks deflecting them away. Sending them downwards towards the ground without absorbing too much power or strength from his enemies. This, of course, does require skill and technique to pull off for any user who does learn it.

Strength: The first time he stepped away from traditionally using his sword’s power. He realized that he’d made an error completely by trying to be something he wasn’t. Tsubasa was a swordsman and fought as such at all times defending and protecting himself as such. By generating his reishi into his blade he can sound out a super powerful slice of his blade. Able to cut through a lot of objects depending on the blade. He can also defend with this using it to send out an attack as he blocks. This, of course, isn’t ideal in some cases as defending isn’t always a good offense. But it was through much of his growth and understanding he learned what it meant for a swordsman. The blade is a strength both in body and soul. No one thing is complete without the other. Growth is possible through hard work and trials alone not by short cuts or exits.

Hermit: Tsubasa from watching Damien as a their fight progressed understood and learned. That the Unlimited Style was impressive as was its founder and wielder who believed all things were unlimited. This wasn’t, of course, the journey that was meant to take place. By creating an energy signature similar to that of Damien’s. Tsubasa can cut into the third dimension, only creating five of these rifts at a time. They only remain for six posts before they heal and vanish. Coming into contact with them causes damage to the skin and body of someone. They are highly visible as they glow an unnatural bright color. So they aren’t able to be missed and are something that he picked up from a Hermit along his life. The greatest story you could learn was about growing stronger together.

Wheel of Fortune: Turning himself sideways he prepares to fight by removing his vitals from contact. Normally trusting his speed with this technique he goes into thrusting and using extremely fast spins and other attacks. Keeping his katana pointed outwards when having his wakizashi in the free hand. He’s able to become a top of death and create high-velocity spins and knock away attacks. Using reishi he can power it up to deflect or throw away attacks from an area. Using this he could possibly create a toward which would slice someone up upon being struck by it. This technique goes into thrusting and using high-velocity spins and jabs or other means to his enemies to yield the conflict. The Wheel of Fortune is always spinning and it’s landing zone may be unknown to some but he understands now.

Justice: A sheath based technique that relies on extremely fast drawing of his blade. Moving quickly with high levels of body control and acceleration, the user cuts into the enemy or tries to while drawing their blade. Traditionally to practice this the user will assume a stance. Similar to Iaijutsu in the fact it’s entirely counter attack based. Though with enough speed it becomes an attack based technique. Allowing him to quickly dispatch an enemy and resheath his weapon at lightning speeds. He’s been able to cut the tip off a candle and keep the flame lit by relighting it with his sword holding the candle. For this to work control is needed on massive levels along with body control. As this technique focuses on counter attacking and moving forward. On accomplishing what he set out to do and become. This is about mastering the sword and everything with it.

Hanged Man:Based on Chinese Sword fighting this technique or fighting chance that he does go into a quick hit and run tactics. Slashing and piercing where he can with thrusts and other methods. The main skill of the Hanged Man is only used when assumes the position slowly. Moving his frame now as he lowered himself towards the ground and moved the weapon closer to his face. Bringing this closer he shoots forward thrusting outward but never putting himself at risk in range. He’s able to extend the range with his spiritual pressure or even use feints of this. To throw his target off guard as the high paced techniques are special. While doing this he has developed a method of using this only as an offensive move. Basing it off of the Jian was rough to translate into a katana based use. But Tsubasa did make it work and uses fluid swordplay once again in this situation.

Death: Somethings are learned and never forgotten, going back into swordplay and what he knows. Tsubasa has developed or rather a system of basics done to the higher levels. This technique or even just a principal is easy to learn in some cases. When blocking an enemy's blade deflect slightly and sidestep cutting them in a single movement. This was what made him good as a child. Not overwhelming power not relying on fancy forms or beliefs. It was the fundamentals that allowed him to wield a blade. Skills in the basic arts were what let him deal death on such a large scale. It let him grow into the man he was now. While raw power has its uses and purposes in places. Simply showcasing skills and remembering what you learned before. Going back to the fundamentals is always a wise choice and he realized it finally. That his knowledge and skill were put to waste by ignoring them so much.

Temperance: Embracing what it means to wield two blades as an Ambidextrous warrior. He points the smaller blade at his enemy's face and raises the larger one by his face where his sideburns would be located. Using the small sword for defense and following up with the large sword to land a blow. And follow up blows was traditionally the idea behind this. Tsubasa often times would draw things out not drawing both swords right away. Taking his time to understand and grasp his enemy's fighting strength. This, of course, was something he believed now to be a misjudgment on his part. Warriors should fight with everything they have and showcase the best of themselves. Lacking or taking away from your blade is dishonorable. It’s something he’s come to learn in time. Drawing the blade like this has allowed him to fight and change his enemies expectations sometimes. By using this as a feint or maybe even a real one many possible outcomes exist.

Devil: By accepting what is a common factor he can also use his blades in this way to cut energy. It doesn’t matter the type of energy if strong enough he can slice through it. By slicing through the structure of the energy itself. He cuts on a level that is extremely small and allows him to access some practical use. When swinging his sword this is useful for fighting against kido and other things. But something else becomes clear, his sword specializes in cutting through reishi and armor in this phase. By creating an energy around his blade that specializes in piercing and slicing at different frequencies. Tsubasa is able to shred armor but not by damaging it. The energy sends waves through the armor cutting the person up who is inside of it. He’s able to do this by having his sword meet another. But it does require preparation and takes some time for him to perform. He can only do this four times a thread due to enemies generally catching on to his actions.

Tower: By tapping into his skill he is able to perform a cut using either his katana or both weapons. When slicing the cuts with such tremendous strength that it delivers a huge amount of force. Tsubasa’s blade delivers a megaton of force along. It’s not through muscle or sheer power alone either. Skill is what makes this happen, it’s his skill to create and innovate how he swings the blade. By controlling his breathing he is able to release a massive blow with his sword alone. The swing isn’t nor does it have any true openings to it. This is what it means to practice with a relentless desire for a precise answer to it. By embracing the wolf’s answer you can find yourself a truth. Find someone or something to push beyond the fathoming of a reach. Focusing and locating the truth in a single swing of the sword. By using this power he can destroy attacks often sending them back at his enemies.



Shunko


Perfected Shunko: Tsubasa had learned how to wield this skill in order to become a better fighter. Using it with his blade and combine the might of Zanjutsu and kido. He never did figure it out till much later in life. Tsubasa's shunko is much like his reishi and other things. Its strength is destructive as shown when used as just a blade. Tsubasa is capable of using it several ways and has a fine-tuned control of his shunko. He has figured out the circulation of energy and found himself capable. Things of this nature are easy and he's even figured out a technique within his element. The Lightning based Shunko that covers his body allows him to take punishment on a greater scale. It also allows him to be fiercer with his attacks. Able to dish out greater destructive force. However, he notes using it isn't exactly something he prefers to do. Tsubasa prefers to fight without going all out when possible and considers Shunko admission of such. But has decided to use this only when absolutely needed much like his secret equipment. He's kept his mastery over Shunko quiet so as not to draw attention. Tsubasa is quietly preparing for a confrontation with those he must. Things will not be so simple this time as children aren't the enemy they face. Tsubasa's shunko is indeed mighty and capable of many things. But as he's only just gotten the hang of it, he can only use it's technique three times.



Shunko Form Tiger Mode: It took some time and effort for him to unlock the final stage of his Shunko. While Tsubasa’s element of lightning was of little shock this hollow like form was unexpected. His skin becomes pale white with black marks on his skin similar to stripes. These allow him to pour the excess amount of Shunko coming from his skin out more securely. His nails become claws and his teeth into sharp tiger teeth. The eyes turn into a black color before opening a gold tiger eye in the center. This transformation requires him to really undergo some discomfort. The infusion of Shunko through the inside of his body and going through the ports. Tsubasa’s body is able to withstand it but this brings out a far more savage side of him. The area around him is dangerous and considered a high voltage area. The effects of this form linger for a while making it dangerous to enter without proper dampening. The energy coming off him is very hollow like in this form. Making it a harder thing to realize. Risks to this form are injuring himself through sustained usage. He could become trapped like unable to turn it off and become something else entirely. The benefits of it are simply increased physical attributes. His lightning and shunko powers are also dramatically increased. Ten turns are how long he can last depending on energy remaining.










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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Tsubasa Unabara 2018 Revamp   Wed Aug 15, 2018 1:52 am

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    LIGHTNING OR METAL. YOU'RE REALLY GOING TO NEED TO CHOOSE ONE TO SPECIALIZE IN, AND THE OTHER WILL BE MUCH WEAKER
    NO CUTTING MOLECULES
    NO GRAVITY
    NO SHADOW AT ALL, YOU ALREADY HAVE WAY TOO MUCH GOING ON IN THIS APP
    SUPREMELY UNCERTAIN AS TO WHAT YOUR INTENTIONS FOR THESE ABILITIES THAT UTILIZE KINETIC ENERGY ARE
    YOU HAVE A PLETHORA OF BOOSTS THAT DO THE SAME THING, THESE DON'T STACK
    STOP WRITING THINGS THAT HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH YOUR ABILITIES IN THEIR DESCRIPTIONS, (SUCH AS NIST HAS NEVER SEEN THIS)


    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Electric Control: One of the reasons why Tsubasa was capable of killing people was he had the power to generate enough Amps to equal near 18 lightning strikes. He could cause people to explode if they weren't careful. He doesn't care for hand to hand and has a harder time with it these days. Making a person simply explode is a tough trick, Tsubasa doesn't have the power to do this very often and tries to avoid doing it when he can. After all most swordsman prefer to fight with their hands. It's something of a matter of pride that comes from being a warrior such as himself. Tsubasa has shown many talents within his manipulation and generation of electrical energy. It's been guessed at what limits he may have, but the truth of the matter is that he is an extremely powerful warrior and is hard to say what limits if any exist for him. Tsubasa has shown his electrical powers to be able to do many things, healing himself is something he's shown to be capable of.

    No healing, move this to sealed power, not just a passive

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Metal Control: He can do many things with the metal objects around him, from turning Iron into Mercury with transmutation of the metal. He's capable of bringing metal from the earth forward from whatever minerals that are at his access. Tsubasa's control over the metal around him some people believe to be an odd thing, using the combination of it with his electrical powers shows a rare site that few people can come up with an answer for. He's capable of forming spears and many weapons with metal made of almost any martial that can be thought of. So long as it exists within the realm of metal he's capable of producing something that most people cannot handle without having an extreme problem. He's able to make Railgun's with the metal he gets his hands on, however, he can go far faster then what the average railgun can when his Zanpakutō is released. His full extent of control in this hasn't been seen. Tsubasa tends to hold his metal powers back when fighting. The reasoning for this is unknown to all who know him well enough.

    No changing metals into other metals, and this would need to be in release

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Fading: Tsubasa has shown a rather special power, this one is strange to many. Those on tier with him are able to detect him as are those above him. However Tsubasa's presence tends to disappear from time to time, it's got a time lapse though people do get used to his lack of being in the area. He doesn't tend to be bothered when they see him. This move is something he uses to avoid fighting weaklings or to simply kill them and be done with it. It's something Tsubasa's personality and movements of how he carries himself have given birth too. Though those who look for him and know him are fairly immune to it. The enemies who do not know him are in for a treat when this man wanders into their territory seeking blood. Tsubasa has shown the great strength to do this and remain unseen by most, this power, however, does stop working after 30 minutes. (30 posts) This is simply something those new to him must beware.

    You can't just fade completely from perception, limit this to something along the lines of being very hard to detect

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Enhanced Speed: Tsubasa has a naturally increased speed that most people are aware of, his electrical powers enhance his vitals better then what one would expect. However, his passive powers make him an extremely deadly person to manage. Tsubasa has shown great speed, some people believe he can exceed the fastest paces set by other people. Tsubasa just knows where to move before the other guy which allows him to act. This isn't saying he is the fastest or the greatest in speed. Tsubasa can keep up with fair amounts of fast people without breaking a sweat. His speed is naturally increased by one, meaning if he's an adept he's truly an Advanced. Tsubasa specializes in fighting people in a physical method but is capable of using his energy in a way that few people can match. Now this power doesn't mean Tsubasa is a GM if he is a Master in Speed, Tsubasa simple is capable of showing a great deal of speed that even Ringo acknowledges him as a quick person.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Enhanced Strength: Similar to his great power as a fighter in this way, Tsubasa is equally strong as he is fast. If he's an Adept in strength, he truly is an Advanced. Making him a strong man able to perform some very massive if not extremely deadly powers that are capable of doing things that most people could only dream of. His natural strength and speed make him an exceptional killer when he is dealing with people, Tsubasa has shown a great deal of strength at times, throwing away people that are three to four sizes larger and more muscular then he is. Tsubasa's strength, however, cannot go past Master into GM. He is, however, a very strong man capable of fighting against some of the better people who challenge him as a warrior. Tsubasa has few holes in his warrior's method, using the electrical energy he is able to have given him a far greater offense and defense than most would expect from one his age. And with his learning powers, he's never to be treated as a child.

    This is in no way acceptable. Your skills are what they say on the skillsheet.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Killer Intent This is a power that Tsubasa has shown time and time again, not knowing that the clan had the power of it. Though it's only through tragic means this power is brought forward, for Tsubasa it was the murder of his sister that allowed him. For his daughter, she has her own reasons she can use it. Each person bears the weight of a guilt to use this move, they never move forward or backward at times. But in truth, this power is a fierce one, by giving off an aura unlike any reishi or spiritual pressure ever felt. The user is capable of producing an intent to kill that is so real that enemies will feel as though they've been stabbed just in your presence, how this works is the aura comes from their reiatsu and being. So far only two strong users have been produced capable of doing this. The stronger your mental deduction the more powerful the effect of this power. It uses your own power to see against you, making you see more the wiser you are. Though this move still effects's those of an unwise nature. Some are used to the aura of killing that it doesn't rattle them, being stabbed or hit is simply a matter of life. Tsubasa's aura is several times stronger than most due to the traumatic life he's lead. Those of a weak constitution can barely stand next to him when the move is activated. This is a blood release power that they have obtained through suffering.

    Reverse this, higher mental deduction will grant more resistance not less.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    The Tiger's Mirror: This is the last kido Tsubasa developed, it's a mirror-based kido that creates a defensive barrier. Something capable of absorbing the impact of energy based attacks and fire them back on the person. The max amount of kido mirrors are up to four, the blast can be reflected through them and hitting a target. Tsubasa's many methods of fighting developed more after he built this move, training himself endlessly. The power he created with all this was developed for the single purpose of training himself to insane levels, Tsubasa's mirror kido is something fairly rare using the idea of Danku and taking it to the next level. The mirror kido can reflect other kido and bounce them off all the way up to 99 allowing him a great deal of control and freedom with them. Each mirror takes a single turn for one mirror to form than vice versa. If an attack is absorbed by one mirror and no others are made it takes two turns to fire. One to absorb the next to fire it, this is not an instantaneous effect unless two or more are present. The kido are absorbed through their energy into the mirror and put back out after a one turn delay. It is after this juncture that the kido spell comes out redirected at his foe from the mirror absorbed or another. They are very easy to break as any form of physical damage will destroy them. This is a simple fact of the matter. Now a powerful enough spell can overwhelm them if the person overpowers the mirror with the spell it will not absorb or cancel the effect. Overwhelming it will require an immense amount of energy and power shot at it.

    Limit this to one mirror, kido above 90 would be EXCEPTIONALLY difficult to block, let alone reflect

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Lighting Armor: By using this he is able to accelerate the healing he has by spinning electric energy around his body at such an intensity that he begins to rapidly recover, using the lighting armor though it does have other effects. By covering his body in this he is able to increase his destructive powers into a whole no realm of power that most couldn't begin to fathom even if they tried, the power he taps into when using this is said to be the reason he kills without his Zanpakutō at times. The Lighting armor drastically increases his power, speed, and healing capabilities into a new realm of being. The drastic power and speed increases are used in a way that makes him a deadly weapon, his shunpo is one of the few things upgraded due to this. However, the Lighting Armor is something he activates on rare fights. Nist has seen this move and commented that its power makes him a formidable enemy to come across when dealing with the power he brings.

    This just wouldn't heal you at all, I'm not sure what you were going for.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Pure Lighting: Now this is a rare talent that he has, due to his deep understanding of the elements before him. Tsubasa is capable of turning into lighting at a whim. The power to become Light has made Tsubasa easily one of the more dead people when he comes in, he can turn himself into a simple lightning bolt. Or perhaps a storm coming in. But Tsubasa is known for entering fights by striking down on his enemy as a lightning bolt, the responding explosion of his radius is said to be fierce enough to defeat most enemies outright. Tsubasa uses the lighting transformation as a simple means of travel, he does acknowledge that doing it during a fight is rather annoying. But he is capable of doing it, when he does this his energy trail disappears for most. Meaning they must weight for him to strike as an electrical current or lightning bolt. Tsubasa cannot do this when he's low on power, this move is something done easily when lots of power are around him.

    You can't turn into light.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Railgun: Though this is weaker than the one used by his Zanpakutō this Railgun allows him to take metal from the surrounding area and make it into a weapon of such strength that few people are capable of doing things about it. Tsubasa is known to be an intense killer when it comes to things, he can use the railgun to fire metal projectiles with spiritual pressure across a city, the size and amount of damage he does are all depending on the spread he decides to make with the power in his possession. Railgun is a special spell that is known to be active within his world of magnetic and electrical that seems to go on forever. Tsubasa is capable smart and seems to be a firefighter when comes down to the process of using this, he doesn't need directions on contact with the object to do this. He is capable of performing it while away from it if he does so desire, Tsubasa's powers are said to be the top echelon of his clan. The Unabara Clan's fatal flawless leader is a deadly man indeed.

    You need to specify exactly how far this extends and not say that it goes on forever

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Presence Shunpo: This is a special move some others may be able to read it, but during the time where his presence is harder to detect he is capable of using. The shunpo is used within that time limit and not after, for its effectiveness will wear off. This shunpo will allow him to close the distance and easily come into contact with someone. Tsubasa is a killer and this step is one he uses to play his games with a person. It has no sound when moving and leaves no trail or anything for someone to follow. Tsubasa isn't considered a shunpo Master by any means of the word. His realm of fighting is simply put a dangerous world that few can play in without being extremely careful. Tsubasa has been called a trump card, a demon, perhaps one of the few men who are good enough to be a true killer of the realm of silence when it comes down to how good he is at sneaking up on people and killing them. This step is simply a means to an end for the talented Shinigami Tsubasa of the Unabara.

    Differentiate this from being basically teleportation

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Recharge: Tsubasa can feed of electrical power in the air or area, to restore his reiatsu and damaged body at the same time. Grant it, he requires a vast amount to do a major healing such as organs that may have been broken, his heart or something like that. He uses this fight for long periods and with his powers in tow Tsubasa is known to be one of the better warriors when it comes to fighting for a longer period of time. This has been seen a few times by his clan where he will simply absorb a large amount of static electricity and move on to fight the next enemy. But Tsubasa does dislike using this and claims it's rather annoying for him to recharge like this. But it's something that must do from time to time. Tsubasa is considered one of the few people whom simply have enough power to get by on what he is doing with his strength. Tsubasa uses this near the end of the fight or after so he may remain useful to his allies around him, Tsubasa and his clan are considered long-term fighters after all.

    This can only restore energy, and to a limited amount.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Nano Bots: These are special bots that reside within the body of Tsubasa, these can construct broken things within him these bots are special things that Tsubasa has been given after some travels. They are generated naturally and are small until he uses them for something more then what they appear. They can easily slip across the battlefield and provide him with data and information, some people believe these are useless for they can only heal the broken body of their leader so long as electric is nearby. Now the other use of these fine weapons is that he is capable of having them invade a person's body, they will begin to deconstruct the within of a person and silently do damage to a person without leaving much of a trace. Tsubasa reserves this for people who regenerate, the bots are able to blend in with blood and things like that. Each bot multiples when given some electrical energy, the number is depending on the energy provided to the creatures he controls.

    You need to rework this completely and it'll be looked at again. I don't know where to start.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Static Manipulation: While sealed Tsubasa has shown the power to manipulate the power around his body of the static electricity that is forming around his body and clothing. However, their is more to it than that, Tsubasa is capable of making parts of his body disappear and reappear. This method doesn't bother him or seem to cause pain, by doing this he's messing with his body on the electromagnetic realm of things, however, he can only do it for a short time. Even when in Shikai and bankai his time limit while doing this does come up. Tsubasa can only do this for 2 turns while sealed. His powers are limited to manipulation of static electricity while in sealed form. However, the majority of the problem fighting him is his natural power within the realm of electricity. The static manipulation allows him simply to erase his a piece of his body for a set turn. This only works against Energy based attacks, physical attacks may still strike him.

    You can't make body parts disappear using electromagnetic manipulation, even if just in regards to energy attacks. Describe this in a different way.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Static Bomb: This is a move that he is capable of doing, that most cannot see when it comes. For he can from the explosion around just about anything, depending on the amount of static electricity that he has built up. Tsubasa can cause minor to major explosions, some people believe he could do it even inside the body of an enemy while this is possible, if he uses his static clone to do it. Tsubasa could create quite a sizable explosion and take out many people. The size of the explosion he creates is based solely on the amount of static electricity he builds upon a person. He can use several means to do it, however setting them up with a ton from his clone is one method he enjoys the most. This allows him the power to get living bombs made on the spot. Tsubasa is a strange man, some people believe his close range fighting style is the only thing he has. But his Zanpakutō practices a melding of both.

    This needs to be rewritten so that it can actually be parsed. Not sure exactly what this is capable of. I also don't see how you could possibly use static electricity to make explosions INSIDE of another's body

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Static Manifestation: He brings the static electricity up to such a level all of a sudden with the activation of his Zanpakutō, the air around him and for several miles quickly shows sign of electricity being built up to a point where if he explodes it. He could level an six or seven city blocks. Tsubasa's electrical generation of the static in the air only causes it to build up, most people aren't aware of it being built up. He's capable of cloaking the build up from people's eyes till he's ready to release the blast. Tsubasa's Zanpakutō is considered pure destruction in some cases, this makes him a man whom very few can combat without losing limbs. Tsubasa is known to of done many bad deeds during his time in the Soul Society. However, he did things to keep peace within the world around him. His Shikai is considered a destructive weapon that few people can ever fully acknowledge.

    Literally everyone would be aware that this was going on

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    Metal Manifestation: Tsubasa's Zanpakutō generates metal around him, causing different kinds of metal to form. This power is rare and highly useful for him, he can turn it off or on as he pleases. The metal he forms can be of any makeup or kind, his Zanpakutō simply needs to touch a piece of metal to create it. Tsubasa rarely uses his mental powers as he states that few dogs are worthy of having their barks answered. However, his power to manifest metal in the air around him is something that builds up to what Tsubasa is capable of doing with both powers that he rarely does. Even his best friend hasn't seen him activate his full power, Tsubasa didn't do it when they fought for a simple reason. Why would the desire to kill a friend? Simply put Tsubasa saw no purpose in it and kept hidden his metal powers. The manifesting of the metal can be said to seem like small bits of metal begin forming from his reiatsu, mixing with the electricity that he is generating.

    Describe the maximum amount of metal that can be generated in this way

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    Electric Metal Railgun: Something that comes out very rarely, he doesn't do it for just anyone. Tsubasa turns the metal in the air he has generated and combines it with electricity to the point each piece is explosive enough that if it hits someone. It's like to have enough impact to blow away their entire body. Tsubasa is capable of controlling and shooting these shots from anywhere, he's considered to be in some cases one of the strongest ranged fighters in existence by his clan. Tsubasa considers this merely a warm up. Because just shooting it is stage one, he is capable of forming the metal and electric around his Zanpakutō and can do strange things with it. For example, one point in his life when Tsubasa got serious, he stuck his sword in the ground. It came out from behind the man he was fighting and stabbed him in the back straight through, the blade exploded on impact. Causing massive damage, Tsubasa is a killer without equal in some cases.

    Describe in more depth how this would effect enemies of differing tiers and constitutions. Don't say it is capable of strange things, explicitly state in what manner this ability can operate.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Max Power Shikai: Due to Tsubasa's nature he and Byakko have formed a way to hold back, however upon going all out in Shikai. Tsubasa is known for having so much electricity and metal in the air that he could blow up a city. Tsubasa generally holds back due to his way of fighting requiring some form of quiet that few people can do. But upon activating this he acknowledges that quiet is no longer an option. He's kept this hidden from Nist, only because he didn't wish to fight to kill his friend. Tsubasa had so few of them to begin with when this mode is activated. Static electricity in the air has built to the point that Tsubasa's very body is generating so much that he is capable of killing most people. However, it opens up his angles of attack to anywhere and everywhere. Tsubasa is known to make up moves on the spot during combat with some people. Max Power Shikai has only but used twice in his life. Byakko and he found the people amusing enough to go Bankai.

    You haven't explained what this does at all

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Byakko no Tsubaki: The final move his Zanpakutō spirit wanted to teach him, it's a move usable in all of his sword's forms. Yet something connected to his sister and so his personality wouldn't accept it. Finally after years of denying the fate of what he had done. Tsubasa had accepted it thus was able to learn the Byakko no Tsubaki. This move is a lighting and metal moveable to be used with either one, it allows him to create a fast extending blade from his Zanpakutō, unlike Gin, however, this blade can change directions and explodes when it makes contact with the person it's aimed at. The speed and force of the blade are something very fierce. Tsubasa was known to of worked on this fairly often, the move isn't something special to most but to him it means a lot. As it reminds him of his sister that he killed. The extending hand that reached for the heaven yet died trying. Tsubasa has since accepted his failure in stride and settled to become much stronger as the leader.

    No, this isn't allowed

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Plasma Generation: A skill Tsubasa learned from sometime ago, he is capable of doing this only within his Shikokai the power of this allows him to generate Plasma pure electrical plasma as his weapon now. The change of his plasma based energy allows him to do quite a bit as a warrior, changing the lighting into this causes massive damage as the Plasma can be generated to the point that he can easily take down large groups, this plasma aura and energy generated by him is acting as a shield for the duration of his Shikokai those who come close to try and fight will find themselves if they are hit by the Shikokai's power erased from existence itself. They would have to take a huge amount of it in to have this happen, but he has incinerated a person with this as well.

    This is in no way acceptable.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Living Metal: Within Shikokai the Metal is now alive and the Zanpakutō is moving it and acting on it's own accord. However it's possible for Tsubasa to control it as well, the field of created metal is larger now. Covering a hundred mile radius making his metal very dangerous. The explosions are the least of the problems as the smallest amount of the dust like metal created by his Shikokai is capable of leveling a city street. The damage and dangerous nature of the combined power that he and his Zanpakutō share are truly fierce making them a deadly combination. However Tsubasa sports more power and strength then previously stated as he has found a way into the deeper power. Tsubasa's fierce tiger nature is something that came up. The Metal can be any kind making it very useful power as it combines with his Plasma Generation that he has created. Using the metal as he did previously with the Railgun. Now it's far faster and more deadly then one could imagine.

    If you decide to specialize in lightning over metal just remove this entirely. If not then it needs to be changed to act upon a much smaller area, and the power needs to be reduced.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Byakko Unlimited: This is an aura and armor that is created along his sword, creating his appearance as that of a tiger sparking electrical energy of Plasma burning away the existence of things that were too weak to withstand the power that he brought. His combined strength with that of his Zanpakutō. Tsubasa and Byakko's incredible bond is one that is extremely powerful. Among his house it's rare that he obtained the power that only so few would do. Tsubasa's connection with Byakko in this form is said to be at it's fullest extent here. The two share a body almost like that of someone standing right within the other. For this Tsubasa and Byakko fight as a singular being, making their fierce roar felt across the battle. Tsubasa's Speed and Strength are drastically increased for the duration of his Shikokai. If Advanced his Strength is shot to Master and if at Master it's closer to the Grand Master.

    The electrical power seems to have enough to suck in other sources of electricity or rather show little to no effect from them. This final truth from him and Byakko is the show of a bond forged by these two since the days that came from the years that have had been spent putting in the deadly fight that has come from the bond only a swordsman can have with his Zanpakutō. Tsubasa's fierce nature is shown more as his hair has changed to White and his eyes cat like with a red glow. This final form of Tsubasa is one that is used so rarely that even Nis his only friend has never seen Tsubasa truly fight out the battle that people would be expecting from him. The Tiger that awaits known simply as the Final Tiger is generated from this form as well. Creating a Plasma and Metal fueled creature that runs and attacks from behind the attacks of the wielder. So when Tsubasa swing's his Zanpakutō a plasma claw with metal claw's will swipe from the direction Tsubasa didn't attack. The Truth of the Tiger awaits those who wish to see it.

    Remove the references to plasma. Yes, lightning is a plasma, but plasma is not specifically lightning. Stating that you simply increase to the next tier, or even close, isn't ok here when we're talking GM

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Byakko no Tsubaki: The final move his Zanpakutō spirit waited to teach him, it's a move usable in all of his sword's forms. Yet something connected to his sister and so his personality wouldn't accept it. Finally after years of denying the fate of what he had done. Tsubasa had accepted it thus was able to learn the Byakko no Tsubaki. This move is a lighting and metal move able to be used with either one, it allows him to create a fast extending blade from his Zanpakutō, unlike Gin however this blade can change directions and explodes when it makes contact with the person it's aimed at. The speed and force of the blade is something very fierce. Tsubasa was known to of worked on this fairly often, the move isn't something special to most but to him it means alot. As it reminds him of his sister that he killed. The extending hand that reached for the heaven yet died trying. Tsubasa has since accepted his failure in stride and settled to become much stronger as the leader.

    Again, just remove this please

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Saigo no Tengoku Tora:When this activated his body turns into a tiger-like demon form. His hair turns white as lightning sparks and fangs grow. Along with something like horns coming from his head. While entering into this form Tsubasa's able to layer several Railguns and perform things. Touching his body will cause damage as the electrical discharge. Tsubasa's body has accelerated into a far faster plan of movement. In this mode, he's capable of taking tremendous amounts of punishment as well. But by accelerating his body he is able to move in forms of accelerating his body at unimaginable speeds. By keeping the form of his Shikokai in this small form he's able to fight with devastating effectiveness. If he's in this state for a prolonged period the surrounding area may be destroyed. The zone of destruction is one to two or miles. Tsubasa is able to access and tap into the full potential of Suzaku while in this mode. His body is also able to project light-based attacks as well with his lightning.

    Describe "things". Also I have no clue what Suzaku is.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Horseman Blessing: Death's Presence: Most assassins learn the skill to disappear, but to erase their existence from the very planes of this world and reappear when desired. This is the skill Death has mastered and appears only to reap the living, this power is shown in different levels. But the power allows the user to completely avoid radars of all kinds, they simply vanish in a way that makes them undetectable. This only functions of course if they aren't seen, if the use is seen this is gone. Death is known for his being almost never being there for long. This lasts till action is taken, radars and such will detect them the moment they take action. They can still use this effectively and attack however quickly after it. Assassin training combined with Death's Presence can be very effective. Those who follow the Way of Death are invisible killers, born to slay without mercy. The level of stealth each member has from training isn't something that can be gained easily. There are people who can detect this though the means are extremely rare, they would need something can detect across the planes. Even then it's not a sure kill, some including Yoruichi herself have been proven capable of reacting to it despite being a flawless approach. This can be used again after a seven-post cool down, however, the user must stop attacking and become passive till they desire to reveal themselves.

    Time Limit: Seven Posts

    You can not become undetectable, change this so that he is hidden well, but not completely gone to any kind of radar or senses.

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    Second Form:The Defensive Form known for it's absolute defense. While the word absolute is used it's not really all that impressive. Users are taught to create a three hundred and sixty-degree sphere around them. By doing this they are taught to defend within that area. Not sudden movements, they are taught to waste nothing. The movements are precise and conserve energy, the specialty of this style is to conserve your energy. By teaching the wielder to shrug off monster blows. They become capable fighters able to endure an insane amount of fights. But the Second Form Preaches good Footwork as much as Bladework. The Second Form is said to be one of the harder ones for people to master. Counter Attacking and Defensive Forms are all that are present in this form. Mastering the aspects of the Blade are perhaps one of the few things that make a wielder more dangerous than one could imagine.

    Please just remove the word absolute from this ability. Reduce this from 360 degrees to 180 as well.

    @Forsaken Crow wrote:
    Fourth Form: The Final and hardest form to learn of them all. Only one person has ever mastered this form in particular. This Form practices dual blade usage. But by using the other forms while wielding the two blades. Some users do replace the blade with their sheath. Using whatever they can to produce an effect of it. Those rare few who do wield two blades are extremely deadly. This style uses a fast acrobatic style at times. But in the right hands, it can be slow or precise as well. While the Fourth Form specializes in two blades it does also mentor the idea of the other forms. Thus upon mastery of this Form, the user learns they can use the other forms while wielding two. The main goal of the Fourth Form is to teach the wielders how to use both hands effectively. While this sword form does focus on Dual wielding as it's focus. The ones who truly master it will become destroyers on a battlefield. This form is the hardest to Master because it goes against the other three forms to an extent. By teaching it's wielder to embrace the second blade and understand how to move or position it. Whereas before it was a singular focus on a sword. The training for any of the forms is hard, but to get the basics. Two threads are required with an additional one just to learn how to use it effectively in combat. Mastering it will take several threads of lessons from a Master of it himself. This style is not made for everyone and teaches an explosiveness and fighting as though feral. The very few capable of even executing a beginner status of this style. Are written down in legend among the Clan. However, many say only one has ever mastered the Forms completely. Tsubasa's Mastery over them is said to be beyond Perfect. He's able to wield both of his Zanpakutō and effectively combine or mix his forms together. Learning to do this will take ten threads. For those interested in learning how he does this feat of his.

    It seems that this ability isn't complete. In addition, Tsubasa does not have two zanpakuto from what I can tell. Finally, please don't refer to this as "beyond perfect"

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    Crimson Lotus-Initial Lotus: This is the first lotus known as the Crimson Lotus. It's opening a gate that is extremely hard to do. While it comes in different forms depending on the form used. The First Lotus is generally the same concept in a single move. The user first must have skills with the forms and be capable. But also, a master in strength is needed at least. The rest comes from the skill of the user. By swinging their blade with as much power and force as they can muster. The precise control creates a shockwave of gravity outwards. This pushes against people with amazing force. The kinetic power is enough to cut through buildings. By applying the first form the user is capable of doing this feat from any strike. They can do it from large or small swings of the blade. This control allows them to also control or change the angle of the lotus. Making it an adaptable sword move. In the second form the user performs this as a defensive measure. This sword strike cuts through the energy attacks sent at them. Bouncing them back against the enemy in question with overwhelming force. However, it is possible for it to be taken over if the enemy is stronger. It also can be canceled out sometimes by their power meeting in the right way. The Third Form uses it in a method that comes from a draw stance. This version of the Crimson Lotus is different from the others. The user's body becomes the tool for the force. Using the quick draw and power of their step to send massive force towards a single target. And finally, the Fourth Form the user is able to send out massive kinetic blows by swinging both blades and sending them different directions.

    Shockwaves of gravity should be removed, as Tsubasa has no ability to control gravity in his kit. Reflecting attacks should also be removed factoring in this ability's numerous other uses. Its ability to block attacks is fine, but should be elaborated on more.

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    Blue Lotus-Second Lotus: The Second Lotus or the Blue one relies on different skills. Spell based powers that allow the user to perform some feats. Kierudo's illusion spell is based on this one as well. This Lotus requires an Advanced or higher in Kido or a form of magic. The user flicks their blade's edge sending out a ringing sound. This sound goes through the area and cuts up the enemies who hear it. However there is more to it, the spell works through this means. When the target hears the sound their body reacts to it as though it's been cut. Thus, an injury appears on the body like they'd been cut. They haven't truly been cut or wounded and if they've high enough Mental Deduction or focus they'll know. It is true that this can be used outside of just it's illusion practice. And doesn't change the forms very much. The Blue Lotus is the only spell based move in the artform. However if the user creates the right sound frequency they can cause their enemies eardrums to rupture. This move is highly reliant on the enemies hearing the blade. Tsubasa's version is updated however and does require more skills. This one is the older version and does have its own practical uses. While it isn't perfect it does have room for improvement for those that desire too. But as a swordsman, this is more to get an edge on a strong enemy. The Unabara styles use underhanded means at times. And this is merely one of them that happens to be present. All the others are legitimate sword techniques. That were designed for the purpose of killing the enemies. The Blue Lotus isn't favored by many Unabara but has saved lives. Its downfall is in the fact you have to hear it for anything to happen. And some warriors can see through the illusion of wounds.

    This entire ability doesn't make much sense. It will need some extensive reworking, as it seems to function simultaneously as an illusion and a genuine attack, when that is frankly impossible. Please clarify the nature of the attack, and limit the effectiveness more than simply anyone who hears it.

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    Emerald Lotus-Third Lotus: This is a special move used by some but requires immense training. Master Weapon Skill or Zanjutsu is required to perform it. The Emerald Lotus focuses on something very fascinating. Indirectly wounding the enemies. It uses the force of the blow but sends a shockwave of cutting energy. Past the block attempt to slice the foe, making it wrong to block it. The injuries aren't generally fatal and experienced warriors won't budge. Or can at the very least read it well enough to avoid injury. In the first form, the user can control the direction of the shockwave. Making them able to direct which way it will end up going. This is limited however as they need to hit something solid for this to work. The Second Form does this by defending and creating the effect of the injury. The force of the enemies blow is put back on them by deflecting its force towards them. The Third Form is able to create a large backlash by sending speed and power into the quick draw. The Fourth form is capable of doing this with both blades at the same time or different time points.

    This ability is mostly fine, but will need limits on the extent to which he is able to reflect attacks, as that is a rather powerful ability.

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    White Lotus Dance-Seventh Form: The only form that is mostly used by duel-wielding only.This form requires a Grand Master in General Speed or Shunpo. A Grand Master is also required in Zanjutsu or Weapon Skills to pull it off. To date, only one person has mastered this being Tsubasa himself. The user becomes a white ghost upon the battlefield. By combining the knowledge of the Lotus moves. They move around the battlefield almost as though dancing across it. This form is extremely hard to follow, as it has no set form. In fact, it's form can change at the drop of a dime. Making it extremely hard to follow as it's able to perform the other lotus while doing this. The user's only normally seen as a portion of white clothing they wear. It's like a blur moving around the battlefield. It's a very hard move to perform as any slip-ups can cost an inexperienced user. Making sure to use proper footwork is important but not nearly as how you hold or wield your sword during it. Some who have seen this before claim the sword disappears completely. That's because once it begins the blade is never still at any time. It's in constant motion making attempts to kill the enemy. While it can be dodged or counter-attacked. The White Lotus is the most demanding form in the entire school for the Unabara. Attacking with relentless aggression making them a extremely fast blur on the field. While certain enemies will spot them coming the changing speeds and such is normally enough to catch most off guard.

    Please remove the reference to the sword disappearing, as that would be exceptionally powerful and lack much counterplay.

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    God's Hand: This sword style serves one purpose only, it's my job is to kill Demons and Hollows. This sword style has the effect of causing extreme damage to those of such a nature, grant it the style is one Tsubasa only uses when he decides to fight a demon or a hollow. This sword form combines the purity of his Zanpakutō with the skills he's mastered. Nist can be blamed for this, he's learned Light's purity thanks to Nist. Being best friends with him did have it's advantages that allowed him to make a style like this. The way this sword art works is very simple, if they regenerate he is capable of slowing the regeneration down. Due to the fact this sword style cleaves the energy Demons use specially, it doesn't do this for hollows however. Demons use a special form of energy and due to this he was able to create a style nearly designed to kill them specially. Tsubasa is well aware of the weak points on demon's body as well, this style exploits it.

    Please explain in more elaborate detail how Tsubasa is able to replicate holy energy simply through swordsmanship. This ability is not approvable until that is fixed.

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    Kinetic Sword Style: Tsubasa is the only one known able to use his sword in this method, he's able to create a kinetic impact with his sword due to the power he can get despite his soft sword style. He's able to bring a kinetic energy down and slice into a person's body, now this isn't the full purpose of his swordsmanship. Tsubasa is able to make his swordsmanship completely like this, using his full body as a weapon of kinetic energy. One swing and he could slice through several buildings, Tsubasa is known for a destructive nature that is rarely seen even among those whom know him best. The other interesting thing about this style is that Tsubasa can cut someone and then cause their body to explode from within the inside of their body. Unabara call him the Kinetic killer, this is why he is known as one of the few whom have earned the title of Death in his clan's short history. The Kinetic sword style is effective against most and the destruction is something dangerous.

    The wording of this using kinetic energy makes the entire ability questionable and difficult to read, as kinetic energy would already be imparted by a sword swing. Also, the ability to simply have a character explode from a cut should have more limitations than it currently has.

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    T.S.U.B.A.S.A: This sword style is unreadable, Tsubasa is known to use pure swordsmanship in this aspect. The style is one another member of his clan did figure out, howveer Unabara Ringo only learned it to the point of making simple melee deadly with a sword. Tsubasa is able to use it within his hand to hand and most of his body movements. Tsubasa does acknowledge the young Reaper's skill but cannot help but take things he's seen develop them into a further and more dangerous method. Tsubasa is capable of fighting at high speeds in this form and changing moves in an instance, unlike Ringo though he isn't able to use it as flawlessly. Tsubasa does show a great amount of skill in this form that allows him to fight at extreme levels that some would acknowledge as the deadly methods that he has come forward with from his own methods of dancing and killing people with the weapon known simply as the sword. The unreadable man simply smiles and brings death upon the world.

    This should not be entirely unreadable, nor should it make such reference to another character's ability for the sake of establishing its functionality.

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    Perfect Shunko Blade: This is the perfected form of Tsubasa's shunko blade move, he having moved past his sister's death by a small amount decided to perfect the move. Using this training he created and found his element in the art, while many believed it would be flames that Tsubasa had nothing but destruction in him, that his power was that which destroyed everything. But much like his reiatsu and Zanpakutō his element in shunko is that of Lighting. When activated the lighting destroys everything around him, he's able to control it now without stressing his Zanpakutō out. A full body can last for twenty turns now, increasing his destructive power and force to a far greater amount. Tsubasa's final training to perfect Shunko made him an excellent combatant in using the form, being one of the only ones who didn't lead the 2nd Division to finally complete his training in the form. Using it around his Zanpakutō only for large scale attacks.

    This is fine for the most part, but please remove the reference to its lightning being able to destroy anything around him.

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    Kierudo no Tsukuyomi

    Please remove this.

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    Kierudo no Chidori: The dancing blade, this style allows the user to move their blade so quickly that it disappears. It's extremely fast and able to become an absolute death blow for enemies. Tsubasa has claimed he can perform a thousand sword strikes with this. Moving his hand so rapidly that his arms and sword vanish becoming invisible. Tsubasa named this one after his daughter who was always moving. Chidori danced like a petal through the storm, this move of the style is the hardest for the user must be quick. Precise sword strikes at high speeds are hard to perform, but this style demands blows that can kill. The other requirement is simply that the user be extremely good within Zanjutsu. Grand Masters are capable of performing similar to Tsubasa. Everything requires the user to be precise and understand swordsmanship like he does. Tsubasa believes passing this style on may not be possible due to how it's skills are built around him.

    Remove the reference to other Grand Masters. Outright invisibility is too much for such a technique, and should be visible to at least those near his level of skill.

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    Kierudo no Tsukasa

    While Kitanashi and Chidori are more or less acceptable in their own right, the fusion of the two brings things to such an extreme that it is no longer acceptable, as the fusion of that level of speed and power lacks little in the way of drawbacks.

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    Kierudo no Tsubaki: This is not so much a sword move as the foot work used by Tsubasa when executing the style. It's designed and requires a master level in shunpo and speed to execute it properly. The footwork he performs when using this allows him to create solid doubles instantly, the max number he can form is around seven. Tsubasa has shown to use Tsubaki when fleshing out his enemies now, trying to give form to his tactics and create more openings so he may finish off his enemies. Tsubaki allows him to directly go into his next move be it one of the other Kierudo forms or something else. But using this stepping method makes it possible for the user to both disappear and become an assassin if need be for a moment. It allows them to become one with the surroundings and embrace the wind and reality for what it is. Kieruo no Tsubaki is the move Tsubasa decided to add on to the style. What would it become later was something only fate could decree, his final task was the creation of it all.

    Making doubles is fine, but solid doubles is simply too much.

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    Kierudo Amaterasu: This sword move was designed with the purpose of incapacitating enemies with little effort. It creates a sound upon impact that rings out. Those who hear the sound have their nerves and body slammed. It's like being hit by several forms of movement sickness at once. Tsubasa's sound wave can knock people out who are extremely weak to it. Tsubasa does prefer to remain out of using such tactics. But Amaterasu allows him to execute his enemies without much fuss. This move is not going to knock out all the time some people of great strength can overcome it. However they will be handling after effects of the Amaterasu. Which will include extreme dizziness with some trouble seeing, most motor skills will be damaged for a while. This damage can be healed but will take four turns for people with excellent healing. As this attack even targets the area in charge of healing. Finally those of a lesser healing will take six turns at least to recover from the effects of this attack on the senses.

    The limit on healing, requiring four entire posts of recovery even for those who excel at healing, is far too high, and should be significantly lowered. Additionally, rather than this simply affecting anyone who hears it, it should have a proper line of fire for its effects.

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    Kierudo Izanami: This is the form used after the use of Izanagi, what happens when Izanami is activated is rather special. Kinetic needles explode from the attack of Izanagi and rupture things within the body. Imagine thousands of kinetic needles exploding in a barrage against your body. This move may be shaped freely allowing him to shape it into projectiles of kinetic force. What makes it special is it's a long ranged kinetic sword move. Allowing him to end attacks or block many projectiles with a single slash of his sword. The distance depends on the amount of force he puts into the attack using Izanami. However this but a single move allowing him to act freely once again.

    This ability simply would not work unless Izanagi used actual spiritual energy, rather than simply kinetic energy as is stated in Izanagi proper.

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    Kierudo Susanoo: This is an art form that surpasses most of his moves. Susanoo is something Tsubasa decided to make. This move was designed with a single purpose, it combines the efforts of his training. This sword move destroys things at the molecular level that is due to the way it's used. Tsubasa vibrates the blade at such a high speed that the weapon hums. When this happens when he strikes the sword cuts into the molecules of the target. This isn't limited to just the target either energy may be cut as well. Tsubasa's Susasnoo move can be used several ways and combines the element of using it within his hand to hand skills. Tsubasa can use this around his entire body for an extra punch when needed. This form is used as Kierudo's second to last move, making him extremely dangerous. Tsubasa grows and becomes stronger as time progresses and allows him to become great. Tsubasa's Susanoo is merely a single trick of many that were created.

    Cutting through molecules, or at the molecular level, is just not acceptable, as it would be a high-level technique even for a character specializing in those specific techniques.

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    Kierudo Shukuchi

    Absolutely not. Tsubasa cannot move anywhere near light speed. Nobody can short of Shadin, the uncontested speed god who is nearly actual deity tier, and even he is immensely crippled by doing so. Try again.

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    Kierudo Sokuza Aseru: The move he came up with to deal with situations that require an instant answer. He sheaths his sword, designing this sword to deal with single target enemies. He unsheathes the sword and uses the Shukuchi at the same time, Tsubasa's acceleration allows him to bring the blade out and cut so quickly. That it is absolutely painless, zero blood is spilled due to the sheer speed of the cut. It's said if he cut an enemy with killing intent they would die without a single shred of pain. Tsubasa's final move allowed him to find a place he was comfortable with as a swordsman. This gave him a good place to stand as a per swordsman. Tsubasa's final move here is made to settle battles in an instant without anything held back. This move cannot be influenced by most of the other Kierudo forms. As it's already at it's peak and meant to be used for defeating enemies. Tsubasa considers this a last resort normally, but can execute it fairly often. Due to the form used it's hard to judge it as he can extend the attack distance if need be.

    If it doesn't hurt, and they don't bleed, I'm not sure it really even is a cut. Also, this is reliant on Shukuchi, which is both redundant factoring in his other speed techniques and GM speed, and has issues of its own.

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    Killer Cyclone

    Factoring in the necessary changes to Tsubasa's metal manipulation, this ability should be changed in light of that. Its actual functionality is fine.

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    Electricity Note: Tsubasa's control over this is immense. He is able to vibrate his molecules and his swords at high speeds and frequency. While their is a limit to what he can do with it. This allows him to slice people with the energy itself, though it does have distance limitations. Meaning stay away from the bright shiney thing and your fine. Also it should be noted he can heal with this skill by accelerating his cell birth rate through electromanipulation. This will cost energy and take time. Finally he can Railgun himself or increase the speed beyond current estimates. This however is a rare occurance due to impact radius. Tsubasa likes to do things quietly, this is not quiet. This creates a lot of noise and will destroy a large portion of things.

    The ability to vibrate one's molecules is exceptionally powerful even for a character who specializes in that sort of ability, and Tsubasa does not. Further, healing through electromagnetic charging of cells simply is not how healing works, and is redundant when the character already has other sources of healing.

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    Izanagi

    The difference between travel speed and combat speed is not hugely clear, and the two should be completely congruent at Tsubasa's skill level regardless. Additionally, this ability should not grant him additional manipulation of lightning and metal.

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    Susanoo

    Seeing as this ability is functionally identical to an Arrancar's hierro and regeneration abilities, we would ask that you pick only one of the options between defense and regen.

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    Lovers: This technique is a counter based on fencing that he came up with at a young age. Love filled his heart and he’d been blinded thus leaving it behind. He’d seen it down with a Rapier based weapon finding out it was called a Passata Sotto. This allowed him to realize the blade could be used this way. The movement for this is fast and fluid ducking under an attack through extensive body control. The person is able to avoid the blow and instantly counter an enemy's attack. Now some people may take advantage or use a bait system to catch people. This, of course, is intended also as he learned other Rapier moves from watching. Fleche and Riposting are optional for him in this form. Using skills he learned from his first wife despite the bad memories. He does seem to of grown and come to terms with things by accepting this technique and those attached to it.

    This ability seems to lack any counterplay. Please address this by adding some sort of opening or chance of failure.

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    Hermit

    You can't just copy someone else's energy signature to this degree, and this kind of ability does not fit with Tsubasa's own powers in any way. Remove this.

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    Tower: By tapping into his skill he is able to perform a cut using either his katana or both weapons. When slicing the cuts with such tremendous strength that it delivers a huge amount of force. Tsubasa’s blade delivers a megaton of force along. It’s not through muscle or sheer power alone either. Skill is what makes this happen, it’s his skill to create and innovate how he swings the blade. By controlling his breathing he is able to release a massive blow with his sword alone. The swing isn’t nor does it have any true openings to it. This is what it means to practice with a relentless desire for a precise answer to it. By embracing the wolf’s answer you can find yourself a truth. Find someone or something to push beyond the fathoming of a reach. Focusing and locating the truth in a single swing of the sword. By using this power he can destroy attacks often sending them back at his enemies.

    Having no openings is not something any technique should have. It can be difficult to see the openings, but it should have some opening.

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    Shunko Technique Raijin

    Outright deconstruction of matter, as well as artificial antimatter, simply does not make sense as an effective side effect of powerful shunko, to say nothing of the fact that this level of power is both far too high and unrelated to Tsubasa's overall powerset. This ability should be removed.

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    Suijin:A Shunko move that is based on the roaring current, Tsubasa extends his fingers creating an attack at their tip. This expands into a massive energy based blast. Capable of destroying a large portion of things. The damage calculation on it comes into the upper forty or fifty megaton area. The blast isn’t an area of effect or simple to dodge as he is firing it like a beam type attack. By channeling the raw power of his shunko into his fingertips he fires a concentrated blast which destroys and burns through those which get in its path. This can be taken by some beings but it will have lasting consequences for some. The lightning based move is exceptional at burning through and causing massive internal damage within. A raging torrent is a specialized object of Tsubasa’s power. While in Tiger mode this is much stronger and capable of leaving lasting effects and may damage those too close to it depending on level.

    "Capable of destroying a large portion of things" is meaningless as far as describing the power of the ability, and should likely be at least marginally clarified as far as scale. Additionally, while the concept of using the elemental power of lightning shunko to increase the output of a lightning attack is fine, the wording of this ability makes it seem as if Tsubasa is literally attacking with his shunko, which is less acceptable. Some rewording would be fine here.

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    Despair

    Tsubasa already has numerous other powersets and themes to expand upon. Adding shadow manipulation to his repertoire simply does not make sense or fit with what has been established of the character.
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