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Kusshi Ko [Approved, 4-4; Arrancar]
Sun Apr 29, 2018 11:11 pm
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I. Basic Information
» Name: Kusshi Ko
» Age: 12
» Gender: Female
» Association: N/A
» Appearance Written: Kusshi is a small, thin, fragile looking child, very easy to pick out in a crowd due to the fact that she is albino. Her hair is a pure, almost untouched white, and her eyes are a blood filled red and yet speak of innocence, not rage. Now if one were to look closely upon her skin, they might see the unholy shit ton of injuries.
Most of these are on her arms or legs, back or chest, but some are in even less respectable places. That was before she died, however. Now, of course, she has healed those injuries.
Kusshi's body itself is very small. She's only four foot two and yet she is thin enough to not appear under grown and stubby.
Her skin is pale - very pale, and also smooth; one might call it silky smooth, even.
Behind Kusshi's left ear is her leftover shard from before her mask broke.
Behind both ears, however, are four small appendages somewhere between a feather and a quill. They glow pink. These are actually a physical "energy gauge", that show how much she has left. They drain from right to left.
Kusshi's Hollow hole is on her left eye.
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II. Personality
» Personality: There is one thing about Kusshi that one anybody can notice: she is never sad.
In fact, she is never anything except for happy.
All of the time.
Every single second of the day.
Kusshi Ko is a victim of stress - so much stress that, put simply, she has become completely desensitized to... Basically everything. From violence, to rape, to murder, nothing phases her anymore. On the inside she is an endless pit of self-hate and depression, but she can neither recognize nor experience this things. She is, truly, blissfully ignorant, and for all of the wrong reasons.
Kusshi Ko became this way due to her life as a human. The aforementioned stress is caused by the stupid amount of abuse she endured every day, every night. It made her weak before, but now she gains power from that. Her will to live is outstanding, inside and out. Inside, because once she took her own life, she endured the pain, the suffering of death, so much pain, and so much suffering.
It is self-defense, you could say. She knows subconsciously that if she begins to pass she will realize what she is, she will realize she has no reason to live anymore, and she would rather live with a lie than die with the truth.
Outside, it is because she can't feel anything but happiness, and dying means she can't be happy, can't continue being happy, maybe she'll know what she is... It all comes back to a sweet, sweet lie. Her life is a lie to cover up the truth, and it's a lie so effective that she perceives it as nothing but the truth.
Forever.
See, the thing that I really must drive in, and enforce, here, is that Kusshi is literally incapable of negativity. She might make negative-sounding comments, or act negative like a child, but in reality she at no point can feel sad. She could be watching everybody she's ever loved die around her, and she would still be smiling, laughing, with her eyes wide, lips curved.
Forever.
Kusshi occasionally, however, will feel empty, and as opposed to overwhelming, manic happiness, she will feel nothing. Nothing. Kusshi will feel cold and desolate.
If you couldn't tell, Kusshi is insane.
III. History
» History:
Have you ever wondered what happens when a child is born for no purpose other than to be a toy? Abused, neglected, driven to unimaginable things, before they can truly experience a life, a love, an emotion of positivity?
- Trigger Warning:
Most children's lives might be a story of true happiness, others might have one of trauma and sorrow.
Kusshi Ko is a name, and it means two things. One might interpret it as "Energetic Child", but if you were to notice the extra 'S', it's meaning is therefore changed to "Foremost". So Kusshi Ko means "Foremost Child", or, "First[before anything else] Child".
Kusshi Ko was anything but.
The first for years of Kusshi's life were horrible for development. She never actually learned how to speak properly, and even now her grammar and accent are imperfect to a noticeable degree. Her parents never really cared about her, and in fact they hated her. They hated her more than anything else.
At age five is when it started. She began receiving insults from her parents, but she didn't think much of it at first - and that was because she couldn't. She couldn't understand what was going on. She was worthless, useless, a failure, a disappointment. She knew they were mean words but she didn't know that she was supposed to be made sad by them, and dismissed them as gibberish.-
"-Worthless, you know that?"
Kusshi, taking a moment to respond, looked up from her colouring book and dropped her crayon.
"Wha'd you shey, daddy?"
A subtle head tilt.
"You're worthless."
The child's hands came up to her head and she softly patted either side of her head, gently ruffling her hair.
"D-daaddy I dunno wha'dat meeanshh.."
"Of course you don't, why would you? You're stupid."
This time she had a reaction, narrowing her eyes.
"Awaahhh! It'sh not m'fault you never tolds me how 'ta learn right sillyyyyy!" She lost the offended look and giggled, clapping her hands.
"Don't you back talk me, girl."
"Daaa-"
"I said don't fucking back talk me, now shut up!"
A little tilt of her head and she giggled again.
"Okaiiooo daddyy~"-
Three years later is where it officially began to have an impact on her.
At the age of eight, Kusshi began a new arc of abuse, one that she had no choice but to acknowledge.-
The child was shaking, making the blood running down her cheek vibrate and form little zig-zags.
"M-momm...yyy... I don't wanna g-go t' school.... Anymore..."
She looked up at her mother with tears streaming down her face.
"Why not?"
"Th-they bully me... And make fun of my hair and my eyes and my height... Ands they hit me, they hit me so muches... It hurts..."
"Toughen up. You can't honestly be that weak, girl."
Her eyes widened, and she let her mouth hang open, searching for a response but not finding it.
Instead, a hand reached out towards her mother's face.
It was quickly slapped back down.
The child's head fell and she gripped her wrist tightly, looking up with eyes full of hatred.
"I'm ti-"
No sooner than she looked up was she met with another slap, this one to her cheek. There was no restraint there, it was a full on, intentional slap, and the child's head twisted to the side. A red stain lay upon her face, now, quickly covered by more tears.
"Now go to your room."
But instead, Kusshi found herself falling to her knees, eyes blank. She couldn't move, her body wouldn't allow her to move.
And so she felt another hit, this one a foot to her gut, and she was on her back.
She was on her back and she heard the door to her house open, and then close.
And she was left there, drooling, panting, crying, and bleeding.-
Now she was starting to understand things, though. Other kids, she heard them talk about their parents doing nice things for them. She assumed it normal, she assumed it natural, but now she was understanding it. She wasn't being raised correctly, she remembered it just starting one day, then one year, not stopping, never stopping. She was abused for a reason, it wasn't her fault...
Which meant she couldn't fix it.
One day, however, it got much, much worse. Saving the details, once she turned ten her father raped her. Sometimes her mother would help, other times she would be alone, and if she ever told anybody, they would kill her. None of it made any sense to her. Why was she even born in the first place?
Why WAS she born?
Many things followed her transition into sexual abuse - more cuts, bruises, and eventually the loss of her left eye, by a fork.
So, by that point, Kusshi no longer went to school. She was, in bare essentials, a slave.
So when she turned 12, Kusshi didn't understand anything anymore. Her life meant nothing, nobody actually cared about her, nobody actually loved her. She wasn't born to be loved, she was born to be hated, so what could she do?
Well, it's simple.
Kusshi took a knife, slit her throat, and died.
Now Kusshi was dead, her Chain of Fate broken. There was nothing for her to love, and so her chain attached to empty air, and began to eat itself, until she too was consumed in the madness.
For a very brief amount of time Kusshi became a Hollow that somewhat resembled an Axolotl. Long story short, she fell out of her bedroom window and her mask shattered near-immediately.
And so became Kusshi the Arrancar: Some dumbass twelve year old that killed herself and got more powerful because of it.
IV. Equipment
» Equipment: N/A
V. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills
» Racial Abilities: Cero: When the quills behind Kusshi's ears no longer glow bright because she has healed so much damage that her external energy is drained to near emptiness, Kusshi is capable of simply consuming her Cero as opposed to firing it. Once eaten, Kusshi will begin to convulse rapidly, enduring obscene amounts of pain, before becoming encased in bone plates like a suit of armour. Once completely encased, Kusshi will spontaneously combust like a fragmentation grenade, sending out shards of bone and a rain of blood.
This drains all of her energy, and is only usable once per topic.
VI. Sealed Powers
» Zanpakutô Name: Calesvol
» Zanpakutô Appearance:
Calesvol is a Laternshield, but funnily enough it holds no latern. It consists of a buckler with a sword attached, and a gauntlet littered with blades. Kusshi's is made out of bone.
» Unique Power: Through a life of nothing but pain and suffering Kusshi had many regrets, but one in particular outshines them all. From all of it, through all of it, she was just never strong enough. She wasn't strong enough to withstand it all. She was too weak to take the pain, she wanted to be able to heal it all, to reverse the damage. She wanted to be stronger so she didn't die.
Kusshi's biggest regret was never being strong enough to heal from her wounds, and so Kusshi's power is accelerated regeneration. The way that her healing works, is that the more damage she sustains in a short amount of time, the less she can actually heal. Healing itself is extremely dependent on the strike itself, but just say a standard, one inch deep, one foot long slash across her stomach, not rupturing any organs or shattering any bones, from a broadsword. She can heal that in a minute, which will be judged in posts by the flow of time. The catch is that each time another strike is dealt, the longer it takes for Kusshi to heal a SINGLE strike, meaning that the most efficient way to kill Kusshi is to hit her hard, and a lot.
On Gauges:
Kusshi's external energy gauge, as previously mentioned, is four quills behind each ear that drain from right to left. These represent her energy usage in terms of healing. Healing wounds is dependent on the severity, exploding is usable once the quills have drained entirely.
Kusshi's internal gauge is tied to her detonation and revival. Once she has healed so much that her external gauge is drained, it "unlocks" one of two gauges that aren't visible. The first one is the pool of energy allowing her to detonate with force, scattering her remains all over the place. Immediately after her Cero is consumed and she begins to detonate, the second pool inside is unlocked and she is tethered to the world she's in by it, similar to a Chain of Fate. Whilst that happens, the second pool also reconstructs her body and then pulls her back inside of it. After revival, her external gauge for healing, and her internal gauges for detonation and revival are all drained.
VII. Resurrección
» Resereccion Name: None Currently.
» Resereccion Release Phrase: None Currently.
» Release Actions: Kusshi holds Calesvol up to the sky.
» Resereccion Appearance: A blank white mask with nothing but a smooth curve takes up the left half of Kusshi's face, and she gains two bent red spike shapes on the surface: One is a thicker line, coming from the outside of her mask and bending downwards, stretching from the top of the mask to the bottom. The second spike is the same, but smaller and lower down.
» Resereccion Abilities: After Kusshi explodes, she can create a new body and transfer to it instead. Kusshi possesses an internal energy gauge as well as her external one, solely used to tether herself back to whatever world she's in once exploding. In the meantime, the energy from her detonation reverses, dragging all of the blood back in, and it will take the form of another Kusshi. Essentially, she rebuilds herself from blood, skin tissue, etc. scattered around the area from her detonation.
This only works if Kusshi detonates and kills herself. It does not work if she is killed by other means. It is only usable after she detonates. Running low on energy does not guarantee an explosion. She can easily be killed before detonating. Considering that her revival consists of small particles gluing themselves back together, the only way to stop this would be to constantly keep the remains away from each other. Taking that into account, no, it can not necessarily be stopped. The downside to it is once she revives, she has no energy left and is incapable of healing.
(The reason it is hard to stop her revive is because I assume death isn't something that can happen without both party's consent, so considering Kusshi kills herself, it being easily negated means she dies and can't revive because she dies without one party's consent, and she is kept dead without the other party's consent, which would render it rather useless. Since it is hard to stop, it acts as an actual ability, and not permanent suicide.)
I. Skill Sheet
[SKILL SHEETS ARE NOT TO BE FILLED OUT UNTIL AFTER A TIER IS GIVEN! WILL SKILLS WILL BE GIVEN BY THE STAFF MEMBER THAT GRADES YOUR APP! FOR MORE INFORMATION, LOOK AT THIS THREAD]
Additional Note: The skill sheets, as of Saturday, February 10, 2018, have had small additions. There are new skills, and Master has been renamed to "Elite". Furthermore, Master is now the bridge in-between Elite and Grand Master. For more information, and the rest of the skill sheets, READ THIS THREAD
- Spoiler:
- 6-Tier: Allowed 2 Beginner, 2 Untrained.
5-Tier: Allowed 1 Trained, 2 Beginner, 1 Untrained.
4-Tier: Allowed 1 Adept, 2 Trained. 1 Beginner
3-Tier: Allowed 1 Experienced, 2 Adept, 1 Trained
2-Tier: Allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Experienced, 1 Adept
1-Tier: Allowed 1 Expert, 2 Advanced, 1 Experienced
0-5 Tier: Allowed 1 Elite, 2 Expert, 1 Advanced.
General Skills
- Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Trained/Beginner/Untrained
- General Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Weapon Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Racial Skills
- Perquisa: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Sonido: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Cero/Bala: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Hierro: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Mental Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Pain Endurance: Elite/Advanced//Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
IX. Role Play Sample
» Roleplay Sample: Why kids?
She had no morals, no restrictions, no regret, no guilt, and most of all, no sanity left in her. All of that was stripped away as soon as she was born with a horribly efficient psychosis, leading her to be extremely psychotic, uncontrollable, and... "Murdery".
Sadly this murder tended to target the weaker targets, which involved a lot of child murder.
Happily children were fun to play with.
Oh! Oh! How she loved to think like this, so bad, so bad, wanting to kill everything all of the time!
She had no honour, no dignity, no sense of right nor wrong. Not to say she believes what she does is not wrong, however. She knew perfectly well she was an evil bitch, and she expected to be hunted down and killed for it.
She would kill them all before that happened.
She would kill them all!
That ridiculous thought warranted a giggle. She knew her place in this world. That was why she would get stronger, and then she would make a name for herself, she would kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, and kill until they all fell to their knees at her power!
Another giggle.
She just wanted to be known and feared by all of Tokyo. She expected a bunch of goodie two shoes bastards to slay her one day.
Her target was a child of age... Seven. She didn't really care how old, the thing was meaty enough to sate her hunger. But... She might not shower her with blood very well... Kids didn't have as much blood as adults so they were kind of less fun.
Oh, oh, she could play with it, she could give it a slimmer of hope before ripping it all away, oh yes, oh yes, oh yes! Yes, yes, yes! That would do splendidly! It got her all hot and bothered just thinking about it, oh how fun, how fun, oh fun!
She walked up behind the girl, tapping her on the shoulder. She jumped, slowly turning around, brushing the short brown hair out of her face. Ichi put on an oh-so-fake smile, her eyes soft.
"Why hello there, are you lost little one?" A simple nod from the girl, tears streaming down her cheeks.
No remorse was felt
"Hey, wanna see something cool? Another nod, hesitant. How cute, how innocent.
How delicious.
That black bubble expaned from her tailbone, before Rymdkadepsyl errupted from it, thrashing around violently, a noticeable two feet longer than usual, now at seven feet in length. The girl's eyes widened in terror as Ichigama grabbed her wrist, laughing hysterically at how helpless, how struck by fear she was. She couldn't even move.
"Aww, no darling I'm just kidding. I'm a nice Ghoul, see?" She harmlessly patted the girl's head with the blade of Rymdkadepsyl, stroking her hair gently. The girl shook, and Ichi gently massaged her wrist.
"No, no, it's fine, really. Here. Want a hug?" A nod, so hesitant, so scared. The child's right wrist in her left hand, she pulled the child towards her, her other arm outstretched in a hug.
But she never gave the girl a hug.
Rymdkadepsyl folded backwards, straightening itself out and thrusting itself, through the poor thing's stomach, instantly rupturing the organ, slicing through her rib cage, and causing her to bleed profusely. No, no, she needed to go further, deeper, more blood, more, more, more! She yanked the child's wrist, pulling the girl further onto Rymd, and she started coughing up scarlet fluid. Farther, farther, farther! More, more, more! SHe needed more, she desired more, she had a lust for more, more, more!
Farther, farther, farther still, until she could push no further, pull no harder, the child's arm socket nearly ripped out.
Nearly?
Not good enough.
So she simply tore the child's arm off, throwing it against the wall of this alleyway.
This alley was too clean. It needed more red.
The child's body shook violently on Rymdkadepsyl, before she threw up, a sickly mixture of vomit and blood. Green and crimson splattered onto her tail, coating the area below it with horrid colours.
Having had her fill of this, she violently ripped her tail out of the corpse's body, but not before grinning madly at the sad, hopeless, defeated stare the girl gave her before she fell limp, lifeless, dead.
Oh.
How disappointing.
She wouldn't feel the best part...
Dashing forward, she wrapped her tail around the child before she could fall, throwing her into the air, turning around, and impaling her through the skull, bringing Rymdkadepsyl down and slamming the body into the ground with extreme force, It ended in an explosion of blood and limbs.
Ichigama fell to her knees, head in her hands, giggling to herself as Rymdkadepsyl retracted into her body, but little did she know it would be coming out again very soon. For now though, she simply threw her arms out to the sides, looking up at the sky, letting out a horrid, insane laugh.
It was very funny.
Very funny indeed.
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Re: Kusshi Ko [Approved, 4-4; Arrancar]
Sat May 05, 2018 5:10 am
« Application Checklist »
• Let's Get Down To Business •
- Name [-]
- Appropriate Age [-]
- Gender [-]
- Appearance Present [-]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [-]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
- 10 sentences for personality [-]
- History is of appropriate length [-]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [-]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[-]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [-]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [-]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
• And Comments/Fixes •
- Willpower/Determination: N/A
- Mental Deduction:N/A
- Pain Endurance: N/A
- Focus: N/A
- Comments/Notes:
Resurreccion Ability: After Kusshi explodes, she can create a new body and transfer to it instead. Kusshi possesses an internal energy gauge as well as her external one, solely used to tether herself back to whatever world she's in once exploding. In the meantime, the energy from her detonation reverses, dragging all of the blood back in, and it will take the form of another Kusshi. Essentially, she rebuilds herself from blood, skin tissue, etc. scattered around the area from her detonation.
You need to explain more about the external and internal energy gauges that are referenced in this app. How do they work, what do they do? You do not give enough information to even begin to understand just what these gauges are for, and therefore it is inadequate to reference these gauges as parameters to an ability.
My secondary issue is that essentially this ability is complete regeneration, which albeit has been done on PH, however those abilities have strict criteria of use, and also have criteria that restrict them--this has none of those ramifications to it (such as can this be stopped, if so how, or "criteria" to negate this ability etc.)You have given us the gist of what this ressureccion ability does however you need more information in relation to it's disadvantages and downsides. more information needs to be added until the ability itself is balanced, as is--this ability needs work.
Over All: This is just a specific instance, but these three points are fairly similar for your ability concepts as a whole. Before the application itself is ready, revision and more explanation is needed in relation to these abilities. For these abilities to be approved the following needs to be fleshed out: information and parameters on how the abilities work, drawbacks and repercussions/benefits and upsides. It's a good start--but it's not quite there yet.
In Short the following is needed
- Explain the external/internal gauge.
- Flesh out and better balance your abilities in relation to their downsides.
- Give us more parameters of the abilities themselves as a whole.
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Re: Kusshi Ko [Approved, 4-4; Arrancar]
Wed May 09, 2018 5:29 pm
« Application Checklist »
• Let's Get Down To Business •
- Name [-]
- Appropriate Age [-]
- Gender [-]
- Appearance Present [-]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [-]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
- 10 sentences for personality [-]
- History is of appropriate length [-]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [-]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[-]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [-]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [-]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
• And Comments/Fixes •
- Willpower/Determination: N/A
- Mental Deduction:N/A
- Pain Endurance: N/A
- Focus: N/A
- Comments/Notes:
Cero: This drains all of her energy, and is only usable once per topic unless said topic takes place over multiple days.
-With your cero ability the secondary clause of "multiple days" does not work because on PH time is fluid, and based on thread interaction rather than the actual "real life day" time elapsed. If you want to do this based on Post-duration cool-down that would work. However if so, the ability needs to be reworked because other than specific instances (I.E a Demons energy-drain capabilities) energy is a finite resource during thread interactions, you have X amount for the duration of the thread, and once it's gone it's gone.
Tier:N/A