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THE ARRANCAR TEMPLATE

Enter The Arrancar
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I. Basic Information


» Name: Víspera Negra
» Age: 150
» Gender: Male

» Association: None.

» Appearance Written:

Vispera is a tall, lazy looking young man, with a muscular build, brown hair, and light-brown eyes. When angered or serious, his face becomes noticeably sharper. Initially, he was almost always seen wearing tattered rags for a shirt and pants with no shoes to his, mentioning to those that have been around him that he remembers always being oppressed and a slave to whomever's whims. After becoming an Arrancar he took up a rather simplistic approach to his clothing. He wears a long black sleeved shirt underneath a modified original Arrancar jacket. What has been modified is the back of the jacket, which is longer yet frayed. The opening for the jacket has a black chain link that rests as the zipper. His Arrancar hole is located just under his sternum just above his ribs. The remains of his hollow mask however run from his upper shoulder to the middle of his back.

» Appearance Image:

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II. Personality


» Personality:

Vispera is an Arrancar of great mystery, his mind could split up into at least three different distinct personalities all of them making up him in full. With each personality comes a different side of him, different aspects or even different outlooks on things most would see crazy or wrong.

The Loner: Vispera's current personality. After opening his eyes to the world of Hueco Mundo, he knew from his "wish" being granted that he would forever be a loner. Sticking to only himself and his own mind he tends to shirk away from large groups, only special instances being made by himself to ever make him want to do so. With a recent fascination with the modern world he will often forsake this to peer into or visit though if he does he will still avoid large crowds.

The Negra Tirano: This is easily considered the bad, evil, or for a lack of a better word the yang in Vispera's mind. The Negra Tirano is not only a name, But Vispera in general as far as his more or less "You fucked up" mentality. This form of his personality rarely shows but when it does, words do not and will not help the situation. The only thing that will come from this is either death or severe injury...usually to himself and others. Other aspects of him or this specific piece of his personality stems from his past where he was constantly oppressed, beaten, tortured and a myriad of other things until his death. When the switch is flipped he becomes a monster, harming all those that he deems guilty or unable to be saved.

Himself: If The Negra Tirano is considered his Yang, then the last part of his personality which in short himself, is his Ying. All of his positive emotions rather they be happy, cheerful, stem from his aspect of him. Although this isn't something someone typically sees in him, at the same time it is worth seeing. Vispera as a "person" doesn't like to show his emotions but when he does, its always for a good reason or just to show that he has some form of emotion....somewhat. Something that is always noticed about him is his overly lazy demeanor, shown even when he walks. While most think of him as a lazy, non combatant Arrancar, He hides his motives and ambitions very well until it is time for him to truly fight.

III. History


» History: The beginnings of the Arrancar known as Vispera were that of a slave, a boy born into servitude when his families village was taken. Named after the God of storms, Takemizuchi or Take for short was born into a family of well off farmers before they were taken in as cattle. His father often told him of times before their servitude being peaceful and free, but no longer was that the case. Wearing shackles and collars made of iron, Take spent his early days after the age of seven in the fields tending to the crops or attending to his slavers sons and daughters. His mother was not so fortunate as him or his father as they were forced to watch their mother being tossed around and used by their owner and his friends, often beating them while his mother suffered through the touches and advances of men that were not her husband.

Time slowly crawled as days and nights blurred for Take as he toiled and worked for no payment and no recognition. On the eve of his tenth birthday his mother had passed, finally succumbing to the abuse and mistreatment of her body. What was almost a relief for her soon came as his curse for when someone loses one toy, another must be chosen. His slaver's oldest two children, a boy and a girl, chose the boy to be their plaything to which his father tried to object. "Choose me over my son please." or "Anything but him master." His father's voice fell on deaf ears as he was struck and beaten for his insolence. The days of a farm worker were over for the male as he was beaten, abused among other things. Take's life was always controlled by those with more power than him, and on the eve of his death he vowed and wished for one thing...

"If I awaken in a new life? The power to control instead of being controlled...will be mine."

The last whispers as his eyes closed in the one life and opened in the next.

When Take had opened his eyes he couldn't feel the complacency that was his body. He didn't feel the heaviness of his weight nor the wind in his hair. He was born anew in a world of black and sand as white as snow. Slowly getting to his feet he wandered around staggered as fragmented memories came to mind. Thoughts of abuse, anger and resentment filling his body, but one stood over them all- Control. His life in the lands known as Hueco Mundo were filled with trails and tests as he wandered the path alone, taking on what he could and plotting to kill what he couldn't. Time flowed differently and while he thought it had only been years had turned out to be decades, centuries even. At the apex, he climbed from the bottom of the trees and rot to find himself anew above the world with the white moon. He no longer stood as some amalgamation, but now as an Arrancar. Shedding the name he had upon death he took on a new name- The name Vispera Negra.

He continued living as a loner despite other Arrancar's and Hollow's forming alliances and groups. He wanted nothing of the sort. For someone to once again lord over him and have control. In his age he found himself gaining a curiosity for the new world of the humans, something that periodically had him peeking or visiting into their world. So much had changed since his time, but the one thing that didn't was the lack of control that many had over their lives. Between this world and the next his only goal was to look out for himself and to never bend to anyone else again.

IV. Equipment


» Equipment: N/a

V. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills


» Racial Abilities:

Descorrer:
Arrancar and Hollows use special, spiritual pathways to travel between Hueco Mundo and other worlds. These pathways are called Garganta. Espada-level Arrancar can easily open these pathways between the World of the Living and Hueco Mundo with a simple hand gesture. The Garganta created using Descorrer are a lot more stable than those produced by lower-level Hollows, and allow the Arrancar to simply walk into the void created. These Garganta neatly close around them before opening at their destination. Descorrer lasts a post from the time opened, and closes the moment the user steps out.

Pesquisa:
The practitioner sends out a radiating pulse which reacts to sources of Reiatsu within a certain proximity this being a fifty meter radius, allowing the practitioner to determine the location of any sensed individuals and gauge how powerful they actually are. When the ability is used the practitioner must close their eyes and entered into a meditative state of mind in order to attain the necessary heightened sense of awareness

Sonído:While somewhat similar to Hohō in regards to function and speed, Sonído appears to be more instinctual, seemingly requiring no previous knowledge to perform. It produces a different sound; rather than the swishing or sometimes silent Shunpo of the Shinigami, Sonído makes a booming or static noise. Though the technique is exhibited by most Arrancar, the proficiency with which it can be performed is limited only by the individual. While it doesn't have a set "range", the amount of uses entail to how many posts its on cool down "essentially if the uses are three times its cool down is three posts"

Gemelos Sonído: By introducing an additional step into the normal Sonído movement, the user can generate a number of clone-like afterimages of himself/herself, with up to five of these clones being sustainable simultaneously. "Same as Sonido"

Bala (虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "Bullet", Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") is an Arrancar-exclusive offensive technique. While similar in function to a Cero, a Bala is not nearly as powerful, but, thanks to its composition, its speed is 20 times faster, allowing it to be fired in quick succession. In addition, it possesses more concussive force than a typical Cero does.{Speed depend on user/ 1 post cooldown}

Doragon'aian{Dragon Hierro} Hierro (鋼皮 (イエロ), Iero; Spanish for "Iron", Japanese for "Steel Skin";Viz "Iron Skin"): Hierro is a defensive Arrancar technique. The user's Reiryoku condenses, creating a titanium-hard skin strong enough to block a Zanpakutō. This allows users to confront some of the sword-wielding Shinigami barehanded. While this technique is exhibited by all Arrancar to some degree, the strength of an individual's Hierro is entirely proportional to the potency of their Reiryoku.

VI. Sealed Powers


» Zanpakutô Name: Vierro

» Zanpakutô Appearance:

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» Unique Power:

Fuerza Opresora De Gravedad: The ability of Vespira that allows him to imprint or shackle his oppressive force onto others or to simply make his presence known. The ability to control the precipice of repulsion or attraction are his to command which of course are within reason. As he lacked control in his previous life, the need and thirst to have the power of control over others burned deep within him.

Fuerza opresiva( Oppresion Force) -Vispera uses a downward motion with his hand, palm facing to the ground, to push those within a ten meter radius around him down onto the ground. As they are pushed the visage of black chains wrap around their arms and legs shackling them down. It requires those with a strength higher than Adept to break out of and move normally. Vispera can only use this three times in a topic before it is no longer able to be used.

Ley de la Fuerza Repulsiva (Laws of Repulsive Force) - Vispera uses an upwards motion with his hand, with his palm facing upward similar to Oppressive Force, to push those within a ten meter radius away from him. The repulsive force requires those with a strength higher than Adept to free themselves from. Vispera can only use this three times in a topic before it is no longer able to be used.

Enlaces Opresivos (Shackles of Oppression)- Vispera can target up to five people within his range of vision to chain or subdue those he deems as enemies. Used as a form of containment instead of destruction, the gravity like affect that keeps them in place can be broken by those with strength that is Adept or higher.

Fuerza De Trituración (Crushing Force) - Vispera points to his targets, infusing his bala with the force to crush those that it touches. When the bala come into contact with an opponent or object, they implode upon themselves dealing more damage.

VII. Resurrección


» Resereccion Name: Herscher (Ruler)

» Resereccion Release Phrase: Long live the king, Herscher!

» Release Actions: Points their right index finger down toward the ground.

» Resereccion Appearance:

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» Resereccion Abilities: When Vispera releases his Resereccion form, the area directly behind him becomes saturated in black, dense pocket of gravity that heavily resembles a black and green eye. In addition to the change in form, a set of chained wings apppear on his back as well.

Overwhelming Gravity: Vispera releases an overwhelming wave of gravity over the area of 20 meters, allowing him to control the area. While in this "wave" he can make things lighter or heavier without having to touch them. Alternatively he can bring this wave into a four sided closed box around someone before clenching his fists to crush them. The strength of the ability scales as he grows stronger and can be countered by those with high strength or durability

Black Hole: Using a greater amount of Reishi, Vispera creates a gravity induced affect similar to a Black hole directly above himself, using his position as the focal point. The center begins to pull anything with a strength lower than Adept toward and for those with a greater strength, affects them at a lower rate but still pulls them in. Once the center is reached, they are sucked in and crushed leaving nothing behind. After the end of Black Hole, Vispera's Resurrecion ends as well.



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I. Skill Sheet


(To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not fill your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. The staff member checking your app will also give you Will Skills in which you can add to your app when approved. Click the spoiler below to see what tier gets what kind of skills.)

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General Skills
  • Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Trained/Beginner/Untrained
  • General Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Weapon Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained


Racial Skills
  • Perquisa: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Sonido: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Cero/Bala: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Hierro: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Mental Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
  • Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained


IX. Role Play Sample


» Roleplay Sample:

There was something to be said about a final stand. Like many eras before them they were determined by an army and in some cases by one man. The wind blew past the pale female's frame and took the bells of her hair into its embrace passing them around before setting them back in place. As it would have it the small would slowly fall from their face as she took a more serious stance, the parasol that she had in her hands idly turning counterclockwise and clockwise as she looked at what was probably the last remnant of a once proud village. The elder male that stood in the forefront spoke for them, the rest rallying behind him. It almost reminded her of a story that had been told to her in the past. The story was simply about a band of samurai who made their last stand against a ninja opposition, the ninja being responsible for the death of their Shogun. The battle lasted days before the samurai had won, but at the cost of their own lives. This wasn't that story however.

These villagers were no samurai and in the face of a monster like Kenshin there would be no victory. Unless someone came to their aid and that wasn't going to happen. Toshi's eyes slowly glanced over to Amaterasu before going back to the final display of the Sunagakure ninja. In the back of her mind she knew that this would end in their defeat, but what would a display of power be if it wasn't going to be the end of something. As their words began to exchange, Toshi offered up a prayer for those killed in this massacre," Let whatever Gods be present take pity on the souls slain on this day. For whatever destination shall be their resting place be of peace and not strife," Toshi was not a religious person by any means. She did believe in a final resting place, but as for a singular God? Not so much.

As the roar of a dead man filled the air, Toshi couldn't help but feel their body ache in anticipation. Would the final stand of Suna become Kenshin's requiem? While the answer was obvious one could only believe in the 1% happening. As the group began their charge and the monster began his, the final battle for the village was finally upon them. A last testament to show just who this world would soon fall under or so she thought. Whatever blood flowed today would simply only pave the way for a world that would know fear, or whatever Kenshin's true motive was.

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« Application Checklist »
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  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
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  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


  • Comments/Notes: Welcome, just a few things that need address below before I am good to give you the pass.
  • Tier: TBD

    Will Skills
    • Willpower/Determination: TBD.
    • Mental Deduction: TBD.
    • Focus: TBD.



    Fuerza De Trituración (Crushing Force) - Vispera points to his targets, infusing his bala with the force to crush those that it touches.

    I'm a little confused on what this is supposed to entail, does his bala hit someone and then cause them to implode on themselves? Does it just make it stronger? Please expand a little more on it.

    Overwhelming Gravity: Vispera releases an overwhelming wave of gravity over the area of 20 meters, allowing him to control the area. While in this "wave" he can make things lighter or heavier without having to touch them. Alternatively he can bring this wave into a four sided closed box around someone before clenching his fists to crush them.

    The effect will scale off his tier by the way it seems to go off and certain aspects can work against it, like a high strength skill will be able to deal with it, or a high durability will endure.

    Black Hole: Using a greater amount of Reishi, Vispera creates a gravity induced affect similar to a Black hole directly above himself, using his position as the focal point. The center begins to pull anything with a strength lower than Adept toward and for those with a greater strength, affects them at a lower rate but still pulls them in. Once the center is reached, they are sucked in and crushed leaving nothing behind.

    This should end his resurreccion since it appears to be a finisher of sorts that would take away a lot of his reserves.



When you're done bump it in staffhelp and you should be ready for approval.



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[list][*]Comments/Notes: All done, welcome to the site.
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  • Mental Deduction: Beginner.
  • Focus: Beginner.


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