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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Valin Tu Ramirezoshecka [Approved 2-3+]   Fri May 20, 2011 5:17 pm



Character Name:
Valin Tu Ramirezoshecka

Character True Age:
1,290 yrs old

Character Appearance Age:
Looks young 17 yrs old

Character Gender:

[*]Freelancing (Looking for Work/Helps Innocents Hollow & maybe Innocent Humans too)
[*]Won't attack the Shinigami or give away their information


Human Past & Bret Williams Attitude
On the surface, Bret seems to be a shallow and self-absorbed man, infamous among many of his colleagues and subordinates alike for the selfish and narcissistic aura he gives off. He comes off to most as a sort of cocky layabout, shirking most of his duties and delegating his paperwork to his friends while sitting idly at his desk with an amused smile on his face as he procrastinates, but quick to take action when it appears that there is glory. During his business run, Bret Williams is a man who cares deeply about the people who trust and support him and goes to great lengths to ensure their safety and well-being, even at the risk of his own. As a man with considerable power, Williams considers himself a protector to people.

Valinotasho's Attitude
Throught his hollow years, Valinotasho was a relentless killer with a murderous personality. Showing just only rage and pain throughtout his years of the hollow race. During a battle, he would show some sense of regret but then it would go away and then the rage monster would come back and he would kill anybody.

Valin Tu's Attitude
As an arrancar, Valin and law binding and senseful atttitude always following orders when Aizen wanted him to do something and still they was some regret but still he accepted it. He maybe sometimes arrogant & battle harden. But when really deep inside..really deep down he's really good man. Now he was an true arrancar with carefree attitude but not anymore just an former arrancar with a caring atttitude and a desire for revenge against anybody who would hurt his arrancar race. He still wonders when he could just rest and live normal like humans do instead of eating them. Valin will listen to reason sometimes but he'll listen if he was in tight situation.Because his flaws, Valin loves boxing and hand to hand combat because the arancar loves using his fists instead of his zanapakuto. Mostly that being his best weakness in a battle. When fighting, Valin puts his full potential into a fight he doesn't leave anything out because in his mind that weakness. He loves to gives it his all. The arrancar does have a code of honor which he does live by any people who can't fight for themsleves then they shouldn't be harm. Valin somehow has a hero's mind maybe because Aizen's hogyoku wasn't strong enough and it manipulate the arrancar's way of thinking.


Valin stands with features similar to other characters. His hair is silver and his eyes are blue green and has a paler complexion like other Arrancar compared to Grimmjow. Valin also is more muscular than espadas showing how at first it seems that he is "better at stuff" than the others. Also in his dark attire, there appears to be a white band on his left wrist, which is most likely an injury due to the strike to that particular wrist dealt by two strong hollows during their fight. Valin wore the usual Black Coat, with a number of small differences. His pants were different, looking more casual, and loose. He also did not tuck the legs of his pants into his boots like the other members did, though Valin's "boots" more resembled black versions of his street shoes, and may not have been knee-high like the other members'. Valin's cloak had a vague resemblance to the ones worn byanother arrancar.

Because of his blindness, Valin wears a black blindfold to cover his eyes from the pain of the attack an espada gave him so long ago.

Bone Appearance:
The remains of his hollow head lays on his left eyebrow.

reiatsu Colour:


Sealed Zanpakutô:
The Zanpakutō is a sword of basic size and construction. It’s designs are the most defining factor that distinguishes the Zanpakutō from all the rest. The scabbard encasing the sword is a plain bright crimson black, and extending from the bottom of the sheath is a dark blue flame design that travels a quarter of the way up scabbard. In it sealed state in a basic katana sword which can give off shadow blasts from the tip of the blade.

Racial Abilities:
Enhanced Cero: Hollow flash from what it was originally called are high powered energy blasts which Darque can shoot his fingers or his hands. He would trained with this ability for hours trying to unleash a high power cero blast from one hand or one finger. Becoming an strong arrancar, Valin managed to fire off a large sized black cero from his right hand

Hierro: Which refers to the ultra tough skin of the arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakutō bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Yet if a strong and powerful attack or shikai attack was used then perhaps Valin's hierro might break.

Garganta: Really is how arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway. When used, the technique opens the dimensional fabric like a door.

Enhanced Sonido: This is the arrancar equivalent of the shinigami flash steps; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of sonido is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound used for flash steps.

Mano: An ability that Arrancar's use to deflect, stop or even pierce the enemy with their bare hands. When this technique is used with conjunction Hierro it power strengthens in terms of defence. Valin can combine this technique with Hierro which is called "Ma-Hierro" a strong which can block bankai but still feel the effects from it.

Increased Sensing & Pesquisa: This is the Arrancar equivalent of the shinigami ability to sense spiritual pressure. It functions very similarly to sonar. While using his ressurecion, Valin can use his ears to sense spiritual pressure almost like a supreme sensed blind man. Valin after loosing gained the augmented abilites of his other senses instead of his eyes but his ears, nose and touching have been helpful over the years. Until someone can help fix his eyes.


Resereccion Name:
Majinatujo Bastuji

Resereccion Release Phrase:
"Awaken Majinatujo Bastuji"

Release Actions:
When Valin holds his Zanpakutō up in front of him vertically and calls out its release command. The shadowlike energy started flowing from his Zanpakutō giving Valin shadow-like back spiritual energy. The shadow engulfs Valin in shadow void and then reappears in his resereccion state.

Resereccion Appearance:

In Valin's Resereccion state, he more demon that his normal arrancar his appearance is almost like a mutated bat who covered in red-pinkish finished hot lava. His hair is spiky white also he wears something like a mutated red coat with the same red-pinkish finished hot lava effect upon it. The resereccion arrancar does like a pair of large gargoyle wings on his back for purposes of flying or gliding around high winds currents. People well hollow had said he looks more like a vasto lorde instead of an arrancar while in his resereccion state, he doesn't mind.

Resereccion Abilities:
Enhanced Infra Red Sensing: Instead of using the five senses like a normal blind human would do. Valin's resereccion state eyes can actually see in only one spectrum of light. Infra red sensing the arrancar can see the person's heat signature from his eyes yet the only way he can see a person. However, if somebody did the surgery on his eyes then perhaps some new features could be done for future journeys or battles.

Enhanced Strength & Speed: In took months for rehealing, Valin thought his strengths and weaknesses needed to conquer. He trained countlessly improving his strength power. Valin is stronger then normal arrancar or resereccion Arrancar. He can break boulders one hand. His speed is enhancly fast movement to match, allowing him to keep up with other fast opponents or fast Arrancar. He still isn't a match for espada, powerful iramasha or shingami's captain needs some more training or experience if he's even ready to reach that level of power.

Arrancar Flight: With gargoyle wings, Valin has the ability of flying to different places whenever he wants do so. An arrancar needs to fly or super jump and with his new power can travel anywhere he wants.

Enhanced Hierro: Valin's resereccion hierro is like a black with white circle in the black hierro. Is an augmentation of his original hierro which can able to block weak attacks. If maybe able to block a strong attack but only once then second attack was the black hierro would break.

Sombre-bolas(Shadow Bullets): They were created from dark arrancar's light consumed by souls it pure white glass bullets attack that has a fast shunpo speed similiar to a vice captain's shunpo speed. Valin can summoned 12 long glass knives and each being an glass air blade. A glass air blade is made of pure glass and it uses the air from Valin's spiritual pressure to make it fly around. The tips of air blade is very sharp and pointy. It hurt, damage or kill weaker opponents. To stronger enemies, it'll be 24 angry bees dish medium like damage. Valin's can use the air sword bullets for various attack patterns depending on his spiritual pressure.

Sombre-hilo(Shadow Thread): Shadow Energy needles capable of ensnaring victims, and at the behest of their struggling. The attack started with a energy ball being formed in Valin hand and dark like needles ar spit up ensaring an enemy. It can easily block with defensive barrier or stronger attack.

Sombre-Estampido (Shadow Bomb): Valin raises his hand toward the opponent and forms a big, darken-black energy sphere. Then, he fires the attack at his opponent by drawing his hand a little backwards, only to thrust it forward at high speed. The Shadow Bomb flies at the opponent in form of a big, black ball with a short, red flaming tail, inflicting a huge amount of damage. Stronger enemies can block or dodge this attack it won't do much damage if it hit them.

Sombre-Cinético (Shadow Kinetic): This refers to moving objects from one place to another without using physical contact. It also means re-shaping of objects using the mind's energies. This starts when Valin focus on something with his right hand then a weird lightning energy picks up the object and throws it. The Kinetic energy has both close and far range. He can only use it three times because of the mental energy drain. Cant lift big objects like giant buildings & big ass boulders also it completely stop a medium sized attack coming his way.


Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
In his Dues Ex release state, Valin was a human sized, humanoid vasto lorde, with cloven hooves, a semi-reptilian hide, a pair of sweeping horns, two pairs of insectoid wings and one pair of chiropteran/bat wings. His entire body appears to be made of grey armor with accents and overtones of tyrian purple, and features ornamental decorations, such as gold trimming along his "crown", a vertical red gem in his forehead, as well as gold knee and elbow guards.

Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)


(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Adept
Skill Level: Sonido: Advanced
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Adept



Valin Tu Ramirezoshecka was once an hellbent Vasto Lorde known as Valinotasho. He was powerful enermy against humans eating them one by one and then everything was going well for him. Until that day when this Aizen fellow show up near the Hollow King, Valin didn't hear the conservation but still something was going down. He didn't like it a shinigami allowed to by here in the master's realm was unacceptable. Valin was about to deal with the guy until Gin stops him drawing his Zanpakutō to his neck telling him to back off. Aizen smiled at him asking someday maybe thise vasto might be stronger than ever but that if he comes to power soon. Aizen in his gang lefted leaving Valin confused and scare of the man wondering what his business was with the king of all hollows.

Still during Aizen/Barragan conservation, Valinotasho does remember the human past still couldn't believe that he was a hollow but the memories linger within. Years ago, Valinotasho was once a human named Bret Williams a decent member of Karakura town. He still wonders what happen to his real parents at birth and why they left him at the hospital. A foster kid who was taken in by two people who seemed to be rich but at that time he was happy just to have a home. Growing up he started regaining confidence that maybe he can make something of his life to make his new family proud of him. In high school, He was a honor roll student and something of a teacher's pet always trying to be better then the other kids but the high grades were his proof. During graduation, Bret was actually given the High School Achievement Award but perfect attendance and perfect general studies scores. Bret had a role model which was his stepfather always helping his son with homework and other school problems.The next step was college enrolling at Karkura state college with was difficult at his first year but his second years took a new direction. He met up with a girl named Suzuka Klein which was also having trouble with some college work they decided to help each other out. Those second and third years in college, Bret was scoring high jusy like in high school with Suzuka's help the plan was she would help him with his homework and he would help her with her homework. Then went their seperate ways during the final exams. Years Later, A man with a plan and the desire to run his own business after college with his dreams coming into fruition became the CEO of his own company. Those years in college were finally paying off but things came to a crashing halt for him one day he was arriving to work on a subway train. Until four hoodlums in mask came in and started robbing people then he sees one of the punks harassing a woman. Bret started wrestling the guy for the gun with was a big mistake as the gun went off and he was shot. At that moment, Bret life just ended the moment he woke up they was a strange chain on his chest something was wrong. They he saw his dead body then noticing his surrounding he was a spirit just about to past on but this chain was nuisance. He rips off the chain then he started change as his mind was tearing apart and his body started to chnage the spirit was becoming a hollow. Bret started to wonder what happen but his memories started to drift away being replaced with thoughts of killing humans and taking their souls. He started out in killing defeneseless spirits and eating them but sometimes he was confronted by some people calling themselves called soul reapers.

He started devouring other hollows and gaining their strength which he started growing stronger and becoming violent. The great accomplishment came when he was Menos from eating over 112,000 hollows and a whole lot of fights in about 215 years which then he was evolving into Vasto Lorde. Then some worse happen after eating some humans which he forgot his name until another hollow named him Valinotasho. Valin was a violent Vasto which got the attention of the Hollow King which then he became his servant. Looking back at the Aizen/Barragan conservation, Valin thought maybe it was time to seek power and maybe newfound strength. Maybe this Aizen character had it. Many years later, Varsh met up with Aizen again this time wanting to become stronger. At first Aizen didn't believe him and asked if he was willing to do anything to obtain this power. Valin was willing to kill his friends just to see if this stories that shinigami were telling where true enough. Valin agreed to follow Aizen's orders and then a strange ball appear from Aizen's hand and then it started floating around the vasto lorde. The black ball started giving Valin energy which was enough rip off his hollow mask turning almost human like. Aizen had created an arrancar thus Valin was the first created by him and then Gin wanted to know what his name was. Valin thought of one name that might satisfy both Aizen and Gin and thus Valin Tu Ramirezoshecka was born. Throughtout time Aizen started creating many more Arrancar and started allowing to train or eating some hollows maybe humans too. This was where the espada powers started coming through as Aizen started picking arrancar to becoming more powerful then they went and Valin was chosen from all the training and killing from his past and the present. He finally felt accepted to become the true arrancar. About 8 arrancar warriors were created at that time their goal was to teach other arrancar ways of defeating shinigami and vizards. Valin was almost a teacher at that point helping other Arrancar with cero and sonido abilities. He didn't like teaching people but Aizen did help him evolove into a powerful warrior so he did follow orders a lot. Some strong Arrancar were put to the test on many missions within Hueco Mundo taking care of problems or dealing with powerful Hollows.

Valin years later was given a mission to take out some shinigami as the espada killed two yet he couldn't kill the last. Aizen thought this might be a problem and quickly another espada was ordered to kill him during the next mission. Barragan Luisenbarn was given the order when the mission the espada were sent then one of them went crazy. The espada went a warpath killing some Arrancar, Valin try to stop and then it happens a sword in his stomach and his eyes slashed. Barragan told Valin that Aizen saw weakness within him and then the espada started to decay a bit. Barragan was using his resurrecion which meant Valin had to escape quickly or die ripping off his left arm he fell within a pit. Barragan was about to go after him until Tousen called him back saying the job was done then the espada left. After that, Valin was almost left for dead compressing his energy from the time being and eating menos to stay alive. He slowly started regenerating his arm from the number of hollows eaten. He thought it was sick but it was the only way to survive. He kept himself hidden for a while resting inside of Hueco Mundo hiding himself from hollows and shinigami.

Years Later, The only time he was seen by a shinigami was because he wanted to see what kind of espada had replace him. Valin lefted Hueco mundo masking his spiritual energy seeing some people running to Las Noches a new building something about saving a girl. Valin kept himself hidden within the sands at the time hoping these new Espadas wouldn't know that he was alive. He started heading back to Hueco Mundo trying to make sense of the situation.

RP Sample:
The pain was unbelievable still he made it back up the cliff. Barragan was gone and yet all his arrancar friends were dead still the espada was puzzled. Aizen turned his back on him what did he do wrong but Barragan did same something about him being weak. Aizen really bretayed him and still he didn't know what was going on but his left arm was gone and before doing anything else he needed to attend to that before moving on. During those long days, Valin started devouring lower hollows maybe hoping and praying ti would regenerate his arm but still the process wasn't working. It was making him stronger though Aizen that bastard lefted him to die so how could he ever trust him again. Decades later, Some hollows were hearing some news that somehow or some way Sosuke Aizen was dead and Ichimaru Gin was missing for the scene. Valin heard the news thinking it couldn't be true but a lot of strange things have happen, he wanted to something about it. A lot of spritual pressure was near Las Noches maybe some Arrancar were having meeting over who should replace Aizen. He didn't care Aizen and the Espada betrayed him and he didn't want anything to do with them. In his mind, Valin wanted to help the Soul society against any arrancar or Espada who put destroy peace they had. Valin saw some hollows going to the real world and then he followed them hoping to start a new life maybe help any soul reapers deal with the espada.

Valin was about to go on his journey to help until he was confronted by Soi Fon and she nearly killed him. Valin just wanted to help the Soul society and she though it was just a deceptional trick, she wanted to kill him. Valin tried explaining why he wanted to help but her actions were speaking much louder then her words. In the end, Valin managed to escape so screatch the idea of helping the Soul society in their time of need but perhaps maybe since nobody was running Las Noches maybe he could finally sit on Aizen's big throne. Nobody was controlling the surviving espada anymore so everything seemed good to this point. Using garganta, Valin arrived at Las Noches finding out somebody was taking over if that was true maybe helping the espada will their goals would be good enough to live with. The guy was undecided for now until Grimmjow approach him asking who he was and why he'd never seen him before, Valin started explaining his story. Grimmjow heard enough thinking this guy might be good to have on his side, Valin became the Number Two Espada even though during his years with Aizen even though he was the number two espada, he became the number one. The Number Two Espada of Grimmjow's gang wasn't so bad now maybe when the time comes perhaps Valin might surprise Grimmjow.

Now a devoted Espada, Valin wants to show the whole world that espada race is ready to take over the world by destroying the Soul society. Still the guy has second doubts about that but he doesn't want to meet Soi Fon ever again.

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Valin Tu Ramirezoshecka [Approved 2-3+]   Tue May 31, 2011 4:34 pm

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Comments/Notes: Okay well, the rules say that power draining isnt aloud. Take it out and it'll be fine.
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Valin Tu Ramirezoshecka [Approved 2-3+]   Tue May 31, 2011 4:56 pm

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