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+ B A S I C I N F O +

Name: Vincent Valentine
Age: 60
Gender: Male

Shifter Appearance: Vincent Valentine Valentine
Vincent is a man physically in his late 20s, and stands roughly six feet tall. He has crimson eyes and long black hair. He wears a red band over his head with his fringe emerging over it. Vincent's most distinctive feature is his tattered red cape, held in place over his shoulders and lower face by several buckles. Underneath his cape, Vincent's attire is black with several straps and buckles. Vincent wears a holster for his gun against his right leg, and pointed metallic boots. He also wears a golden gauntlet on his left arm. His weapon of choice is the Cerberus, a three-barreled revolver. Vincent has kept this look in all his appearances, with subtle variations.

True Appearance:



Vincent Valentine 240px-FFDoc_Chaos

~Vincent's Weapons~
Vincent uses a variety of different pistols, revolvers, shotguns and rifles, and possesses rather low stats, although he is one of the best magic-users.

Vincent's default weapon is the Cerberus.His ultimate weapon is the Death Penalty, whose strength increases with the number of enemies Vincent has killed.Vincent's guns typically have mediocre Attack power, but two of them have a 60% hit rate, meaning they will eventually miss, and all of his guns are long range. The 60% Accuracy makes Vincent a good choice for the Deathblow Materia, which inflicts double damage but has low Accuracy - the 60% hit rate can make up for this.

During the course of Dirge of Cerberus, Vincent acquires two
other guns. One, a bolt-action rifle, is christened the "Hydra." The other, the "Griffon," resembles a Thompson machine gun, and has a rapid-fire ability, although shoots slowly enough that it is possible to only shoot one bullet. All three guns can be equipped with accessories, such as longer or shorter barrels, a scope, and Materia.

Cerberus
Weight - 540
Firepower - 60
Firing Rate/Speed - 80
Range - 60
Capacity - 18

Griffon
Weight - 1050
Firepower - 25
Firing Rate/Speed - 140
Range - 20
Capacity - 35

Hydra
Weight - 1050
Firepower - 140
Firing Rate/Speed - 65
Range - 140
Capacity - 5

Death Penalty
Weight - 500
Firepower - 500
Firing Rate/Speed - 500
Range - 500
Capacity - 6

Cerberus -
The Cerberus is Vincent’s basic gun frame. It has average stats at all ranges which makes it the best for medium ranges.Vincent has been using this gun since the beginning.Its also a three-barreled revolver.

Griffon - The Griffon is a very fast frame but is has a low power. It is best used for short range distances.A Machinegun and it resembles to The Thompson Machine gun.It has a high firing rate but a low firepower.

Hydra - The Hydra is a slow gun frame but it deals lots of damage. It is best used for
long range combat.Hydra is a rifle and it resembles to most of the snipers but a greater firepower than any sniper.It has a powerful firepower but a low firing rate.

Death Penalty - The Death Penalty is Vincent's Ultimate Weapon.The Death Penalty is focused on being a rifle, the new version is completely made of metal, sports five unraveling chambers, and a menacing look that makes it resemble a revolver.It has a high firing rate and high firepower.
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Personality:

Dark and brooding over his past "sins", Vincent carries many burdens and secrets. Despite his cold personality, he is not uncaring; at a point where Cloud admits he thought Vincent was cold and did not care about the Planet, Vincent casually brushes off the remark. He also has a soft spot for Lucrecia, referring to her as a beautiful lady. He fiercely despises the professor Hojo for his various immoral actions, and it is the promise of meeting him that stirs him to accompany the party in Final Fantasy VII. Vincent is reluctant to speak, although when he does, he typically has something important to say.Nojima has noted that Vincent is naturally a loner, and had he not been a former ally of Cloud and his friends, it is likely that he would not have joined them in the battle with Bahamut SIN in Advent Children. His voice actor, Shougo Suzuki, noted that Vincent's few appearances had a profound impact each time they occur, and that Tifa's remark "they're our friends", after Vincent's arrival, shows his underlying warmth.

Seemingly stoic, very quiet, and withdrawn, Vincent isn't too much of a people person. At first glance, he would appear to be the type to snap your neck if you even looked at him funny, but in truth, this is the exact opposite. Despite his strongest attacks being that of monsters, Vincent is far from the mindless killing machine Hojo believed to have 'created'. Years in the Turks have molded him to think and plan, to conceal far more intelligence than first believed. He just lets others plan first.

Even with his worst enemies, he's always the type to get information first, then put a bullet through your head if the answer isn't acceptable. Since his early days, and even now, he has always had a strong sense of morals. If you're not intentionally trying to attack people and just acting normal, he wouldn't give it a second thought. If people at risk because of what's being done, and that person is getting a kick out of a violent situation, then no, that's not right. Though other times, he won't even give a warning before he steps into a dicey
event.While it seems as though Vincent's "take them as they come and leave the thinking to others" attitude may portray him as selfish, it's mostly a cover-up and it wouldn't be long until he shows otherwise. He has friends, and he's determined to hold onto those friends down to his last breath, even if it meant pushing them away.

If he mentions he doesn't want to help, he does.If he would leave one to die, it would be for their own good.As much as he tries to hide it, Vincent loves kids. No matter what the situation, if there is a child involved, Vincent will immediately come to the rescue, hiding his concern all the way. There is a need to protect there, to give something to others what he had been given himself. A hero. Protection. Though despite this, Vincent still bears an unspeakable grief from the loss of his love and the treachery of Hojo, but, slowly but surely, he is becoming more and more mellow and possibly, a bit happier. The process is long and trying, but damn it all, if he didn't see it through.
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+ B A C K G R O U N D +

History

~Vincent's History~

About twenty five to thirty years before Final Fantasy VII, Vincent was a member of the Turks, then known as Shinra Electric Power Company "Department of Administrative Research". When he was assigned to supervise the Jenova Project in Nibelheim, he fell in love with a scientist named Lucrecia Crescent, an assistant to Gast Faremis. When he discovered her link to his deceased father, Grimoire Valentine,
Lucrecia distanced herself from Vincent, ultimately entering a
relationship with her associate, Professor Hojo, instead. Lucrecia
became pregnant afterward, and Hojo planned to use the fetus as a test subject for the Jenova Project.

Vincent objected to the use of humans — especially Lucrecia — as test subjects. Even so, in the interest of science, Lucrecia proceeded with the treatment and became very sick as a result. Outraged, Vincent confronted Hojo in the Shinra Mansion's
underground laboratory and a heated argument ensued. Hojo ended it with treachery, pulling a gun from his lab coat and shooting Vincent in the chest. He proceeded to use Vincent's half-dead body as the subject for experiments involving strengthening the endurance of the human body, and
metamorphosis, enabling the body to transform into various monstrous forms. While Hojo did succeed in making Vincent's body stronger, the experiments were a failure because Vincent, though still living, remained in a death-like state.

As a last resort to rehabilitate him, Lucrecia infused the Chaos-tainted Mako into his broken-down body. The procedure worked, as Vincent's body, due to Hojo's previous experiments, was strong enough to become a vessel for Chaos; however, Chaos was completely uncontrollable and was only stopped when the Protomateria had a reaction to Chaos. The Protomateria, discovered by Grimoire alongside Chaos, was theorized by Lucrecia to have been created by the Planet "out of necessity as a means to control Chaos and prolong its own inevitable fate", and was put in Lucrecia's laboratory. She put it inside Vincent's chest, and thus Vincent was able to control Chaos to a degree. Vincent later awakened on the operating table and responded to
his modified body with both anguish and rage.Believing himself responsible for Lucrecia's illness after Sephiroth's birth, Vincent locked himself inside a coffin in the Shinra Mansion basement, where he slept mostly undisturbed for twenty-three years to
atone for his "sins". He constantly relived his "nightmare" as a
punishment for his inability to stop Lucrecia from submitting to Hojo's experiment on her unborn baby.

On December 19th, 0006, in Episode 19, Vincent and Veld search for the Support Materia for the Summon Zirconiade
at the Shinra Mansion. While searching, Veld awakens Vincent inside his coffin. Despite the differences in their physical appearance, Vincent and Veld knew each other when they were with the Turks. When he wakes up, Vincent helps the Turks fight AVALANCE, and displays sharp shooting skills, though he is rather jaded after his long sleep. It would turn out the Materia was hidden inside the mansion and Vincent knew of its existence. He gave it to Veld before he returned to his rest once more, refusing to leave with the Turks.

During the year following Final Fantasy VII, Vincent traveled the
world, mysteriously popping in and out, retrieving information and
helping those in need, keeping even looser connection with his friends than the rest of the party. In 2009, he eventually follows rumors to the Forgotten Capital, where the Remnants of Sephiroth were stationed. After Tseng and Elena were struck down and tortured by the trio at the Northern Crater, Vincent rescued them and helped them recover, while getting as much information about the remnants as he could.

When Kadaj begins to fight Cloud in the Forgotten City, Vincent rushes in and opens fire at Kadaj while picking up Cloud and carrying him to safety.Resting in a remote part of the forest, Vincent tells Cloud about the Geostigma, and Sephiroth's impending rebirth. Cloud, still tormented over his guilt at being unable to prevent Aerith's and Zack's deaths, asks Vincent if sins are ever forgiven. Vincent simply replies with "I've never tried". After a few minutes of thought, Cloud decides he will try, and tells Vincent he would "phone in the verdict".

Vincent shows up with the rest of AVALANCHE for the battle against Bahamut SIN, asking Tifa where he could buy a cellphone(a joke in the film; he apparently is the only member of AVALANCHE without one). Aboard the Shera, Vincent tells the party Kadaj is Sephiroth's "larva form" and would most likely become him, while Cloud duels him atop the Shinra Headquarters remains. Although the party are eager to help, Vincent says Cloud can handle him alone.
During the bonus feature, Reminiscence of Final Fantasy VII, Vincent makes a call to Cloud. At some point after Advent Children, Vincent purchased a cellphone, and made a point to relay a message to Yuffie that she had no right to call it.

A year following the events of Advent Children, in 2010, Vincent is called into duty once again. When the mysterious group Deepground began attacking people around the world, Vincent and the World Regenesis Organizations start investigating. Deepground, they found, was a group based from secret experiments underground in the Shinra Building trying to awaken
the final Weapon, Omega.To do this, they were hunting Vincent because he housed the Protomateria needed to control it. Vincent is forced to fight off the constant attacks while trying to solve the mystery of his dark past.

Eventually, he gets his answers with the help of a young Tsviet named Shelke.Deepground is able to steal the Protomateria from Vincent's body, and Chaos becomes increasingly unstable within him throughout the game.At the end, it is revealed a digitized version of Hojo was the plot's mastermind. Chaos is finally unleashed and defeats Hojo, Deepground, and Omega. When Vincent concludes his mission, he disappears within the
Crystal Cave where Lucrecia lay for quite some time. Cloud's party eventually sends a befriended Shelke to retrieve Vincent, who has made his amends and forgiven himself for his "sin".

Dirge of Cerberus -Final Fantasy VII- revealed that when
Vincent confronted Hojo he was shot, and turned into a sample for Hojo's metamorphosis experiment. The experiment was a success and left Vincent effectively immortal and with the ability to assume various demonic transformations. It seems the longer Vincent lives the more transformations he evolves and the stronger they become. Upon discovering this, Lucrecia took his body and attempted to save him by implanting the Chaos gene within him. While Vincent was revived by this process, he became Chaos itself and had no control over the form. The
Protomateria then appeared and Lucrecia used the Materia to suppress Chaos to allow Vincent to have some control over the transformation. In a flashback, Vincent wakes up on a table in a lab, and looks down to find himself in his Galian Beast form. Hojo later reveals implanting Chaos into Vincent was part of his plan all along, which is why he performed the metamorphosis experiment on him in the first place, in order to allow him to combine with Chaos.

It is ambiguous precisely what happened between Vincent's
awakening in the laboratory and the beginning of his extended slumber. In a note written by Hojo - the first clue provided for uncovering Vincent - he claims to have put Vincent to sleep in the basement himself. While there was originally much conjecture as to whether Vincent's sleep was fully voluntary versus induced, because of his attitude toward it, and the mystery of his in-game attire and long hair, a flashback scene in Dirge of Cerberus clearly illustrates Vincent was experimented on and then immediately put to sleep in his current appearance as a Turk. His change of appearance to his current design is unexplained.

~Demon's History~
Stated in the Omega Reports, Chaos was first described in an ancient Cetra tablet. Later, a team of scientists that included Grimoire Valentine and Lucrecia Crescent found a small pool of tainted Lifestream within the Crystal Cave, hypothesizing that Chaos would arrive here at the destined time, and later excavated the Protomateria from its depths. With samples of the Mako and the newly discovered Protomateria brought back for experimentation, Grimoire died in an experiment associated with the discovery. Shinra used the tainted Mako in an attempt to create stronger SOLDIERs within Deepground, which resulted in the birth of Nero The Sable.The scientific investigation of Chaos and Omega later comes to a complete stop when other scientists dismiss and criticize Lucrecia's report.

Chaos's nature is revealed explicitly later in Dirge of Cerberus -Final Fantasy VII-, such as what exactly he is, how he was discovered and how he links to Vincent. Chaos makes frequent appearances throughout the game and most of the information about him is revealed by Shalua Rui, Shelke, and Lucrecia.
Chaos is first seen in Dirge of Cerberus at the end of Chapter 3 when Vincent Valentine meets Rosso The Crimson.The two fight during a cutscene with Vincent ultimately losing, as he
is unaware of the strength of his opponent, and being hurled through a building wall. When he emerges a few seconds later he is Chaos and uses his power to knock Rosso away. As in Final Fantasy VII, he still seems to have control over himself while in this form, as the Protomateria is still within his body.Vincent awakes later to find himself in a regenerative chamber in the World Regenesis Organization Headquarters. Shalua, who had found Vincent and brought him to the WRO to recover, releases him and tells him about Lucrecia's research on Chaos. Vincent does not seem to know that Lucrecia was researching Chaos
and Omega, but before he can ask more about Chaos, Deepgroundattacks, forcing him to leave his questions until later and fight.

Chaos is not mentioned again until Chapter 5 when Vincent is in the Nibelheim mansion. When he finds a piece of Materia
that contains a recording of Lucrecia's, Vincent hears Lucrecia explain to him what Chaos and Omega mean to the world. Lucrecia tells Vincent in the recording that Omega will be the end of the world, though she does not mention exactly what part Chaos plays in this.

After battling his way through the mansion, Vincent comes across Rosso once more. After a small talk, Rosso flees and Vincent chases after her to the mansion entrance where he fights a Black Widow robot. After the fight, Rosso catches Vincent off-guard and removes a piece of Materia from his chest. As she does this, Vincent, who has collapsed to the ground, transforms once again into Chaos, but instantly transforms back. Rosso comments it appears that Vincent cannot control Chaos without the Materia she just extracted, but before she is about to kill him, Yuffie arrives and rescues him.

From this point on, Chaos becomes more and more unstable within Vincent. Aboard the Shera during Chapter 7, Vincent briefly becomes Chaos, slashing out at nothing, tearing deep gouges into the wall. He is only brought out because he sees an image of Lucrecia walking toward him, snapping Vincent's mind back into place.

He gets another bout of Chaos outside the Shinra Headquarters in the ruins of Midgar at the end of Chapter 8. It is here that Shelke explains to him that, after the Protomateria was taken from him, his mental defense against Chaos was weakened, and he was slowly losing all control. She also explains that Chaos, while a part of Vincent, acts independently from Vincent himself and explains that Chaos shall be born before the Planet dies and shall gather together all life for Omega.Chaos appears once again after Azul knocks Vincent unconscious after their fight at the end of Chapter 9. Chaos goes wild, impales Azul with his own gun and then knocks him off the elevator they were on. Vincent has a flashback of his time after he was shot by Hojo and Lucrecia was trying to revive him. Hojo comments on Chaos and Omega, but no information is given on them.

Chaos is next mentioned in another flashback in Chapter 10.
Lucrecia and Grimoire Valentine, Vincent's father and a fellow scientist interested in Chaos and Omega, are in the Crystal Cave which, according to Grimoire, is where Chaos is supposed to awaken.

Hojo, or rather, a digital version of him inside Weiss,
explains to Vincent near the end of Chapter 11 exactly how Chaos exists within him. Due to Hojo's experiments of Vincent many years ago, Vincent's body became more durable and thus Chaos could exist inside him. He also says that Chaos is born of a tainted Lifestream.

Vincent tries to use Chaos to fight against Weiss but fails.
Vincent hallucinates that Lucrecia is standing in front of him; she
tells him to try and control Chaos, not let Chaos control him. Vincent does so successfully by utilizing the Protomateria within Weiss and uses Chaos's power while retaining his human form and defeats Weiss.

At the end of Chapter 11, Chaos finally takes full control over
Vincent's body when Omega is summoned to, according to Shelke, counterbalance Omega's appearance. Shelke then uses a SND to retrieve the Protomateria and return it to Vincent so that he can control Chaos once more.

Before Vincent gains complete control over Chaos the player
learns, through another flashback scene, what Lucrecia did to Vincent so that Chaos resides in him. It seems that after Vincent had been shot by Hojo and experimented on, he was still dying. Lucrecia tried to save him by infusing a tainted Lifestream into him as she believed that her thesis on Chaos could potentially save him. However, while this stopped Vincent's body from decaying, it also meant he was permanently Chaos with no control over it. It was then that Lucrecia discovered the
Protomateria and used it so that Vincent could control Chaos, however, although it is not said, it appears that Vincent resumed decaying as when Lucrecia tries to use it, her computer screen flashes red, like a sign of failure.

It is unknown exactly what happens to Vincent after this or how he stops decaying, however, due to the events of Final Fantasy VII and flashbacks that are seen, it can be assumed that Vincent woke up and realized what he had become and then went into his deep slumber.

Vincent as Chaos goes to combat Omega and Weiss. After the battle with Weiss, Omega begins ascending so Vincent uses Chaos to destroy Omega as they are opposites. However, it appears that after this Vincent, along with Chaos, dies. During the ending movie after the credits, we see Vincent, who did survive fighting Omega, saying to Lucrecia that Chaos and Omega returned to the Planet.

~Vincent's History (After his previous history, Custom-Made)~
After everything happened and its a past, he finally went back to his home safely.His chest was still in pain, he hold onto the pain.It was the same pain while the chaos was in his body.His sight then suddenly went black.He was unable to see, or knowing what happened to him.After a few years later, he woke up.He woke up from his bed, he thought he only slept for a day.He stood up and suddenly went out of control, he then turned into chaos and went berserk.Himself, was out of consciousness.Chaos was destroying everything around him, after he woke up from his unconsciousness, he take control over his body back again, turning back into his own form.He quickly find a protomateria and put it into his chest, to be able to control the chaos inside him.He thought chaos already gone to the Planet.But the truth is, it didnt.

He then saw a black portal in front of him, it was unknown to know what it is.He decided to went in and everything around him turned black, after a few minutes later, a light then shines in front of him.He then fell out from the portal and landed on the ground safely before his face was landed down on the ground.He was in the place that was called as, "The Demon King's City".He sighed and walk around the place.He then walk over the bridge wihout any emotion or any scared expressions.He just simply walk over the bridge.After he walked over the bridge, he seen a city, it was a wide city.After seeing those, he would then live in the demon world himself, while finding a place to live and stay.But the thing is, where will he live?After he thought of that, he went around the city to find a place to live.After a few hours later, he found an abandoned mansion.He decided to live there for a few days or a few months to find the same black portal and bring himself back to his real world.
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+ P O W E R S +

Natural Abilities: Shifter Appearance,Akuma Kyodo and Boru Shi

Unique Abilities:

Limit Break -
Vincent's Limit Breaks are quite different from the others'. He has only one Limit Break for each of the four levels. When Vincent initiates a Limit Break, he turns into a monster, who is constantly berserk, and stays that way until the battle is over, win or lose. When he shifts his form, Vincent's stats increase and heal his wounds(It only heals fatal wounds and doesnt heal any minor and moderate wounds), but he cannot shift back at will. Thus, while his Limit Breaks can be powerful, they are risky. If Vincent should be Knocked Out though, he will transform back to his normal form.

Ultimate Limit Break - Vincent would had no control over Chaos once Vincent transforms into him, his stats change and he uses unique attacks. Vincent's Defense and Magic Defense will be doubled while he is Chaos and he uses the attacks Chaos Saber and Satan Slam.Chaos Saber hits all foes with an attack power 2.5 times stronger than Vincent's normal attack and Satan Slam also hits all foes, but with an attack power 5.625 times stronger than Vincent's normal attack power

Shishi Mōdo Appearance: None

Shishi Mōdo Abilities: None

Satsugai Tsūru: None

Mukō Jōtai Appearance: None

Mukō Jōtai Ablities: None

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+R P S A M P L E +

Role Play Sample:
Vincent would sit down quietly, resting.He would then hear a gunshot, coming from the left.He stood up and jump over the wall and sees a bandit holding a handgun and already shot someone down.He took out his cerberus, pulling the trigger and fires at the bandit, hitting him on the head as the blood would flow out from his head, having a headshot and a critical hit.The bandit then kneel down and fell onto the floor, dead.He would spin his cerberus and put it back to its place.He then ran away and jump over the same wall and lands smoothly.He would took out his gun quickly and reloads it.He would then put it back again.

He would look around his place with his crimson red eyes, sighing slightly in boredom.He would then look at the sky, while he would inhale the fresh air into his lungs, and exhales out the carbon dioxide."The sky is beautiful... and the breeze is good... isnt it...?", He spoke with a deep voice.The Male would then look around his surroundings, feeling that someone is hiding and stalking him.He would exhale out a cold breath, his eyes twitching.The wind was blowing to his direction, his tattered red cape would be blown by the wind and flew up, as the wind stops, his tattered red cape then went down.He would stand up and walk away silently.

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+ S K I L L S H E E T +

(DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills

  • Za Koa Manipulation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Spells/Summonings: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Jigoku Sokudo Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills

  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Tue Jun 14, 2011 7:58 am

This application is good and all, but I feel you have not given enough detail to the different weapons you have assigned to him. in short, i think you need to properly show exactly how each weapon works, how much range they have and what they look like etc.

Also, %255 hit chance? 100% hit chance means it will never miss which is god mod because your attacks 'need' to be dodge able. 50% chance it average for most characters so if you want to up his accuracy, bump it to %60 or something less massive.
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Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:21 am
Something you left out Chaozi, if you are going to create another character from another anime you need to bleachify their history. Yours has information about Shinra and final fantasy 7, you will need to change that so it fits with bleach.




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Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:06 am
The Application is Done and Fixed. Vincent Valentine 213265

Vincent's Weapons - [Fixed]

History - [Fixed] (Made a custom-made history)

All is fixed!


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Wed Jun 15, 2011 1:41 am
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[-]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [-]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: You need to expand your history. I only counted 7 out of the 10.
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The application is Done and Fixed.

Personality - [Fixed]

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Vincent Valentine Empty Re: Vincent Valentine

Tue Mar 19, 2013 12:10 pm
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A'ight! This is has been in here long enough!
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