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lionus
lionus
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Joined : 2012-11-22
Posts : 984
Age : 28
Location : convict island aka Australia

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Left_bar_bleue10/100Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Empty_bar_bleue  (10/100)
Tiers:

Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Empty Re: Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2]

Thu Jun 06, 2013 2:46 am
Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Liocheck_zps9665eefc

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes:

Hokay so ive got a few things listed to fix up here so lets smash straight through em.

1. why is her last name the same as Grimmjow, if she is related i will need proof that you have permission. from what i can see in your history it doesn't have any real links but i might as well check anyway

2. Racial abilities - Gran ray cero is a big no no. This is an espada exclusive technique and inst allowed straight off the bat.

3. unique abilities - her swordsman ship although it could be seen as quite good, should NOT be though of as on captain or espada level when you don't even know how strong she could be in tier id really prefer if you rephrased that.

4. resserecion - Augmented strength alone shouldn't be capable of just simply stopping bankai leveled attacks, please change that. I'm fine with pretty much everything else her except the gran ray cero, yet again this is an espada exclusive move and any old arrancar shouldn't have it.

5. strike out the deus ex for the current moment until its all approved and the tier is set, it all seems to be in order and quite fine though.

All in all this wasn't that bad an app and when those changes have been made i will happily approve this for ya. when done either post within the app or inform me about it, same goes for any questions you have.

Tier: TBA



Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] M9rTQZk



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lionus
lionus
Moderator
Joined : 2012-11-22
Posts : 984
Age : 28
Location : convict island aka Australia

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Left_bar_bleue10/100Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Empty_bar_bleue  (10/100)
Tiers:

Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Empty Re: Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2]

Thu Jun 06, 2013 7:34 pm
Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Saber_zps5bf99f04


Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance:Adept
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: thanks for working with me on this one and powering through with no complaints or that. you can uncross dues ex now and use it as well. As foe the segunda etapa i dont think after reading through she would be valid to start off as a 0 tier she is a very solid app and all but id prefer if you worked your way to that man
Tier:1-4+



Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] M9rTQZk



Henrex
Henrex
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Joined : 2016-01-20
Posts : 4404
Age : 23

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Left_bar_bleue419100/999999Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Empty_bar_bleue  (419100/999999)
Tiers:

Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2] Empty Re: Anastasia El Dante Castillo [APPROVED, 0-2]

Fri Feb 10, 2017 7:38 pm
[mod]Moving this to archives, as there is a new version of this application that was recently approved.

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t17384-anastasia-el-dante-castillo-updated-approved-0-2#112447[/mod]
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