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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Kukaku Shiba [APPROVED, 1-3+]   Sat Oct 22, 2011 6:46 pm

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Kukaku Shiba


Gender:Female

Age: 1000

Appearance: kukaku Shiba is of a slight high, though being usually about with a sense of priority, and Purpose to what she does. Her face is gaunt and pale in complexion to her Eyes which are of dark red color, which show gentle features within them. Being framed by deep dark black lashes. these being delicate. Her hair, you will notice, Is black and uneven being majorly spiky on one side. The other, being wrapped up by bandages which are pure white, and luminous bits of hair spiking through them . Next, her neck is delicate, like a flower. Though it shapes down to a wide shoulder, and a decent amount of clevage. Her blade is usually found on her back being strapped in. Her lips are of a lush red, her hips are curved wide, onto thin and feminin legs. Aswell as long slender arms. Usually found wearing a kimono.

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality:


=Impact]]LOW ON PATIENCE[/size]<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Kukaku Shiba is low on patience because the fact of the matter is. If you are being a jack ass, and deciding to do random crap for no reason. If she asks you to stop once, thats all the warning you are going to get. As ichigo Found out easily. In the fact of the matter that he got his ass pummled repeatedly for being a moron. This is also why Her brother gets alot of greif, because of the fact of the matter she just has not alot of patience for him.

=Impact]]SuperBitchism[/size]

Kukaku shiba, is a major bitch some times, depending on what happens, It is the manner of how she acts. She has her terf, and she would like it if you stayed off it. And if your on it. Please do her a favor. Just behave and dont get on her bad side .Shes like a super bitch straight from hell with a blade and temper to match .So if you see her, give her a wide birth some times thats the smartest thing to do . If you cant, just hope shes in a good mood.

[size=18]Caring[/size]

Dont let kukaku shiba's hard demeanor get on your nerves. She does care about people, though sometimes those people are who get on her nerves most. As seen when she fired off her brother towards the soul society, She hoped he would be safe. She may never show it, but she sure as hell cares about people. Even if she shows it by being there worst nightmare.

[size=18]Quick Witted [/size]

Kukaku shiba is quick witted, and is hard to pull one over on. Being as she , is one of the main buisness women in the rukon district. But she can aswell discern between situations attacks and trivialmatters easily at once, But she can sometimes get on overload, and become a headache wriddled mess.


THE BEAST

Kukaku Shiba, is a beast in name and in person, she is one who you do not want to cross. She aswell, can walk into any situation, and seem to get it handled. Or, like with ichigo, she will go utterly crazy and kick someones ass, Bitchy, And sometimes will break down, though not often, SHE is the definition of the word beast, If you think im rong, Ask around i KNOW, what a beast, im right, though she Is the beast.
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History/Background


Kūkaku was educated by Koganehiko and Shiroganehiko, who continued to stay in her service after the fall of the Shiba family. After Kaien's death, Jūshirō Ukitake informed her of the events surrounding Kaien's death. Kūkaku's home used to be located close to the West Gate of Seireitei. She then moved to a location further away from the gate, and changed the design of the house to have Human hands holding a banner with her name on it

PLOT INVOLVEMENT



Kūkaku greets Yoruichi and the Ryoka.


After an unsuccessful attempt to break into Seireitei, Yoruichi leads the Ryoka to Kūkaku's house. Koganehiko brings them to the door of Kūkaku's room. Before he can introduce them, Kūkaku tells him to open the door, stating that it seems there is a rare guest. She greets Yoruichi, saying that it has been a long time since she last saw her and asks who the people with her are. Yoruichi asks for her help and explains their situation to her. Kūkaku agrees to help, saying that she cannot refuse since Urahara is involved. However, she states that while she trusts Yoruichi, her trust does not extend to her companions. She therefore decides to send Ganju with them. She opens a door to allow him in and is surprised to learn that they have already met Ganju.

Kūkaku beats Ichigo and Ganju into submission.

Kūkaku beats the pair into submission when they start to fight and warns Ichigo that if he does not like the way she runs her household, then he should leave. She accepts his apology and instructs the group to follow her. As they walk along a corridor, Uryū Ishida notes that it is well lit considering they are underground. Kūkaku tells him that she planted light vines between the walls and ceiling. She ignores his follow-up question, instead telling Ganju to open a door and revealing the base of the chimney-like structure beside her house. Ichigo and Uryū ask what it is and she replies that she will use it to send them into Seireitei from the sky, revealing that she is a master of fireworks.

She calls for Koganehiko and Shiroganehiko to raise the platform they are standing on. The ceiling retracts and the platform ascends to just above ground level, where tells the others that it is her personal fireworks station. After she scolds Ganju again, Uryū questions whether they could survive the attempt. He is then hit on the head by a Reishūkaku, which Ichigo then catches. Kūkaku tells him to place his reiatsu into the sphere. When Ichigo asks how to do this, she tells him to focus his reiatsu on his palm as if he was using Kidō, saying that she thought all Shinigami knew how to use Kidō. Yoruichi tells her that Ichigo is not an officially trained Shinigami and thus does not know any Kidō. She tells Ganju to show him and beats the pair when they do not co-operate.

Kūkaku explains about the Reishūkaku.

As Ganju demonstrates the cannonball formed by the Reishūkaku, Kūkaku tells them that Seireitei is surrounded by a wall of Sekkiseki which generates a special energy wave from its cut surfaces, forming a barrier above and underneath the city. As Ganju tires, she tells him to maintain the cannonball, saying that she will launch them towards the city and the cannonball will allow them to break through the barrier rather than be killed upon contact with it. She then orders them to a training area to prepare. As they leave, Ganju asks her if is she is really going to help them. Ganju states that he will not help a Shinigami, no matter what she might say to their brother. Kūkaku silences him, reminding that she told him not to bring that up ever again. She instructs him to go and not to let anyone see his "pathetic" expression. After he leaves, Kūkaku apologizes to Kaien, saying that she is going to help a Shinigami like the one that killed him. She notes that if he was alive and she did not help them, Kaien would likely scold her.

Kūkaku scolds Ichigo over his failure to control the Reishūkaku.


Later, Ichigo is able to activate the Reishūkaku. Kūkaku notices the pressure and tremor caused by this and rushes to investigate. She finds Ganju and asks him what happened. He apologizes to her and she opens a door to see Ichigo inside a large sphere of energy. She tells him to focus and refine his reiatsu, which he does. She then scolds and beats him when he loses concentration, causing it to explode.] When the group are ready to depart, they gather at the base of the cannon. Kūkaku asks Ichigo where Ganju is, but he quickly arrives and begins to talk about Kaien. She unsuccessfully tries to silence him. When he finishes, she compliments his words and tells him not to run away during their mission. She then asks them if they are all ready.

Kūkaku asks Ganju if he was studying and if he has learnt the spell needed to control the flight of the cannonball. She states that she will use "Kakaku style version 2" and asks him if he can handle it, which he claims he can. She opens a door at the base of the cannon and orders the group to enter. Noting that it is almost dawn, she states that she will launch them when the sun rises. After launching the cannonball, she tells Ganju to take care of himself.

Kūkaku defeats Hikonyūtō with Kidō.

Several days later, Kūkaku visits Jidanbō Ikkanzaka, commenting that he has slept for five or six days straight. She invites him to go for a walk with her, saying that she wishes to see Yoruichi. Sometime later, she and Jidanbō make their way to Sōkyoku Hill after Sōsuke Aizen reveals himself as a traitor. She tells Yoruichi that she became bored and came to see how she was doing, before helping Jidanbō attack the other Gate Guardians, defeating Hikonyūtō with Kidō. After Aizen and his forces are seemingly subdued, the Menos rescue him, Gin Ichimaru, and Kaname Tōsen, and both Kūkaku and Jidanbō watch them as they depart for Hueco Mundo.

Rukia apologizes for her role in Kaien's death.

After the conflict within the Seireitei has ended, Kūkaku forces Ganju to do push-ups, saying that he was of little use in the second half of the battle. She tells him that she will make sure that he is in the frontlines from the start the next time. They are interrupted by the arrival of Rukia Kuchiki. Kūkaku asks what she wants and Ganju tries to tell her who she is, but she cuts him off, saying that she is the one who killed Kaien. Rukia apologizes, saying that she was cowardly for not doing so before. Kūkaku cuts her apology short, saying that it is too long and hits her when she tries to continue. She reveals that she heard the details from Jūshirō Ukitake and decided that she would forgive Rukia if she just said one word of apology. She subsequently invites Rukia, Ichigo and Orihime Inoue to share a meal with her household.

Bount arc (anime only)Edit


Note: Events occurring in this arc are only in the anime and do not constitute canon material.

Kūkaku yells at Ganju.

Having changed the location of her house, Kūkaku sends Ganju to the Human World to assist Ichigo and his friends in dealing with the Bount. When Ganju returns, she disciplines him for being useless in the Human World and only taking care of the convenience store he was working at. She apologizes to the newly arrived Ichigo and the others for Ganju's uselessness. Ichigo states that he's surprised that Kūkaku knows about convenience stores, but this angers Kūkaku, who believes that he was making fun of her. Yoruichi reports on the situation with the Bount and what they're planning to do. Yoruichi asks if they can all stay there for a while since it would be easier for them to move about. Kūkaku tells Koganehiko and Shiroganehiko to prepare a meal.

Yoruichi and Kūkaku discuss Ichinose's involvement.

Kūkaku asks the group how they will track the Bount down, only for them to explain about the Modified Souls. Kūkaku is surprised that the Mod-souls were put into dolls. As the group leave to eat, Kūkaku speaks privately with Yoruichi, telling her that she knows that she is hiding something. She asks Yoruichi why she is not going to the Seireitei. Yoruichi tells her that a Shinigami, Maki Ichinose, is working with the Bount and that he has an ability to hide his reiatsu and whereabouts and it would thus be safer not to stay in Seireitei. Kūkaku realizes that the reason Yoruichi wants to stay here is so Ichinose doesn't deduce their strategies.
Kūkaku silences Ganju.

The members of Ganju's Gang inform the group of what happened at a gambling house in Kusajishi. Ichigo wonders if it's Kariya and Ganju remarks that if it was, Kariya had picked a good place. Kūkaku cuts him off and explains that the place he was at is one of the most dangerous places, meaning that there's a lot of brute force to be found there. She states that he would be quite formidable if he recruited them all and Kūkaku gets angered at the two of Ganju's members who went there. Ganju states that they'll head there tomorrow morning then, but Kūkaku punches him and tells him not to be lazy and that he should go there now.
Gotei 13 Invasion Army arc (anime only)








Preparing for the worst when the Reigai began to take over Soul Society, Yoruichi arranges for Kūkaku to stand by as backup. When Kagerōza Inaba removes the limiters on his Reigai and they begin to overwhelm the captains, Kūkaku, Jidanbō and Ganju help them escape. She allows them to treat their wounds at her home.

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: (Shi shi in japenese |THE BEAST IN ENGLISH )
Appearance:


Inner World:

Kukaku shiba's inner world looks alot like a battle feild. There are thousands of craters riddling it, as blood is spattered every where, The center being a ruined city in which the very essense of her Zampucto is. Though while aswell, the sky is deep blue the stars easily visible through the night sky, It is quiet, at times and at others is filled with screams that torment Kukaku Shiba.




Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : The sword itself in its sealed state looks like a run of the mill short samurai sword which had a red cloth at the end. This being a powerfull blade, made of unknown originiating energy, which has helped Kukaku make things such as her flower cannons and cannon balls, The back being plane aswell the blade being onesided dull silver.


Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:

Blasting order

This allows the basic power of Desctructive skills known as Bakudo And Hadō, to be increased by two times there normal power. This being from the fact that Shiba is naturally good with anything that explodes or is made specifically for defense. But this is from the fact, that the blade acts liek a tuning fork to draw in the extra power of the spell pump it into the Attack, and use it, making it in most cases bastly more powerfull then what it usually is.



oka Boom Combat

This uses the power of explosive energy within kukaku, allowing the pure explosive charge to radiate outwards and slowly, increase in power, with kicks though being small usually these can become quite big depending on what happens though in most cases that are contained within a 5 meter radius, being able to cause aftershocks in a area of 15meters.



Oka blast Absorption

Because of who kukaku , is and what she does, this allows her to absorb the explosion that occurs from attacks apon detonation, these being able to fuel her own attacks later on. The more explosions occuring around is the better for Kukaku, Each explosion increasing her destructive capabilities by around 1.5 times its normal for each explosion this in a sense after a cap of 3times its power, it can still absorb to keep it on that power level but it cannot go over.


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Release:Blow them to smitherines shi shi

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Shikai Abilities:


Blast Mayhem grade 1

Blast mayhem grade 1 increases the over all power of the explosions by 1.3 times its normal power for every explosion triggered by opponents, or herself, In addition to reducing the damage taken, by the explosion by 15percent.
In conjunction it also, raises the amount of explosives being fired at once from a certian, period of time. Alowing for multiple attacks in quick sucsession. This being limited at around 6 times its power, though it can still absorb to keep it at that power level .

Blasting Armor stage 1

Blasting armor stage one, puts a coat of highly condensed spiritual pressure onto the outside, of Kukaku, this being infused with bakudo like propertys, to for every explosion, it over a certian period of time can increase by either 6times if it is left onscathed by explosions for that time, or If hit continuosly it will decrease by 6 times its normal power. Same as the other skills like this, if explosions occur, without hitting it directly, it can be strengthened by 1.5 times its normal power if hit decreasing 1.5 times its normal power level. The max decrease being 6times, max increase being 6 times .

This aswell, Can be seen as a slight fire at the feet and along the skin of kukaku shiba. This using slight discharges of reitsu to increase speed and dexterity by double .




Magic explosion grade 1

What this does is , once every three turns, Kukaku can gather up massive amountso f spiritual energy then fire it off into one huge blast, This being at maximum able to decimate 16meters around the shockwave at most being able to be felt over 50meters away. Though this aswell, causes debri which can seriously harm an opponent. This being highly destructive, and volitile , Being able to punch through heirro, much more effectivly then Skin.





Triblast system Double

What this does for kukaku is It triples the output of an attack by replicating it so there is three of them in a gun, being as the gun itself has three barrels, Doing the same to the second gun aswell, meaning this make five diminished powered, blasts. The cpoies being 20percent weaker then the normal attacks themselves. These aswell being able to fire off into different places. Depending on the angle of the blast.





Bankai Description: The bankai has no real shape being as it is made up of pure reitsu , which is explosive in its nature, This being able to expland in a vrsitile 360 degree's or Retract in a split second, before being able to elongate around 500yards forward. Before retracting. The reitsu colorr is White, and blak mixed together, this aswell being able to expload around her in buckshot, of sorts to protect her when she is surrounded. Aswell in this form, she is wearing a furred hoodie, and has a Blasting sheild on her other arm alot like a riot sheild.
The only difference is this one, can open up into a massive Explosive cannon, which can fire off massive rounds alot like a Kidō cannon. Just more destructive.
To continue, This versitile Object has some facts to it which should be known simply from there explosive capabilities:

Explosion: Generated from the simple amounts of energy from her blade and punches and what not, the area surrounding her is packed to the brim with simple yet untamed spiritual energy, this is versitile and sickening to those around who are not care ful of it.

Bankai Abilities:



UNHOLY ORDER

What this does, is it allows for a switch in the alignment of a person , aswell as makes it so that they are momentairly confused . In this stage though it also slightly increases kukaku's powers aswell as markings slowly wind up Kukaku's arms before this is the gap stage between her released Bankai and sealed bankai, The difference being monumental, Depending on what it is, And the power of it.

This aswell, can be seen in the sky as a flaming marking formes , Unholy blast order, would follow suit, next.



Unholy Blasting Blade

What this does is now slowly through the power, of the unholy order, her hand has no wepon in this stage, but This allows for a blade mae of destructive explosive powers, to form in her hand, this thing being able to contract and expand, in any direction in a matter of seconds without manuvering; Though it can go out around 500 feet, And retract from it, by Breaking into Tiny minute fractions of energy. Kind of like gins blade. Though this Can also go into a scatter attack, making mini charged explosions occur around her in a matter of seconds. This in concentrate, Being able to decimate a area of 60 meters in radius around her, the scatter shot being able to Simply bombard the land scape like weak bara's Causing eruptions and explosions. Or in some cases mini sized craters.

Blast Ordering army

This allows Kukaku shiba, to create multiple Creatures out of explosive energy, While these can move, like puppets Either ejecting flame, from there stores of power. Or if kukaku wishes she can Explode them to create a crater of around 50 meters, the shock wave being aroudn 100meters. Though The limit to controling these is around 5 of them at one time , The bigger though the less that she can make. This usually takes a 5 turn cool down to use again.



Decimater Blast take over

This is the released form of Kukaku's bankai, it surrounds her with a veil of raw destructive energys, While Devilish wings adorn her back, and a crooked crown . In this stage, her wepon is a Massive cannon , aswell as the blasting gauntlets on her feet and on her Hands. This form being around twice as powerfull as her sealed bankai. Though the attacks are not much stronger, It comes with afew attacks. Her eyes are covered by Cybernetic targeting scopes in this form. Aswell as The blasts become heat seaking.

Explosion Step

This is alot like a Sondio in senses of what it does. But within the second she vanishes, it creates a double step. Where a slight illusion of er in two places form, While she in this movement can fire, out at will, Explosive charges from her finger, These being able to fire from those two places, the affect makin it seem like she it in two places at once but in actuality she is not. This in speed being about twice as fast as a normal flash step. But being esclusive to kukaku shiba, And her family. The step is also called explosion step for her, because when she vanishes she leaves small explosions where she stepps from a special release of explosive reitsu when she steps down makign her vanish again.



Blitze Leveler Blast Dispersion.

This allows for the special ability that kukaku has developed herself called blast Warp, which forms a circular barrier infront of her, which will summon up, a birrage of different explosive charges some being like cero's or bara's and others sometimes Being a huge ass Kidō beam, .Some times in this spell, at max she can summon up only 400 Different blasts. Though this being from the fact of the matter from the nature of her bankai itself.And her shikai, and zampukto with her mastery of explosives. It Can be used once every 4 turns . Though you never know what will come out.

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Possible Discharges from the Summoning.

Levivanthan Dragon: A massive dragon made of explosives rips out from the summoning barreling into the landscape this dragon being around 50ft tall, and apon detonation can easily, destroy half a city block .Or go barreling around creating mayhem for several turns

Grimlin Armada: A horde of aroudn 13 grimlins come out, these things having explosive blades aswell, but usually not lasting more then 3 turns, these things can attack , and apon the third turn .Detonate each being able to take out around 5 meters around them.

Shakkaho Shower: this one comes out around seventeen shakkaho will expload from the end of the summoning circle, rippling into the line, these being abit weaker like 20 percent weaker then the form Of a normal shakkaho but usually just as dangerous because of there numbers.



Kukaku Shiba Blast Thread

This allows for highly condensed explosive threads to weave around opponents or even set up traps for the opponent to use. Depending on what happens there is A explosive charge of a weak bara in a thread, but these can be wound up, being oe thread the explosion can just be used to anoy the person or even Disorient them .




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  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced

  • Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Advanced
  • Kidō: Advanced
  • Zanjutsu: adept
  • Hakuda: Adept


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Kukaku Shiba [APPROVED, 1-3+]   Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:05 pm

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Alright main issue is the sealed powers
"This allows the basic power of Desctructive skills known as Bakudo And hado, to be increased by three times there normal power. This being from the fact that Shiba is naturally good with anything that explodes or is made specifically for defense. But this is from the fact, that the blade acts liek a tuning fork to draw in the extra power of the spell pump it into the Attack, and use it, making it in most cases bastly more powerfull then what it usually is. " This is overpowered I have no problem with kido based powers like this, but its mainly the amount increased is damage, but based off the canon I seen of her, her 63 Hadō was no more powerful than others, and if it was x3 time it would rival a level 90 kido easily, just fix it so its fair and not broken

"This uses the power of explosive energy within kukaku, allowing the pure explosive charge to radiate outwards and slowly, increase in power, with kicks though being small usually these can become quite big depending on what happens though in most cases that are contained within a 5 meter radius, being able to cause aftershocks in a area of 15meters. " for a sealed power this is overpowered like the kido sealed powers are 1/3 of shikai powers, but this makes her sound like she can defeat things easily with just kicks.

Because of who kukaku , is and what she does, this allows her to absorb the explosion that occurs from attacks apon detonation, these being able to fuel her own attacks later on. The more explosions occuring around is the better for Kukaku, Each explosion increasing her destructive capabilities by around 1.5 times its normal for each explosion this in a sense after a cap of 10times its power, it can still absorb to keep it on that power level but it cannot go over." again over powered, while nothing new to the table, its just overpowered increase

and this goes on for shikai and bankai as well, I would allow her shikai at the lest, but make sure you nerf things down, canons are powerful but not this powerful.


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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Kukaku Shiba [APPROVED, 1-3+]   Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:52 pm

approved with the tier listed above

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Kukaku Shiba [APPROVED, 1-3+]   Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:10 pm

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Kukaku Shiba [APPROVED, 1-3+]   Sun Mar 25, 2012 6:35 pm

hoping to repeal and move to active via ima use her for a shit-ton of things now.

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Kukaku Shiba [APPROVED, 1-3+]   Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:41 pm

If possible i would like to reclaim this Canon and use her.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Kukaku Shiba [APPROVED, 1-3+]   Sun May 18, 2014 11:33 am


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« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced

  • Comments/Notes:
    Just giving this it's will shit

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