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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Ika Mazi   Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:18 am








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General Information
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Name: Ika Mazi
Appearance Age: 16
True Age: 413
Gender: Male

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Overall Apperance
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Appearance: Ika looks emo and he wears Skinny Jeans which are always Black and a Black and White patterned belt. He wears band t-shirts like Bring Me The Horizon, Asking Alexandria, Bullet For My Valentine, Black Veil Brides, Pierce The Veil, Eyes Set To Kill, A Day To Remember, et cetra. He has Pitch Black hair and Blue eyes which are almost crystal colored. He has scars all over his body from where he used to cut and still does since he's mentally addicted. He has a large sheath in his left pocket as well.

He has large muscular arms and bracelets that cover his scars. The bracelets all have band names on them like Bring Me The Horizon, Asking Alexandria, Bullet For My Valentine, Black Veil Brides, Pierce The Veil, Eyes Set To Kill, A Day To Remember, et cetra. He wheres black Ed Hardy Converses. He also has a tattoo right where his heart should be in the shape of a heart with a horizontal line through it. The heart represents his being broken. He is about 5'11 160 pounds.
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Personality
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Personality:Ika is usually caught with a blunt in his mouth and if he doesn't have
one he is often depressed because he often recalls back the terrible
things of his past. Ika is very insecure about things including his
appearance and voice even though they are both pretty good according to
most woman. He was emo when he died and stayed that way when he went to
the Soul Society. He loves to spar and often does this in his spar time.
Ika also practices a lot even though hes known as the most painful spar
you'll ever have.

Ika is a gloomy and depressed person without a
blunt in his mouth and finds life absolutely worthless. Ika does not
fear death one bit and feels at some points in time deaths the only way
out of misery. He is probably the most depressing person to be around
without a blunt in his mouth. Since Ika is usually high off his ass to
the point where if he was floating he'd be burned by the sun his
subordinates do his homework usually. He also threatens them with Mental
Suffocation so if they don't theres hell to pay.

Ika loves
Screamo music and is often caught with his Ipod in his ears blaring some
nice Screamo though he does like bands like Brand New and Jamestown
Story.Ika is quite powerful and is known to be a prodigy after
graduating from the academy in less than a year though it never goes to
his head. He has been known to have a drink with everyone once in a
while and has even been known to drink with squad 11 on occasion. He is a
quiet person who does not speak often unless spoken to. He also has no
mercy for anyone or anything. He actually claims anyone who dies on the
battlefield are lucky and more fortunate than those who lived to tell
the tail.


Ika is a proud stoner and enjoys being one and has a
bull burn on his left thigh to prove it and he considers it to be a
very special marking on him. He hates anyone who's overprotective of
others though to his friends he is overprotective himself. When Ika is
completely baked he is laid back and care free thus not having a care in
the world. Ika has been known to never fall in love feeling it only
leads to heartbreak and claims he has no heart left to break. He is
known to be a problem child and in his human life had frequent run ins
with the law. He is also quite insecure from being abused in his
childhood.

Ika was a very depressed person in his human life and
that carried over somewhat he got addicted to cutting mentally and never
stopped and uses the cutting in battle to harm his opponents if they
have a low pain threshold. Ika does not like to talk shit he likes to
let his fighting ability do the talking and is not known as a merciful
man. He also loves pain and finds it quite addictive. Ika hates cocky or
arrogant people and also power abusers and if he can likes to put them
in there place.He hates all Arrancar and Demons and Hollow and sees
them as a plague to the world though if he had to would fight alongside
one.

Ika hates stress and makes his subordinates do his work to
avoid it at times as well and makes sure it never leaks out with the
threat of Mental Suffocation.He finds life to be a meaningless illusion
and often treats it as such. He also loves sex and will fuck whenever he
can if he can when he gets the chance and has never resorted to porn or
Hentei for pleasure. His hero is also Hugh Hefner owner of the playboy
mansion whom he finds to have lived life as its meant to be lived. He is
also a song writer whoms musical influences are Oliver Sykes A
Jamestown Story and Danny Worsnop.

Ika is a polite man and opens
the door or helps anyone up he feels necessary to help aka the old and
woman. He also finds those who date online retarded and has always lived
under the motto fuck for real or never fuck. He sometimes says racist
things and says that he isn't racist he will fuck any hot girl from any
culture and that he hates all people equally. He also is a beast at
playing guitar. He is known as a pimp considering he always has
beautiful woman around him. Ika is quite perverted as well and try's and
usually fails not to stare at a woman's chest.
Likes:Ika happens to
be a stoner thus making him love Weed because it helps him cool off and
not be as stressed. Ika likes to fight and will spar and fight in his
spar time if he gets the chance. Ika also likes Boobs and woman in
general and is known as a huge perv and pimp. He loves music and is even
a song writer himself and loves to play his guitar Jobe. He is a huge
fan of Hugh Hefners as well and considers him his hero. He loves his
powers and Zanpokuto.

He loves his friends and family and holds
them quite dear to him in many ways and says he would give his life for
any of them in a heartbeat. He also likes having his subordinates do his
paperwork for him. He also loves Screamo type bands such as Bring Me
The Horizon, Asking Alexandria, and A Skylit Drive. He also likes to cut
as it is much like an addiction to him. He also loves to torture evil
enemies or ones he dislikes to the point of them begging for death.
Dislikes:Ika
fears his friends and family dieing even after seeing so much of it
happen he says it never gets easier. He also fears breaking his guitar
Jobe if it were to break... all red and black hell would break loose.Ika
fears never having sex again or seeing boobs the thought to him is
terrifying and easily one of his most depressing thoughts.Ika fears not
having a blunt in his mouth because he becomes unpredictable unless he's
fighting at that time.He also fears losing and never wants to lose a
spar or fight.

Ika fears stressful situations and almost never
enters any unless he is forced to do so by a higher power and even then
he's pissed and hard to get to do it. He also fears not having his Ipod
for more than a week because it relieves much of his stress through his
music.Ika also fears having no underlings to boss around and do his work
for him because he hates work. He also fears not being able to fight.
Ika fears one day his hard hardheadedness will get him killed by Captain
Commander or a another high ranked Shingami or Arrancar or Demon or any
other race.

Ika has always been very accepting of people with
different sexualities or if they had certain fetishes and has actually
been interested in such things as well,and knows much about just about
every fetish or Serial Killer known to man and does only because of
people he once knew.In this regard he was pretty easy to get along with
because he didn't give a shit what you liked what made you erect or what
race you are he just really couldn't give a shit.He views all people as
equal and sees discrimination to be complete and utter bullshit and
though he makes jokes about every race out there he is one of the most
non judgmental people out there today.His favorite Serial Killer of all
times is Jeff Dahmer just because...well lets be real here Dahmer did as
he damn well pleased to get his hard on which makes Ika in a sorta
smartass kind of way think of him as a hero.As you can see Ika is quite
umm... "interesting".

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Zanpukto
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Zanpakutō Name: Its name is Bleeding Heart.

Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:
Spoiler:
 



Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: Bleeding Heart is a depressed song writer who loves to play guitar. He is a rather gloomy fellow and is often to honest about something if it is hopeless in his mind. He is a loyal spirit and helps Ika whenever he can whenever Ika needs it though he does not speak often. He is a sarcastic man whom often abuses Ika if he's high and cannot tell when he's using sarcasm.Deep down Bleeding Heart cares about Ika a lot and protects him however he can.

Bleeding Heart says he can never love again after what she did to him however who she is is unknown. He is often lonely and rarely ever speaks if he's not spoken to and yet it does not matter to him usually. He loves music and him and Ika often discuss music together considering they like the same music.He hates to see Ika get hurt and really hates to see it and often yells at him to kill them. As you can see Bleeding Heart is quite a character. Bleeding heart is also quite sarcastic and humorous at times.

Inner
World:

Ikas
Inner World is rather creepy indeed and somewhat replicates his life to
a certain extent in his mind at least.For each friend or person he held
close to him dead and gone he has a hole in the heart. There is then
only one in the middle that has a gleam to it that shows Ikas reflection
that drips blood but it is the only one that leaks.He then has almost
pain sploch like coloring in the background. There is grey purple black
pink and red all over in the background. There are also shadows
everywhere.
Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance:
Spoiler:
 

The Zanpokuto is a Katana that is about four in a half feet long. The blade is a deep grey and the hilt is black.The hilt has a hard bottom and it has a very soft grip making it easier for Ika to grip. It also weighs 5 pounds.

Release Phrase: "Darkness Enclose"
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Shikai Information
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Shikai Appearance:
Spoiler:
 

In this form a dark cloud of Reitsu forms around Ika and chains hang from a heavy blade that is his Zanpokuto. What is interesting though is that Ika due to the grips on it he can move the blade like a feather.The sword is about 6 feet long and resembles the past days Claymore of mid European descent except it is black.The most interesting characteristic about this sword is the red jewel in the middle.Once he uses his ability the jewel turns black which is a very cool sight indeed.

Shikai
Abilities:

Ikas stabs his sword into the ground and as he does this everything
within 50 yards of him with Spiritual Pressure will see nothing but
darkness for 50 yards.The escape routes are blocked with spikes as well
made of Ikas Reitsu and what makes this place very deadly is the fact
you cannot see more than a foot in front of you but Ika can see
fine.However you can still sense every object in the area using Pequissa
or something like it.Ika can also manipulate the darkness in various
ways (see techniques).You can also break out by waiting 5 post.The only
other way is to hit a hatch at the top of the dome with an attack of
Hadō 50 power or more it will be invisible however.The cooldown is also
five post.
Shikai Techniques:

Limit 6
Technique Name:Darkness Spikes
Description:¬Types:Offensive
¬Effect: This shapes darkness into zanpokuto like spikes that can be fallen on or stepped on to cut an opponent open.They just impale.
Range: 2 feet tall 2 feet wide.
Duration/Post Usage::N/A Last for the whole duration of Shikai.
Preparation: None
Cool Down:one per every 3 post.

Technique Name:Darkness Slash
Description: ¬Types:Offensive

¬Effect:
Darkness gathers darkness on Ika's sword where Ika can launch a blast
like the Getsuga Tensho at a rather high power.Cero level power.

Range: 50 yards
Duration/Post Usage::Once per post
Preparation: n/a
Cool Down:N/A

Technique Name:Darkness Fist
Description:Ika speeds up his punchs and covers them with dark
Reitsu to speed them up and make them more powerful.They speed up to the
speed of Bala and are just as powerful.This last for one post and has a
1 post cooldown.

Technique Name:Darkness explosion

Description: Ika can plant a Reitsu infused bomb in his dome
(traceable) and when he snaps his fingers it will blow up causing
extreme damage if it works right.Inflicts 2nd degree burns and Gran Rey
Cero power damage. 2 post cooldown.

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Bankai Information
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Bankai Appearance:
Spoiler:
 

In this form Ika's hair flares up and turns blood red and a sharp black armor forms around him.He gains two hand blades and several other hidden blades all over his body including his back and sheathe on his side. The ones that are not the big blade are equal in power to a Shikai Blade of a Captain but the one on his back is equal to a Bankai blade of an Captain.He has a dark Reitsu about him that is very strong even for someone of his level.It is also rumored to be darker than even some Hollows Reitsu.

Bankai
Abilities:
When
Ika is in this stage it is the same as Shikai accept a few differences
that help Ika even more occur.One thing is the field increases to 75
yards with the same stipulations as the Shikai version.Another thing is
he gains even more techniques to use in this fucked up hell hole of
darkness.It is truly one of the most destructive ability's of all.(He
retains all past techniques)The cool down is still 5 post.You can still
break out and not break out by the same methods.

Limit 6
Technique Name:Darkness Destruction
Description: ¬Effect:
Ika charges a Darkness blast and launches it and it is as powerful as
any move Ika has and is launched at the speed of a Cero or something to
that equivalent.It does Hadō 90 equivalent damage.Takes a lot of energy
to do.
¬Types: Offense
Range:100 feet then it blows up for another 5 feet.
Duration/Post Usage::N/A
Preparation: 1 post
Cool Down:4 post

Technique Name:
Description¬Name: Darkness Spear

[u]¬Level:
Bankai

¬Types:Offensive.

¬Effect:Ika
can use this once every 6 post and once he does you will know.This
launches a spear like object that comes from the Darkness that spears
through them and blows up inflicting damage much like a Cero.A decent
stab wound and Cero power level.

Range: 25 yards
Duration/Post Usage: 1
Preparation: 1
Cool Down:5 post


Technique Name:Darkness Transport
Description:Once per turn Ika can transport anywhere inside his
dome instantly.He does this by using the Reitsu infused in his dome to
appear anywhere he wants within the darkness by Reitsu.One post
Cool down.

Technique Name:Darkness Ultimate Slash
Description:One post of preparation to gather energy for this technique.Four post cool down and the damage from this technique is equal to a Hadō 90 from someone of Ikas tier.He gathers darkness onto his blade and swings his blade to release the blast.


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Inner Hollow & Mask
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Inner Hollow Description: The Hollow is pale white and has dark cat like eyes resembling Gin Ichimarus.He stands at somewhere in the area of 6'5 and weighs around 250 pounds but this is of pure muscle.His pupils are a yellowish green and he has long dark hair down to his shoulders.He wears regular old faded Jeans and a muscle shirt usually. His appearance makes him appear to be very intimidating.

Inner Hollow Personality: Ikas inner Hollow is very quite and almost never speaks unless spoken to and sometimes not even then. It is quite a sarcastic individual and very few responses it makes are not in usage of one of two languages, profanity or sarcasm. He also loves to insult Ika at every turn and though it does not show he does not mind Ika much. He has no problem staying as a source of power and not overthrowing Ika.This is showed quite often indeed.

Inner Hollow Powers: Cero Sonido Pequissa

He can also send images of Ikas past to him and form images from his past.
Ikas Hollow mask has a red flame like pattern on it, he also has 4 spikes coming out of it.It in a way resembles a bull except with two extra horns and he also has a very small speaking hole in the middle at the bottom. The mask is white and red for the total colors of the mask. He has eye holes at the top and a small nose hole as well. Ikas mask also is also one of few that cover his whole face entirely and the mask fits perfectly.
Hollow
Mask Appearance:


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Vizard Powers
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Vizard Powers: Cero and Bala along with Heirro that is somewhat hard to cut through.Sonido and enhanced strength and speed.
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Resurrección
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Resurrección Appearance: Will edit in if above 1-3

Resurrección
Abilities:
Will edit in if above 1-3
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History
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Background:
Ika
was not your normal kid as a human He lived a tough life losing his
brother and mother in two years and then had a following two years of 5
friends dieing as well.He hated death and always was against it though
he never was against fighting and he fought quite often. He had three
friends at this time since he was very antisocial. They were Franky
Jessica and Tanner. Franky was an emo kid Tanner and Jess were Bi and
Hipsters so they were a little fucked up but Ika was not exactly normal
either so what did he care. He was a mentally addicted cutter and stoner
and got a bull burn on his left thigh to prove it and values it as his
life almost.

He was raised in a house where his dad abused him
and often showed signs of this and felt worthless at most points in
time. He was never loved in his opinion and really hated life and was
tempted to end it. One day it was his birthday and his dad being a prick
and all gave him a noose a razor and a card that said how worthless he
was for his birthday. Ika was terribly upset about this and got the
point. He went to the woods and hung himself and gutted himself and
watched his funeral as a Shingami to see that no one even came to see
him buried. He became emotionless from then on.

He was bored in
the Soul Society he wanted more than to just lay down and waste away all
of time itself. He then enlisted to become a Shingami and was great. He
graduated top of his class in one year and then became a seated member
in the Kidō corps because he graduated top of his class in Kidō. He
then heard his Zanpokuto speak to him and immediately knew it was time
to learn Shikai. He began to ask its name but no reply.He would ask more
"personal questions" such as how he was feeling things about his life,
they discussed musics meaning things that they valued.They both knew
each other well and he began to train one day.

He trained and
trained and tried to become good friends with his Zanpokuto and was
succeeding and he knew it but no leap of faith yet,no not until he
became a little stronger,and then, and only then would he ask it what
its name was and actually expect a good response.He swung his sword
left,right,up, and down mastering striking combos and sweating like he
was in the Amazon but he pushed on knowing more power lie ahead for him
and knowing that he could very well become Lieutenant with such power.He
trained more and continued prying deep into his loyal partners mind
trying to learn more and more as he trained.He was getting impatient and
decided he would ask.He would ask him now.He smiled and spoke "one last
question" the Zanpokuto replied "what is it my friend"?

Ika
swallowed hard and sweated even more from being nervous as hell and
choked out an inaudible "whats your name".The spirit looked confused and
inquired back "I am terribly sorry my good friend I cannot hear you
what was that" he looked baffled standing in his inner world as Ika
spoke.Ika stood up,now or never,nut up or shut up,Ika mustered up the
courage "Zanpokuto what is your name" he asked sounding as confident as
possible which was not easy with his current state of mind and silence
followed.Ten seconds passed and it seemed like an eternity when his
Zanpokuto smiled widely and replied "Bleeding Heart is my name and you
now have unlocked more of your untapped power,good job Ika".He smiled
and walked back.Ika stared on in disbelief.

Ika worked hard for
years to master his Shikai and became Vice Captain of squad 2 for years
and he was content with such power for years as well until one day he
sparred with the Captain and lost just because he had Bankai and he knew
he needed it if he wanted to be stronger and decided it was time.He
needed to learn Bankai and he trained for years so he could get inside
his Inner World to learn Bankai and finally got inside and told his
Zanpokuto he wanted Bankai and Bleeding Heart looked at him with icy
cold eyes.He cracked his knuckles and told him "fine but it will be hard
and you will have to beat me on my terms in complete darkness with none
of your senses but touch to work for you.He smiled "not much choice
lets get started now my friend".

He fought him and went to hit
him but with no senses he failed,he could not see,sense,taste,smell,or
even hear him and he waited and continued to be cut at every turn and
making aimless attempts at cutting into his Zanpokuto Spirit.He had to
think of something and quick or he would be swiss cheese before the
battle even started and right as he began to think, Stab.The blade sunk
into Ika and though it hurt like a bitch and left a huge gash in his
left lung Ika got an idea on how to win this thing and it donned on him
that his foes guard was down because of Ikas predicament.He smiled and
waited and yelled "come on you bastard try it again lets go".He charged
Ika and Ika tensed up.

Stab Ika was stabbed 10 mm from the
original spot he was stabbed but he wasn't the one whom was down now,as
soon as he was stabbed he stabbed his Zanpokuto spirit as blood spurted
out Ikas mouth and the area became clear he smiled "hmph well a hell of a
way to end this I guess".His spirit was beaten and coughed up blood "ya
it is over you got me Ika though that was a hell of a way of doing it,
nice job Ika I am proud of you for doing this train more and master your
new power.He smiled when he woke up and trained a bit but could not
move anymore after that and then he walked to his room and hit the
hay.Training was a pain in the ass he thought.He trained for years to
master it as Lieutenant.



Bankai was a pain in the ass for
him and he thought he looked quite badass and he was right. He was
absolutely badass and went against his captain in a spar and won while
using Bankai in front of the head captain. The Head Captain was
impressed and made him the captain immediately. He was content with this
for a while. A matter of fact he was content for 100 years. Then an
event that shook his life forever happened. He would never be the same
ever. He was now Captain of squad 2.

He heard screaming and as he
went to rush to investigate he saw that his lieutenant was being
killed. She was woman and she was being eaten by a Hollow and as it
swallowed her it turned around and spoke to him "Long time no see Ika".
He recognized the voice it was Jessica. He nearly dropped on a knee and
allowed death to come until his Zanpokuto spirit took over and slashed
her open and made him watch her disappear. It was a terrible moment in
his life and one that could of ended it for him.

Life went on
even though he began to smoke a joint nearly all the time and just kind
of went the direction that life took him. He had lost most of his humor
and the lieutenant he had just gotten wasn't half as good as the one
before. He wanted to send him on a hard mission and hope he'd never
return but the head captain wouldn't allow it. This disappointing him
greatly.He began to realize that he was not doing very well as a captain
as irresponsible as he was but he knew it was not enough for his title
to be revoked.

One day as he was walking around he got knocked
out and woke up weirdly and felt something white going around him. He
was in utter disbelief he was Hollowfying. He screamed bloody murder and
realized that if anyone came he would not be as welcome he ran like
hell until the pain overwhelmed him. He passed out and then soon began
to hear his Inner Hollow speak.He did not mind it as it was much like
his Zanpokuto Spirit and himself in many ways. He was a runaway not
accepted anywhere that he knew of he then decided to go look for the
other Vizards. He figured he had been sealed so he knew it was one of
the better ways to have it happen.

Nightmares on top of
nightmares and even more nightmares as his nights became restless with
no sleep for months and he was surviving on pure straight up Caffine
when finally he couldn't take it anymore.He ran out to the forest in the
Amazon and began to fight his Inner Hollow "bring it you dumb son of a
bitch I am tired of your shit and tired of being awake and want to sleep
and honestly I need some power so prepare to die asshole".The Hollow
looked at him and laughed a sadistic laugh that would make the most
hardened of people cringe in fear and it spoke "what a mouth you have on
you, to bad you won't have a tongue to speak with when I am done with
you Shingami scum". Ika smiled and cracked his knuckles and Shunpo'd
above him and slashed his blade down and it was caught with ease as he
followed up with a slash at Ika that knocked him into the ground."Not
bad" Ika grinned at the Hollow while saying this blood trickling from
his mouth."My turn now bitch".

Ika and his Inner Hollow exchanged
blow after blow but Ika was the only one wearing down and meanwhile the
Hollow was taking over, and knew he had to finish the guy off sometime
soon.Ika slashed at him and was knocked back then impaled through his
leg.He smiled and pulled off a move that ended the fight and any chance
of my moving his leg he used his other foot to step off his blade and
jump but the other blade cut his leg from the knee up but it didn't
matter now as Ika took a slash and cut the Hollow down."You win Ika but
let this be known to you the second I sense weakness in you I will crush
your skull with my bare F***ing hands and take over that body of yours
that I consider to be my vessel". Ika just smiled and yawned "good luck
with that".He woke up and checked the time before he passed out "69
minutes... huh".He then passed out from blood loss and awoke
healed.Apparently someone healed him."Great now then...".

He
wandered like this for a few years killing everything that would dare
attack him at any time. Hollows Shingami for being an outlaw a desperate
Bounto Quincys even Humans would try to bring him down. No one could as
Ika was very tough and he knew how to fight hand to hand and sword to
sword. This made him a very hard to combat foe.He had it all as Captain
of squad 12 Lieutenant of squad 2 and 5th seed of squad 10 all under his
belt. He was the perfect outlaw in every way and his powers were
unrivaled.That was until he stumbled upon a old Human.

He met the
Human whom had been following him around Mexico for quit some time now
and he was in the middle of no where so he figured he might be able to
dispose of him quietly.He turned around and looked at the Human "what is
your business I have no time to put up with this"... He said this and
as he did the man jumped above him "big mistake". As he said this the
man came down with a slash at his arm of which he easily parried. The
next attack was aimed at his stomach and it missed as he Shunpo'd away.
"Bankai" and as he said this the man launched a Hadō 4 at him. "Not a
human that means he-". He was cut off as the man Shunpo'd behind and
made a slash at his back. He responded with his Reitsu gas which made
him able to be affected by his moves as he inhaled it and he did right
as it cut his back.

Ika had him where he wanted him and yelled
"die" and began to wonder what kind of simple human could put up such a
fight as if it were nothing and became very pissed off as they both
clashed swords again and as one tried to get an advantage Ika was able
to muster out a question "Who are you". "Makino Mazi who are you" he
replied. Ika held back tears it was his father. "Your boy the one you
never cared about and treated like shit for his whole life". Ikas Reitsu
flared.

His Reitsu turned dark and even more immense than before
and his mask took over his face as his dad gawked at him realizing he
was a Vizard. "Your one of them". His father said this with a disdained
appearance to his face and Ika laughed "yes dad and this one will be
your death".He Shunpo'd behind him and punched him in the cut and kicked
him in the knee dislocating his knee.His dad screamed out in pain and
looked at Ika as he somehow reverted.His father laid his head down
expecting to be decapitated.

Ika did not kill him "I pity you but
do not take this as forgiveness I simply have the compassion that you
lacked and it came from my mother".His father took a breath of relief
and looked at his son in disbelief "I just got my ass handed to me by my
son and pitied what is the reason"? Ika looked at his father "when I
died my mom told me about your addiction and that you weren't really
like that". He looked at the sky. "I can't forgive you for what you did
all I can do is spare you and have compassion".

His dad laughed
and spat out blood "of all people to pity me and say something like this
you were the last one I expected". Ika glared at his father and spoke
slowly "if you wish for your life to continue and you want a chance at
being valued by me leave now before I change my mind". His father held
back tears and walked away "we will meet again son". Ika spat at the
ground and looked at his father smiling "not if I get my way now get
going". Ikas dad left without a word and his whereabouts are to this
moment unknown.Ika does not mind this and now waits for the meeting his
dad promised though doubts it will come.

As time passed Ika
became restless with his mask duration and wanted it to become longer,he
wanted to become stronger after fighting his dad and it annoyed him
that he couldn't use his mask longer and then decided to train so he
would get stronger.He had fought his Inner Hollow and won,he fought his
dad and won,he fought his Zanpokuto and own but he still,no matter how
hard he trained he seemed as if he could not get any stronger and this
pissed him off to quite a large extent.He wanted the power,no...he
needed the power,he needed to prove to himself he could get stronger.If
he couldn't his mind held no reason to keep living in this hell of a
life.He decided it was time to push the Vizard thing to the max, to see
if he could harness its full power.It was time to enhance his powers to
their fullest.

Ika stood in the field and after fighting his
father he felt weak, he wanted to be stronger...no the strongest.He
jumped down and looked at the sky and gathered all the emotion he could
into himself and jumped deep within his self and saw his Hollow "my
partner I will train with you so that I can harness your power so that
we can become stronger join me won't you.The Hollow pondereed this for a
second "and whats in it for me if I win hmm".Ika smiled "you know
exactly what you get you punk bitch now lets get started".Ika drew his
Zanpokuto and began whirling it around in circles and made a smashing
hit at his foe.The Hollow easily got out of the way and smashed Ika into
the dirt with his Zanpokuto.Ika got up and spat to the ground as blood
slowly filled his mouth "not bad.

They continued slashing wildly
at one another as Ikas Zanpokuto tried to help him in any way possible
but the Hollow was powerful indeed.He made slash after slash after slash
at the Hollow and the Hollow did the same, vertical cuts horizontal
cuts stabs it was like an all out war. "Give up Ika just allow your
power to be mine it will be much less painful for you I promise".Ika
spat on the ground and smiled "yeah maybe but I really like this body so
sorry I will be keeping it thank you".His Hollow waved his Zanpokuto in
circles and shot it at him like a canon "tough words for a dead
man".Ika saw this and grabbed the sword as it went through his arm.He
pulled it out and tossed it back and grinned as blood poured out of his
arm at the upper forearm."I would hate for you to lose such a pretty
sword their".He grinned as he put his hand on his arm "wouldn't want
this to be to easy".The Hollow just smirked "I completely agree your
death will be much to easy and painless without the sword".It laughed
wildly "so I will gut you with this very sword how about that
bwahahhahahahahaha".

Ika heard a swish and looked behind him to
see his Hollow laughing wildly and swinging the sword knocking him back
20 feet.As he made contact with the ground he flipped on his hands with a
back handstand and landed "not bad for someone who can barely swing
that sword tell me how is it knowing that I am able to counter this this
easily and that you'll never get this sexy body".Ika smiled as he truly
looked at the Hollow before him like it wasn't even a threat.This of
course was not true as the Hollow was by far one of the biggest threats
Ika had ever seen and as Ika Shunpo'd forwards to collide swords with it
he noticed the impact was weaker.The Hollow stopped and jumped back and
had a blank look.He then spoke "let me ask you a question" he asked in a
cold tone that Ika had never before heard."What do you want" Ika would
say with a scowl."Why do you want my power so badly" The Hollow would
ask with the same look.Ika stared at the ground his face became tight
sad and strained "after fighting my dad"...his voice trailed off."I want
to get stronger dammit and I will do whatever I have to do to do
it".The Hollow smiled and spoke "put your mask on and train and if you
can take the training my power is yours".Ika grinned "ok ready".

Ika
swiped the mask over his face and immediately had a flurry of pain come
over him and it seemed as if all of his past memories were flooding
back.The beatings were played out in his mind in such brutal detail down
to the word and the same exact pain.Ika screamed as he felt defenseless
as the pain took over him in such a brutal manner.Ika was in the forest
with not a soul around in Bogota which suited him just fine and in his
own eyes it was just like his heart lonely with not a soul to be found
with in one hundred miles of it.He was right in the middle screaming yet
only the animals that made their homes there could hear his hopeless
cries.It was truly pitiful as his Reitsu was being thrown all over the
place and scaring the animals off as the birds began to fly off and the
ones on foot were running as fast as they could away from Ika.He truly
felt alone there in that damned wilderness but then the Hollow came
through in his head with his Zanpokuto spirit."Listen Ika you must fight
your memories confront them make peace with them then while your doing
this train as much as possible.

Ika began to run laps around the
forest and climb the trees and jump from limb to limb and land on frail
branches just so they would break and he would Shunpo to the next branch
and do the same thing.It was a good work out and as he made his way
back he drew his Zanpokuto and had just noticed the beauty of it.He
smiled and at first he made motions with the sword as if he were
actually fighting.His Hollow and Zanpokuto spirit watched smiling and
spoke "good job Ika keep up the good work".Ika Shunpo'd forwards and
made a slash at the biggest tree he could find and yelled "timber" as he
did this he Shunpo'd back and watched it take out a lot of trees in the
nearby area like a bucnh of dominos.He then Shunpo'd to the tree that
was about to fall over and hit it with his fist and knocked it back the
other way to stop the dominoe effect.He then grabbed a tree and kicked
it full force and split it down the middle.As he did this he punched
another with much thicker bark and left a crater in the tree.He then hit
the smaller tree behind him with his elbow as it toppled over and he
grinned as he did this.

He was becoming stronger and he didn't
even know it and as he did this he began to Shunpo around and he was
even faster than before and he looked like a truly superb fighter and he
liked this.He liked feeling stronger and feeling his power slowly
increase to unknown levels he never thought he would reach.He laughed
and drew his sword.

Ika began slashing wildly at the trees around
him leveling each of them without even having to try, all he had to do
was flick his wrist and have his sword make contact and bam the trees
would fall.He was having fun with this and was learning to control the
Hollow but then it struck him like a F***ing fright train.The pain of
his mothers death and all of his friends deaths Ika screamed "MOM
JESSICA GAHHHTTT" the visions and emotional sorrow struck him like a
bullet.He keeled over crying and began to puke and he knew he had to
fight the pain even without his Zanpokuto and Hollow yelling it in his
head.He knew he had to continue training.He jumped and Shunpo'd to the
sky and came down with his Zanpokuto cutting a huge tree right down the
middle as he Shunpo'd away and watched them fall.The carnage was
unforeseable.Half the landscape was completely laid waste to and he saw
the images of his moms dead body and Jessicas mangled dead body.It made
him cry through the mask but he would still attempt to keep his
composure as he began to rip through the area before him.It was truly a
sight to behold as the area looked like a tornado had just ripped
through it.He kicked down trees cut them down punched them down through
them down he even destroyed a whole damn tree that was 100 feet tall and
about 15 feet round with his bare hands.If he wasn't frightening now he
was never going to be but this still wasn't enough for him.He had to
keep at it.

The training was brutal to say the least and Ika was
feeling the pain of it but Ika wanted this new power badly he would kill
to be stronger than what he was and he was proving this now as he was
absolutly destroying this area with his barehands and Zanpokuto.It was
truly an amazing feat destroying such a large area in such a short time
single handedly.He was barely lifting a finger and destroying even more
of it.He then began to practice flexability and was amazed at the
limberness he had in this form.He did a double backflip in mid air
without having to try,it was that easy.He could still do the kicks and
flips and he was as limber as a rubberband.A matter of fact if anything
he was even more limber than before which truly excited him since that
was a great part of his fighting strategys and life style.Ika smiled
thinking the onslaught of pain was over.Boy was he wrong.

When he
went for a backflipping kick in mid air he fell on his face as he saw
himself kill himself in his mind.It was like a replay down to his last
seconds and feelings and as he felt it he gripped his throat because he
felt like he was choking.He had no clue what was so wrong but it really
hurt him and when he tried to overcome it it was like his breatheing was
stopped.He couldn't take it anymore.He yelled "STOP".Then suddenly the
voice echoed throughout the area and it was the only thing able to be
heard for miles as he fell to the ground clutching his head and slowly
tried to stand up and as he began to cry it rained all over him.He did
the one thing he needed to his whole life.Just let it all out and to
cry, he needed to quit bottling up his emotions he needed to let them go
but he was denied this before but not now.He could cry all he wanted
and he did.There was no in between he was straight up balling his eyes
out.He needed to grieve and now was the time.He felt like he could just
lay there and curl up in a ball and die right then and there but he knew
he could not accomplish what he wanted dead.He picked himself up and
continued training.Right then and there in the rain he began to rapidly
punch holes in the ground as it began to shake at the speed and strength
of his punches and he smirked as he created a crater in the ground
about 20 feet deep and wide.He Shunpo'd out and saw a tree and came out
with a full force punch knocking the smaller tree back about 10 feet as
he landed.He then picked up his sword and carved his name into the bark
of a tree while and said under his name "rest in piece Jesseca Kisamoyo
and Kathryn Mazi aka mom you'll both be missed forever and I love
you".He then sat down by the tree and cried more.He stood up and cracked
his knuckles and smiled at the sky."Thank you my Hollow and thank you
Bleeding Heart".He got his serious face back on as his Hollow began to
speak to him once more "are you ready for another test"?It would ask and
Ika shook his head yes and spoke "yes as ready as I think I will ever
be".The Hollow said nothing more as Ika resumed his training and
destruction of the area.He of course had no idea of what pain lay ahead.

He
trained but then he fell over,unable to stand like the breathe was
simply taken from him and he began to cry for the first time in a
long,long while and as he did he saw it all before his eyes and the
Hollow said he would end Ikas suffering if Ika would give up and smiled
"go ahead". Ikas eyes steeled he looked at his Hollow dead in the eye
and looked straight at him dead in the eye and spoke with a large large
smirk on his face "not in a million years would I sell my soul to
something as evil and sinister as you,rot in hell".The Hollow scoffed at
this statement not fully aware of the trouble he was in and felt the
cold blade long before he saw it "I will take your power now Hollow".The
Hollow fell to the ground with a sly smile "you do have killer instinct
heh I thought your old dad made you soft".Ika smiled "you thought wrong
goodbye". Ika threw on his mask.

He jumped from tree to tree
with inhuman agility and speed and barely had to try to move,this Mask
was a simply amazing tool and was proving its worth in training alone,he
the decided it was time to see if his strength had been enhanced any
what so ever.He took his fist and punched a tree and it immediately
toppled over and he picked it up and threw it.And, unlike before he
wasn't tiring out his Mask was lasting longer he threw it up in the air
and pointed his finger at it and launched a huge Cero and blew the tree
to oblivion.This power...why couldn't he have known of such before.He
smiled and punched the ground and a crater formed, this would be fun.He
knew he could not let up on such training and the second he did it would
have been for not,a waste of his valuable and precious time.He knew he
had to continue and he did.

The time was passing quickly,night
was already falling and he could feel himself tiring steadily but not
enough to stop him,oh hell no,stopping was not in Ikas nature this shit
would be like go go go.He jumped u and came down with a thrust of his
leg on a tree and crushed the top of it into the ground like he wasn't
even trying and cracked his knuckles as he saw a stream and saw a
fish.He practiced his speed he waited and punched quick enough to smash
it and he watched solemnly as what little entrails and insides of the
fish that were left floated away downstream.Ika felt like superman and
thought he could do anything and tried to do just that.He wrestled an
Alligator and crushed its throat with a squeeze of his hand.Oh how fun
this could be to use in battle he thought to himself solemnly.He
splashed his face in the stream and walked away.He left any signs of
weakness left in him,buried at the creek bed.


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[u]RP Sample

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Role
Play Sample:
He
watched as his attack was Smothen by god (I hate you Rena) he quickly
said a few choice words at the ground and decided if he survived this
battle to put a mustache on Marys face.He then noticed the man had put
on his Hollow Mask and looked at the man. "So your a Vizard aye oh how
many of those have I killed I must be in double digits" he said to make
the man angry and if he didn't stop he would force the man to lose it.
He laughed "Oh well that is to be expected of a lesser race a hybrid no
less you always wanted to be as strong as us but couldn't be.He laughed
and hoped this got the man going.

He saw several of the attacks
make no contact and one make very little contact ti the man which was
pissing him off as he hated to be blocked.He continued and as he
realized his assault was failing he began to get very pissed at the man
and yelled "Come on mother fucker bring it I want to see you come close
bitch".He continued launching attacks and watched as the gas made
contact and made the mans vision blurry. This was a win for Devon as he
knew sight was a big battle factor in this mans strategy from what he
had seen.This however was a guess and he knew he could be wrong and if
he was he was in for a world of hurt.

He felt his attacks being
blocked and dodged and was becoming pissed off at all of it he wanted to
land an attack so bad in this combo he was getting pissed off as
hell.This man was just making Devon look stupid and he didn't like
it.The man seemed experienced and more so even then most other Arrancar
he was guessing thousands of years but he wasn't sure.He laughed as he
was very entertained with the battle at hand and he really enjoyed
fighting someone whom knew what they were doing. It was a nice change of
battle as young Arrancar were no challenge at all...

The man
continued parrying and dodging Devons attacks and pissing Devon off more
and more each time.He dodged most of his attacks even though his vision
was blured which made Devon wonder if he had guessed wrong.He missed on
all his cuts and the man didn't even have to parry which annoyed him to
no end.He was missing left and right right and left. It didn't matter
what he did which really made him lose his temper. "I WILL FUCKING KILL
YOU" he screamed.

He went for more attacks and failed at more
attacks which made him upset as hell"God dammit" he yelled.He finally
decided it was time to get back to attacking and as he did he realized
he still was missing attack after attack. That pissed him off a lot and I
mean he was ready to kill a fucker.He decided that this man was
definitly an experienced fighter and was very intrigued at the mans
choice of battle technique as it was only slightly smarter than Devons.
This intrigued him greatly but he shrugged it off.It was in intriguing
battle indeed.

And after this as if Devon was now steaming mad
and pissed off enough the man dodged more blows of his and more and more
to the point where Devon damn near had steam coming out of his ears. He
then saw his scythe cut through the Heirro and laughed "so you are
hittable this is very good news for me in fact I would love to do it
more often". His other swing was batted down which annoyed him. He
looked at the man intently looking powerful and not breaking a sweat
"not bad".

He felt the icy glare of the man staring at him but
stood unfazed by the mans attempts at intimidation. He then asked Devon
how old he was " I am near 2,200 years old and have had plenty of battle
experience I assure you". But then right after he spoke the man decided
to play cheap and used a blinding move and made a slam with the flail
like Devon was stupid. Devon Sonido'd in circles and closed his eyes to
avoid it while waiting for the light to fade. He couldn't open his eyes
if he wanted to without being blinded.Bad news for Devon.

Devon
opened his eyes to a Cero that he was hit by and launched through most
of the damned Stonehenge and as he got up he spat blood. He grinned at
the man looking almost unfazed and wicked and spoke "thank you may I
have another". As he said this he saw the man come in with the flail and
punch and Sonido'd to dodge. "Damn dude calm down and actually look at
what you have done or not. He laughed "oh yes swinging wildly while
being blinded will help idiot".He laughed like a maniac and prepared
himself.

He saw the man jump out with a powerful burst of some
sort "oh really now" was all he said as he simply Sonido'd out of the
way on the defensive. The man was a very potent attacker but was only of
average control with his mask and Devon knew it. He could see it in the
mans angry charges and power that he had let the Hollow take over
somewhat. He laughed "thats right give in to a greater power bitch". He
laughed and spoke "The Hollows will always be the strongest and you
Shingami need to learn this". He prepared for what would be this mans
final attack of that moment.

The man started spinning the flail
and Devon swung at it with his scythe in hand and then made a slash at
the waist with his sword. After that he came in above with a Cero and
Bala to stop the spinning and gain of Reitsu. He then decided the man
was about to be maimed beyond all known comprehension. This dumb bastard
had no idea who he had just fucked with but like hell if he wouldn't
learn. "I hope you love Stonehenge because this is where you die
Vizard". He said this as he charged the man.

He Sonido'd forward
making a slash at the neck with his sword and one at the knees with his
scythe before launching a Cero and Sonidoing above the man and launching
a Bala. Smoke filled the air from the destruction and carnage but Devon
did not hesitate. He jumped through the smoke and made a few more
slashes at the man then made a slash at the mans head with his sword
followed by another Cero.Hell was freezing over before this dude beat
Devon. Devon knew what he had to do.

Devon Sonido'd forwards
again making a few more slashes at the stomach with the sword then he
coated his sword with Reitsu and launched it point blank at the mans
stomach at a high velocity. He then launched Balas anywhere the man
Could Shunpo away to and blocked the exits and as the area exploded he
came down with a slash.All of a sudden the ground cracked from the blow
as these two equally matched foes had continued fighting. No one would
be sure who would win. Not this fight.

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Skill Sheet
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General Skills

  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner










Racial Skills

  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala/Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:18 pm

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Comments/Notes: Okay, first, if you'dve checked, the rules, you can't start with Bankai! I'm sorry dear, but that's the breaks. Well, you could ask an admin.. but yeah. Second, bountos never existed here : so please nuke that. Third, total darkness is a no : a near complete, sure, but total? Some people have thermovision, used to darkness : stuff like that. Also please, give a post count for the dome's duration! Your coding is also a bit hard, with all that underline. I suggest changing it, but it's up to you.
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Mon Mar 26, 2012 9:31 pm

Ok well Darkness was approved by {The Frost} and did have a foot of visibility so its fine I will nuke the Bountos but I plan to leave Bankai in because I plan on adding that to History soon as edit when training is complete.I will fix the rest.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Sat Mar 31, 2012 4:07 pm


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Ikas stabs his sword into the ground and as he does this everything
within 50 yards of him with Spiritual Pressure will see nothing but
darkness for 50 yards.The escape routes are blocked with spikes as well
made of Ikas Reitsu and what makes this place very deadly is the fact
you cannot see more than a foot in front of you but Ika can see
fine.However you can still sense every object in the area using Pequissa
or something like it.Ika can also manipulate the darkness in various
ways (see techniques).You can also break out by waiting 5 post.The only
other way is to hit a hatch at the top of the dome with an attack of
Hadō 50 power or more it will be invisible however.The cooldown is also
five post. [/quote]

Again, you still did not address the thermovision issue. I do not see justification as to why it is more than normal darkness either that you could just get out a light and see through.
Quote :

Limit 6
Technique Name:Darkness Spikes
Description:¬Types:Offensive
¬Effect: This shapes darkness into zanpokuto like spikes that can be fallen on or stepped on to cut an opponent open.They just impale.
Range: 2 feet tall 20 feet wide.
Duration/Post Usage::N/A Last for the whole duration of Shikai.
Preparation: None
Cool Down:one per every 3 post.

What does limit six mean? Also, how can you have a spike 2 feet tall and 20 feet wide? That breaks the laws of geometry. Thirdly, the fact that you can make these spikes without any warning at all within your dome, as well as the other structures, is a bit over powered. I would reccomend a brief flash of light or something similar to where the structure is about to appear, thus giving the opponent at least a CHANCE to react.

Quote :

Technique Name:Darkness Fist
Description:Ika speeds up his punchs and covers them with dark
Reitsu to speed them up and make them more powerful.They speed up to the
speed of Bala and are just as powerful.This last for one post and has a
1 post cooldown.

Just... what. Is it a punch or an energy attack? How large is it if it IS an energy attack?

Quote :
Technique Name:Darkness explosion

Description: Ika can plant a Reitsu infused bomb in his dome
(traceable) and when he snaps his fingers it will blow up causing
extreme damage if it works right.Inflicts 2nd degree burns and Gran Rey
Cero power damage. 2 post cooldown.

A gran-rey level attack seems a bit much for shikai with only a down side of 2 turns. Plus, what do you mean by traceable? And again, structures in an omnipresent dome.

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Bankai
Abilities: When
Ika is in this stage it is the same as Shikai accept a few differences
that help Ika even more occur.One thing is the field increases to 75
yards with the same stipulations as the Shikai version.Another thing is
he gains even more techniques to use in this fucked up hell hole of
darkness.It is truly one of the most destructive ability's of all.(He
retains all past techniques)The cool down is still 5 post.You can still
break out and not break out by the same methods.

Are these still the same 5 posts as before? As in, do they compound, add onto, or reset?

Quote :
Limit 6
Technique Name:Darkness Destruction
Description: ¬Effect:
Ika charges a Darkness blast and launches it and it is as powerful as
any move Ika has and is launched at the speed of a Cero or something to
that equivalent.It does Hadō 90 equivalent damage.Takes a lot of energy
to do.
¬Types: Offense
Range:100 feet then it blows up for another 5 feet.
Duration/Post Usage::N/A
Preparation: 1 post
Cool Down:4 post

No. The power of a level 90 Hadō is too much for a run-of-the-mill bankai.

Quote :
Description¬Name: Darkness Spear

[u]¬Level: Bankai

¬Types:Offensive.

¬Effect:Ika
can use this once every 6 post and once he does you will know.This
launches a spear like object that comes from the Darkness that spears
through them and blows up inflicting damage much like a Cero.A decent
stab wound and Cero power level.

Range: 25 yards
Duration/Post Usage: 1
Preparation: 1
Cool Down:5 post

Once again, the opponent needs to have SOME chance to react.

Quote :
Technique Name:Darkness Ultimate Slash
Description:One post of preparation to gather energy for this technique.Four post cool down and the damage from this technique is equal to a Hadō 90 from someone of Ikas tier.He gathers darkness onto his blade and swings his blade to release the blast.

Again, level 90 is too much, ESPECIALLY with so little drawback.

Tier:2-3 when fixed.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:53 am



It's been over two weeks! This has been stored away! PM me if you want it back!

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Wed Jun 06, 2012 4:50 pm

Archived due to inactivity.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Wed Sep 19, 2012 12:31 pm

I wants it back D;

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Wed Sep 19, 2012 1:12 pm

Moving back to unchecked then

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Wed Sep 19, 2012 3:53 pm

What the actual Duck.

Alright, moving this back to WIP until you FIX what I told you to already. Jarves. Let me know when you have done all the fixes.

Also, uses images from his past... wut. Please extenciate on that, as I don't think I mentioned that in my last check.

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Ika Mazi   Wed Oct 03, 2012 9:37 am

Old WIP you go

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