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|Subject Post 1Subject: Renji Abarai [Approved, 0-3++ ] Thu Apr 19, 2012 10:35 pm|| |
Name: Renji Abarai
Titles: Lieutenant Abarai
Appearance Age: Early 20's
Affiliation/Rank: Gotei 13, Soul Society, Lieutenant of the 6th Division
Appearance Description: Renji has brown eyes and long crimson hair, which is usually kept in a high ponytail. As a child, Renji's hair-line was leveled. Later, he obtained a large widows-peak. His upper body is covered in tribal tattoos, which have increased over time, starting from his early days as an academy student to covering his entire back, much of his chest, his extremities, and even much of his forehead. He wears a standard Shinigami outfit, though he usually includes some sort of headgear, usually expensive glasses or a white headband when he is saving up to purchase some new glasses. Despite being of appropriate rank, Renji doesn't wear his Division's Lieutenant badge. While out of uniform, Renji often wears a white kimono-like type of night clothing, with pink floral patterns on it, and a dark grey sash tied around his waist. It has also been said 'that the women within his Division do not mind that he usually walks around in his night clothing'.
Seventeen months after Aizen's defeat, Renji's hair has grown longer and he wears a maroon colored bandanna covering all of the tattoos on his forehead. He also wears long dark straps on each wrist with bandages over his arms.
Appearance Picture: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120309083029/bleach/en/images/0/01/RenjiEpisode363.png
Personality: Renji is quite dynamic. His personality varies from smug and cocky to disquieted and depressed after a major defeat, but shows himself to be an incredibly serious and determined fighter when confronted with an actual threat. Willing to fight, kill, and die for whatever he believes in, Renji is a dangerous man to those who stand in his way. Yasutora Sado compares his fighting style to that of Ichigo Kurosaki.
Likes: Renji likes taiyaki and futsal, In his spare time works on assembling a team from the 6th Division, with success, more or less.
Dislikes: He has a dislike for spicy food
History: Renji grew up in the 78th district of Rukongai, Inuzuri, with several other children. Having come to Soul Society alone, they helped each other to search for their families. One day, after stealing a jug of water, Renji and his friends were chased by a kama-wielding adult. Rukia tripped the adult and urged Renji's group to follow her to avoid losing the water. Rukia joined their group and they lived together as a family. They all hated Inuzuri and the people there. Renji disliked the fact that Rukia had spiritual power like he did. Ten years after Rukia joined their group, with all of their friends dead, Rukia proposed that they become Shinigami, which Renji agreed to do. As they were quite gifted with spiritual powers, they entered the Shinō Academy with ease, where they struggled to prove their worth among those from noble families. The night before the welcoming ceremony for the new students of the Academy, Renji slept in a tree, against Rukia’s advice. The following morning, he fell out of the tree and landed on a headstone where a startled Izuru Kira had been praying. Having scored amongst the highest grades in the entrance exam, Renji was admitted into the top class along with Izuru and Momo Hinamori.
Two months after entering the Academy, Renji scolded Rukia for still not fitting in and informed her that he was going to the Human World for field training to practice the Konsō for the first time. Whilst being briefed on the field trip by Shūhei Hisagi, Kanisawa and Aoga, Renji failed to recognize Shūhei, who was to lead the mission. Izuru explained to him that Hisagi was famous and a gifted student. Renji, Izuru and Momo were assigned to the same group. When Momo joined them, Renji kicked Izuru because of how he greeted her, saying that he should not let his emotions show so easily. While in the Human World, Renji remarked that Konsō was a lot easier than he had imagined. He then lost his temper with the constantly fidgeting Izuru and punched him. As Shūhei called an end to their field trip, the group was attacked by a Huge Hollow, which killed Kanisawa and Aoga. Shūhei ordered the group to retreat while he stayed to fight the Hollow. When a second Huge Hollow appeared, Momo stopped and questioned why they were running away. Renji reminded Momo that the Hollow had just killed two sixth year students. When Momo rushed back towards Shūhei, Renji and Izuru followed her and helped to block the second Hollow’s attack on him. When more Huge Hollows showed up, they were saved by the arrival of Fifth Division Captain Sōsuke Aizen and his lieutenant, Gin Ichimaru. When Momo wondered if they would ever become as strong as Aizen and Ichimaru, Renji laughed at the notion and insisted that captains and lieutenants were monsters.
Having passed an important exam, Renji rushed to find Rukia to tell her. However, when he found her, she was with several Shinigami, including Byakuya Kuchiki. As they left, Renji noted Byakuya’s power, causing him to wonder who he was. Renji asked what they wanted and congratulated Rukia when she told him that they want to have her adopted into the Kuchiki family, have her graduate immediately and assigned to the 13th Division. Rukia thanked him and left. Renji told himself that Rukia finally had a family and that he should stay out of it. After Rukia left, Renji trained every day in a bid to beat Byakuya, but he was unable to defeat him even once.
Renji graduated from the Shinō Academy in its 2,066th year and joined the Gotei 13, where he initially served under Aizen in the 5th Division, along with Izuru and Momo. The rebellious Renji, however, was moved to the 11th Division and rose to the rank of 6th Seat. During his time in the 11th Division, he befriended Ikkaku Madarame, to whom he revealed that he wanted to become stronger than Byakuya Kuchiki. Ikkaku taught Renji how to fight and Renji became aware that Ikkaku had a Bankai, and requested that he use it to train Renji. Forty years after Rukia’s adoption into the Kuchiki family, in mid-April, Momo and Izuru presented Renji with a letter stating that he was to be promoted to lieutenant of the 6th Division. He formally accepted Momo's words, which caused her to tell him not to be so uptight. Ikkaku told him that he was now a step closer to Byakuya and that his will had been strong for forty years, but now that he was a lieutenant, they should return to the type of relationship that they once shared. Izuru informed Renji that Rukia was leaving on a mission to the Human World that afternoon. When Momo urged him to hurry, Renji told her that he would wait until his promotion was made official a month later, and that when she returned, he would surprise her with it. On the 19th of July, Renji was sent alongside his captain to arrest Rukia and return her to Soul Society.
Reiatsu Color: I think it's red, I've never actually seen it though
Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Zabimaru
Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: No idea
Inner World: No idea
Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : Zabimaru's sealed form resembles a typical katana. It has a rectangular bronze tsuba with a jagged design to it and a red handle and sheath.
Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: None
Release: Roar, Zabimaru or Howl, Zabimaru
Shikai Description: In its Shikai, Zabimaru transforms into an even longer 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. Zabimaru's segments grow in number almost without limit. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread, making Zabimaru more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Renji's swordsmanship. Zabimaru's guard and handle remain the same in its Shikai release.
Shikai Abilities: Renji can also use his spiritual power to take the disconnected or broken segments of Zabimaru and levitate them into the air, allowing him to execute a one-shot omnidirectional attack, but states that this is damaging to Zabimaru and leaves Renji defenseless. Byakuya later comments that using this technique will prevent him from reactivating his Shikai for an unspecified duration. In it's Shikai form it can also stretch out quite far and be used as a whip[See the description of his Shikai to see more detail][/strike]
Bankai Description: transforms Zabimaru into a massive version of its Shikai form resembling a skeleton of a snake. Zabimaru gains many more segments, which are much larger resembling a mix between a snake’s vertebral column and the pick-like protrusions of his Shikai segments, and it also gains a snake-like head about the size of a small car. Renji is also slightly transformed, gaining a fur cowl around his neck. The cowl appears to be the fur of an ape and thus, the ape's skull could be seen over Renji's left shoulder while the rest of the fur extends to cover his right arm. Zabimaru itself, in Bankai form, does not literally "cut;" Renji usually catches his opponent with the snake-head of his weapon and smashes his opponent into the ground with it. The head has also proven capable of inflicting heavy damage through biting.
Bankai Abilities: Bankai Reconstitution: Unlike its Shikai, Zabimaru's segments are held together by Renji's spiritual power, allowing him to separate and reattach them at will. The segments themselves are extremely tough, making it extremely difficult to destroy Hihiō Zabimaru. Even if a segment is damaged, knocked off, or even destroyed, Renji can simply detach it and reform (or reconstitute) Zabimaru.
Hikotsu Taihō (狒骨大砲, Baboon Bone Cannon): The technique fires a dense blast of concentrated spiritual energy from Zabimaru's mouth. The technique costs a substantial amount of energy from Renji which usually causes an aftermath that breaks the segments out of formation.
Enhanced Higa Zekkō: He can also use a much more powerful version of Higa Zekkō, where all the segments detach, glow and sharpen using spiritual energy. They surround the opponent and execute an omni-directional attack of blades of spiritual energy. After use of this attack Hihiō Zabimaru reconstitutes itself.
Reiatsu Ropes: Renji can separate his Bankai segments and use them to surround his opponent. By linking the segments together again with his reiatsu, Renji is able to bind the target. He uses this technique on Yammy Llargo, but it is easily destroyed.[/strike]
- Durability: Mastered
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Advanced
- Weapon Skill: Master Swordsman
- Hoho: Adept
- Kidō: Beginner
- Zanjutsu: Mastered
- Hakuda: N/A
Roleplay Sample: [I will be going off a fight I had on another forum for this post I will also be assuming that each attack managed to hit, I don't auto or godmod but for the sake of a roleplay sample by myself I will]
Renji placed his hand near the hilt of his Zanpaktou, As he slid his hand across it he spoke "Roar, Zabimaru!" With that Zabimaru transforms into an even longer 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back.
Renji raised his hand and swong downward, As he did Zabimaru began to stretch out towards his opponent like a whip, When it connected the prongs on it dug in deep into the opponents shoulder, When Renji whipped his hand back Zabimaru began to retract, Each prong ripping through the shoulder of the opponent. Renji then slashed his hand from the left to the right before Zabimaru retracted fully, Causing it to stretch out again and slam into the side of his opponent.
Renji again ripped his hand backwards and had Zabimaru rip through his opponents side, Again he raised his hand and moved it to the other side and again swong horizontally to slam it into the other side, Again pulling his hand back when it slammed into him to rip into his other side and did the same again for his other shoulder. This would cause grievous wounds in his opponent, Leaving him near death.[Again do note that I do NOT Auto-hit or Godmod in an actual fight/RP, I just did for the sake of the RP Sample
Last edited by Kanji Man on Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:25 pm; edited 4 times in total
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Renji Abarai [Approved, 0-3++ ] Fri Apr 20, 2012 6:15 pm|| |
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hrn... Since you're new, I'll hand you it, from the RP sample, it looks like you play him decently... I'll give you a starter tier and see how you work up, kay?Tier:
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|Subject Post 3Subject: Re: Renji Abarai [Approved, 0-3++ ] Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:17 pm|| |
THIS IS BEING ARCHIVED! USER HAS NOT SUBMITTED A REQUEST TO STAY ON THE SITE DURING THE REBUILD! EITHER REGISTER TO CONTINUE ON THE SITE OR SAY GOODBYE TO IT! WE CANNOT KEEP APPLICATIONS OF INACTIVES AT THIS POINT.
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|Subject Post 4Subject: Re: Renji Abarai [Approved, 0-3++ ] Thu Dec 06, 2012 2:01 am|| |
Rejoice your freedom, inactive chit!I, the Kitten, have come to save you! Bow to deh Aivee!
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|Subject Post 5Subject: Re: Renji Abarai [Approved, 0-3++ ] Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:47 am|| |
Added the owner in the title!
Since the app maker isn't always the one that owns the canon, I'm adding the owner to the app's title! X3
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|Subject Post 6Subject: Re: Renji Abarai [Approved, 0-3++ ] Tue Mar 04, 2014 5:11 pm|| |
Due to prolonged inactivity and a missing activity check, this is being sent to the Available Canons Section. Similarly, the name of the owner has been removed from the title. If you're interested in this character, feel free to post and RP sample and a member of staff will respond accordingly.
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|Subject Post 7Subject: Re: Renji Abarai [Approved, 0-3++ ] Sun May 18, 2014 11:05 am|| |
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- Willpower/Determination: Master
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Master
- Focus: Advanced
Just giving this it's will shit and a tier boost
- Tier: 0-3++