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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Thu May 03, 2012 4:01 pm

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ARRANCAR



GENETICS


Character Name:
Exsis

Character True Age:
Died at 34

Character Appearance Age:
Unknown
Character Gender:
Male

Orientation:
Freelancing

Personality:
He is quite a violent fellow. He prefers to attack first then ask questions later; It takes very little to set him off. He is annoyed easily as well, which leads to him being very destructive.

When he's annoyed he gets very destructive and starts attacking everyone near him without care for himself or anything/anyone around him, friend or foe. This means he's extremely hot headed, Moreso then Renji, However do not let his hot headedness fool you into thinking he's just a brute, Exsis is also extremely intelligent.

Despite his rash action's he never attacks without thinking even when agitated. Just because he acts rash does not mean he isn't thinking, Exsis can just as quickly throw up his defense just as fast as he attacks. This leads to many people greatly underestimating him and leading, ultimately, to their death.

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History:
Exsis was a very cruel person when he was alive, However when he died and became a hollow, The Soul Society wasn't able to track him down despite his many many apperances that he made the Soul Society we're always one step behind him. When he became an Adjuchas he was forced into the Hueco Mundo for the first time where he was on the run from other Adjuchas' that we're far more powerful then him. However as he ran he became more powerful and more powerful until eventually all levels of Hollow's sought to devour him to become even closer to that of a Vasto Lorde though clearly none have succeed. Exsis is a special type of Adjuchas in that he is able to revert his form to that of his former Hollow self at will, Easily confusing enemies and making them think he's weaker then he truly is.
APPEARANCE


Appearance:
He stands 10 feet tall with a girth from side to side of about 4-5 feet
Bone Appearance:


Hollow Hole:
Chest
reiatsu Colour:
Black/Blue

SEALED STATE


Sealed Zanpakutô:
Like a normal Japanese Katana

Racial Abilities:
Exsis already Enhanced Strength, Durability, Stamina and Speed are further increased as well he's also a Master Swordsmanship, Polearm, Staff, Knife and Chakram Specialist, Exsis is a highly perceptive Combatant meaning despite his nature he's extremely capable of telling what his opponent is going to try next only being caught off guard to the swiftess of opponents, This further compliments his ability to use Sonido, meaning he can move at very high speeds and catch many of his targets off guard and like all Arrancar he can use Cero's, Though he's good with them he prefers not to use them. He can also use Pesquisa
Unique Abilities:



RESSERECCION


Resereccion Name:
Extinction
Resereccion Release Phrase:
Anihilate Everything

Release Actions:
He raises his sword and swings it down as though he we're cutting right through his opponent, It is important to note that his sword does not have to be in one piece nor does he need to have ahold of all of it, Even grasping a piece of the blade and swinging it will trigger his Bankai, When it releases a massive surge of Reiatsu is released from Exsis and is sent in the direction he swings, Anything caught in the line of Reiatsu will either take a high amount of damage, or they could be outright sliced in half and killed
Resereccion Appearance:
Note: He can stand on his hind legs as a human would, Freeing up his front two arms he is also 144 feet tall and about half that in girth, If he stands on his hind legs he is twice that in height
Resereccion Abilities: His first ability doesn't really have a name, However when performed it has a long charge up time of about 5 seconds so it's usually used when the opponent is bound or some such, It fires in a wide cone infront of him and extends from the ground to about 40 feet in the air, It continues to go until he stops firing it or until he runs out of energy to sustain it, The farther you are from the intial firing spot the less damage you take, But if your at point blank range and get hit your nearly guarented to be slaughtered by the blast however since it has a 5 second charge up time and is easily visible chances of getting hit point blank are very low especially since Exsis has to stay still in order to charge it and fire it so there's no way he can begin charging it then move behind you with Sonido or some such skill

His second ability he gains is known as Impulse, Exsis generates 4 black orbs around him, They are able to fully block any attack up to 2-3 at which point it can only mitigate the damage to a certain extent, However once an orb(s) is used to block a single attack no matter what it disappears after the block/attempted block, Once all 4 are used Exsis cannot use any more orbs like this for the rest of the battle usually, However if the battle does go on long enough and he's able to regain his energy from using it he can reuse these orbs

His third ability seems like an ordinary attack, However if struck by his claws and if his claws dig into your skin a deadly poison seeps into your blood stream, It takes about 10 minutes to take it's first effect, It's first effect starts to numb the body, Slowing down reaction time and movement, After another 20 minutes your body goes into various levels of paralysis depending on how strong/weak the victim is. This ability only takes a medium amount of energy to dispel it, The varying effects of paralysis are as follows: Weaker opponents suffer from Strong Paralysis, This often results in them being unable to move their limbs, Victim's around his level will find themselves only inflicted with a mild amount of paralysis, This will result in them finding it harder to move their limbs but still able too do so and block somewhat effectively, Victim's that are stronger then him by a decent amount are only inflicted with minor paralysis, This will result in only their limbs being slowed by a small amount and their thinking and processing will be slowed by a small amount as well, Most often this will not really effect them much in most fights, However if they are far stronger such as tier 1-2 or above, They will find themselves completely unaffected by the paralysis. NOTE: THIS ABILITY LASTS FOR 2 FULL POSTS, NOT PARAGRAPHS, IT'S DOWNTIME IS 3 FULL POSTS this means that no matter how long/short the post is, It will count as a post towards the uptime/downtime, Do keep in mind he must ACTIVATE the ability for it to be put on it's downtime after it's activation has been used, Meaning AFTER the 2 full posts



SKILLS


(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

General Skills

  • Durability:Adept
  • General Speed:Beginner
  • Strength:Adept
  • Weapon Skill:Adept


Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination:Beginner
  • Mental Deduction:Adept
  • Pain Endurance:Adept
  • Focus:Beginner


Racial Skills

  • Perquisa:Adept
  • Sonido:Beginner
  • Cero/Bala:Adept
  • Hierro:Beginner
  • Regeneration:Adept

    (Arrancar may only add skills to either Hierro OR Regeneration, not both. This is due to incredibly resilient and unbalanced Arrancar that never die creeping around. Whichever skill you do not choose to apply a skill to will be set at Adept or Beginner depending on the character)
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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Thu May 03, 2012 5:56 pm

Welp, a few things are wrong with this, Kanji. One, all skill sheets must be clear as of now, Staff give you the skills via Tier and Personality. Two, this app looks like a wip, feels like a wip, and smells like a wip, so, I'll move it. That's really all that's wrong, so, get back to work on it bru'. (Nrd)

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Fri May 04, 2012 7:25 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [J]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: MAKE SURE YOU PLAY FAIRLY.

Also, cross out your ress until you obtain it. (He has not obtained Ress yet.)
Tier: 3-1

Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Fri May 04, 2012 8:29 pm

This app is now placed BACK in WIP as Arrancar CANNOT be without a ress.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Fri May 04, 2012 8:42 pm

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Sat May 05, 2012 12:11 pm

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Unique Abilities:
Pesquia

I am unsure what you mean by this. Firstly, Pesquisa isn't a unique arrancar ability, it is racial so i'm wondering if you added this in by accident or forgot to finish what you were writing.

Quote :

Resereccion Appearance:
He looks like his previous form [Bahamut]

I do not know what your previous forms is because you have not provided the correct explanation or imagery for it.

Quote :

They are able to fully block any attack up to a Espada Cero level

Just using the words 'Fully block' in an app is very bad because if not written correctly, looks like your godmodding. be very careful about that. I have read what the entire ability does and because of your approved level at 3-1 This ability wouldn't be capable of blocking an Espada Cero. I would just state 'Cero of a similar tier' to your character.

EDIT: App changed, Now approved

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:55 pm



THIS IS BEING ARCHIVED! USER HAS NOT SUBMITTED A REQUEST TO STAY ON THE SITE DURING THE REBUILD! EITHER REGISTER TO CONTINUE ON THE SITE OR SAY GOODBYE TO IT! WE CANNOT KEEP APPLICATIONS OF INACTIVES AT THIS POINT.



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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Thu Dec 06, 2012 2:01 am



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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Sat Feb 09, 2013 11:43 am

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Exsis [APPROVED, 3-1]   Sat Feb 09, 2013 1:03 pm

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