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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Jaeden Crow [Approved 1-2]   Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:11 pm


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The Crow Family are a new clan within the Junrinan district, the clan is known to be quite skilled within in many arts including Zanjutsu. They follow their Leader Jaeden into the thick of the world of Soul Society with high hopes. Their clan's special sword style coming along with them. The Crow's are known decently in their homeland for good swordsmanship within Kendo and outside of it.

Considered the the keepers of some forms of electrical knowledge and seen as the holders of what some consider a rare and true sword family. Anyone who isn't able to keep to the ways of this clan's Tengu style are often placed within the branch family. Known as lesser and often taking care of the main branch. However once and a while a rare blossom is born into the Branch of the Crow clan, brought into the main house. Things are a bit different in the home, they are hardly known as the clan with pure swordsmanship for a reason.

Most members would aspire to the the ranks of the 11th, Division. This way makes them quite a violent clan that is often seen as the keepers of the district they hail from only in nickname. Leaving little to know the future of this clan.

System Error: Crow Jaeden : File Detected :




• Name: Jaeden Crow
• Titles: Head of the Crow Clan, The Dragon of West Rukon
• Gender: Male
• Appearance Age: His early 20's
• Age:2000
• Affiliation/Rank: Captain

• Appearance Description: Jaeden Crow is a well built man, with a decent height, known easily for his red eyes that his family hasn't seen in several years. Marking of a royal blood within the veins, however it's unknown the details of it. However further details indicate a scar over his left optic, some damage had happened at one point within the young man's life. Resembling a man within his early 20's. He appears to be very determined at first glance.

Known for wearing his clan's symbol on the red piece of armor attached to his left shoulder, the emblem shown at the top of the document page. This emblem has a great deal of meaning to him, reasons for such is unknown in this file. However his brown hair and red eyes are a key give away for his promise, within the clan. His Zanpakutō is worn on his waist,t he large sword upon his back is used primarily for training and other such things. Training people in the Crow Zanjutsu style, it's believed that he's quite strong for his time spent carrying it around.

Depending on the situation and time spent, before he joined the Gotei 13, he was seen as dressed in the file below. Information was compiled due to his nature and nickname going around Rukongai. He was seen wearing a black coat, with the clan symbol hanging on a piece of white fabric. His body build was very muscled and his skin tone seemed to be of a Caucasian coloration, it's unknown on any further details. Some images of his childhood indicate the coloration of his eyes weren't shown till later.

The clan has shown a less then accommodating nature about the files of the current head, perhaps something to do with the ties in the family.


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Personality File : Access Granted :

Complicated: Jae has shown a very complex nature and actions, even to an untrained eye it appears the man is many layers of complexity that go on for endless miles, his attitude towards the noble families show that he is less than caring about nobles. Or where even his own family stands, despite seeming attached to the symbolism of the Crow clan, being true keepers of Death. He defends them one moment and is seen willing to downgrade them the next.

Dreamer: Having shown that he dreams of a better day for the Crows, where the family and branch family are brought into one family together, no such thing as two families who treat one another any different then what they are. Simply a family, the clan's of higher nobility seem to have no issue such as this. So he wonders if that comes with the status of being a noble. But he doesn't truly care about it, he believes that flaws are everywhere. And his family must become one to defeat their own.

Lazy: A trait that isn't as grand as the others, he perhaps isn't completely aware how often he appears to be the exact opposite of this, his idealism sometimes causes him to act this way towards work. Though he will do it if driven. Somethings he seems to lack the desire to be part of, it appears as though his personal dislike for doing work that goes against a set code he follows. A code similar to that of Bushido in it's prim, he and his sword are in complete agreement about this.

Confident: Showing something rare, he's quite confident within his skills. He doesn't believe himself a weak man, yet he doesn't believe himself a god. His thoughts about the subject are quite normal. Things are going to change as time does, all things must grow and wither. But yet in time things will change, his crimson gaze is a sign to him that he understands truly to the depths what he is after as a being.

Understanding: He seems able to comprehend a person without them speaking, able to follow and understand them by crossing blades. Or simply by being around them for over an hour, understanding the desires and dreams they have. He's highly good at reading people and understanding them and the situation they are in. Despite his age he retains his youthful appearance.


Relaxed: Jaeden's whole demeanor has changed since his battle with Kaminari, he doesn't seem to take things as seriously as he used to. His hand is normally seen with sake, meaning he's become quite a drinker since his recovery. But he doesn't seem to mind being a bit goofy at times, these traits make him a better person in some peoples eyes.

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History: Born into the Branch Family children die very quickly,for the Main Branch sends them out to fight hollows to prove themselves worthy of the family. This is just a way to kill them off, groups of ten are sent out and this was long before they were in the Rukogani. The Family would send them out and watch them die for what they considered science, this passage was normal. Jae was born a crying child, always crying and upset. He seemed to cry all the time, he showed great promise for the sword and seemed only to cry whenever he got hurt. Seeming almost always upset by a voice no one else could hear. Given extraordinary spiritual pressure as a child. Some said he was good enough to be a seated officer. Though the location they lived in wasn't really known by the Soul Society.

He was a young child of his early 100s here. They sent them out, out to die like dogs for the Main Branch who sat and laughed about the death of the young children to come. After all they were expendable for them. As they were sent out, hollows came and attacked them in large numbers. Large part due to Jae's power being in the group. They'd engaged them and fought for a long time, nine children had died in 20 minutes. Jae's anger perhaps was triggered by this. A loud yell a roar almost had come from his mouth. This place was much like a Cave, as it began to shake he was angry about this entire situation. They casted them aside as though simply dogs to die for their entertainment. His beautiful brown eyes had begun to show signs of changing.


Killing these lowly hollows even at the cost of pain and what came of it, along his left eye and down his neck was a large claw attack he took. It had surprised the hollow, his crimson glare almost evil as he fought back. It was the rebirth of Jaeden, this moment as comrades died. Friend's people he laughed and smiled with dying. His hate and his desire for avenging them had taken over. They were doing fine, living and almost making it as it stood. His brown eye's had slowly shifted to a complete red glare. Seiryu had been awakened, he'd accessed powers of his sealed sword at a young age.

Killing at least 20 hollows in this place, spilling blood everywhere. His injuries had caught up with him, one was so bad it scars him to this very day. The leader's of the clan had done well, as Jae had finally earned a moment of rest. The scar was hit upon him before he knew what happened, he was slammed into the stone wall. A warm feeling flowing down his left eye and his chest. He laid and waited to die, the creature who'd attacked him had been none other then a Menos Grande Adjuchas class. Well dying wasn't so bad, he'd killed all those who'd hurt his friend's. His little body lay in a small amount of blood.

Alfonso had arrived sadly for the Adjuchas it's death wasn't something that he questioned, was he here to kill him that was a question that echoed in his mind. What did it matter, living wasn't something he planned. This cave and place out near the compound of the Crow Clan was covered in blood, both sides had bled all over these grounds. What did the man do, what was he going to do. Questions of the like seemed to flow in his mind, sounds of battle were echoing around him. The Hollow wasn't really doing well it seemed to die shortly after this Jae pushed himself to his feet. Walking towards exit now, and heading home blood spilled along his body now. He'd lost quite a bit, but his will to live was strong and Seiryu had asked him. "Jaeden do you wish to live?" He'd said yes and the Zanpakutō had kept him alive letting him arrive home.

From this point on Jaeden was called the Dragon of the West, known for coming from the west with storms rolling behind him. His childhood nature of crying and being happy seemed to vanish. He'd begun to transform, defeating all the main house within the next month. Taking a spot at the top of the food chain at the age of 1000. His energy was equal to that of Vice Captains now. He'd been trained by some to listen and learn, the only one who taught him truly was Seiryu. Learning how to wield the sword from the sword. Though this didn't happen over night, nothing of the like ever came easily for him.

Facing traumatic experiences in his life still after that. He had made a choice after going into a small family war, they would abandon the Main House. Jae's family had been killed, mother and father both. By the Main House, this was a common practice to keep them in line. However it had a negative result. For all those who'd been part of it started to turn up dead. The next war of houses was about to begin and they'd thrown the first punch so to speak.

Jaeden and the Branch Family retaliated with force so devastating that the family really began to know why Jae was called the Dragon of West. Having a Zanpakutō put him ahead of others in his clan, he'd not truly understood everything about it and Kidō. But learning was key, whatever he could pick up. He learned things from traveling Shinigami and pushed further into the well of knowledge as a teenager. Finishing the war in two short years against the better family. Earning his place as the clan head, the battles had been brutal events.

Jaeden wanted to further the education of the family and took them to Rukongai finally, they had at first not fit in so well. As battling people they weren't much of people. Jaeden seemed to enter what some called a depression after arriving, he'd ended the war on a sour note. His child had been killed by the Main Family's head out of fear. Jae had done something in his anger that haunts him, he killed everyone in the Main Family, children and adults alike. His depression seemed endless, he'd lost his temper again and allowed it to get his rage up. But this act alone had pushed him so far over the edge.

Nothing else had compared to it, the Main House had taken everything from him. He'd even told Seiryu he wasn't going to use it's power for a good thing this time. Only evil was coming this time, Seiryu had thankfully known the wielder's pain and acknowledged his desire for a vengeance of purity. Though Jae isn't aware, Seiryu didn't harm the children the blade wasn't aimed at vital points. But the elders and adult's died screaming of the Dragon who burnt the west to the ground.

Deciding he needed a change, he studied the Shinigami way within the Academy. Developing himself further into a warrior, this distraction helped him far more. Seiryu was also happy that his master wasn't as upset with himself, the bond between Seiryu and Jaeden deepened as the two became so close. Seiryu viewed Jaeden as the only one who'd been worthy of him. He'd saved Jaeden's life at one point and many times as he'd always wanted. Jaeden's life after the Academy was simply sitting in the House in Rukongai they'd moved into.


As he hit 2000, Jaeden had mastered Seiryu and made many new forms to the style the Crow's were so proud of. At the moment he rests peacefully awaiting the next job that comes along, he's simply a Rogue without a life at the moment. Many teachers called him the prodigy that came after the events of the things within the Gotei. The calm before the storm had truly been decided, people die and move on but as he laid and seemed to grow lazy.

His choice had been made where he would be going soon, thing's looked to be taking a turn that was really interesting for him. He'd met many fine people these days, thing's weren't really going anywhere he was so curious about that caused his crimson gaze to change. The nobles of this Seireitei were much like the Main House in his eyes. People were looking more towards the better these days. Things had begun to finally brighten up, but yet a storm was coming. This was always the truth, storms were always their just on the horizon. Waiting for the next time they move in.

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Physical File : Access Granted :

Within this file are physical skills that the family had has displayed. These skills are abnormal in someways, as they effect the way he fights. These skills and such are marks that he carries, the files below.

Inch Wide Eyesight: This skill is something dealing with the crimson eyes he has now. These eyes grant him the power to somewhat examine and understand attacks, they call it the Dragons Eye's within the Crow family. Basically this allows him to examine things to a higher detail. Within combat, however this has been sued outside of it allowing him to somewhat understand people. This power isn't absolute as somethings are simply unable to be read and understood. However this does increase his field of Vision greatly and helps him find things better.

Blind Fighting: Jae at a young age put himself through training to fight without his eyes, his parents were planning on him perhaps being a tool to defeat the main house. The training has stuck with him and out of a habit he'll often keep his eyes closed. Opening them only when he feels a desire to fight seriously. This habit and training has made his other senses much sharper then a normal person.


Nimble and Strong: This has come from wielding a large buster blade upon his back and often fighting with it rather then the true weapon. However this doesn't mean he dislikes his Zanpakutō, it's simply a method of training and he has grown quite nimble and strong from wielding the heavy weapon. However he does firmly state that the weapon is to broad for his liking and isn't good for facing enemies who are using small weapons.

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Crow Technique's


Suppression Technique: This is constantly in use, though it's not a complete suppression for he stores some energy away, but this move allows him to suppress his energy almost to the state of absolute zero. Making his energy almost vanish till he desires for someone to really know he's their. This comes from training and attempting to hold everything back till a moment he felt it was best to let it all out. This move is used outside of combat for hiding, it allows his pressure and presence to almost be erased. Detecting him will not be an easy task for anyone below 1-2.


Advanced Suppression Technique: IN this form Jaeden has turned into a white wolf with blue eyes, able to hide from anyone with complete perfection. Jaeden's actions using the suppression in this form are better, allowing him to hide to absolute perfection from people, Jaeden is known for his activity in the arts of stealth.

Tengu Sword Arts: As expected he is trained in the swordsmanship art of his family and uses it frequently when fighting, however he's shown a somewhat dislike for the traditional style of it and sometimes will alter between that and the newer forms that have been made to deal with times. The Crow Sword Arts is known for a large amount of practice in kendo, kenpo, and other arts. but it combines the forms of Kidō, Kenpo, and Kendo into a lethal art. Users of this style are often seen taking one of the several stances below.

Murder of Crows: This Swordsman move allows the user to counter attack within an instant, this move was made by Jae and has only one thing it is dependent on. The sense of touch, as most Crow family members who are good fight blind. This allows them to use a style that is built upon the other senses that don't deal with sight. The true movement of their weapon and style is often hard to completely notice. But the Murder of Crow's is the beginning of the stances that they learn at a level of what they consider high swordsmanship.

Hawk Eye: only a couple members of the clan have mastered this move, when watching a swordsman use their moves. If they've watched it or had it used upon them three or more times. Some of them are capable of reading and negating the damages of the move due to a deep understanding of how that move works. It's unknown the complexion of this move and what requirements the user must meet.


]Misdirecting Blade: This is a move that most Crow's never really learn due to the sheer nature of this attack. Basically the principal behind it is simply the blade doesn't go towards what it appears to, the blade is instead sent towards another location giving the user little time to react. Those who are only able to use their eyes as a sense of battle will often fall to this blade. For an example of the form used with it, the blade being sent towards the neck will instead slash the gut. This form of swordsmanship is dealing with a large amount of deception. The user of this may go far as to deceive themselves by closing their eyes.

Family Seal: This is used to shutdown the use of reshi from a body completely turning it off, this spell has a similar effect of the Seki Seki stone that lines the prison. The Crow clan's move has several requirements for it to be effective, firstly an extended period of contact with the target (two posts). A greater power or equal power to the target person. And Finally the seal may only be used once a day upon one person. ( Till the end of the thread, the user can break the seal by locating the placement and stabbing it with a weapon. Knife, sword, etc)


Name: Tsurugi sono Rijekuto - The Sword that Rejects
Style: Tsurugi sono Rijekuto
Stance: Mid
Art: Zanjutsu
Effect: For ten effects of the follow, by focusing on a point he is able to create a reality of that point. The point focused upon here, is the point of negating the power of some attacks, the circumstances behind it are. Able to be used once every other post, this move allows the user to negate the powers of Zanpakutos, depending on circumstances. Kidos and ceros are also vulnerable to them, depending on the circumstance of it. This move may be used ten times each thread, the how it works depends upon the move. As before stated the effect centers upon focusing hard on a point to make a that point a reality.


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Equipment Breakdown:


Weighted Training Gear: it's not exactly stated on how heavy the gear is, but the shoulder, wrists, and feet are restrained by red bands to hold him and help him train so hard that he loses himself. Training in this method allows for great amount of endurance, making his stamina already higher than average. Combined with the heavy blade he uses for combat over the Zanpakutō. He's able to truly train in ways that are different from others.

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In the Works

New Sword Arts: these are a process Jaeden is working on something special to help give swordsman an edge over the other people, however given his lack of time as a Captain tot rain with his Zanpakutō he's busy dealing with matters the Gotei 13 deem worth his time. However it's known he's working on a sword to fight against Kidō and cero based moves, this style is still highly developmental and shall be updated as progress is made. File closed.

Tengu Zanjutsu Upgrade: Having trained in the art form his family has trained in for many years, Jaeden is one of the first to develop a way to use the slashes more than once now, able to swing his sword and create two extra invisible slashes, these slashes can be detected if a being closes their eyes or has an extremely high swordsmanship practice or is able to notice the signs. Using one has no rest needed, however to do double can only be done every 5 seconds.( every other post)

However the tips of the attack can be seen, they are some visible. However avoiding them is still hard considering they can come from almost angle. Their are a couple ways to find out about these type of attacks, fighters who have good instincts and have the attacked used on them enough. May be able to tell the angle and sounds just from their bodies memories. The attack is somewhat visible when two are used.

Zanjutsu Slash: Using his knowledge of the sword, Jaeden will give his sword a strong slash sending out a slicing wave of air. Those hit by this slash are cut, performing this action will tire him a bit, it's meant to deal with enemies who rest to far away for Jaeden to indulge in the close range zanjutsu arts he prefers.

Dance of a Thousand Crows: This is a move that Jaeden has developed to work with the Tengu style, it allows him to increase his general speed by one, this let's him grow a bit stronger and faster while performing the dance, however the draw back of this is simple. He is tired and often slows down for several minutes after using it. (3 posts)

Kuraiko: The important use of Kuraiko comes from Jaeden's experience with dealing with the arts of Kidō. Using his power he brings an energy around his Zanpakutō, that's built to counter act against Kidō blasts and Kidō based attacks. The majority use of this move at the moment is to cut Kidō and allow him to defend himself better from them, it has great psychological damage on Kidō users, of course using this often isn't possible. Jaeden must have access to his reiatsu and be able to use it freely. This will allow him to slice Ceros and other energy based attacks similar to kidos.


As it stands though Kuraiko is able only to cut through Kidō that are similar to blasts, ceros, blast like moves. The move will pry be worked on more later as Jaeden gains experience in combat further from his youth. This move will only be usable every other post, but this allows Jaeden time to recover and decide his next action. This move sadly comes at the price of a cooldown as it were, Jaeden must wait ten seconds between each use. (Two posts)

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Spiritual Breakdown : Access Granted :

High Spiritual Pressure: born with a high spiritually energy that has caused problems for him most of his young life. His energy has been causing issues from his time as a youth, it's to blame for the scar on his left eye and down his chest. This pressure has grown considerably, but is still impressive for his task.

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What Jaeden's Lighting Does:


Burns:- Tissue heating due to resistance can cause extensive and deep burns. High-voltage (> 500 to 1000 V) shocks tend to cause internal burns due to the large energy (which is proportional to the square of the voltage) available from the source. Damage due to current is through tissue heating.

Ventricular fibrillation:- A low-voltage (110 to 220 V), 60-Hz AC current traveling through the chest for a fraction of a second may induce ventricular fibrillation at currents as low as 60mA. With DC, 300 to 500 mA is required. If the current has a direct pathway to the heart (e.g., via a cardiac catheter or other electrodes), a much lower current of less than 1 mA, (AC or DC) can cause fibrillation. Fibrillations are usually lethal because all the heart muscle cells move independently. Above 200mA, muscle contractions are so strong that the heart muscles cannot move at all.

Neurological effects:- Current can cause interference with nervous control, especially over the heart and lungs. When the current path is through the head, it appears that, with sufficient current, loss of consciousness almost always occurs swiftly.


Keep in mind that most beings are beyond a simple electric shock doing damage to them to a degree that kills a human, however this is the effects that follow one of Jaeden's electrical damages.
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Zanpakutō Information : Access Granted :




Zanpakutō Name: Seiryu


Zanpakutō Appearance Information: Seiryu takes on the form of a giant Blue Chinese Dragon, it's body sparking with storms of lighting and thunder across it's back. The Dragon is shown to be quite large and often takes up several fields of a location. Thus the location of his inner mind is quite large to fit the creature. Seiryu is the one who rescued Jae from his depression and young nature as a child. Jae was known to be a child who cried all the time and lacked any desire for fighting.

Inner World Appearance: The Inner world of Jae used to rain all the time, he'd been a child who cried often and heard voices of Seiryu. The Dragon was reaching for a master who was worthy of it's awesome powers. The Keeper of Storms, the watcher of lighting and thunder. The Dragon was seeking him for such a long time it had been a journey that had taken longer then expected. The Inner World now seems to be a Valley of Lighting and Thunder that is constant as the large dragon appears to be above and comes down only to see him when the time is right.

The creature has shown a liking for the mountains and other things that are around him. The valleys are struck by lighting often, hitting the grounds and mountains. It seems almost dangerous within his inner world, but ironically he's at peace. For the bolts and thunder are a sign of righteousness to him. This world of chaos and disorder is the order that Jae has stabilized himself far better than his childhood.


Zanpaktuo's Sealed Power's: Seiryu's power is quite alike to the sword, the user is able to magnetize the other person's weapon or body by simply pointing a blast or touching the object. This power can send the person flying towards and object and hold them against it, the amount of force behind this magnetic pull increases as people attempt to pull away.


Zanpakutō Sealed Appearance: Seiryu is a rather more flamboyant than other Zanpakutō's in their sealed state. Showing little signs of what their powers may be. It's sword hilt as small designs along the hilt and guard, showing less of this later on. Because of Jae's nature for showing his loyalty to the clan he won the freedom of. His life with this, showing the figure of the Zanpakutō to be the phenomenon that he created even among the Crow's Jaeden is still called the Dragon of the West. Elders know where it began as does Seiryu.


Shikai Appearance: His Zanpakutō changes from it's ordinary Katana form and slowly begins to change to look like a Chinese Jian, it appears to have a slight curve to the blade. Making the weapon a double edged nightmare. A blue tassel forms on the end of the weapon, it appears still quite versatile not putting on to much weight as the weapon is formed. lighting sparks along the edge and seems to dance along the blade's tip before coming back and forming a blue gauntlet on his opposite arm. The gauntlet is charged with lighting and dances between the sword.


Shikai Abilities:

Weather Manipulation: This is truly the main power of the Zanpakutō, given the strength of Seiryu the weather is effected by it's Shikai almost soon as it's released, causing wide spread storms around a small center. The user is able to manipulate the lighting and direct them with their hand and sword when desired. It's not to complex for Jae to point and fire with this move. often he favor's this as the amount of lighting depends highly on how much he pulls down.

The power to pull such objects down within rain and storms is the main power that Seiryu is so proud of. It's power of pulling down the thunderbolts from the skies above to the wielder drawing in storm clouds and other by a special power it gives off in the air. Rain and such isn't a uncommon thing within the dealing's of the summoning of this weather manipulation that the wielder of Seiryu brings about.


Charged Regeneration: This power is a passive and is often taken care of by his zanapktuo's electric nature. This allows him to speed the cell growth up within his body and electrically heal his body. This move is rather simple in it's effect and has become simply a passive, however it does have limitations and based on the damages it can take several minutes depending on the type of wound. For example, simple cuts are in it's power to heal and stop the bleeding of.



Lighting Shield: Gathering the electrical energy around his arm that the gauntlet rests upon he forms a shield of pure lighting, this can be used to block energy based attacks. Sometimes used to block physical attacks, however this shield grows based on the energy gathered for the move. It's allowing the user to fire bolts from the Surge move into the shield and attack the enemy from a multiple point.


Surge: Arguably one of the moves that Seiryu taught to the young man Jaeden as a line of defense, this moves utilizes the charge of electrical energy within the air and let's him fire it from around his body without making many motions. This lighting bolt can arc outwards and change directions, it can be done by forming a certain pose or simply stating the name and standing still. This move is able to be fired from anywhere on Jae's sword.

Pale Net: This is a lighting net, made of pure lighting and is commonly made by the gauntlet over the sword, however it can be done with either or. The net is able to be fired around the target and wrap around them. It will fly for a long period of time, the user is able to direct the net and move it with the magnetic pulse they place on a target.Making them almost a target under heat seeking. Obviously this net can explode and be used within another method of simply electrocuting the target.


Surging Dragon:
This move is the final move of Shikai that he was able to learna nd understand, this move allows the user to fire a large lighting blast from either the sky or their body. The choice is on the user to use this move out of the two choices it really has. They may call a lighting storm upon their body to charge themselves with enough power to send the large surging dragon of lighting towards the enemies. Those who take a direct hit from this are almost instantaneously severally injured or killed.

Bankai Information:

Bankai Name:Seiryu Ryuzaki

Bankai Appearance: Upon bringing his sword up and performing the bankai, lighting strikes his body from every direct of the sky charging his body with so many volts that wings of pure electric energy begin to form, recharging from the skies every once and a while. The Lighting is able to be fired at others, his body is fully charged with electricity. The lighting often takes a red appearance given his reiatsu color and negatively effect it. The sword changes very little other than gaining a super charge to the tip and around the blade, causing lighting to dance around the user more often. The lighting that goes around the user's body has grown quite a bit as the user has generated enough for wings.

Bankai Abilities:


Electric Wings: The wings cover a rather small area, the user could fold them in front to protect their body. This stage of his Bankai or move is rather the starting point, if the fight is serious the wings can be put away. They have no real physical body so they don't have an air resistance as one may think and will grow smaller as he uses the powers of his lighting attacks from them. They are able to channel into a larger force, creating more storms often by flapping them.

Pillar of Storms: Able to bring down an entire pillar of lighting around the target, giving it only a brief moment to flee that 20 meter zone. That's about to get lit up by the large surge of lighting coming down from the skies. This voltage requires a recharge within the skies, this move isn't able to be used for 6 turns after it's first use. Taking time to recharge as it builds up for perhaps another attack.

Storm of a Thousand Petals: This move is Seiryu's final move in Bankai it's said to release a thousand petals over an area the user has selected. Often times a large space, the petals upon touch of an enemy will release a near fatal voltage, once all of them have come down they will begin to shock the user covering him in an electrical field that will continual shock him till death takes him. The voltage building up each time an electrical shock is added to the previous one before it. The petal's charged of pure lighting are said to look like glowing petals of death from above.

Lighting Emperor Mode: This mode is Seiryu's Final Bankai move, generating a massive amount of electrical power through the users body, it builds so much around them that the armor can be used to deflect attacks of energy nature and otherwise melee attacks. The benefits of this mode are grand, however the end result is very dangerous. Use of this mode is something Seiryu doesn't wish to ever do, it's absolute draining effects are hard on the users body. The move can only be sustained for three minutes. ( three Turns) It increases the wielders strength ,speed, and endurance by one. His lighting based attacks also gain a large increase, however the benefits are shadowed out by the negatives.

The use of this move puts a tremendous strain on the body the damages to the body are extreme, after the use of this move. The damage to the internal structure, muscles are tearing themselves apart during the move. Afterwards, the damages done are complete and the user is vulnerable to a high extent. Their reiatsu supply is often completely dried out after using this move. The pain is said to be legendary by Seiryu, he claimed that Jaeden should use this only when all else fails.

All moves of Seiryu's are buffed up quite high by 4x of the regular damage.. This move is built to be the last move Seiryu will teach Jaeden, it's use is something Jaeden himself is scared to pull out of his bag of tools. Only in a situation where many are in danger. The buffs to his body come at a heavy price, saying the user is in pain is an understatement. The lighting coating his body makes his hair turn almost blond from bleaching of the electrical light.


The Lighting Dragon Emperor Blast: This is the final move Seiryu made, only usable within the Lighting Emperor mode. Which coats the wielder in Lighting, this dragon can cover the entire skies as far as the person can see. It can be seen for many miles, this dragon is directed by the wielder's hand. Bringing it down upon the enemy, this attack is said to be so destructive that entire countries feel the wraith of the dragon's damage. Using this move results in full drain of the users reiatsu, once the move is launched control is gone. This move adds on to the effects of Lighting Emperor Modes finishing.



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General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Master
  • Strength:Adept
  • Weapon Skill:Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master
  • Kidō: Adept
  • Zanjutsu:Master
  • Hakuda:Adept


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Jaeden Crow [Approved 1-2]   Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:07 pm

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Jaeden Crow [Approved 1-2]   Mon Jul 09, 2012 3:36 pm

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Jaeden Crow [Approved 1-2]   Thu Sep 06, 2012 11:27 pm

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Name Tsurugi sono Rijekuto - The Sword that Rejects
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Effect: For ten effects of the follow, by focusing on a point he is able to create a reality of that point. The point focused upon here, is the point of negating the power of some attacks, the circumstances behind it are. Able to be used once every other post, this move allows the user to negate the powers of Zanpakutos, depending on circumstances. Kidos and ceros are also vulnerable to them, depending on the circumstance of it. This move may be used ten times each thread, the how it works depends upon the move. As before stated the effect centers upon focusing hard on a point to make a that point a reality.

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