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 Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:45 pm

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Basics


Name: Shinn Asuka
True Age: 500 years old.
Gender: Male. [He's Heterosexual]
Personality: He is hot tempered, and Shinn has also shown to act own his feelings. Despite these short comings he's usually calm and gentle. Although he can get that way he regrets it because of his past and the things he knows he's done. Those killing in the name of Evil, although it was his job, he still had regrets.

He still deeply saddened by the world's cruel actions and all the people that have died in his life; he fights for wanting to change the world for the better. He wants the people to stop dying recklessly and learn that they have the power to change the world like he did before. Shinn's heart and mind are now in the right place, and he no longer bears the pain of his past. In short he's a calm, brave and understanding person, who has a short temper at certain mentions of evil acts.


General Appearance

Appearance:
Appearance Age: Sixteen. [16]
Height: Five Foot Six [5'6]
Weight: One-Hundred and Twenty-One Pounds. [121 Lbs.]



Natural Abilities


Magic: SEED Mode: SEED mode represents the ability for an individual with the SEED factor to enter into a state of enhanced awareness and peak physical ability. While in this state, the person demonstrates heightened reflexes and extremely quick information processing. This ability is usually triggered by extreme situations or from recalling significant traumas, often arising out of a need to protect someone else in a critical situation.

It is demonstrated visually by cutting to the image of a jewel-like seed, its color matching the color of the experiencer's eyes, dropping from the above and exploding in a shower of light just above the eyes. The physical characteristics are the shrinking of the pupil and growth of the iris. When in SEED mode, a person exceeds his or her normal physical and mental limits.

When SEED Mode is active. Shinn Gains +1 Rank to each General statistic, and in Tsurugi in Synchonization and, Martial Arts but it drains his energy fast.

Meteora: Using high skills from the stars Shinn Asuka Summons a large series of Meteors down upon the area around him about a half of mile around. Also while he uses this attack he's suspended in the air. The attack's AOE itself is triple where it hits. It causes a systemic ripple effect of AOE.

Kokūjin Ōgi: Akumetsu: A counter of Sorts where Shinn Asuka Focuses the area around him into a state of slowness. -Cuts down two tiers from speed in a 20 meter AOE (if slow than Shinn.). Then while they are slowed down he uses a high speed quick-draw slash through the persons waist line to cause massive damage, and while he's slashing through them, it's like getting hit by hurricane winds that were set on fire.

Other Weapons:: Katana (When powered by Reishi the sharp part of the blade turns red, like the Tsurugi's and helps it to cut better and faster.), Handgun (Powered by his Reishi, and or Normal bullets, or silver bullets.


Tsurugi

Name: ZGMF X42S Destiny Gundam.
Type: Shinuuchi
Curse: "I shall protect Earth from evil from people like you!"
Curse Effect: Forces Shinn's S.E.E.D Factor/S.E.E.D Mode activates causing a rapid drain on Shinn's energy.
Smith: Anaheim Electronics. (Vino Dupre)
Standby Form Appearance: Same as Humanoid.
Humanoid Form Appearance:
Personality: Brave, Noble, and Determined is the Tsurugi that Shinn Asuka Uses. It's main personality is of a gentle man whose only wish is to make the world a better place. Although he's battle hardened and seasoned with his Pilot who he trusts with his life, he knows that even they have to be in perfect sync. It's Brave in battle and out of battle showing that even Tsurugi's have a personality too. Although ti's a humanoid being. It was once just a plain ol' robot. The G.U,N.D.A.M Isn't necessarily a plain OS, it's a master one compiled to control the systems of the Tsurugi when Shinn isn't piolting it. While it's not with Shinn it tends to be training on it's own to hone it's craft of battle. While in battle, if necessary it will try to talk down a battle to preserve the majestic landscapes of the world, if it can't talk the person or thing down it will then try to draw the battle away from that area.

History:A commission from a higher up at the place where Vino Dupre, a master smith under Anaheim Electronics, to build the next generation of weapons for the future. He had an advanced design in mind for the Musha Shinn. The idea was to use such advanced technology to help improve the flying skill of the Tsurugi and the speed to a point where it's speed and flight are unmatched. It's meant to been built for total destruction, but the personality of Vino came shining through the tsurugi. A strong and noble creator of weapons forcing his feelings into the weapon itself.

The main problem with making the Tsurugi was the fact that while it was in use the drain on the user of it would be pretty steep as soon as they began to use weapons left and right. To counteract this drain once the realization came in that the weapons needed a balanced system they began to create a master Operating System that would make the weapons balanced usages and such so that the user of the Tsurugi could survive without hopefully exhausting all of their Reishi.

Once the project was completed. The Musha Shinn and The Tsurugi called Destiny were put together into trainings. After all of the training had been done and such the Tsurugi was offically given off and then the Blacksmith had disappeared to continue his masterful research and peeping out his Tsurugi products. Destiny's completion shows the power of Anaheim Electronics.

Tsurugi Unleashed

Calling Phrase: Shinn Asuka Ikkimatsu.
Height: 1.9 Meters.
Weight: 2.5 Metric Tons.
OS Name:The Gunnery United Nuclear-Dueterion Advanced Maneuver operating system, (MOBILE SUIT NEO OPERATION SYSTEM Ver.1.62 Rev.29) aka G.U.N.D.A.M
Fixed Armaments: Variable Phase Shift Armor.
2 x MMI-GAU26 17.5mm CIWS
2 x MMI-X340 "Palma Fiocina" Palm Beam Cannon
2 x MX2351 "Solidus Fulgor" Beam Shield Generator.
Hyper-Deuterion Nuclear Reactor : The Destiny is powered by a Hyper-Deuterion nuclear reactor, giving it a self-replenishing power reserve. Despite this amazing power source, the Destiny is quick to run out of available power in a fight.
Optional Fixed Armaments: 1 x M2000GX high-energy long-range beam cannon
Hand-held Armaments: 1 x MMI-714 "Arondight" Anti-Ship Sword
2 x RQM60F "Flash-Edge 2" Beam Boomerang,

Shinogi: Wings of Light. Hikari no Tsubasa.
Shinogi Abilities: The Ultimate Attack of the Destiny Gundam using it's high active system, It makes a large wings upon the back of the gundam extending from it's own wings built in with thrusters to create mirages of itself and move at the speed so blinding that it's hard to track it in battle. Furthermore, when used with a weapon, it makes the slashes or punches of the weapon so blinding that it's so hard to see. (Faster than Shinigami's Shunpo, and causes mirages to appear making it hard to counter it.)
Shinogi Drawback: It's difficult to use the longer range weapons on it, it's only meant to be used with the Arondight Sword, Finally it's so draining that it wears out the user and after the battle both Tsurugi and Summoner.



Past & Roleplay Sample


Character Background: Originally he was a human and he piloted a gundam called the Impulse Gundam it had three forms and well it was quite the useful gundam getting him through a lot of problems, but even that couldn't of handled the potential that was waiting for him. The new potential was the Gundam of Destiny or the ZGMF-X42S Destiny Gundam. It was the latest and one of the most powerful besides the Freedom and Justice. Arguably people would say the fastest unit of the Anaheim Electronics, and probably the most prone to expending it's energy.

After a long battle., A strange majestic energy hit Shinn and the Gundam, changing them forever on a recon mission from the air force to explore the world around them fully. The Gundam gained sentience and at the same time full control of itself, although it preferred Shinn Piloting it instead of fighting on it's own. It was used to being fought with and him operating the controls and that's how it wanted to be used so Shinn Agreed, also he gained skills of magic. Which scared Shinn at first until he could control the skills well enough so that he could be useful. He only needed a few attacks seeing he was still piloting the Destiny Gundam with full Armor and energy from him.

Jumping Forward roughly four hundred and Eighty-Four years roughly He's gained a master control of it, it's like a part of him. There's nothing he can say bad about Destiny, although he does get annoyed when Destiny goes on a long Monologue about how he was just a simple machine before Shinn and him were changed forever. Although Annoying to Shinn, they are best friends, and better battle partners. Although It's mainly Shinn Piloting him.
Role-play Sample: (Already did one on ZX)


General Skills
Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
Sugiura Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Animal Instincts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Martial Arts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Alter Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Tsurugi Skills
Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Maneuverability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Martial Arts: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Synchronization: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner



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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:11 am

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  • History is of appropriate length [O]
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Comments/Notes: You can't have these type of 'weapons' on here.. We have no idea what those Armaments would be inside of the Bleach world, you need to bleachify this entire application, until then we will not accept it.

Also History, No. You cannot include things like "Zaft" or anything to do with the Gundam realm, this is Bleach, Not Gundam.

Basically, Bleachify This Application.
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:26 am

Note* If someone who can override my decision wants to approve this application, they can. However I don't think we should have things like Armaments in the Bleach realm, if so then I think you must bleachify them in order to let them get approved.

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:17 am

-points to Tsurugi-

No offense, but I don't think you know what Tsurugi are, Kenshin.
Armaments like this are standard. Check out some of the other Tsurugi before you check another.

So I'm overriding you on the first part.

Also: Tsurugi are not 18 meters tall. This one would probably be 1.8 or 2 meters, maximum.

History still needs to be redone.
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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:36 pm

Edits made. Sweet Jesus I didn't think this would be too controversial. x.x -Gomenei Kenshin-kun.-

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Thu Jun 14, 2012 10:05 pm

Okay, you still didn't remove the references to the SEED Timeline.

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History: Tragedy hit him when he was young while his family was on an island on earth, a rouge missile from a plane had hit his parents, while he was running down a large hill to get his little sister's phone. He felt the explosion and the concussive blasts on his back that sent him flying when he was about fourteen years old. Being that he had advanced genetics as a child he could take the blast a bit better than his parents and his little sister, who died instantly from the blasts as well making him an orphan, and a lone general took him under his wing, and eventually he became a fighter pilot for the Air Force.

While he was called Super Ace, by his teammates, the real problem was that he had a condition that made him freak out for a bit before he flew and then it was like smooth sailing. One time it happened mid flight and he crashed, his life for forfeit, but one day a Suigira came to him and said he'd have another chance if he followed. He wanted that chance to someday fly a robot like he had seen on television as a kid. Little did he know that once he did do that he'd be come a user of the Tsurugi Shinuuchi called Destiny, but he had seen it before, it was on television. This was the same Robot thing he wanted to pilot and now he could!

He was definitely excited and wanting to pilot this thing, but one thing he didn't know how to pilot it! He'd learn over timme.. in fact over a long time. He'd been with this Shinuuchi for at least a good three hundred years. Over those 300 years he learned all about the weaponry of it, and how it worked, the energy it used. In short he became a part of it by flying, working on it, Finally just using it more than he would a normal car. He made it a part of his body in a way, and yet it was so natural to fly this thing with him

So the least that could be said is that it was an extension of body. He resides on earth with the Shunnuchi always present, he doesn't even leave home with out it. He knows how to make it fly and such better. Once he leaned how to control his S.E.E.D Mode his flying and skill became so much better. His goal now is to protect the earth with The Mobile Suit of Destiny. Shinn Willingly places his life into the hands of the Tsurugi, and at the same time, the Tsurugi trusts the complete piloting skill of Shinn.

This is supposed to be the history of the Tsurugi's blacksmith, not Shinn.

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Curse: "I shall protect Earth from evil from people like you!"
What does the curse force him to do?

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Smith: Zodiac Alliance of Freedom Treaty.
No. ZAFT. Anaheim Electronics exists and could have made this, though.
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Thu Jun 14, 2012 10:52 pm

Edited.

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:07 pm

Still mentions of ZAFT.
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After the battle of Messiah, A strange majestic energy hit Shinn and the Gundam, changing them forever on a recon mission from Zaft to explore the world around them fully.

Also, I need one more sentence in Shinn' personality.
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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:57 am

Edited to specifications.

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Shinn Asuka [APPROVED, 2-3 TSURUGI]   Fri Jun 29, 2012 7:51 pm

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  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
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