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 Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]

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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]    Wed Oct 10, 2012 10:05 am










• Name: Yoma yazaki
• Gender: Male
• Appearance Age: 19
• Age: 100



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• Personality:Yoma is a cheery and outgoing individual. He can get overexcited over minor things and enjoys trying to getting along with others. He can act quite childish at times and become quite distracted by little things. Yoma can get shy at times when speaking to groups of new people but he can quickly adapt if given a little time. He may distance himself a little but will join in once he is ready to join. Yoma is a hard worker and very dependable. He will take the time to improve himself and help out anyone that needs it. Yoma can get quite serious when he needs to be. Though Yoma is known to act childishly, he is capable of thinking seriously and focusing on the task at hand.

Yoma can act quite childhood to fool others into thinking he has no clue what is going on but this is often not the case Yoma is highly intelligent in some areas but he is completely clueless in almost everything else outside Fighting, Basics of living and some aspects about the soul society. Yoma tries to understand quickly as he can but will usually need help to fully understand something. He will spend time doing research on something to learn more about it. Yoma also happens to be highly curious so if he doesn't know something he will question it and want to learn more about it.

Yoma Tries to takes advantage of what’s in his surrounds to give him an edge. He will also analyze his foes and try to exploit their weakness if any can be located. He isn't strong in this regard but this is his preferred method of fighting. He doesn't enjoy heavily relying on others which gives him the feeling of worthlessness. He is willing to risk his own life to protect others. To him the lives of other are much more important than his own.

Yoma has a second personality which he does not enjoy talking about. They may switch unexpectedly and unknowing to the other people around him. One personality may talk to the other physically or mentally. This personality also responds to the name Yoma. This second personality isn't evil but is more arrogant and hates helping other and prefers to do things that help him. He likes to trick others and deceive them. This personality seems to be to be easily angered and also will easily insult others at will. He prefers close combat to anything else and will not let himself fight in another way.

Both of yoma's personalities will struggle with one another for control and will switch when one or the other is weaken. Memories may be hidden from one half to the other. The personalities don't like one another but that doesn't mean they aren't willing to help one another from time to time. Thy both understand they are different people trapped in the same body so they have to help one another to move on in their goals.


• Likes: Personality 1: cats, dogs, taking advantage of what he can, spending time with people
Personality 2: power, control, just messing with people

• Dislikes: Personality 1: the other personality, dislikes being useless, watching people suffer,
Personality 2:the other personality, being around people he considers stupid, losing, being wrong
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• History: Yoma has no memory of his past in the world of the living. the only thing that he can remember is the voice of his childhood friend. everything else has left his mind from the time he was living.

Yoma found himself in the streets of the Rukongai after his death. he wondered around helping out the little children and the elderly that need any help. He wondered around trying to find his purpose. He got in to a fight trying to protect a group of young children from a group trying to kill them because they were unable to do their work. he was unable to protect the children. they were killed he was left beaten and unconscious.

He was awaken by a person named Nexas. He learned from Nexas about the Shinigami academy. They both started to attend and became close friends as well as rivals. They worked to improve themselves and each other. After they completed the academy they decide to take their own paths. They split up; Yuma still unsure of what his goal should be or where to go, decided to become stronger in order to protect those who can't protect themselves. So he thought that if he joined a squad he could find a way to complete his goal.
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• Reiatsu Color: Crimson red

• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: shakunetsuno hana


• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:


Shakunetsuno hana is a kind and caring but she dislikes it when yoma isn't serious and will scold him for it. she is highly likely to insult yoma but she still supports him in his decisions. she understand how hard yoma tries to become stronger so she will help him in anyway possible. she cares about him but dislikes it when he talks to other females and may get annoyed. she does trust who ever yoma trusts and likes taking breaks as often as she can. may act like a little girl at times in order to get things her way. she dislikes yoma's other personality as he will greatly look down on her and insult her. she has no problems fighting with either personality but yoma is the only one who more likely to listen to what she has to say. Shakunetsuno hana is quite intelligent and will always give her view on things. she enjoys company, so the more the merrier.



• Inner World: The inner world is a snow covered hill, covered by dead trees, it never stops snowing here, in every direction you look is the same thing the ground covered in snow and dead trees scattered everywhere.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :


• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:
Fire manipulation
Yoma is able to create fire and use it in his battles to help him but he is working to have these move support him in battle.

Pressurized heat area
Yoma can raise the temperature in the area around him to the point where it creates a pressure and causes his opponents to feel the great amount of heat released from the area around him. This area is quite small and only around him of a range of 10 ft for a few minutes due to very little control he has over this skill.this area creates a pressure created by the heat so it will negatively effect them by causing their symptoms to worsen or those with breathing conditions because breathing becomes difficult in this area. People in this area would slow down by a little due to the pressure created by the area and the speed reduction would be very little from the farthest reach of this ability but closer to the center point of this ability where the user is standing would slow down people the most reducing their speed greatly determined by their tier and speed rating. the slower the person the greater effect this would effect them. if a slower but higher tier person is in this area would get their speed reduced by very little to nothing. if a person same tier or lower tier but high speed rating wouldn't get their speed reduced by much but the pressure and heat will still affect them. this ability only creates a pressure and does not cause any physical injuries. This is one of the skills yoma continues to practice to use when fighting with allies and to maintain it for longer lengths of times. the longest yoma has been able to use this move has been 5 mins but that is usually a rare max and happens to commonly last about 3 mins.

Heatwave strike
this move requires him to raise the temperature of his sword til it starts blazing with flame and then either strikes with it or launches the flame at the opponents by swinging the blade at them. this move has also not been perfected can be a powerful attack but it takes him 25 mins to focus on his blade and raise the temperature of it then while focused on maintaining the temperature he swings the blade and launches the attack. which can't currently travel very far and the farther it travels the weaker it becomes till it disappears. the current range of this attack is 12 and half feet. He must not become distracted while doing this or the attack will fail and he will tire out.

Fireball
Yoma can create fireballs which are the size of his hand and throw them at his opponent up to 15 feet away. These fire balls can burn what they come in contact with and can be created instantly from his hands but after throwing 5 fireballs he has to wait one post to be able to use them again. yoma can charge the fireball to make them stronger by holding it for a post to increase the strength by 1/4. the number of posts the fireball can be held in one hand to be charged is 3 posts. while yoma is throwing a fireball with one hand he can charge one in his other hand. for every post the fireball is charged is equal to using up one fireball.

IE charged up for one post then fireballs uncharged that can be fired is 3 as the other fireball used as the energy for the charged one

Burning contact
touching objects around him on or on his person he can set them on fire and even raise the temperature of the item it self. using this skill might take sometime due to the time it takes him to focus on the items to perform it. these moves can quickly wear out yoma if used too much or repeatedly. if the object is quite small like the size of his hand they can burn with in the same post. Items about his size take 3 to 4 posts to become ablaze. Items bigger then him can take up to 6 posts. Yoma is Unable to be hurt by fire and is able to touch it with out feeling anything. His whole body is protected from any fire damage but scars will still appear on his body from fire.

Explode
by coming in contact with something with any part of his body and heating it differently from normal where it can be remotely detonated by his will. this move is able to be used instantly as yoma can heat objects by just coming in contact with it but only 10 of these mine can be placed at any given time. these mines will burst into flames and can also be triggered by other's coming into contact with them. these mines can only on anything that isn't another person except yoma himself. These mines can be used on yoma's body but they act differently sending a sudden burst of fire out from where the mine is placed if it is activated only 2 can be placed on yoma's body.

• Release: shatter the chain of restraint and singe the path towards tomorrow shakunetsuno hana

• Shikai Description: (Your character or your sword's new appearance. The appearance is totally up to you.)

• Shikai Abilities: (What are the abilities your Shikai has? Do not overpower your shikai.)[/strike]

• Bankai Description: (You may fill out your Bankai Description, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)

• Bankai Abilities: (You may fill out your Bankai Powers, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)

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• PhatomTech: none
• Phantom Tech Abilities: none

• Phantom Tech Powers: none

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General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Beginner
  • Kidō: Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Beginner
  • Hakuda: Beginner


Personality 1
Will Skills
  • WillPower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus:Beginner


Personality 2
Will Skills
  • WillPower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus:Beginner

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• Roleplay Sample:
Yoma was covered in sweat and was completely worn out, his clothes were blacken and burnt. He could no longer maintain his sword in his hand and fell to the ground. yoma had been hard at work trying to reduce the time it took him to perform the heatwave strike but all he managed to do is wear himself out. the max distance the move would go is 4 and half feet and using the move took to long so that made it completely useless in a fight. Yoma throws himself on the floor letting all the sweat slowly roll down his face and placing one hand griping his forehead and hair, messing up his hair. " Why is training so hard i see no results from this no matter what i do. i must not be doing something correctly, maybe i should go back to the basics." Placing his hands beside him he pushes up on the ground to push himself to a sitting position but just doing this was difficult for him as his body ached in pain from being pushed and pushed in his training. yoma noticed his hands were trembling in weakness he told himself " i guess my body wont be able to take anymore today." he lets himself fall back down but this time his head meets the ground with a loud crash. Tried from his training yoma closes his eyes and begins to sleep.


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]    Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:56 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept (beginner when in "arrogant" personality)
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner (adept when in "arrogant" personality)
  • Focus: Beginner


Comments/Notes: There once was a man from Peru...everyone died, the end.
Tier: 4-5



Hokay now. Even though you won't be starting with it (so just strike it out using [strike ][ /strike]), I need a better description. How much does the temperature around him go up? About how long would it take to heat up an object (give me an approximation for how fast a person would heat up), and how long would this power have to last to set an object on fire?

Edit: Whoops, that wasn't your Shikai. Ignore the strike statement. Still fix it, but also remember that since it is a sealed ability AND he doesn't have Shikai, those powers can't be very powerful. So until he actually gains his Shikai, keep those powers nerfed (they should never reach the strength of his Shikai, obviously).


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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]    Wed Oct 10, 2012 9:27 pm

Well...as useless as some abilities are, and you have expressed that that was on purpose. Approved. See above
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]    Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:02 pm

Aivee says this be A-OK!

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]    Wed Feb 13, 2013 9:07 am

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]    Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:09 am

increased yoma's strength durability and first willsheet pain endurance along with tier increase to 3-2 due to this upgrade thread

http://www.platinumhearts.net/t9592-overheat-yoma-yazaki-s-upgrade#60041
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Yoma Yazaki [APPROVED 3-2]    Fri Oct 04, 2013 10:49 pm

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