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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Kakeru
Kakeru
Nise no Eiyū
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Joined : 2012-05-31
Posts : 1343
Age : 33
Location : Kagatsuchi

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Zaiko Tricaesarn Empty Re: Zaiko Tricaesarn

Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:58 pm
Okay... One he's not a Vizard no mixing Shunpo and Pesquisa. I don't think that would even fly for a Vizard even. Make it The Arrancar's Sonido, and maybe It'll fly, but I want post times for pretty much using this ability. Because this could be getting pretty damn cheap.

Okay what's with you and Forcing Damage Attacks? Honestly that's starting to get a bit annoying. Take it out I think I told you this with your application Syn was it? I swear, that is one thing you need to work on, Just make the distance a bit less extreme, you're trying too hard for over powerful skills.

Also Pick TWO Elements for that fist to be.. Not Seven for god's sake your character isn't an Elemetnalist type, he's Lightning and maybe dark. So keep to your power set please Otherwise I'm going to have to deny. You're trying to do too much at once. One step at a time okay?

Okay Resurrection

Where are you getting your flame element for your Extreme Lightning Fist Move. Explain how he got it.

Until Fixes for this I'm not reading your history because, well... I'll need more time for that.

Here's a suggestion.. Make the powers you want first, and then explain them out then, start reading through it, then make it all formal, Then have one of us pre-read it before you post it up so you don't have these issues... I'll get to your history fix this first...


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Sat Jan 26, 2013 8:37 am
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Moving this to Old Wip!
Feel free to ask staff to move it out if you're working on it!
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Tue Mar 19, 2013 2:04 pm
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