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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Lala Vega (2-2)   Tue Dec 11, 2012 9:07 pm





• Name: Lala Vega
• True Age: 700
• Appearance Age: 21
• Gender: Female
• Orientation: The Espada



• Appearance: In her human form she is always wearing this. (but the size is only as large as a gillian)

• Bone Appearance: She has two knobs from her old hollow mask. (as seen in her resurrection) Located on the forhead. In her human for they have the appearance of goggles. And are more pronounced on her resurrection as they are easilly half the size of a full grown person.

• Hollow Hole: In her waist covered up in her armor like clothing. The hole is located in the exact middle of her waist from east to west and just above the top of her uterus. Though unlike most hollows that grow in size hers doesn't when she activates her resurrection

• Reiatsu Color: Yellow



Personality: Normally she’s a little moody. She tends to not speak much especially in groups. She has a very short fuse and will even go as to fight allies if they make her mad. Though if you manage to say on her good side or give her a puppy she will be friends with you almost forever. She serves Ashlei fiercely.

When fighting, she is majority melee relying on her fists to do the work. she does fire ceros but more often than not they tend to be point blank. She has a berserker fighting style using her rage to win her fights. Though when she uses her resurrection, she tends to fight more thoughtfully. This is where her machine nature shows. Every attack every action planned.



• History: Lala's life wasn't a happy one. She remembers it well but has long forgotten her name. Her father was a drunk, and her mother was a spineless beaten wife. She never shielded Lala from her father which is why to this day she still hates her mother. Though the main source of her rage was her father, she had only tried to fight him as a kid once and was beaten for it. After that she would always sit in her room and stew. A grumpy face to her father but deep inside a severe anger that would reshape the world grew.

It was from this horrible raising that her temper came from. While she couldn't beat her father, she certainly could beat kids her own age. Any little insult any little excuse set her off. She can't remember a lot of those times she lost control. She only remembers going off and then standing over a bloody beaten body. Yet it felt good when she lost control. It felt so good she started welcoming every chance to lose her temper. While she never started fights, as this would get back to her father and get her hurt, she defiantly would finish them.

All the fighting had made her get expelled a lot. She had been through eleven schools before she was fifteen. As this time passed though the more she lost control the shorter the blackouts would be. Eventually it got to a point where she wouldn't black out she just loved releasing her temper, while she never showed it. She always had the look of a pissed off girl. There were rumors that her face muscles were so built they were stuck as a scowl. She spent most of her time out of school in gyms, martial art studios, anywhere she could strengthen herself or watch somebody fighting. Really it was any excuse to stay away from her father.

It was when she was 18 when she had gotten her favorite present. The only present her father could give her. It had been almost two decades since she fought him. That night he came home drunk again. Just as drunk as he was the first time. This rampage though was different. Lala arrived home to the usual sight of her mother beaten on the floor, though this time the floor was red around her head. Apparently she had fallen from one of the blows and hit her head on his broken whiskey bottle. Her father still really drunk turned wanting to know why she was always late. Lala immediately tried to head up to her room to avoid it, but her father wouldn't have that grabbing her arm painfully.

It was then she snapped. Without even thinking, her free hand swung around smashing into her father’s jaw as his had to hers and her mother’s so many times before. Thus it was on, he egged her on with every drunken slur, every insult another reason. When it was all over she had a few bruises but with all her rage released her father laid next to her mother, two bloody beaten corpses who deserved each other, one a coward, the other a monster.

Though the scene wasn't over, one of the neighbors and in her fear for Lala they called the cops. The cops arrived at the end of the bout Lala standing over her parents huffing her face twisted into a horrible look of rage. As she turned to look at the cops, a rookie, startled by the scene, let a bullet lose. The shot was off only grazing Lala's arm but it was enough. With a blast she was off again only this time to be met not by fists or flesh but by blazing hot lead. Each shot burned her as she pushed on only to fall at the cop’s feet.

Her life as a ghost was actually the longest time she’s been at peace, but it didn't last as her home was sold and bought. Her soul bound to the building she died at unable to leave its doors. The new buyers not knowing about the deaths would be haunted by her, waking up with bruises in their sleep. Though this wasn't a truly long period as her constant rage at the living, her mind always going nuts why was she the one to have to die. It was her father. She should be alive. The pain didn't even bother her with her consent rage. It was one night on another rant that she gave out her first hollow roar.
After she ranted she raised her head to scream in rage only to have a bestial roar come out followed by a gush of white.

Her mind shielded from her rage she finally had some true peace. No rage only hunger. She ran around eating human souls, though souls never satisfied her, until she turned to the hollow next to her. It was then she ate anything she could fit her hollow mouth on. All she did was consume until in one eating frenzy the hollows all around her were crushed into her fusing together into one menos grande. It was then she had a small rampage before going through her own garganta finding her way to the menos forest. Lala's hunger couldn't be contained though she was constantly devouring Menos, though all these menos didn't trigger the change in her menos form. It wasn't till Ashlei came down almost 500 years later that she would get that. Ashlei came down to find a good subject for her latest experiment.

Most Hollows ignored Ashlei until she came up to the Lala menos. Lala turned to her without thinking firing her cero at Ashlei. It then began to try to eat Ashlei till Ashlei used her power to make Lala stopped. She grew interested and took Lala back to her lab at Heceo Mundo. She started experimenting on her. Though something Ashlei didn't count on happened.

All that energy that was stored up in Lala mixed with the experiments caused her evolution. Lala's form didn't shrink but fused with the metal and machines creating a Meno grande sized Adjuches. Thus Lala Vega was born. She was now Ashlei's war machine. From then on she served Ashlei, until about 100 years ago when Lala approved Ashlei. Lala wanted to be more like Ashlei. Thus she granted her this and used her Reiatsu to remove Lala's mask.



• Sealed Zanpakutô: It is a Katana that is secured at her side. That katana itself is strange in design almost as if it was made by somebody out of pure rage. Its blade is waved in its with almost as if it was pounded on hastilly missing the anvil at times. With no hilt to be found the handle instead is made of ebony wrapped tightly leaving a diamond pattern caused by red leather. No sheath to be found as the swords design would not allow it to be drawn.

• Racial Abilities: She knows Cero, Garganta, and Sonida(only when sword is sealed)

• Unique Abilities: Cero Charge: Unlike most hollows/Arrancar who charge a cero and fire it instantly Lala can actually hold a Cero charge in each fist.
Improved Hierro: Her metal hands have a thicker hardened Hierro making it impervious to attacks that would normally cut her elsewhere.



• Resurrección Name: Arrebato

• Resurrección Release Phrase: Burn

• Release Actions: She pulls her sword from her waist. Though her large hands make it incapable of wielding, she ends up grasping it mostly on the blade. She holds it out infront of her and almost as if remembering all her anger and releasing it on her opponet she says "Burn Arrebato."

• Resurrección Appearance: Big Freaking O

• Resurrección Abilities: Crushing Reiatsu: A passive ability granted by her spiritual pressure and her massive size. It lowers all those affected, by her spiritual pressure, speed by one skill rank. (lowering their speed by one rank when affected by her spiritual pressure. This effects those that are her rank and lower. Of course the greater the distance in rank the more the effect with normal spiritual pressure.

Improved Hierro: The shields on her arms are made of a special hardened hierro made by Ashlei. It is hardened far beyond normal making blows that would normally damage or cut Lala's other parts not affect the shields.

Charged Cero: Lala's charge time becomes drastically reduced taking only a shove back of the hydraulic piston in each arm. (each one charges one cero for that hand). She can also push more power into them while fighting essentially charging more cero energy for a bigger blast. While most fire a standard Cero hers can be added together waiting for an opening. Cero strength = Post count of charging time X normal cero power. Though in either case it can only be fired from that hand that charged the energy.

Normal Cero: In addition to her charged cero she can fire her normal cero from her forehead between the two knobs on her forehead. While it has normal cero power it can be aimed in any angle that doesn't intersect with Lala's body and can even chase her target while being fired.

Cero Gatling: By opening up the armor on her arms she can reveal a 4 barreled Gatling gun in each arm. This arm fires high intensity spiritual energy round volleys. It fires about 20 shots rotating ever speeding up till it looks like just a circle of barrels at which point it fires off a ring of energy that explodes on impact.
While the amount of shots doesn't change letting to miss lead opponets its total power draws from the Cero Charge ability. One cero total damage if no charge.

Hollow missiles: Down the front of her waist (in the black panels below each silver trim) that can open up to show they are housing 4 rockets in each panel. Upon being launched the rockets fire off and split after a few short feet into 5 from each. Each of the 5 rockets is about the same as an Rpg round.

Hollow Bullets: the two chest panels on each side open up to reveal a pair of 6 barreled gatling guns. These two guns can rotate around in their sockets to target. The bullets are made of hierro allowing them stronger penetrating power and explode when the shell is breached. The effect is equivalent to an explosive shell that can blow apart weaker soul reapers Zanpakutō.

Hollow Hooks: The six spikes at her hips can be launched out like missiles. Being struck by them is virtually a death sentence, maybe not from the spike themselves but being connected to Lala by a retractable chain. Each chain can be fired individually as an attack or shot at the ground to anchor her to avoid knock back or blow back. (each spike is 60 degrees from another forming a 360 degree circle)

Hollow Cero cannon: Her ultimate weapon. First using her hooks to anchor her to the ground large cannon comes out of the center of her chest. This cannon fires a Cero that contains almost all of Lala's energy in a huge blast forward(equaling the size of a Meno's grande in diameter.)



General Skills

  • Durability: Advanced
  • General Speed: Adept-Advanced (approved by JJ)
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Racial Skills

  • Perquisa: Adept
  • Sonido: Adept
  • Cero/Bala: Advanced
  • Hierro: Advanced




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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Lala Vega (2-2)   Thu Dec 13, 2012 11:03 am


Heyo! Chaozi here to do some app checking for you! Take a look below and see what I think needs some more work!


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• Bone Appearance: She has two knobs from her old hollow mask. (as seen in her resurrection)

I think you should describe the knobs properly here. I can't tell where theya re on your body. Im guessing the head but, how big are they etc? More description please.

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• Hollow Hole: In her waist covered up in her armor like clothing.

Can you please explain exactly where? On the left hip? the right? Right through the middle?

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Personality: Normally she’s a little moody. She tends to not speak much especially in groups. She has a very short fuse and will even go as to fight allies if they make her mad. Though if you manage to say on her good side or give her a puppy she will be friends with you almost forever. She serves Ashlei fiercely.

When fighting, she is majority melee relying on her fists to do the work. she does fire ceros but more often than not they tend to be point blank. She has a berserker fighting style using her rage to win her fights.

Im sorry to say your personality is not long enough. Add at least 3 more lines please.

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Sealed Zanpakutô: It is a Katana that is secured at her side.

This could use some description. Katana's have colours, shapes etc. be imaginative.

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• Release Actions: She grips her whole sword in her hand.

And?.... go on.... what happens?

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Crushing Reiatsu: A passive ability granted by her spiritual pressure and her massive size. It lowers all those affected by her spiritual pressure speed by one skill rank.

I think it's the way you've written this but, I don't fully understand what this can do. Your speed lowers peoples skill rank by one?

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Cero Gatling: By opening up the armor on her arms she can reveal a 4 barreled Gatling gun in each arm. This arm fires high intensity spiritual energy round volleys. It fires about 20 shots rotating ever speeding up till it looks like just a circle of barrels at which point it fires off a ring of energy that explodes on impact.

Im going to have to say no to this ability. Cero is a very powerful explosive. You MAY be able to keep this ability if you lower the barrels to about 5-10 and state it deals reduced damage. Otherwise, your going to be eradicating settlements in no time and we're trying to cut down on that.

If you can go through and modify the application to what iv'e suggested, I can approve it
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Lala Vega (2-2)   Thu Dec 13, 2012 1:50 pm

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Lala Vega (2-2)   Thu Dec 13, 2012 2:25 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


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  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: Approved, nice work, You have my permission to use Ashlei in your history
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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Lala Vega (2-2)   Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:47 pm

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Lala Vega (2-2)   Fri Dec 13, 2013 10:22 pm

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