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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Aoi Zen'no Kenmeina Denko Ryushikei {WIP}   Fri Dec 21, 2012 5:02 pm

Name: First: Aoi Middle: Zen'no Kenmeina Denko Last: Ryushikei
Titles: Kami Nageki Yashi no Kuīn, or "Queen of the Divine Lamenting Palm"
Gender: Female
Appearance Age: 25
Age: 917
Affiliation/Rank: Affiliated with the Gotei 13

Appearance Description: To start, Aoi is five feet nine inches tall, weighing roughly 147 pounds. Most of this weight comes from trained muscle and just sheer height and could be described as "voluptuous" except more on the skinny side from head to toe. Her hair is jet black and comes down to the back of her knees, and her hair is also extremely straight and soft. Her skin is rather paled because she often doesn't enjoy the sun but her skin still seems to have natural beauty and depth. Her eyes are pure silver, aside from the pupils which are black and dilate small most of the time. Her lips are firm but soft and have a natural red color to them. Her teeth are perfectly straight and have never had a cavity, and her ears are smaller in comparison to the rest of her head and are rounded at the top but are usually hidden by her long hair.

Often, one will see Aoi wearing a simple shinigami gi that tailors specifically to her body structure, meaning that it conforms tightly to her body. Over the black gi, she wears a white cloak, which looks similar to a captains' cloak, loosely around her and doesn't usually use the sleeves. On her left hand, she wears a ring that was once a wedding ring when she was human and never takes it off and on her right hand, she wears a black glove that has no fingers and is made of a satin-type cloth. On her arms, she wears jet black sleeves, each arm having two sleeves that cover the two sections of her arms. On her feet, she usually either is barefooted or she wears simply-crafted, wooden geta; what she decides to "wear" depends on the circumstance. Her Zanpakutō is two blades, the first on her left hip, which is encased in a black, ornately designed sheath, and the second is always held in her left hand with its blade facing the ground and is covered completely in white bandages. She also has brands on both arms and both legs, the brands resembling twin dragons circling around the entirety of her arms and legs, the design looking similar to that of a constant loop of infinity signs.

Appearance Picture:


Personality: Aoi's personality can be compared with that of Jyuushiro Ukitake, though there are some outstanding differences. In this sense, she is very kind and well-mannered, she is extremely wise and is always willing to help those around her, and she greatly enjoys peace and quiet. Aoi is a very respectable and respectful woman, as she treats everyone in the way that she would want to be treated. She is loyal to the core of her being to the Soul Society, though there were times when she felt as though her beliefs or thoughts conflicted with those of the Soul Society as a whole. Her loyalty serves her home well and is always trustworthy. She never lies, no matter what the situation is. Even if a girl were to ask her how they looked, she wouldn't hold back as being honest and telling the truth are two of her greatest traits. Though she doesn't act like a show-off, she knows that she is an amazing fighter and, even though she doesn't ever act self-centered, she knows that she is an amazing woman, though sometimes it comes out every once in a while that can make people think that she is self-centered when she really isn't trying to be. Aoi always tends to have a very serious expression on her face when out in public and especially during the day. However, at night, her facial expression becomes one of sadness and pain. This is because of the way she died when she was human in the year 1520 in the fall season during a night of a full moon and how she left her loved ones, especially her husband who died with her on the same night. She wears her wedding ring in order to constantly reminder of that point in time.

Aoi is the type of person who would always protect her friends and family, and she always puts her own neck on the line to protect her home. When she had first come to the Soul Society, she was taken in by the shinigami of the Seireitei and was taken care of and taught the ways of the shinigami. Over a span of hundreds of years, Aoi had mustered a bond between her and the Soul Society and since then, she feels that protecting her home is more important than anything else in her life, hence why she has a very protective nature about her.

Likes: Aoi loves to teach others in the arts of battle and even loves to teach about respect and discipline, which is a strong effect of her personality. She also loves to train herself and spar with her fellow shinigami, for without strength, determination and discipline, she would not be able to protect her home. She loves eating too, but out of respect for herself and those around her, she eats very formally and always takes simple bites so that she doesn't eat like she hasn't eaten in 300 years. She often enjoys taking walks throughout the Seireitei to relieve herself of stress and tasks of the day once finished with such tasks, and she can often be found on top of one of the tallest buildings, looking up at the sky and looking over the Seireitei. Aoi also enjoys sometimes visiting the World of the Living from time to time to say hello to the many sanctioned cities around the world.

Dislikes: Aoi, over the years, has come across things that she doesn't particularly like. For one thing, she doesn't like slackers and often she gets them back in shape with some disciplinary action. She also doesn't take lightly to people who are disrespectful and not mannered because those kinds of actions by others conflict directly with her personality and personal beliefs. She also, most of the time anyway, dislikes alcohol because it changes her personality almost to the exact opposite of her normal self, and she also completely dislikes smoking, though she has nothing against those who do. Above all, she hates rule-breakers and people who commit crimes against the Soul Society, The Human world, and the Iramasha group because they are not only allies of each other but some members of said groups are also close friends of hers.

History: (You will write about their life on earth, then their history as a shinigami here. 3-4 paragraph's)


Reiatsu Color: Jet black with a slight touch of crimson red throughout it.

Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Mugen Yashi

Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Mugen is six feet seven inches tall, weighing about 198 pounds which more than three quarters of that weight is muscle. His body is wrapped completely in bandages except for his right arm and head/face/hair. His hair, which is pure white, reaches to the ground and is as straight and soft as Aoi's hair. His skin is just as pale as Aoi's, though his skin is more coarse to the touch than hers. His eyes are ocean blue and he often wears a kind and happy expression on his face, except when he's serious which becomes similar to Aoi's serious expression. He, unlike Aoi, is always barefoot since he already has bandages encompassing his feet as well. He wears Aoi's and his own blade-form zanpakutô in the same way that she does, with Anshin on the left side of his hip and Taisen held in his left hand with the blade facing the ground.

Inner World: Here is an image of my zanpakutô Inner World:

Sealed Zanpakutô Appearance : The first zanpakutô, known as Anshin (which is a katana; the blade is 30 inches length and the handle is 8 inches in length), is kept in a black sheath designed by hand and on the sheath is an infinity sign carved in a constant loop around its surface and the blade itself has the same design in the direct center of the blade on both sides (carved vertically). It is always kept tightly laced onto Aoi's left hip.

The second zanpakutô, known as Taisen (which looks exactly like the Sword of Perseus from "Clash of the Titans," the blade itself being 34 inches in length and the handle 12 inches in length), is wrapped in pure white bandages, covering the entire blade and handle. The bandages are part of Taisen and have the same outer designs as Anshin's sheath. The design on the blade itself is Japanese calligraphy, the writing being in the direct center of the blade on both sides (written vertically) and says, "He or She who wield me Shall understand the Meaning of the Pain of War" (Or in calligraphy: "彼または彼女は私には戦争の痛みの意味を理解しましょう誰振るう"). Taisen is always held in Aoi's left hand with the blade faced downward toward the ground.

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:
Regarding Anshin:
Crescent Slash: While Anshin is drawn from its sheath, Aoi can slash in any position sending forth a jet black-colored, crescent-shaped blast in the direction it is shot toward in order to be able to attack from a distance.
Reiatsu Cutting Power: While drawn from its sheath, Anshin can cut through, or deflect (deflects by hitting such reiatsu projectiles with the sides of its blade), projectile reiatsu when Aoi slashes at such reiatsu.
Defensive Prowess: Anshin being the blade of peace, it is naturally able to defend against an opponent's attacks more easily than its counterpart Taisen, but is normal in offensive prowess due to its protective and peaceful nature.

Regarding Taisen:
Crescent Slash: While Taisen is released from its bandages, Aoi can slash in any position sending forth a pure-white-colored, crescent-shaped blast in the direction it is shot toward in order to be able to attack from a distance.
Slashing Power: Taisen, because it is the blade of War, strikes stronger than its counterpart Anshin and thus is more difficult to thwart its strikes, and this is usable even when covered in its bandages, though the strikes won't be fatal in such a case.
Offensive Prowess: Taisen being the blade of War, it is naturally more able in terms of actually striking an opponent, making the force of each of its strikes stronger than that of its counterpart Anshin, but it is normal in terms of defensive prowess due to it's fierce and war-like nature.

Regarding Both Blades:
Dual-Crescent Slashes: While Anshin is unsheathed and while Taisen is released from its bandages, Aoi is able to send crescent-shaped blasts from both blades in the same manner as when used separately.
Pure-Opposites Attraction Combo: While both blades are uncovered, the special abilities of each blade are activated in sync, allowing Aoi to cut through reiatsu with Anshin and then in succession strike with Taisen's added force, allowing for a combo effect on her opponent(s).

Release: Shikai: "Anshin and Taisen, strike strong and true!"
Bankai: "Anshin! Taisen! Strike fiercely, for we are the Palms of the Divine!"

Shikai Description: In shikai form, Anshin becomes one with Aoi's right arm, increasing the speed, accuracy, and power of the right arm's strikes and the right arm becomes clothed in a long, black glove that has hundreds of tiny blades all along the glove's surface. Taisen, when released into its shikai state, does the same as Anshin and becomes one with Aoi's left arm, increasing the speed, accuracy, and power of the left arm's strikes and the right arm becomes encased completely in Taisen's bandages which also has hundreds of tiny blades all along the surface of the bandages. Nothing else about Aoi's appearance changes in the shikai state.

Shikai Abilities:
Regarding the Anshin Arm:
Yasashī Yashi (Gentle Palm): Aoi's right arm, which is now Anshin, has now become encased in a black glove which has hundreds of tiny blades protruding from all over the glove's surface. This arm utilizes skills with the palm as protection for Aoi (deflection) and may redirect reiatsu back toward an opponent (reflection) if timed correctly.
Ha Ga Tsui Yashi (Bladed Palm): When Aoi strikes an opponent with Anshin, the blades that protrude from her right palm puncture the skin, which may slightly cause discomfort and minor bleeding to wherever the strike hits.
Mikadzuki Yashi (Crescent Palm): Just as its used in its bladed form, Aoi is able to send these crescent-shaped blasts from her palms and the blasts are usable in the same manner as stated in its bladed state.
Kōken'nin Yashi (Guardian Palm): With the palm of her right hand, Aoi is able to focus dozens of small blades to come together and fortify the palm's defensive nature allowing her to protect herself while still being able to move freely without weighing herself down with a full shield. This ability may also extend to the rest of her body (or can be placed in effect in certain parts of the body).

Regarding Taisen:
Mōretsuna Yashi (Furious Palm): Aoi's left arm, which is now Taisen, has now become encased in white bandages which has hundreds of tiny blades protruding from all over the glove's surface. This arm utilizes skills with the palm as the main offense of the two (Offensive prowess and Slashing Power). Taisen also achieves a new active ability in shikai which allows the use of Anshi's defensive prowess to boost its overall striking power/accuracy/speed.
Enkaku Yashi Taisen's raw striking power allows him to push the air toward a target or targets, which lets Aoi attack from a distance. This ability also extends to the rest of Aoi's "attack" limbs (i.e. the legs, feet, and hair).

Bankai Description: (You may fill out your Bankai Description, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)

Bankai Abilities: (You may fill out your Bankai Powers, but unless you get staff permission, you may not use your Bankai right off the bat. There are expectations, however.)


PhatomTech: (Does your character have a PhatomTech brain installed? If so, you'll be able to qualify for upgrade at the Cybermind or add other Cybernetic parts to your character to make them stronger. Click here for more information about Phantom Tech)

Phantom Tech Abilities: (What can your character do with his or her's add-ons? This applies to any upgrades your character has gotten from places like The Cybermind as well.)

Phantom Tech Powers: (This refers to things outside of Add-ons unlike Abilities. What Phantom Tech Powers are, in a sense, is basically what kind of power did your character gain from having a Cyberbrain? For example, Shadin Yuudeshi gained Imaginary Computation with his Cybernetic upgrades and has the ability to bring tangible things into existence with his computers Quantum Calculations.)


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Roleplay Sample: She watched as Tsundorakage made a combination of difficult hand-signs and as she finished them, multiple spikes grew from her back and also grew a tail. These looked to be made of solid ice, which made the Tsurikage rather excited. This will be a great warm-up, I think. The Tsundorakage then spoke finally. "From here on we are not friends, we are enemies. I cannot engage in friendly conversation during battle. I have no choice but to kill you." The Tsurikage couldn't help but chuckle once and reply one last time before she charged at the Tsundorakage with the full extent of her abilities. "Miss Tsundorakage, if you really meant that, you wouldn't have said anything at all. However, I do have to agree with you. This is a time for battle and not for speech. I have spoken my truth and that's enough." The Tsurikage's facial expression turned from a playful grin to a very serious and Kage-like expression. As she spoke to the Tsundorakage, she ran an immense amount of raiton chakra throughout her body, visibly covering her body with raiton chakra and then after doing this, she ran more raiton chakra through her arms and legs -this being her signature jutsu- than the rest of her body, making her hits ever more difficult to dodge; then she activated a second portion of her signature jutsu which required fuuton chakra and allowed her to hit an extra ten inches out from her punches and kicks. Using the momentum from charging chakra into her feet earlier in her and the Tsundorakage's little talk before the beginning of the actual fight, she would dash toward the Tsundorakage with her vastly increased speed and aim a punch at her stomach, while adding a kick with her right foot to the Tsundorakage's left leg in swift succession, which would fracture a bone, if not completely break it. As this all would happen, the Tsurikage would continue to keep her eyes locked on to the Tsundorakage, watching every movement she makes and making adjustments to plans of action as they happened.

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Aoi Zen'no Kenmeina Denko Ryushikei {WIP}   Sun Dec 23, 2012 10:16 pm

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Aoi Zen'no Kenmeina Denko Ryushikei {WIP}   Sat Jan 12, 2013 12:48 pm

Moved to OLD WIP due to the expiration of the two week period!
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