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Braxia
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Roran Yakimura[Approved Human, 4-2+ Empty Roran Yakimura[Approved Human, 4-2+

Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:46 am
teir: 1-3
(Spiritual human template)
• Name: Roran Yakimura (true last name is Osvaldus)
• Titles: none
• Age:21
• Gender: male
• Affiliation/Rank: none

• Appearance Description:
Height/Weight: 180lbs
Hair/Eye Color: White/left blue right red
Noticable Difference: Roran has a toned build often sporting a high collared shirt and relaxed fit jeans. His white spiked hair is long enough to cover his right eye. leaving his left eye, and the vertical slash scar over it visible. If he were to remove his shirt, one would see a body covered in scars, its not the most sightly view. he carries his weapon clipped to the right, back side of his jeans at belt level for quick withdrawal. It is not visible to anyone but him while stowed.

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Personality

• Personality:
Levelheaded: It takes more than a petty insult to rustle his jimmies. Roran can easily keep a calm mind in most situations.
Analytic: Roran can take simple details, to come to a complex conclusion. In other words, he can find the weakness in almost any opposition.
Quick to act: When the time comes that He needs to act, or take an opening, he can take it without skipping a beat.
Guardian: Roran always puts others before himself, protecting those whom have not done wrong in his eyes from those who have.
Fit: Roran has the build of what Many girls would find attractive. however he doesn't concern himself with that sort of thing, trying to keep away from situations that it could cause.

Antisocial: Due to his ties, often keeps away from others, worried his past might suck them in to something they don't need to be involved in.
A bit smug at times: often gets this way around opponents who have lost his respect, or friendly banter with a friend.
Shy when it come to anything that could be considered romance. Often avoiding girls that approach him, this ties in with his Antisocial personality.
Mysterious: Often this makes people a bit afraid of him, as he doesn't speak of his life, leaving a lot to speculation, like how he received his scars, and where he even came from.
Stubborn: When it comes to what he feels is right, Roran has a tendency to not let things go, not until he feels his job is done.

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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Powers:
Existance is how he describes it. His weapon an embodiment of this power, a katana hilt with no blade. But not everything is as it seems.
The bladeless sword activates upon him drawing it and willing it to do so. Upon activation a katana blade roughly 7ft long made of pure blue energy erupts from the hilt guard, forming a functional sword. the blade of this sword can be weakened to allow objects to pass through it, or hardened to block as if it were a normal blade. this change can be localized to various segments of the blade, allowing him to slice harmlessly through, say a hostage, and cut the target behind them. Roran also can create large portals (non combat) to travel to various locations, in other worlds as well. they are not functional for combat, as they require a bit more time to manifest. He is limited to places he has been, or knows how to travel to.

Ambulans Mittebant: A basic ability learned early on in life by all Members of In Deos Homo, in which the user subconciously removes part of their soul, and embeds it into their own body when a hollow knocks them out of their body. this protects the spirit chain, and prevents it from inhibiting motion of the user's spiritual body. this also enables the user to re-enter their body at any time as long as their body continues to live.

Releases:

Dance Through Existance, Evanidus Spyridos!

Lacerendam (Tear):
Name: Evanidus Spyridos (Fading Spirit)
The Katana blade splits, forming two halves of a Buster sword, this sword is larger, at about 12 ft in length. the hilt a large red gemstone.
In this form, The sword retains the basic ability of the first, and Roran can cause segments to fade at will. however, in this release state, those segments can manifest themselves elsewhere. enabling him to swing his sword, and a vanished segment of it swing at an opponent from long range, this can be done with multiple segments at once, allowing for a barrage of sword strikes without a gap having to be closed.

Alligaveritis (Bind):
Name: Victum Inritus Evanidus Spyridos (Trancending Void Fading Spirit)
The sword vanishes, replaced by a white and gold armor over Roran's right arm, and a matching gauntlet on his left. Also added are a few armor accents on the rest of his body. In this form, Roran can manifest blades of energy similar to the unreleased Katana. these blades can be controlled with his mind, but can move faster when guided by his hands. As with previous stages, these blades can be made to fade to avoid hitting things Roran does not desire. While the Right Arm armor is for the blades, the left arm gauntlet is for using these blades as projectiles, firing them off from an orifice on the back of the hand.

The central power of this stage however. lies in the ability from the previous stage to allow segments of blade to be manifested far from the user. in this stage, Roran can create Invisible rifts that allow him to perform the previous stage's actions, but not only with the blades, but with anything else as well. including himself and his opponent (note he does not control the opponents movement, but by placeing a portal before them, he can disorient them as they suddenly are traveling elsewhere) These versions of portals do have a limited range, and cant be used to travel through worlds like the ones previously mentioned.

(Note: currently can maintain 3 portal pairs with ease. more requires increasing effort for increased portal count.

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History

Roran does not talk about where he came from, only that he had to leave, in order to gain the strength to right what is wrong in that place. He ran from a Society that had become corrupted, and no longer followed the true beliefs under which they were founded. At this time, he was a mere 12 years old.

Roran was considered a prodigy by his people, on his 10th birthday he had already achieved what was believed as the mark of manhood. 6 years before most had achieved it before. What someone like him could do for them, they were not willing to let him see the world like was normal, and kept him sheltered, putting him through additional studies and training. Not only was this stressful on the young Roran, but it exposed him to more of his people than they would have liked. It was with this knowledge that Roran ran. escaping at his first chance into the world. hiding his spiritual pressure, so he could not be followed.

For 9 years now Roran had been traveling, changing himself to fit his needs as he grew older, making his living through odd jobs and the like, all the while training himself, moving far beyond what he could have been trained by his people. Not only was he helping people through work, he continued to follow the beliefs that he was working to restore in his people, and protect those who needed it, even if they didn't know it was happening. He took it on himself to act as a hero, and save people as well, most often not even letting them know who it was that had done so.

Still to this day Roran continues his travels. Knowing that his time to return and set things right is coming, or perhaps what he had left, is now finally coming for him.

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Roleplay Sample

Roran stepped from the gate into the town, his sneakers crunching against the sand beneath them. "so this is the afterlife?" he asked himself as he scanned his surroundings. Old style oriental homes, a blue sunny sky, people with rags for clothes. Occasionally were any of them sporting shoes. "Not much of a Nice place if you ask me" he mused to himself, walking forward, intending to explore this place a little more, see what it had to offer.

"We have an illegal entry into Rukongai in the eastern sector" the shinigami dispatch reported "Anyone near the area please advise, the target has masked its reiatsu and must be marked as dangerous." This report was followed with swift response, as two Soul Reapers converged on Roran's location. they not being very skilled, their reiatsu remained uncovered to him, so it wasn't hard to determine when they made their approach. "Welcoming committee?" he asked himself as both rounded the corner at the end of the block. The novice Death-gods drawing their swords without even thinking. "Surrender and come peacefully!" the left one orders, his oily black hair sticking to his face awkwardly as he shouted. immediately all bystanders ducking into their homes, something that does not go unnoticed by Roran. (there could be trouble) he concludes, despite not wishing to fight, nor go peacefully with these odd individuals. "And what if I respectfully decline?" he asks calmly, crossing his arms, and waiting for their reply.

"Then we will have to force you to come with us!, or kill you, your choice!" the second, shorter one remarked, sneering. clearly he had a bit of a napoleon complex to deal with. "I'll have to pass on both those offers" Roran replies, his hand slipping between buttons on his shirt. knowing they would charge any moment. the only thing missing from this scene was the tumble weed, whistle and harmonica.


Last edited by Braxia on Tue Feb 26, 2013 6:42 pm; edited 10 times in total
Raiki
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Wed Feb 20, 2013 6:06 pm
Hold it!, please follow are template which are here

https://www.platinumhearts.net/f259-character-templates


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Braxia
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Wed Feb 20, 2013 7:55 pm
OK did the unneccecary work profile is the template now, but still exactly the same
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Wed Feb 20, 2013 8:25 pm
Roran also can create large portals (non combat) to travel to various locations, in other worlds as well.

Alright, going to help you get used to our system. First, things like that need way more description, at the very least:

What do the portals look like?
What can pass through them?
How often can he make them?
What can't they lead him to?
Where CAN they lead him to?
What if someone he doesn't want passing through them goes through them?

Those are the LEAST things that I need answered.

The ability to move through things is fine as you properly explained it, however everything below (Tear and Bind) I'm just going to have to say are release form related powers as that is way too much stuff for a sealed state of this level. When you unlock your release state you may have them rechecked; as they will need to be explained better at that point as well. For now, just put a strike through them and put them under Release State.

Tier Upon Completion: 4-2+




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Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:25 pm
Giving checking rights to Raiki now.




Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
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Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:32 pm
Well as Jj pointed out.

Shinigami have The Senkaimon (穿界門, World Penetration Gate) is the dimensional gateway which Shinigami use to enter and leave Soul Society. Soul Society and the World of the Living are parallel worlds. The Senkaimon is the gate used to travel between the two worlds. The Senkaimon is the only official and safe way to enter and leave Soul Society. The Soul Society has only one permanent Senkaimon, which takes the form of a giant gate situated within a large courtyard atop a large tower. Travel through the Senkaimon is heavily regulated, and can only officially be opened by the members of the Kidō Corps. Upon opening the gate doors, white light, extending upward into the sky of Soul society, emanates from the door.

Upon arriving and leaving from the Human World the Senkaimon can appear almost anywhere. When it appears in this fashion, the Senkaimon takes the form of a traditional Japanese waiting room entered through a Shōji. It can be opened by using a Zanpakutō as a key. The method requires simply placing the Zanpakutō in front of the user and, inserting it into the spacial area one wants the Senkaimon to appear, turning the sword like a key. As the crease of the door appears and fully opens, another door beyond it opens, releasing the Jigokuchō. Intruders can pass through the Senkaimon in the same manner. While this method uses the same gate, the lack of a Jigokuchō forces intruders to pass through the Dangai (断界, Parsing World), a bordering dimension between the Human World and Soul Society (not to be confused with Hueco Mundo). This is much more dangerous to do, as souls who cannot pass through before the gate to Soul Society closes are trapped there forever. It is possible for Seireitei to deactivate these mechanisms, allowing Shinigami or Humans to traverse the Dangai safely.

Roran Yakimura[Approved Human, 4-2+ Senkaimon

Thus how does your char can use something so easily? How does it work, what is its limits.


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Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:45 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes:
Tier: 4-2+


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Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:04 pm
Braxxi child, you have to learn this the hard way, BSing your tier becuse of placing it inside your app, IS NOT the way are system works. How you see your tier? And what your Tier really is. Beucse of your actions done here https://www.platinumhearts.net/t9092p10-lost-little-mask-girl-open-no-tora-or-stefan

Your char is moved to pending. Till the following things are REMOVEd and learned

Your tier is what I GAVE YOU
not how you see it

So remove it now.

Any threads you existed in, your actions are now voided till you LEARN


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