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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Fri Feb 22, 2013 8:30 am





THE CERO EXPERT






• Name: Mikan Mischevang/Miki Mischevang
• True Age: 415
• Appearance Age: 18 - 20 [Age of a highschool student]
• Gender: Female
• Orientation: She serves for Ashlei Clixx.



• Appearance:
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Mikan Mischevang takes an appearance of a young highschool lady. Her long, silky black hair reaches out to her waist. Her beautiful figure would definitely make most men drool, which she despise. There is nothing to deny that she has a figure of a perfect woman which most men would want, but she doesn't like the body she has. Despite 2 years of her sudden dissapearance, her appearance entirely changes to a whole new other level. Her hair that becomes from short to long, and blonde to black. Her entire figure changed as well, as well as her bust sizes. Her breasts, grows somehow much faster and bigger than most of her Mischevang sisters. As for her clothes, she mostly wears a normal highschool uniform. Oddly, she doesn't wear bras and panties, as they refer them to be "very annoying" or "in the way" when she fights, runs or walks. Although she wears in very rare occassions. The color of her eyes are seemingly dark purple or mistakenly to be brown. Her eyes usually confuses others somehow, because of her constantly changing eye color.

• Bone Appearance: Her bone remainings can be found under her long sleeves of her shirt, having two ordinary skull pieces on both of her elbows. These hollow piece, is not only the remainings of her hollow part, as it was a seal to lock off most part of her spiritual power. Everyone in the Mischevang Family, does not exactly know about the seal of her hollow piece.

• Hollow Hole: Mikan's hollow hole is quite hard to notice, considering that she wears clothes all the time that covered off her hole. It is located directly on her stomach, and on her belly. How her hollow hole was formed on her belly might be the cause of her hunger for more power and the amount of human souls that she had eaten.

• Reiatsu Colour: Her reiatsu consists of yellow color during in her sealed form, and bloody red with a black outline that covers it when she is in her resureccion. Mikan's reiatsu was formerly red-colored in her sealed form, which had changed to yellow for no valid reason. Her changes might because of her dissapearance two years ago.



Personality:

= Opposite Sex = :
As it means by her reaction and personality towards the opposite sex of her, Male. She holds no interests, lusts or special feelings towards any male gender, even if she has, its not her true feelings. She would just use them as her experiments to be doing on and being researched upon. If she holds special feelings, which is her true feelings, that would be very rare since she holds no trusts on any males at all, and it would be very hard to actually catch her heart. Trying to woo her would be nearly impossible, and having her to actually hold feelings for a male would be a dream for them. It is possible to get her, but it will take almost forever just to get her to hug you. Hugs are for her sisters only, not for strangers.

= Mad Scientist = :
Mikan loves to bring living humans and souls as her experiment to examine their reishi and the use of their powers. Her subjects are mostly male, due to how she brings them into her trap with her figure and strap them up in the end. She is one of the most craziest sisters to be having most fun on experimenting humans, Arrancar, demons and many more. The reason why she got addicted to experimenting is because she learns many things from their body. How their powers are generated, collided, used and many kinds of different things. She could see things that hardly anyone could see before, and do the things nobody dared to do before. If anyone tries to get near her, they would be the next victims of her experiments. Although she is a mad scientist, she will never use her sisters as her test subjects, as they are very important to her and they are the only relatives she has in her life.

= Emotions = :
Although she is an arrancar, she still provides basic emotions as well as response like any other normal beings does. Basic emotions like Fear, Anger, Love, and any other basic emotions, but oddly, it does not provides her the feeling of lust, which makes her emotions of love pointless as she does not have the feeling of lusts, although she does hold some certain amount of it, in a special way. As for anyone who does not know her, she is described as an "emotionless" female, but most of her emotions are shared and seen by her sisters only. Sadistic smile is the most basic emotion she has with her, and a normal smile would be nearly impossible, and very rare to be seen.

= Ruthless = :
She is known to be ruthless to anyone, exception to her sisters including ashlei. She does not care either it is a kid, a baby or an adult, and she would just slaughter them and rip out their guts like she does not even care at all. Because of her ruthless personality, she shows no sympathy towards any gender, age or races at all, and that why she was typically known for her ruthless personality of hers that could scare the guts out of every hollows or even weak Arrancar that encounters her. Her ruthless personality developed when the first time she got addicted to experimenting. She may be ruthless and shows no sympathy neither to anyone, but the only person she actually shown sympathy and mercy on was her sisters, and ashlei. This only happens to her loved ones, no one else.

= Protective = :
Mikan is extremely protective of her sisters, making her very strict around with her younger sisters instead of the older ones, since she does not dare to nag at her seniors, instead, she nags at the younger ones instead. Her protective nature can often make her very dangerous, as anyone hurts her sisters, even a single scratch, and she will make them suffer and she WILL definitely torment them until they beg for their lives and apologize to them. So, touching or even hurting her sisters even a little bit will have to pay for their lives. Not only that, opposing against her sisters will have to pay double for their lives, by tormenting them, experimenting on them and play around with their bodies until they turn insane, then she will only slaughter and dispose of their body. Her protective nature towards her sisters are also about men, as she shows no interests on them, she always tells the younger ones to be careful of choosing or going out with any males, especially their enemies. Going out with shinigamis would be a grave mistake, as she would definitely kill the male her younger sisters goes out with, which makes her protective nature much more dangerous as anyone can ever thought about it. Even if she is protective, she does not dare to nag and order around her older sisters, which are seniors.

= Just One = :
Mikan is just that kind of a woman who chooses over one man than hundreds. Though this 'special' occurance will hardly even happen for her, since having relationships other than her own kind would be a very tough journey for her. Her feelings can be a real truth to a male when she chooses one, and she will never switch to another male. By meaning, she only chooses one mate, and just one only. Although getting Mikan's heart would be very challenging, but its worth trying as it might work as well. Its not easy getting her, as she will set up a complete, risky challenge for you to take before you can actually start chasing after her, even if it requires a lot of time to be doing that. This could also actually make her a real choosy woman on males, since she only loves one, and one only.

= Experimenting = :
This became one of her habits, and her most favourite hobbies of them all, Experimenting. Her habit of experiment was developed when she killed her first 'living victim' for the first time, and she couldn't see enough blood to be splattered all over her face and her body. Not only because of that, she could also learn many things from the living body, and analyze their DNA, blood and others to gain data and actually learn them. Because of her serious habit over experiments, she joined the Ninth Circle of the Shadow Fall to further up her experiments, and her experiences.



• History: (Life, death, and and progression to the Arrancar state .)
Check the next post.



• Sealed Zanpakutô:
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Mikan's Zanpakutō is an ordinary wakizashi that lengths as about 12 inches. She commonly uses her Zanpakutō to assist her during her experiments, but it is used during combat as well, except that she hardly uses her Zanpakutō during combat and depends more onto ceros more during any combats.

• Racial Abilities:

= = Cero = = : Mikan's vast knowledgement with Ceros had increased her capability of using ceros. Although she could use a normal cero like any normal hollow and Arrancar could, her knowledgement with ceros could increase her normal cero's damage by 1.2 times more. Which means her cero is a bit more powerful although it is the same as any ordinary hollows and Arrancar would use, but her cero's damage is enhanced to a higher level, because she could concentrate her cero more properly and made it much stable. Though the speed of the cero is still the same. It allows her to fire her own cero from any part of her body, whether to be her finger, her chest or her legs, even her back, she could fire to any direction she wants, allowing her to take an advantage against her enemies. Her cero charging speed can charge instantly, takes almost a second just to finish up the charging and fire. Her vast knowledgement with ceros could make her dangerous when using ceros, since she can manipulate the particles of the cero that she uses. Her cero's color is the same as most hollows and Arrancar do, that is crimson red-colored.

= = Gran Rey Cero = = : A Cero which only Espada can use. It is performed by mixing an Espada's own blood with the Cero. The result is a Cero with much greater attack power and speed and a change of color unique to the Espada. It is many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space. upon release, it seems to spin like a razor as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. Ulquiorra Cifer states using a Gran Rey Cero is one of two things forbidden while inside Las Noches, as it is so overwhelming it could destroy the fortress. However, Mikan was unable to use it although she knew how to use it, because it is specifically used by Espadas and she isn't an espada. So, she is forbidden/unable to use Gran Rey Cero, no matter how much she knows about it unless she is an Espada.

= = Cero Oscuras = = : A black Cero used by Ulquiorra Cifer in his Resurrección form. He compares it to Ichigo's black Getsuga Tenshō. It covers any exposed light in pitch darkness. Though the only Espada shown to utilize this technique so far, Ulquiorra told Ichigo "This is an Espada's fully powered Black Cero." Ulquiorra referred to it as "our Cero." The Cero Oscuras' range is vast and its attack power is massive. It shattered Ichigo Kurosaki's entire Hollow mask, critically injuring him in the process. It destroyed half of the dome over Las Noches. The Cero Oscuras is far more powerful than an average Cero. As Cero Oscuras is used by higher ranks of the Espadas, Mikan is unable to use it, even if she has vast knowledge of it and knows about it, unless she is part of the espada as well.

= = Bala = = : Her overly obsession with cero made her less knowledgeable about balas, making her bala speed to be 1/2 weaker than the ordinary bala's damage, and 10 times fold speed only when she shoots them off from her speed. She tends to prefer to mix bala and cero together to form a much more effective bala than the ordinary one, which will make her normal bala much more weaker than any Arrancar. Or maybe the weakest bala to be known used by any Arrancar. She tends to miss her shots at her enemies when she uses bala, is because she could not able to handle the bala well enough as she hardly use them in many situations.

= = Sonido = = : More of a 'silenced sonido' than 'Just a sonido' and resembles to more of shunpo. Instead of making a "booming" or a static sound during the use of sonido, Mikan's sonido is completely silent, and that is why it resembles to shunpo more than sonido. Despite her rare use of sonido and prefers running more than using her sonido, it is known that her sonido is faster than an average sonido. When used, it makes a complete silent sound that almost the same as shunpo. Although her sonido is faster than an ordinary sonido's speed, she do not have the ability to create afterimages, because she has certainly no knowledge of it. Which means that no matter how much speed she possess, she cannot create afterimages herself, which the problem and the cause is unidentified.

= = Pesquisa = = : Mikan's Pesquisa is slightly different than Ulquiorra's pesquisa. Instead of knowing the person's reiatsu level by taking a single glance, mikan must actually 'touch' the person to precisely know the amount of reiatsu he/she has inside him/her. By means, she is required to have a direct contact from her hands onto his/her body, any part of it. Once she has touched them, she will be able to accurately gauge the amount of reiatsu that he/she possesses inside them, although it will be not an easy job for her to do.

= = Garganta = = : She is able to use garganta like any Arrancar do except it has some little speciality. Garganta is a spiritual pathway connecting the Arrancar's world Hueco Mundo to other worlds. Besides the World of the Living and Soul Society, it can open the gates of the Dangai. A turbulence of reishi blows within Garganta. To move through it, travelers must create footholds using the reishi. Her way to open a gargants is to snap her thumb and middle finger together, and a garganta will open directly in front of her. Sadly, her garganta can only fit one person inside, as the garganta she creates is small and limited for 1 people to enter inside, which makes it personally for her only. The speciality for her to use this garganta is that she could transport anyone, no matter who is it, to any designated location that she desires to. It means, instead of transporting and move herself between The Living World and Hueco Mundo, she could move others to another location that she wants. As an example, if someone steps into her garganta, she snaps her fingers again and closes the garganta, then she thinks of a place where she knows, and moves her garganta to the designated location that she thinks of. Then the garganta will open by itself once reaching its own designated location, and it will close itself back after 5 seconds. This is why it makes her garganta a little bit special for her to use.

= = Hierro = = : Mikan's Hierro is entirely different than the normal hierro. A normal hierro is defensive Arrancar technique in which the user's reiryoku condenses, creating a steel-hard skin strong enough to block a Zanpakutō. This allows users to confront some of the sword-wielding Shinigami barehanded. While Mikan's different, instead of able to harden her own skin and protects herself from most physical attacks, she could condense her reiatsu and hardens her own skin, and protects her from energy-based attacks. Which means a normal hierro protects him/her from physical attacks, while Mikan's hierro protects her from energy-based attacks. For an example, if a person swings his/her sword towards mikan, it will be done to the sword's fullest effect, which it will injure her. But if a shinigami uses Hadō #63 on her, its damage will be halved because her hierro protects her from energy-based, not physical-based attacks. Any Hadō up to #45 will entirely have no effect against her, while any Hadō from #46 to Hadō #70's damage will be halved. And above Hadō #70 will have a full effect against her. It does not matter what tier she is in, as the positions and effects of her hierro will be the same. Its protection will be the same as well. In the other note, because she knows a lot about ceros, which gave her a natural resistance against ceros. That means there is no regular ceros that will work against her hierro, no matter how many times they've shot at her, due to the natural resistance that she had developed against regular ceros.

= = Caja Negacion = = : A small cube item that was used by Espadas. Caja Negación is a special cube-shaped device held by Espada meant to simulate Negación fields, which are used to punish their Fracción, if necessary. The cube, when used on a subject, traps them in an alternate dimension from which there is no escape; however, this assumes it's being used as intended. More powerful Arrancar, namely the Espada themselves, can escape, given enough time. The only occurrence of this Negación field being used was when Grimmjow Jaegerjaquez trapped Ulquiorra Cifer with it. Apparently, the small cube device must be placed in the Arrancar's Hollow hole. However, Mikan was able to access to the item for some reasons.

= = Negacion = = : Unlike Caja Negacion, she is also able to 'shoot' her own Negacion from her finger, although it is a very rare occurance for an arrancar to be able to directly use a Negacion wihout using the Caja Negacion box. It took her a very long time and observation for her to actually alter her spiritual energy many times to actually let her use her own Negacion. But, because the Negacion's energy is too strong for her, it is actually unstable and uncontrollable for her to use it, which means she can only 'shoot' one, but she does not have toe ability to stabilize and control the negacion itself. She could fire a large beam of light from her index finger, and trap her allies inside an impenetrable box. As on the other note, it can be used on other races other than Arrancar, on another consequences. Anyone or anything that is trapped within the box shot from Mikan, will be immediately and instantly being sent into Hueco Mundo, which its primarily used to save her fellow allies and friends, which includes her sisters. It is known that Negacion is only used by Gillian-class Menos only. The fact that Mikan can actually use Negacion itself by altering her spiritual energy, nobody really knows, even Ashlei herself does not know Mikan can actually use the Negacion itself instead of using Caja Negacion. Mikan is also known to be either the first or the second arrancar to be actually able to use Negacion itself as her ability. It is capable of taking 1/2 of her energy away once used. It is also capable of taking a crowd of people to Hueco Mundo, with the same amount of energy required to use, which means even if the Negacion is used on a single person, it will still take away 1/2 of her spiritual energy, considering how unstable it is for her to use Negacion, since she does not know the entire details about the Negacion yet, and not used to using it yet. The only way to escape is to dig himself/herself out in the underground, since her negacion cannot cover the bottom. She seems to be the only sister to have the ability to 'shoot' out a negacion from her fingers.

= = Cero Specialist = = : Mikan being a cero specialist is no laughing matter. From her first time turning her interest onto Cero, she tried and tested many experiments on knowing more about ceros. Not only that, she had slaughtered and sacrificed many hollows to acquire more information about the ceros by analyzing the energy particles which the hollow holds. On the other note, she could gain, or thus copy the power of the cero and use it back on her enemy. To fully understand and observe the cero, close observations [ About 10 - 50 meters between the fired cero ] is required as she cannot observe the fast flowing energy that is fired from her enemy if she were to observe from a far distance. Risk must be taken to have a close observation as well, as there are chances that she might get caught into the cero. It usually takes almost 2 posts to fully specify the energy particles of the cero before copying and use it by Mikan. There is no actions needed to learn about the cero, all she needs to do is to 'look at it'.

= = Vast Spiritual Power = = : How Mikan obtains her vast spiritual power is might because of the amount of adjuchas that she had ate before she became part of the Arrancar. The most acceptable theory of her vast spiritual power is because of her common use of ceros. Because her knowledgement with ceros was so strong that it enhances her spiritual power. Since cero needs a lot of spiritual power to be able to use one, and Mikan tried to get used of using it. Her common use of cero is what enhanced her spiritual power to a level where she can hardly empty it no matter how many ceros that she shot out. This is just an acceptable theory, how she gained such vast spiritual power still remains a mystery.

= = Weak Strength = = : While Mikan implanted too much focus onto ceros, she has forgotten to train up her strength, giving her the strength of a child. Her weak strength is unable to harm anyone, even to the Tier 6 characters and normal humans as she has the strength that compares to a little kid. Asking Mikan to do any job that requires physical strength is not a good idea, because she does not have any strength unlike most Arrancar who has an immense amount of strength that could harm many people. Mikan is also known to be the weakest sister in comparison of physical strength. The cause of her weak strength compared to most Arrancar might be because she tried to surpress against her spiritual power by sealing them into her hollow piece. It might be the cause of her losing most of her strength, turning her into a weak woman when it comes to physical strength.

= = Vast Intelligence = = : Although Mikan is not as smart as some of her sisters, she has vast knowledge about ceros, and weapons. Her intelligence mostly helped her also with the sealing spell that she has been looking for to seal away her spiritual power. Mikan's intelligence has kept many kinds of secrets, including the forbidden seals that she could not remember at all, which made her smart yet a dangerous weapon if she were to remember the forbidden seals that she once red when searching for a seal.

• Unique Abilities:

= = = Hollow Piece Seal = = = : As the name described, in the past, she sealed off most of her spiritual power, and human souls that she had into her remaining hollow pieces that was still on her body. The seal was so powerful that not even Mikan herself could remove it if she tries to. Although the seal can be weakened when she enters resureccion or Dues Ex/Segunda Etapa. But, two of the resureccion taps to different levels as the seal won't be completely weakened after she releases her Zanpakutō. In resureccion, only 50% of her power will tap into her body, turning her into a much powerful being than just a weapon. In Segunda Etapa/Dues Ex, her power is tapped to its maximum potential, although not even Mikan herself could imagine if she were to enter Segunda Etapa/Dues Ex. The seal cannot be removed by anything, or any being that tries to remove it. It last permanently, and its sealing effect won't weaken unless anything tries to force it 'open'.

= = = Energy Alteration = = = : Her vast knowledgement with cero gave her the ability to alter and modify the energy particles in the certain element or energy attacks, especially Ceros that can take her almost immediately to alter it completely, which is her advantage. Another advantage is that she can alter any energy-based attacks from any tiers, whether the ability is weak or powerful. Her disadvantage for her energy alteration is that other than cero, it will have to take her longer observation about the certain energy for her to gain knowledge about it. For example, if she were to see a shinigami using Hadō #33, Sokatsui against and grows an interest on the ability, he/she has to perform it many times for Mikan to observe the energy particles that is used for the Kidō. Once she is used to seeing an energy-based attacks for a lot of times [ Ranged from 10 - 30 uses ], she can start to alter the energy she has within her and turn the Kidō ability into any energy-based ability or cero-based. There are various amount of times she could use and the amount the time she needs to alter the energy, since Energy Alteration is not an easy job for her, even if she is an expert. She needs a large amount of time to fully alter the entire energy particles to use to its fullest effect. She could use the ability when she altered the energy particles, and the effect depends the amount of time she had used to alter the energy particles. The ability only applies and works on energy-based abilities and does not work and apply onto any physical attacks. Mikan's Energy Alteration does not have the ability to negate or stop any energy-based attacks. It is used for her to alter any energy that she has and turn them into more powerful energy. The ability did not need to be always 'Cero-based' everytime, she can actually copy the ability from the enemy as well.

In order to alter her energy particles after observation, she has to stop moving and a ball of blue light would glow when her hands are close to each other. Mikan will and must stop altering her energy if disturbed by any enemies. Though there are consequences when she stops. Once she had stopped altering her energy particles, she will only have 3 posts of time to alter and modify her spiritual energy again. If she did not finish altering it, she will either stop altering it and reset the entire alteration, or release it. If she resets the entire alteration, she will regain her spiritual energy completely. If she releases it, she will lose the amount of energy she had placed to alter the energy particles. And Yes, she applies 10% of her energy in every successive alterations in a post. The ability can copy every energy-based attacks, but it only works on offensive energy-based attacks, while she can't do it on defensive attacks. What she meant by 'Copying' is that when she alters her energy, the effect that the ability has will be the same as that certain energy-based ability. If one were to summon a lightning and strike her down, she will observe the elements and the particles that the lightning has, and once the enemy has used for certain amount of times, and once Mikan got used to the elements and particles it consists, she can immediately start altering her energy and summon a lightning and strike her opponent, that is what it meant by 'Copying'. The attack and damage will be the same as her opponent's, but energy alteration will take her at least 6 posts to alter to its fullest effect. It has an unlimited use, but it drains her energy everytime she uses it. The alteration has to cover up 1/2 of the post to be known as a 'Successful Alteration', but if the opponent's move is acceptable by both Sou and the owner of the character, then the alteration will be known as being 'disturbed'. [ Note: When discussing about this, staffs must be involved in this discussion to get things right. ]

There is also another disadvantage that her energy alteration ability has. If he/she has a powerful ability but with drawbacks, major and minor, she will be affected by the same drawbacks that the ability consists as well. If the person's ability can summon an energy-based attack that has the power of a nuclear bomb, she can alter her energy and elements for 5 posts duration to reach its fullest effect, and she will be able to summon an energy-based attack which also has the power of a nuclear bomb as well. But if the ability has a drawback that can cause the user to have nausea and turn powerless for a few days, she will also receive the same drawback as well. This lists of 'level damage' does not apply to cero as she could already create one for herself. This applies to every single level of her energy alteration. Even if the energy alteration only reached the first post and disturbed by the opponent 3 posts, trying to stop the alteration completely or release it, Mikan will still receive the drawbacks that the certain ability that she copies has. On the side note, once she learns how to alter that certain ability, she will remember it for only a temp while, which means if she has observed the ability and uses it in a thread, when she enters the next thread, she will forget what she has observed in any previous threads she has entered.

0% Damage - This is not applied to altering cero's energy particles. If she were to alter a cero's energy particles and does not have enough time to modify the cero, it will work like any regular cero would. This is only applied to any energy-based other than cero. For example, if she tries to alter her energy at the first post, and an enemy would keep stopping her from doing it, either she has to stop altering and redo the entire energy altering or release it. The release would be various since she can 'copy' the opponent's ability. The release could be summoning a circle of fire, a lightning strike or a tornado, but if she does not have not enough time to alter her energy and elements, all of the release would be rendered as a completely useless and powerless since she does not have enough time to channel even 1% of her energy into it. Another example, if she tries to copy and alter her energy into the ability that has the power of a nuke, and disturbed three times during the alteration, and if Mikan tries to release the ability, it will rendered as a complete useless attack, no matter how powerful it is. She will also receive drawbacks in this level, even if she stops the alteration or release it for nothing. The advantages that this 'powerless level' has is that she can shoot it at the ground to create a large amount of smoke for her to escape from any enemy, but it won't work on everyone. This is the 'Level 1' of the 'Released Energy'. The First and Second Post of the alteration will stand in this level. The first level is called as 'Muryokuna'. 10% of her spiritual is used in this level.

25% Damage - In this point on, this will make her ability more useful than Level 1. Before getting to the point, this level will let the ability she releases will cause her opponents to receive 1/4 of the damage from its original effect, which means its weaker than the original ability used by her opponents. As an example, if he/she attacks her continuously attacks her with poison that could infect the person's body with poison at fast speed for 3 posts, she would observe it for a long while until she knows all the elements and the spiritual energy used for the ability, and she would also able use the poison ability as well but it would become 12 posts to fully infect a person's body, which its effect is deducted by 75% [ This is exceptional. Copying any poison-based ability will need a MAJOR DISCUSSION with the staffs, especially the admins and frost, including both myself and the owner of the character ]. She is able to regain her spiritual energy completely by stopping the entire alteration or release it in various ways. This will not apply on any physical abilities. At this level, it is known as a 'Level 2' of the 'Released Energy'. The Third 'Successful Alteration' Post will be applied to this level. The second level is called as 'Ranbō'. She applies another 10% of her energy when she reaches this level, which she will be using a total of 20% energy in this level.

50% Damage - At this level, Mikan will be able to tap the ability's power to 50%, but not yet reaching to its fullest extent, and it had only reached half of its maximum power. Again, an example, if he/she was uses an ability that can wipe out 1/2 of the karakura city, and used it too many times until to the extent where she understands the use of the ability, then she could alter her abilities until to the 4th post, to use half of the total damage that the ability that she copies from the opponent. Then she will be only able to wipe out 1/4 of the karakura town using the ability that she copied from, which means the damage is halved from the total damage, because at this level, the energy alteration wasn't complete yet. This is the 'Level 3' of the 'Released Energy'. The Forth 'Successful Energy Alteration' Post will applied to this level. The '3rd Level' of the Energy Alteration is called 'Hangen Hakai'. Mikan will use another 10% energy in this level, making up a total of 30% of spiritual energy used. She can regain her spiritual energy by stopping the entire alteration, or releasing the ability using 30% of her spiritual energy.

75% Damage - This is the level where it will almost reach to the maximum level and maximum damage of the copied ability. Although the damage will only be 3/4 of the total damage. Any abilities that she copies or uses will be 15% weaker than its original damage. A set of example, if any tier were to use an ability that is capable of wiping out the entire karakura city and being used continuously [ This is impossible to happen, this will only be an example ], Mikan could get used the ability and copied it, then alter it for 5 posts before entering this level. Once altered and reaching this level, she will be able to copy and use the ability that the opponent has, and Mikan could destroy only 3/4 of the karakura town [ Again, ITS JUST AN EXAMPLE ] because she had not reach to the full extent, and it deducted 1/4 from its total destruction and damage it contains. She could stop the alteration completely to regain her spiritual energy completely, or release the ability. Mikan will have to use another 10% of her spiritual energy, so in total, 40% of her spiritual energy is gathered. If she releases the ability, she will lose all total of her 40% spiritual energy. This is the '4th Level' of her 'Released Energy'. The fifth 'Successful Energy Alteration' will be applied to this level. The 4th Level's name is called 'Hakai Chikaku'.

100% Damage - This is the point where the ability that she copies from the opponent reaches its fullest extent and its maximum power. She can deal the same damage as the opponent's ability that she had copied from. Reaching to the maximum level would be a very hard task for Mikan to do, since there is always a disturbance in many combat situations, so getting to the final level of the energy alteration ability would not likely happen. If she's lucky enough, she might be able to reach to this point. Her chances to be able to use a copied ability to its fullest extent is very rare. To be exact, she can use the ability's [ Copied Ones, which are altered with her spiritual energy ] full power that can rival with the opponent's ability. Another example, if one were to use an ability that can annihilate an army of captains, and used many times which Mikan will eventually get used to it after a long observation. Then she could alter her spiritual energy as the same as the person uses, then keeps altering her spiritual energy for 6 post duration, then she could release it entirely and wipe out an army of captains as well, which rivals the same power as the person had used. It takes away 10% of her spiritual energy again in this level. This is the Fifth and the Final Level of her 'Released Energy'. It takes away half of her total spiritual energy once released. This level can be achieved on the final 6th 'Successful Energy Alteration' post. The final level's name is called 'Gōkei Heisoku'.

There are total 5 levels that she has to achieve its fullest power. She will receive drawbacks that the copied ability from every of these levels, no matter if she stops it or release it. If the copied ability has no drawbacks, she will feel extremely exhausted from the Energy Alteration process that she has done as it requires large amount of spiritual energy and focus to go through each levels. The alteration can be stopped by attacking Mikan or simply disturb her. But be warned that Mikan can still be aware of her surroundings and enemies even if she is doing the Energy Alteration. She CANNOT move during the process of Energy Alteration, and she can only look around while altering her spiritual energy with a ball of blue light that floats between both of her palms. She can copy his/her abilities wihout the owner's permission if he/she uses the same ability more than 10 times. She is allowed to use it countless amount of times wihout limits, except that she will get even more exhausted after she had released or stops the alteration. Again, Ceros and Physical Attacks will not work and included.

= = = Slow-Speed Regeneration = = = : A special feature and ability that Mikan has. Instead of having high-speed regeneration, she has the 'slow-speed' version of it, except there are differences between both of these abilities. Slow-Speed Regeneration can repair any part of her wounded and lost limbs, to a completely perfect one, but at a slow speed. It could fully repair and regenerate her entire lost limb, but it requires 2 posts to regenerate it entirely. High-speed Regeneration could instantly repair the user's limbs, while Mikan doesn't. Not only that, her Slow-Speed Regeneration can repair her tissues and automatically increases the amount of blood she has if Mikan does not have enough blood inside her body. It won't give her too much blood, but it gives her just enough for her to live perfectly. Its speciality is that it can repair her internal organs, but because of the complex designs that the organ has, it usually takes her about 10 posts to fully regrow a lung, or a kidney. The Brain is an exception as it cannot repair her brain, while it can repair the rest of her organs for duration of 10 posts. It can also repair or even REPLACE any of her lost bones. It does not matter if its the rib cage, or the skull, as it can completely repair it at the duration of 5 posts. Though skull takes 7 posts to repair it as it needs to be harden as well to protect her head from more injuries.

= = = Cero Metras = = = : Cero Metras is an arrancar's cero, created by Mikan herself. Mikan observed the particles of the Cero Oscuras and Cero Metralleta, she had found a way to make both of them destructive enough to actually take out an army of captains easily.

Since cero is fired at a concentrated blast, and it uses some partial of energy to able to fire the cero. As Cero Oscuras is known to be an Espada's 'Fully Powered' Cero, she is able to remember most of the particles and energy used to shoot a cero oscuras, as well as an amount of energy required to use to shoot one. That goes the same with Cero Metralleta, which Starrk generates his energy to his right hand then to his pistol, and generate triple blue-colored cero and shoot before shooting a barrage of ceros to his enemies. Mikan instantly knowledged its energy particles as well within the cero and amount of energy that is required to use to actually does the same as Starrk does. Fusing both cero's particles into one, can generate a deadly energy that could cause the rocks on the ground to rise up. The cero generated would be Light-Green colored with black outline. It requires an instant amount of time to completely charge and fuse them together. The cero can be charged on either palm, finger or from a gun [ Like Starrk's ]. Other parts than those will trigger a self-destruction that would cause harm and damage like a Cero Oscuras would.

This method, does related to the Cero Sincrético used by Pesche and Dondochakka, although the ceros would combine together at the 'outside' when Pesche and Dondochakka charge their ceros. Mikan's method is different, instead of doing it at the 'outside', she combines and mixes both Cero Oscuras' energy particles together with Cero Metralleta inside her body, before putting them into use. The cero can be fired in a single blast or in a barrage of ceros at rapid speed. Since Cero Metralleta's energy particles and Cero Oscuras' energy particles are combined/mixed, they have the combined power of both ceros, making it deadly and powerful enough to actually wipe out 1/2 part of karakura town, but if the user's powerful enough, he/she can use it to completely annihilate the entire karakura city with a single hit. Also powerful enough to actually destroy 3/4 part of Hueco Mundo.

Because the cero is extremely powerful, the user has to deal with many drawbacks after usage of the cero. The user will feel nausea for every post, it means the user will feel nausea until they are out from the thread. The nausea will decrease their field of vision, accuracy, speed and strength. Not only the person will feel nausea, they will lose 3/4 of their strength during fight, means that they will be as weak as a Tier 4 or Tier 5 after use. While their speed is halved once used, giving them the speed of a Tier 4 as well. The devastating power that requires a ton of spiritual energy to use can immediately sap almost the entire energy that the user has, and only leaves a small portion of energy for the user to use. The enormous and devastating this cero holds, is forbidden to be used in Hueco Mundo, as the ability contains the power that is enough to wipe out the Hueco Mundo entirely, and this is almost a weapon of annihilation. To prevent any chaos or any additional destruction, only those are permitted and special people knows this ability. Once per thread only.
[ The Rules Of Using It Are Within The Link To The Cero Metras. Unarchive it and Move It To Approved If Any Admins Or Moderators Approves This Cero. ]



• Resereccion Name: Baionoido [ Annihilator ]

• Resereccion Release Phrase: "When one is to take, the other would be blown. A finger to pull, and one would face the annihilation of death. Shoot, pull and blow them down into their very pieces of flesh and blood. Destroy, Annihilator."

• Release Actions: Mikan will have to place the hilt of her Zanpakutō onto her palm, and a circle of bloody red light appear under her. The activation starts while many Mikan's 'tortured souls' will start floating up and out from the circle.

• Resereccion Appearance: After her resereccion release, there are some changes from her previous appearance. What is changed is that of her hair. Mikan's hair turned from black to a pure, bloody red hair. The reason she had a blood red hair in resureccion is either because of her bloodline with the Mischevang Family or influenced from Ashlei. While Mikan's eyes turned into blood red color as well together with her flow of hair as well. This might be the influence from the Mischevang Family as well. Her hollow piece expands on both of her arms and forms itself into a gauntlets, while the sleeves of her clothes would be destroyed by the reiatsu that emitted from the gauntlets themselves. Her gauntlets, however, emits an endless amount of tortured souls that some has the sound of a human screaming for help, making Mikan's reiatsu much more dangerous and 'creepy'. Not only that, she has a weapon in a form of a revolver, namely it was a Raging Bull revolver. The rest of her body and clothes was remained untouched after resureccion.

• Resereccion Abilities:

= Regained Abilities = : Mikan is still allowed to use her previous techniques and abilities that she has during resureccion. All the abilities and techniques that she uses will be powered up twice more powerful than its original power as it is because of her 'Tortured Reiatsu' that mixed up with her spiritual power. Her cero will be blackened a bit in her resureccion.

= Tortured Souls/Tortured Reiatsu = : By meaning of 'tortured souls' or 'tortured reiatsu', is the souls of millions of victims that was formerly part of her experiments. After killing them when they were humans, she ate their soul before they could actually escape themselves. Although eating 'other beings' won't boost her powers, she could use their 'souls' as part of her 'power'. On the other note, she used their soul to boost her reiatsu, but because of the overwhelming number of souls that she has eaten in the past, Mikan had no other choice but to lock most of her reiatsu away inside her hollow piece. In resureccion, she was able to regain 1/2 of her spiritual power/reiatsu back, but the 'tortured souls' reiatsu will still remain locked inside the gauntlets until she obtains either Dues Ex or Segunda Etapa. 'Tortured Souls' are also Mikan's special reiatsu that had her reiatsu and the souls mixed, forming into what she called 'Tortured Reiatsu'. This might be the cause, or the way of how she was able to alter any reiatsu she sees. Mikan's abilities are boosted to 2 times more powerful. Not only that, she can use the souls themselves as an ability. On the other hand, these human souls that serves as her second reiatsu was completely sealed away into her hollow piece before she entered resureccion. Only 50% of the tortured souls/tortured reiatsu was released during in her resureccion.

= Weapon = : In most cases, any arrancar in resureccion form will not wield any weapons or Zanpakutō. Special case like Starrk who could use his pair of pistols during resureccion is something that surprises Mikan. So, she was able to obtain a weapon in resureccion, because of her strong need of wanting a weapon in special cases like Starrk's. How she was able to manifest a revolver as a weapon in resureccion is because of her gauntlets and reiatsu. Her gauntlets was able to emit the tortured reiatsu to one of her hand to form a revolver that acts as her Zanpakutō. Her revolver can fire off a cero, or using her spiritual energy to form a bullet. It uses 0.5% of her spiritual energy each time she forms a bullet and shoot one. The user and the holder of the revolver must be Mikan, while other users who holds this gun will not work completely, even if they channel their spiritual energy into the revolver and try to form a bullet. The bullet that the revolver uses is not an ordinary spiritual energy, it uses 'Tortured Energy', a spiritual energy that mixed with the souls that Mikan had experimented in the past. Although her resureccion resembles to quincy that uses spiritual energy to shoot arrows, and bullet, Mikan's different. Other than using spiritual energy, she uses human souls to do it as well.

= Gauntlets = : The gauntlets which her hollow piece turned into, was surprisingly a seal as well. Although they were the remaining pieces of her hollow part, the hollow pieces was used as a seal to lock most of Mikan's spiritual power as it was too much for her to handle inside her body. If she had too much spiritual power inside her, Mikan could've exploded. Mikan's body, somehow, could not handle too much spiritual power for no reason. What have caused it is not verified. The gauntlets are also her melee weapons that enhances her strength. Dark souls would be seen emitting and floating out from the gauntlets as well. The gauntlets, are somehow breakable, but at a tougher rate. Means it requires raw strength to crack and break the gauntlets open. Once the gauntlets are broken, she will lose all her strength and her spiritual power, which she will re-enter her sealed form again. Her hollow piece is still normal when she is in resureccion, even though it has been cracked open during her resureccion. Only raw strength like kenpachi or radioactive could actually break it, and energy-based attacks that ar eboth offensive and defensive like Cero Oscuras and such CANNOT break it, as it is like an 'Anti-Energy' protection gauntlets. Only physical strength works well against her gauntlets.

= Enhanced Strength = : The strength that Mikan had obtained was both from her gauntlets and her spiritual power that she had regained from sealing. Although she had only half of her spiritual power back, her strength has been drastically improved to the point where she could single-handedly take out several captains wihout any help. Compared to her previous strength which she can't even harm a single tier 6 at all, in resureccion, her strength could lift a large boulder with a single hand and effortlessly throw it. Although at this point, it only unlocks a half part of her power, and it did not yet reach to its fullest potential.

= Soul Ripper = : As the name says, it uses the human souls that mikan has taken together to form a brown-colored cero with hundreds of 'faces' on the surface of the cero. When Mikan is generating the cero, the cero itself could actually release spiritual pressure that could actually reach miles away from it, which could lure anything, and anyone that is within its vicinity will feel a strong spiritual pressure. It would be an unknown spiritual pressure for everyone as the spiritual pressure that comes from hundreds of human souls mixes up together and made it almost an unknown spiritual power that the cero contains. It does not work like an ordinary cero, as it is made from human souls that mixes up with her spiritual power, making it much more powerful cero. After it is fully charged [ Takes 1 Post ], the spiritual pressure that the cero emits will instantaneously vanish from anything's detection, and it would be shot either from Mikan's index finger or from her gun. Once fired, it releases a strong shockwave that blows everyone away, including Mikan herself. As the cero advances foward, it rips everything apart with its strong pressure that is near it [ about a few meters close to the advancing cero ]. Once it hits a 'living' target, it will explode, but its explosion radius will be various. It can be ranged from a small explosion into a nuclear explosion. If it hits the ground or flies up to the air wihout hitting anything [ Probably a few miles away from Mikan ], it will turn into a giant vortex that is about 500 meters wide. Anything enters will get caught and gets 'slashed' at by the vortex. It will not inflict any major wounds onto the opponent, but instead, it leaves many scratches and small wounds that could cause them to bleed slowly. The wounds can be easily patched. On the other note, it would bring the wind into the vortex, making it strong enough to pull everyone in with the strong wind, including Mikan herself could actually get caught into the vortex as well. It can be used anytime, except it is limited to 3 times per thread, considering that it is dangerous for Mikan to use as well, and it takes away a lot of her spiritual energy quickly by using it once. It could reach as far as it could, depending how high it is aimed. The cero can be affected by the gravity, which means it will slowly go down as it advances. Be noted that although it uses the human souls only, her spiritual energy is involved as well to be able to form a cero.

= Soul Piercer = : More of sharpened version of bala. Soul piercer hardens her spiritual bullet by mixing it with a human soul, and forcefully changes its shape into an arrowhead. Mikan can feel a great deal of pain when she forcefully trying to change the shape of her spiritual bullet as she cannot do it with her own will once it is fused with a soul. After the shape has been changed, a skull-like face made up of spiritual energy would appear in front of her revolver's barrel. When fired, the bullet moves at the speed of bala, fast and powerful enough to pierce through any kinds of defenses and walls it goes through. It is also thick enough to go through several summoned Bakudo #81, Danku. There's an exception for this ability for Mikan to use it though. Since changing the shape of her bullet is not easy, her spiritual energy can be easily drained almost 1/2 of her energy for trying to change it once. She could use it many times, but once per thread is enough to drain half of her energy out from using it. It only moves in a straight line and it is not affected by gravity, which means it keeps moving straight until there is something hard enough or going through enough walls which is at its limit then it will explode like a small bomb. Once per thread use is recommended. No cooldown is required for this ability.

= Soul Bullet = : 'Soul Bullet', by means of her main ability that is permanently turned on during her resureccion. But, it is a bit more special than just forming bullets that uses spiritual energy. Soul bullets are formed using the human souls that are slain and eaten by Mikan. She can switch to either a normal spiritual bullet or the 'Soul Bullet' at her own free will. Soul bullet does not work the same as the normal spiritual bullet. It is as fast as the bala do, and able to rival the same power as a regular cero. But, Soul Bullet drains more spiritual energy than the normal as she has to fuse her spiritual energy together with the human soul, to create a 'Soul Bullet'. It can be generated and fired almost an instant wihout any reload. Once direct contact with anything, it explodes and damages like a regular cero. It drains 2% of Mikan's spiritual energy each time she uses it, which its very exhausting to use.

= Soul Bomb = : Despite its name, Mikan uses a human soul as a bomb. Which means if she were to throw a human soul towards an enemy, it will explode like a normal grenade would, but unlike grenades in the human world, the bomb consists of human souls that will harm both spiritual beings and living beings. It can be used infinitely, as Mikan has a large amount of human souls that can be used as a bomb, but an exception that she will become weaker and weaker for each time she uses one. Another exception that she cannot hold the human soul that will be used as a bomb, because the human soul will keep absorbing her spiritual energy from Mikan's body until it is thrown. Although it absorbs her spiritual energy when she holds it, its explosion radius and power will not affected at all.



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General Skills

  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills

  • Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner




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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Sun Mar 10, 2013 3:17 am

Moved to OLD WIP due to the expiration of the two week period!
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Mon Mar 11, 2013 4:36 am





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As a child, Mikan lived in a very small town over 200 miles away from karakura with her sisters.The place was surrounded by thick woodland area with only a single path in and out at the village.A place where she was able to live there with her sisters.She felt like becoming a stronger and better person, with ashlei.She never gets bored of this village, and able to live properly in the small town where she could see everyone happy and smiling each and everyday.

Until the day where something had happened in the village, when she begin to suspect something about her sister, ashlei.She began to wonder if she is the one who cause all the killings in the village.She did not mean to suspect something about her sister, when she heard everyone in the village agreed to kill her sister, ashlei.She ran, standing in front of all the villagers and asked them not to kill ashlei because she knows that she did not do all the killing and bad omens.She insisted for the villagers to kill her sister, no matter what they do.

Stab.

A sharp spear piercing through her flesh, as the villager stuttered when he held the spear that went through her chest and believed that she works with the 'witch' [ Danielle Mischevang ], and decides to kill her in case if she does anything that could 'free' the 'witch'. The blood began to spill out from her chest where she was stabbed by the spear. She did not successfully stopped the villagers from killing ashlei. The final, and the only sound she heard from her ears, had dissapeared.Her sight and life faded away from her mind.Her dead body was found laying against the ground, mortally wounded and bleeding after being stabbed on the chest.Her last breath has been released from her lungs, and died.

She began to wander around the village as a spirit.It was after her death and being killed by the villagers.She has been avoiding hollows and shinigamis' because she did not want hollow or return back to the soul society yet.She wanted to find her sisters first.While she was wondering around, she started to feel hatred for this small town.They killed her, her sisters and ashlei as well.When hatred was developed in her feelings, she took off the chain of fate off her chest and become a hollow herself.

After becoming a hollow, she continue watching the village until she has the chance to devour their souls.She had the desire to kill them and devour their souls.The hatred in her heart will never fade away from her feelings.A mask forming around her face, looking at the village.She watched until she heard a loud explosion at the river in the air.Her eyes widened, saw what her sister, ashlei had became.A hollow that attacked the villagers in this small village.Ashlei kept killing every single human in this village.She watched, until she left the place.

She had used her time to kill every single human and devour their souls.Finding each deceased soul and devour them as well.She avoided every shinigami she sees and decided to kill human instead of the shinigami.She went to hueco mundo and devour her fellows hollows soul because it was easier to gain more power.She continue to devour one by one, turning from lesser to gillian.After when she continues to kill and devour hollow souls, she finally and become an adjuchas-class hollow.She did not stop devouring other hollows and she continues.When she had devoured thousands of hollows, she did not know why she can't become a vasto lorde hollow.When she decided to break and shatter her mask to become an arrancar.

Eventually, she was able to break her own mask and gained a new power for herself.She had a different role and her goal now.She decided to rule over a small group of hollows that she can be stronger and use them to find her sisters.She did not know why she stopped devouring other hollows and become a vasto lorde, but it was her choice to stop.Her new personality had developed within her, and begin to do some experiments and research on each hollows she sees, hoping to get some information.She also studies their cero everyday on the hollows, until she had learned better about cero and bala.But something wasn't right.When she gets near the hollows, her spiritual pressure kills them when they gets near her.She did not know why, the weak ones can get together but why the strong ones can't.

Yet, there is something she will never happy and comfortable about it.Her sisters and ashlei.She hope that she can be reunited with them, and live together happily.Then she heard there was a person, who was the leader of the nuevo espada and she was called "Ashlei Clixx".The ruler of the entire hueco mundo and Las Noches.She was happy about this, and decided to send a message to the cero espada and ask to meet together.Her fate with the sisters and ashlei is unknown, until then.She did not know what will happen next after meeting her sister, ashlei.

[ I am keeping this as a temp. history to keep this application up-to-date. Although Ashlei is no longer part of the staff, i will still continue my work. I wish Ashlei a healthy and a happy day. I do not have any ideas for the history for the past few weeks, so i decided to copy this history from the old one, of course i won't let it stay for the rest of its lives. I will update the history that is currently in the drafts until i can replace this. Thank you! ]




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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Sat Mar 16, 2013 3:26 am



AHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Finally finished everything!

Although i've finished it a few days ago, i fixed some of the stuffs and added a few abilities into her application. As i checked, everything seems to be fine and there is nothing more to add in. Anyways, the staffs can check the application now. Lewl.

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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Sat Mar 16, 2013 12:27 pm

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Sat Mar 16, 2013 2:55 pm

This is currently a Work in progress evaluation. You can modify your app as I go along if you so wish but remember more will be added as I get further into the app


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= = Cero Oscuras = =

I don't think i'll be letting you use the Cero oscuras. Cross it out or remove it for now.

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= = Sonido = =

No two Sonido speeds are the same. This means if you move twice as fast as a sonido, how fast is the original sonido moving? I do not think you should say you move 'twice' as fast. However, you may state that it moves 'faster than average'.

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= = Negacion = =

I would be very wary about this ability. It may be a move used very rarely, but you do not specify a method of escape. I thoroughly suggest adding one.

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= = Cero Specialist = =

Your'e going to need to specify a better method of gaining your information on the cero because from what you have written, you specify no range limits or time constraints on cero. How close do you need to be? How long does it usually take? Chances are, if you say 'instant, far away' it will be denied.

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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Sat Mar 16, 2013 11:48 pm

Fixed everything above, and be noted that i will update/edit this post each time i've finished every repairings that you need me to do.

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= Sonido : Despite her rare use of sonido and prefers running more than using her sonido, it is known that her sonido is faster than an average sonido.
[ Fixed That ]

= Negacion : The only way to escape is to dig himself/herself out in the underground, since her negacion cannot cover the bottom.
[ Fixed That ]

= Cero Oscuras : ... I strike'd it off.

= Cero Specialist :
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[ Fixed The Entire Details ]

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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:59 pm

Moved to pending.

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Sun Mar 24, 2013 12:07 pm


Sorry for taking so long to get back to this application. however, I will probably not be able to completely approve this application myself as I am constantly pulled away from my computer nowadays. nevertheless, I shall be checking Mikans history to see if it matches the Mischevang timeline. You will have to get somebody else to go over the rest of the application though as I know some poeple have picked out issues I did not. Anyway, onto the things you need to consider:

1) You state Hollows attack the Village and following this Ashlei is accused of it. This is incorrect as the Hollows never attacked to a point that they were noticed before Ashlei was killed. It wasn't until Ashlei herself became a Hollow that the town suffered it's first full scale attack from hollows.

2) Not going to lie, but I doubt the villagers would retaliate and kill one of Ashleis sisters as at the time, the father of the family had proven that the rest of his daughters were not the same as Ashlei and the villagers would be aware of that. Thus, the villagers don't have any real reason to attack and kill the sisters themselves without any other proof that they were witches.

3) I don't understand why Mikan chose to seal away her own powers. Also, you have made it out that Mikan is a very pwoerful character capable of turning Hollows nearby into dust. I'm sorry, but this is false as this character will not be granted a tier high enough to be capable of molecular disintegration through reitsu. A vasto Lorde would be capable, but not an adjuchas.

4) Arrancar do NOT eat to get stronger. Thus taking humans into her home and eating them would do nothing to raise her abilities.

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Her long life in the human world has began to spread out a rumor, a girl with a red hair, a Cero Espada and a powerful arrancar.

How did Mikan suddenly realise that this was the Ashlei mischevang she once knew? The description doesn't even fit what Mikan would remember and please note that Ashlei used to be called 'Danielle Mischevang'. Knowing her name and appearance would not lead anybody to realise she was the girl from the village. For example, Danielle had white hair when she was a child.

6) Please re-read this history. Half the sentences have been either misspelt or the wrong words have been used.

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Mikan Mischevang = FINISHED =   Tue Apr 09, 2013 5:21 am

I am literally done with the history by replacing it with the old one, you'll know my reasons for it.

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