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|Subject Post 1Subject: Jessy's shikia finished Sat Feb 23, 2013 7:18 am|| |
- Name Of Character: Jessy Nessa
- Link To Character Profile: Jessy Nessa
- Reasons For Upgrading: Jessy shikia training thread
What Are You Upgrading: shikia for Jessy
- Any Extra Notes: copy pasted from her app to get the current info
Release: Slash out, Incisorius Tigre
Shikai Description: In shikia, Jessy wears a leather gauntlet on each hand which extend to cover a bit of the arm. On the back of the hand and continuing down to the end of the gauntlet are metal protective plates, upon which are mounted 3 claw like blades, each extending 8 inches out from her fist. The claws are made of a black metal, the protective plates look like normal steel.
Fighting Style: While in shikia, her fighting style adapts to become a mixture of hakuda and swordplay, a unique style that changes the range of attacks constantly, making it much harder for the opponent to dodge.
Speed and mode of movement: In shikia, Jessy's speed is doubled, and she can also move on all fours to obtain shunpo like speeds for up to half a minute before stopping for fifteen seconds, though she must travel in a straight line for this.
Slicing Air Claw: While in shikia, she can swing her claws and create a highly focused arc of high pressure air. It can tear though cloth easily, but the most that will happen to someone's flesh is a shallow cut, as the air will disperse before it has time to make a deeper one. She can only use this ability 6 times while maintaining shikia, using it a 7th time will work, but she will be forced back in to sealed form and be unable to release for the remainder of the battle.
Tiger's Pounce: With this attack, Jessy tries to either stab or make a downward slash with both of her guantlets, and two white furred tails sprout from the ground, winding around the targets legs, entangling them for 15 seconds.
- Approved By: (ONLY THE PERSON WHO APPROVES THE UPGRADE WILL PUT THIS HERE! WE WILL EDIT YOUR POST AND ADD OUT NAME HERE!)
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Jessy's shikia finished Sat Feb 23, 2013 9:12 pm|| |
Alright, I have no problems with it because I don't believe it is overpowered, but it might be a tad underpowered. As Jessy grows, remember to make the individual powers stronger as well instead of just adding on new abilities, a commonly made mistake. Approved.