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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Sat Apr 13, 2013 11:41 am




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»Theme:
» Name:Ryo-Ohki
» Titles: the adorable one
» Age: it will vary anywhere from 5-15 depending on the form she is in.
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Rouge

» Shifter Appearance Picture:

» True Appearance Picture:

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» Personality: loving: Ryo-ohki is kind and loveing to everyone she meets. She is always trying to make everyone around her smile no matter what. Her skills to do so considering her looks at times tend to be legendary though her adorable nature does not have a tendancy to work on everyone though. She does her best to be kind and loving to everyone she meets though in a way this can not always work out depending on the situation she is put into.

focused: She is also extremely focused at everything she does. No matter what it is. Even if she is simply trying to amuse someone with her acrobatic feets she puts at least 200% if not more into her effort to do her best when doing her little performance. She has a habit of overdoing it at times and can end up knocking herself out from over exerting herself in order to do what she feel's she has to. She has that i will never stop untill i do what i can additude.

Emotinal: She can be on the emotinal side. Cause at times her personality can become rather childish. If someone is mean to her or it seems like her work she went through so much trouble to do was not liked. She can end up crying as if her hopes were crushed by the certin person or persons who said or acted that way to her. Her emotions can fall under the childish side of things but when she is really needed she can over come this and her focus will take over from there.

Dependable: Though she is childish Ryo-ohki is also rather dependable as well. Cupled along with her focus she is someone anyone can rely on as long as she consider's them worthy of her assistance. she tends to go all out on this aspect as well. In an attempt to try her best not to dissapoint her friend that had made a request of her. she puts her effort into doing it just right so that she can get the attention she feels she so deserves.


» Likes: She loves carrots, anyone who can be considered nice in her book, She loves hugs and pretty much being close to her friends as often as possible.

» Dislikes:she dislikes verry little. but her strongest hates are waiting, making people worry. Being left alone for to long, and she absolutely despises anyone that can be considered mean or that would threaten the safty of her friends.
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» History Ryo-Ohki is a unique artificial lifeform created by the universe's greatest scientist, Washu. Ryo-Ohki was created by combining a powerful creature known as Masu with some form of mineral lifeform. She is basically created to be the companion of Washu's other creation Ryoko, as well as her powerful spacecraft. Ryo-Ohki, along with Ryoko, were initially created by Washu to wield the power of her gems, which contain all of her godly abilities, similar in power to that of the first generation Royal Trees of the Imperial Family of the planet Jurai which are descended from Washu's sister Tsunami. After Washu was sealed away on her battleship, Soja, by her assistant Kagato, he claimed Ryo-Ohki and Ryoko as his own in his quest for ultimate power, brainwashing and controlling them. With Ryoko as her captain, Ryo-Ohki helped her destroy 28 planets and 69 colonies for Kagato's personal gain. 700 years before Ryo-Ohki attacked and almost decimated the planet Jurai with her owner Ryoko under the control of Kagato. The pair were defeated for the first time when Jurai's Prince Yosho chased them all the way to the planet Earth, and subdued Ryoko by taking away her gems. Yosho sealed Ryoko inside the cave near the Masaki Shrine and Ryo-Ohki "fainted" on the ground near the shrine which became a lake. Ryoko receives one of her gems from Earth boy and series protagonist Tenchi Masaki in order to awaken Ryo-Ohki. Ryoko sends Ryo-Ohki into battle with Juraian princess Ayeka's Royal Treeship, Ryu-Oh and both crash onto the Earth near Tenchi's home. She regenerates as a small egg and proceeds to hatch into her "cabbit" form which she uses while not in spaceship mode. The new Ryo-Ohki, though essentially the original's daughter, is a complete reincarnation of the spaceship, having all her memories and powers; however, Ryo-Ohki is much more powerful than before and has new abilities. When not in spaceship form, Ryo-Ohki simply took the form of a crystal-

however, it would seem that Ryoko had used part of her energy to keep Tenchi's cat alive, and took back this energy upon her revival and used it as a catalyst to revive her ship; leading to Ryo-Ohki's cabbit form. Ryo-Ohki can shift between cabbit and ship form at will, but after doing it the first time, the spaceship became its own entitiy lying dormant beneath the lake with Ryo-Ohki the cabbit as its computer module, akin to Jurai's Royal Trees and their ships. Following an incident later in which she fully merged with her base, the Masu, she gains the ability to shift to two humanoid forms — a child form and an adult form. However, her adult form is only seen once (during her fusion with the Mass), both because she has the mind of a child, and because she has trouble walking on two legs in the body of a full grownup. Ryo-Ohki is a legend throughout the universe and some are surprised to see her as a small adorable cabbit or a little girl.

She and young Juraian princess Sasami quickly become attached to each other while living at Tenchi Masaki's home, and she can generally be seen with Sasami rather than Ryoko though their connection is still a deep one Ryo-Ohki still craves attention and affection from Ryoko.As mentioned before, Ryo-Ohki was originally created by Washu as a means for Ryoko to access and control the vast power contained within her gems; hence the small jewel embedded into Ryo-Ohki's forehead. The combined power of Ryoko and Ryo-Ohki is as great as a Juraian 1st-Generation Royal Treeship. When the pair reaches a certain maturity, if Ryoko is in possession of all three gems, they will be able to produce ten Light Hawk Wings; the same amount as Tsunami. An additional danger is that it is completely possible to mass-produce more Ryo-Ohki, which is a great fear to the Juraian Royal Family. Washu, however, vows to never clone Ryoko or Ryo-Ohki. One day as she was running around playing with sasami a strange portal seemed to open up out of no where underneath ryo-ohki's right leg. As she stared down the portal seemed to be slowly pulling her into it. As she screamed out everyone within the raidius of her voice quickly came to her aid. Though they tried with all their might they were not able to free her from the portals grasp. As she cried she soon found herself completely taken by the portal ans she soon passed out. Upon wakeing up ryo-ohki found herself in a strange new world and she was in her adorable animal state. Running around she was crying haveing no idea where she was. She tried to turn into her spaceship form but found she was able to still take on her space ship form. She did so quickly to get a better view of the area and to go above everyone. It was hard to maintain though she was to sad and focused to find everyone to care about all that. Her new search to find a way back to her family and friends begins now.

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» Natural Abilities: Light Hawk Wings (光鷹翼, Kou-Ou-Yoku) Though Ryo-ohki can use them due to the jewls she posseses the main one being on her forehead. The Light Hawk Wings are primarily a defensive shield capable of repelling virtually any attack unless the attack is stronger then what the char can withstand. They can also be used as an offensive weapon with vast results, but this is not their intended function. Z explained the true nature of the Light Hawk Wings later in the series; they are our universe's manifestations of energy from a higher plane of existence. The generation of Light Hawk Wings requires a phenomenal amount of energy.Their attack comes from a focal point at the center of the wing's formation. It gathers the power of the light hawk wings to a centralized point then fires it in a ball of energy that is capable of takeing out a large radius when focused properly. The radius depends on how focused the attack of the wings is. It can be anywhere from 3 feet all around the target to 10 feet. The attack utilizes partical acceleration to create a form of small to large nucular type of explosion though their is no actual radiation involved with this attack at all. Though the chance it will be used is rare sense they are mostly only used for defensive reasons.The attack is only as strong as a nucular explosion it is not actually nucular. It can be used only once. Though after its use she can not use the wings again.

» Unique Abilities: Ryo-ohki has an inate ability to alter her body's physical structure to allow her to pass through solid objects. This includes wall's and other things that many would have to work at to get into. She used to use it for the sake of her partner. though now she primaraly uses it as a way to aid herself to complete jobs her firends give her at a quicker pace. She can only really phaze through inanimate objects like walls and doors. Any form of attack will not be able to really be phazed through. Unless the attack is someone throughting items at her like doors an other inanimate objects.

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» Note: Feel free to change "Adjustable State Appearance" to any title you'd like for your Demon's Stages.

» Adjustable State Appearance:

» Adjustable State Benefits: In this state Ryo-Ohki can travel through space and can travel lightyears in mear minutes. This is mostly due to the fact that she was created for the soul purpose of space travel. Her appearance was givent o her so that she could show that she was able to do more then just simply destroy. and it was a form she ended up takeing to derive her individuality as a liveing being. Her ability to go to light speed comes via her creation. She was made to be a super computer in a manner of speaking. So while in spaceship mode she rediercts outword inerssion of power that gathers within the ships power cells. that powers a certin device that gives her crystals more power. The crystals are used to cause a form of slipstream effect causeing her to gain massive momentum that uses her Reiatsu to propel her forwords. Upon reaching her designated speed she lets the 0 grtavity do the rest of the work. She tehn uses her reiatsu to come to a stop. It can wear her out in the end but thankfully she will still have the energy to remain in ship form to rest and restore her energy unless she was going to a specific planet that allows her to land upon its surface to take on her original state to take a nap or to feed.

It can work on earth. But its speed is limited. cause the distances it travel if used on the planet is completely diffrent. and the attacks it does may never be used unless she finds that she has no choice. The attacks are usually more focused to cause less damage to the area. but the whole thing that she will really need to use it at all outside of going to space is unlikely. Sense she trys to avoid fighting where at all possible. The only time she will is if family or friends are in trouble. sense she will have neither when starting off she will quite possibly be to sad to really do anything big till later on down the road anyway.It can work on earth. But its speed is limited. cause the distances it travel if used on the planet is completely diffrent. and the attacks it does may never be used unless she finds that she has no choice. The attacks are usually more focused to cause less damage to the area. but the whole thing that she will really need to use it at all outside of going to space is unlikely. Sense she trys to avoid fighting where at all possible. The only time she will is if family or friends are in trouble. sense she will have neither when starting off she will quite possibly be to sad to really do anything big till later on down the road anyway.

She has an even better access to her light hawk wings as well. Ryo-Ohki also has access to a weapon arsonal of Highly condensed particle lasers that can be used in rapid fire if the need arises. The lasers are powerful though the damage they cause to the surounding area they hit are minimal they are created to where the target alone tends to take the force of the attack. They can be considered to be the strength of 12 pounds of C4 explosives though the damage radias if missed tends to equil to a 3 foot round radius of the targets initial impact. this design is so that in her new mental state to try to reduce the damage to the surounding area to make it where her power is not as distructive as it was when she was being controled by an outside force.
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Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill:Adept
  • Demon Magic: Adept
  • Shadow Movement: Advanced
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Adept


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Adept

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Sun Apr 14, 2013 12:22 pm


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Hi there! Aivee will check this today!

First off : Those Light Hawk wings need to be less wiki'd since they looked like you pasted them, and second, there's a lot of things that need to be changed.

''The Light Hawk Wings are primarily a defensive shield capable of repelling virtually any attack. '' No. Nothing can repel everything. I'd suggest editing the wording here.

''It can be anywhere from 3feet all around the target to 100 feet.'' All around? This makes quite a LOOONG distance; I'd suggest reducing that a bit to match better with actual distance measures. 100 feet is about 20 people one on top of each other, if they were all 5 feet. That's a bit much for a splash effect.

Second: Her Phasing has no drawback, no cool downs, no anything. You could just loldodge everything. I'd suggest working on this, and elaborating it further so that it doesn't seem like that; like adding a weakness, like spiritually charged objects she can't pass in, or maybe something like she can only use it so many times. It's up to you, but that needs to be balanced out.

Third: Her adjustable states. It seems interesting, but how can she travel in space/move light years in mere minutes? You'll have to explain a bit more then that.

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Sun Apr 14, 2013 6:24 pm


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Light Wings: Nuclear type explosion? Please add in a radius for this and if it's that strong, a cool down on how long it's on cool down after use =w=

State: it's fine to travel through space. But how does she gather enough speed to travel at light years?

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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Mon Apr 15, 2013 4:34 pm

There we go updated again. I do hope the whole idea of the slipstream is not to confuseing If it is i can try to explain it better and or change it.
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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Mon Apr 22, 2013 5:49 pm


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Okay one FINAL question. This ship form; does it work only in space or does it work on earth as well? You don't need to add it, I just want to know to clarify it. x3

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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:13 pm

It can work on earth. But its speed is limited. cause the distances it travel if used on the planet is completely diffrent. and the attacks it does may never be used unless she finds that she has no choice. The attacks are usually more focused to cause less damage to the area. but the whole thing that she will really need to use it at all outside of going to space is unlikely. Sense she trys to avoid fighting where at all possible. The only time she will is if family or friends are in trouble. sense she will have neither when starting off she will quite possibly be to sad to really do anything big till later on down the road anyway.
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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Tue Apr 23, 2013 5:13 am



Do not worry nya! The Pawesome Aikuko-Nya is here!
This applications is minesh, nya~! So's let's get down to the ameowzing checking nya!


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  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Adept


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[list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b] Adept
[*][b]Mental Deduction:[/b] Adept
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Subject Post 8PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Mon Nov 18, 2013 10:12 pm


Moving this to WIP
Owner was notified of issues with the application, so changes are needed in order to make this acceptable again.

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Subject Post 9PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Wed Nov 20, 2013 2:40 pm

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Subject Post 10PostSubject: Re: Ryo-Ohki [WIP]   Thu May 21, 2015 1:09 am

I will unarchive this for you, but as is it will be denied. I do not accept copypasta from wikis as descriptions to powers. So change that.

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