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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Romano Stellare [2-1]   Tue May 21, 2013 12:29 pm




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» Name: Romano Stellare
» Titles:
» Race: Human
» Age: 22
» Gender: male
» Affiliation/Rank: To be added after Approval

Appearance:


Height: 6'0"
Weight: 175
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Personality:
Quiet: Romano doesn't talk to many people unless he is spoken too or when he is working. He can usually come out as being very meek and weak at first glance but that is not him at all. He may be very quiet, but he really has a lot to say about any situation that he may be in, he’s just rather shy around people that je doesn’t know very well, odd since he works as a model and parades in front of a lot of unknown people on a regular basis.

Courage: Romano is very brave. He never backs down from a challenge or a fight; he keeps going until he can't go on anymore even if it means his death though in some cases he will give up because he doesn’t want to face death just yet. He follows this same mentality when he is around people he knows and has vowed to protect with his life.

Intelligence: Romano is very smart. He graduated from an Astrophysics Program when he was 19. Because of this his university made him the manager of their big ass observatory. Romano loves his job but he does get lonely a lot because he had to grow up so fast. His vast knowledge can give him an edge in battle because of the intense physics and math courses he can predict the direction of attacks and how to deflect or counter them.

Lonely: Romano is alone most of the time. Because of his high stress, high paying job he had to give up having friends. Most nights he usually lies on a hill near the observatory and looks up at the sky not as a scientist but as a regular person just enjoying the sheer beauty of the sky. He really wishes that he had more friends; he has the time to hang out with them but because of his job and his powers most people tend to avoid him.
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» History:

~Birth and Unexpected Union~

Romano was born to a wealthy family in Rome, Italy. He was born a very sick child, the doctors told his parents after he was born that he had Leukemia and that he wouldnt be able to live past a few months before he died. His parents were very respected in the city but they had a very deep dark secret., they worshiped demons. Yes thats how they had gotten all their money and power they worshiped demons and had sold their souls ,and that of others, to get all they wanted and they planned to do the same to save their son. They begged the demons to heal and protect their son from all the illnesses in the world and the demons thought of a way to do it. They placed a demon inside of little Romano that had the ability to ward of illness and they asked for nothing in return for whatever reason. So they placed Narcissus inside of Romano to keep the illnesses at bay but they also wanted to get rid of him because he was getting on everyones nerves and what a better way to shut him up than to seal him inside of a human for a very long time.

Death of Mommy and Daddy Dearest

Everything went pretty normal for Romano when he was growing up whith one glaring exception. He was extremely smart. By the age of 12 he was done with school and had moved on to college to study Astrophysics and Astrology. He was completely mesmerized by the beauty of the night sky. He wanted to know how it all worked, what was out there and what people believed in oldent times about the sky and how it affected us on Earth. While he was working on his masters program when he was 16 one day he came home to a bloddy scene. His parents lay in the vestibule of their mansion in pools of their own blood, their bodies ripped appart while everything was coverd in blood spatter. The gleaming white marble of the house covered in blood. Romano had fallen to his knees in shock as to what could have done this to hisparents who had done nothing wrong to anyone in their own lives, as he was there crying a black fog started rolling in as a deep voice started talking.
"Long ago your parents sold their souls to us to gain their wealth and power. They also gave up their lives to us when they saved you from illnesses that plagued you at birth. They could not bear to live with the pain of having sealed a demon inside of their only son so today they asked for one more favor. They asked for you to to retain all of their wealth, status and memories while we made as if they died soon after your birth. They say they did it because they loved you but we say it is because they were foolish enough to think that having that disgrace of a demon put inside of you, I mean come on hes not even that powerful.... in retrospect we should have told them what we put in you. But oh well soon you will find out that having that thing inside of you is much more of a blessing than a bother, even if it is a very annoying one".

As the fog started to fade so did the carnage in the area as Romano got up and started to walk around the house. He started thinking about what he could do with all that money and power his parents had and what he was going to do with them. He decided that he wouldnt go crazy and spend it all but save it and use it to help people in need.

All the while Narcissus was inside of Romano desperately waiting until he had the chance to at least awaken Romano's true powers and he knew that that day was coming soon.

I want to be the first Supermodel in space!

After he had finished all his studying in the university by age 19 he was given a lofty position as director of the Astrophysics and Astrology department of the university where he studied and he decided to take it. But in the back of his mind he wanted to do something else. Alot of people had told him that he was really pretty and that he should consider going into modeling. Romano had thought about it and eventually he came up with a crazy idea: he wanted to become the first supermodel in space. To achieve his goal he started taking modeling classes at night and work at the university during the day.

One night while going home from his modeling classes he felt as if he was being followed, and indeed he was being followed but not by people. As he turned into an alley because he had gotten momentarily lost, behind him emerged hollows. Romano ran until he hit the wall and felt cornered. This is when Narcissus decided to make himself known to Romano. He started speaking to Romano as he controlled his host’s body, lifting his arms and activating his Sun power causing flames to erupt from Romano’s hands and incinerated the hollows. Narcissus informed him that he was more than just a normal human; he had special “God Given” powers that corresponded to the Roman Pantheon of Gods and other mythology. To get these powers he had to visit each of their temples and learn different chants that corresponds to each of his powers.
(He has access to all of his powers but I will write how he got each of them later.)
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Natural Abilities

Powers
Romano gets his powers from the planets and the stars in space. He accesses them via special chants that he learned when he Narcissus activated his sealed potential. Only 2 abilities can be used at the same time with the exception of Mars and Taurus, and Mercury and Aries, that can be used with any other abilities for a maximum of 3 -4.

Power Development Stage 1 Appearance: Solar Prince
In this stage Romano has no difference in appearance. In this stage he can use the powers of heavenly objects inside the solar system sucha s the planets the sun and other things. The weapons in this transformation are made of very hard stainless silver unless described otherwise.
Power Development Stage 1 Abilities:

Mercury: "Oh heavenly messenger grant me your swiftness."
This power grants Romano the ability to jump extremely high, about 50 feet, and increased agility and reflexes. It also gives him the ability to safely land when jumping or falling under his own volition, not if someone hits him an d sends him to the ground. He gains a silver spear as his weapon. The first effect can be carried over to other abilities. The ability looks like little wings on his shoes or feet.
Special Attack: Mercurial Crash: Romano Jumps high in the air and starts falling down with the spear in front of him. As he comes down he is cloaked in very sharp energy, sharp enough to slice through stone, that causes a very small explosion, about 10 feet in diameter, when he hits the ground.

Venus: "Oh beautiful goddess show me your inner darkness"
This power grants Romano the ability to create clouds of acid and make him seem like less of a threat if they are weaker than him, have a lower mental deduction skill than he does to figure out his whip causes an area of calmness. He gains a 7 foot long silver whip. He is not affected by this acid and his whip is also coated in the acid and is the thing that creates the clouds of acid when it is swung. It has a pH of 1 and acts just like Hydrochloric acid.
Special Attack Heart Eraser: Romano spins his whip around to create thick heart shaped clouds of highly corrosive gas. This gas can instantly eat through many things except the enemy, glass or sand. It can eat through steel in a matter of seconds. The damage done by it depends on how long the person is in contact with the clouds. The longer the person is in the gas the more damage they take because of its corrosiveness.

Moon: "Oh heavenly huntress shine your radiance upon these evil souls."
This power grants Romano the ability to control ambient and his own reiatsu as a weapon. He can create blasts of hardened reiatsu that are like sharpened glass. His weapon is a silver bow. Much like quincy arrows, but the difference is that they are so dense that they have their own small gravitational field, this allows them to carry other attacks with them if they are shot through an attack, say if they are shot through a blast of fire they have a chance of returning the attack partially or fully with them.
Special Attack Lunar Radiance: Romano gather alot of reiatsu in his bow and shoots a huge arrow to the sky. The next post hundreds of arrows rain down from the sky. The amount of arrows varies by the amount of ambient reiatsu. If it is high 700 arrows, if it is medium 400-600 if it is low 0 - 300.

Sun: "Oh blazing powerhouse of fire let your heat eradicate those that you have created." This power lets Romano control fire. The fire created in a brilliant Yellow-Orange. The fire comes out from his hands and it is hot enough to melt steel. He cant make more fire than 3 times his size (no more than 18 cubic feet). He has no weapon in this state. This fire can also selectively heal or harm people, an example would be that a person cound be in a flame and being healed whith no illeffects from the fire while someone trying to enter that same ara would be burned.
Special Attack Solar Flare: A flaming aura surrounds Romano and then it is sent out in all directions in a 50 foot radius sphere. It can be used for harm or healing

Neptune: "Oh drowning heavens rain down they blessed water." This power lets Romano control and create limited amounts of water. The water is a dark blue. He cant make or control more than three times his size of water (no more than 18 cubic feet). His weapon is a trident and it is the source of the water. This water can take any shape that Romano wants and can be frozen by him.
Special Attack: Blessed drops: Countless drops of highly pressurized from around Romano and start forming bigger and bigger orbs of water. They are then thrown at the opponent from all sides and when the hit things they explode releasing all the pressure in them. It has a range of 300 yards and a radius of 20 feet.

Jupiter: "Oh king of the skies, crash down your heavenly judgement."
This power lets Romano control electricity. The electricity is a radiant white. He can make shapes with the electricity as if it were liquid water and can control its intensity from something as small as a static shock, to creating massive static cling causing things to become stuck together to making a large hot bolt of electricity.. His weapons are two Chakrams and the electricity comes from his hands. These are as sharp as surgical steel are electrified and return back to Romano after he throws them.
Special Attack Lightning Fury: Romano charges his chakrams full of electricity and then throws them towards the sky when they collide with each other they create an electrical dischrage with a 25 foot radius sphere. This also sends out an EMP that makes electrical objects stop working within a 50 foot radius sphere, this effect is permanent unless they were built to survive an EMP .

Mars: "Oh red star in the sky protect and heal those that call upon you"
This power gives Romano extra strength. He can lift thinks 3 times his own weight. His weapon is a hammer the same size as Romano. He can also create shields of red energy as strong as quartz. These can be used while he is using other powers and can borrow properties from them.
Special Attack Healing Arena: A spherical area with a 25 foot radius forms around Romano. Those inside are healed and acts as a barrier from things that are outside. The strength of the barrier is only 1.5X the strength of his regular barriers and it lasts for 2 posts after it is summoned. The healing is very limited and can only heal to the point of fixing medium cuts and broken bones ( but not those things exclusively). This healing effect can last for up to 2 posts after it is called.

Power Development Stage 2 Appearance: Stellar Prince
He looks the same with the exception of the changes that are stated for each power and that all his weapons are coloured gold instead of silver. They follow the same rules of usage as the Stage 1 powers.
Power Development Stage 2 Abilities:

These are upgrades to the powers above. They follow the same order as the ones above.

Aries: "Oh heavenly Ram, grant me the power over the winds of change."
In addition to the powers given by Mercury this power gives Romano control over wind, giving him the ability to manipulate it at will as long as it doesnt go faster than 150 miles per hour. It also gives him the ability of flight. During this ability Romano has translucent wings, a golden spear and golden ram like horns on his head.

Special Attack Hamal: Romano starts glowing blue as the air around him starts spining faster and faster until he is surrounded by a twister of razor sharp winds measuring 25 feet in all directions that he can control at will.

Virgo: "Oh heavenly Maiden, grant me the power over thy fog"
In addition to the powers given by Venus this power gives Romano the ability to create a dense but physically harmless fog. This fog is a deep green color. The fog bank has a radius of about 25 feet and can be moved by Romano and regular winds. During this ability Romano has a golden whip and has the Zodiac sign of Virgo on his face
Special Attack Spica: The fog starts coming together until it forms a dense ball that starts glowing a bright blue. This is a ball of extremely hot corrosive gas. When it hits something the object is melted and eaten away by it in a 5 cubic foot area.


Sagittarius: "Oh heavenly archer, grant me the light to banish evil souls"
In addition to the powers given by Moon this power gives Romano the power to create portals. When Romano shoots something with an arrow he can create portals with it. He can create 5 human sized portals at maximum but he can create more as they become smaller but no smaller than one of his arrows. The portals can be interconnected as long as they are within 500 yards of each other. They are typically connected to the one created before it but if Romano decides to connect them in a different order after they are created the preceding portal is closed. So far he cant create portals to Hueco Mundo or the Soul Society.
Special Attack Ascella: Two white portals form around the target and face each other. Romano sends arrows (corresponding to the amount of ambient reiatsu as in Moon) into one of the portals that then sends it to the other one and continues to travel from in-between the two portals until it reaches the other one to start the process again until all the arrows are used, Romano calls off the attack or he runs out of energy to keep it up. The portals are about 15 feet apart and can follow the target but they lag behind the target. The portals take time to form so after the attack is called it takes effect on the next post.

Leo: "Oh heavely lion, grant the flames of your anger"
In addition to the powers given by Sun Romano can create up to 54 cubic feet of fire. The fire is a brilliant blue. This fire is extremely bright and can be seen for miles. During this power Romano is wearing stylish black sunglasses to protect his eyes from the light. The temperatures the fire can reach is far beyond that of his Sun power this one actually being able to reach temperatures as hot as the surface of the sun. This fire cannot be put out by conventional means but Romano can put it out at will.
Special Attack Regulus: Romano creates a 25 foot radius sphere of brilliant white fire that he then sends flying at the target. Once it hits something, if the object is weak enough (like trees or steel) that could be melted or incinerated easily it can go through them, if not the orb contracts and explodes into a 50 foot wide sphere.

Aquarius: "Oh heavenly river, grant me the purity of your waters"
In addition to the powers given by Neptune, Romano can create up to 54 cubic feet of water. This water is a deep blue. He loses the trident and gains a golden jug from where the water is created.
Special Attack Sadalsuud: All the water that Romano can make is shaped into a giant dragon. The immense pressure the water has when traveling can easily crush stone and steel. The force of an impact would be equivalent to being thousands of feet under the ocean, it moves at 25 miles per hour.

Ophiuchus: "Oh heavenly serpent, grant me the your struggles"
In addition to the powers given by Jupiter, Romano's electricity can be so powerful in this state that it can break through stone at its maximum power, but at the same time I can cause damage to his own body.
Special Attack Rasalhague: Romano lets out a very loud scream as electricity starts crackling over his body as it eventually forms a Snake shape about 10 feet wide and 30 feet long. Romano travels inside the snake. Because he isn’t protected from his own electricity it causes him damage to be inside of it, a small price to pay for dealing enough damage to just cut holes through buildings.

Taurus: "Oh heavely bull, grant me thy protection"
In addition to the powers given by Mars, Romano can lift 5x his weight. He keeps his hammer but now it is golden. The barriers are now as strong as steel. In this state he has small, red, bull horns coming out of his head.
Special Attack Pleiades: Seven white orbs of energy form a sphere, if possible, with a radius of 50 feet around Romano. This works like Healing arena with the differences that if something touches the orbs the orb touched explodes and the barrier starts losing its strength. It has a general strength of steel and it starts decreasing as the orbs explode if they are touched. The healing effect is only slightly stronger than Healing Arena's effect. It lasts for 4 posts after its creation

Zodiac Super-Nova: This is Romano's strongest and most devastating attack. When used an area that fits in a 100 foot radius sphere is surrounded by a circle with all the symbols of the zodiac. Then the area is sealed in an invisible sphere and then the area suffers a massive explosion that severely damages everything inside of it. This attack drains 75% of Romano's energy. This makes it very easy for Narcissus to take over Romano.

Citta Eterna: This is Romanos Strongest defensive measure. This creates bricks with all of the zodiac symbols of them that form a 20 foot radius see thought multicolored sphere that blocks out all incoming attacks. This ability drains extensive amounts of energy, about 25% of his full energy per every one of his own posts. It also needs extensive concentration so if he is doing it for more than one post he can’t act until he stops it. (This means if he is doing it my post length will be severely shortened and might not meet the requirements unless i am controlling enemies or any other of my PC's)
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» The Spirit's Name: Narcissus
» The Spirit's Race: Demon
» The Spirit's Gender: MAle
» The Spirit's Age: Unknown

» The Spirit's Pictured Appearance:
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» The Spirit's Personality: Narcissus is very self centered. He only cares about himself and to some extent about Romano since he harbors his spirit. Since Narcissus had dreams of taking over the world he desires to take over Romano's body to eventually gain a body and achive his goals of global domination. He is relentless when he wants to reach a goal but is generaly calm when doing so and calm when he takes over Romano


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» The Spirit's History:
Not much is known about his life before becoming a demon or what he did when he was a demon. All is known is that he wants to take over the world since he can remember. He ended up inside Romano because of Romano's parents. Since He was born a very sick child and Romano's parents were into demon worshiping they asked the demons to cure their child at any cost. The demons decided to put Narcissus inside of Romano to heal him and to get rid of him since his complaining was getting fairly annoying. And so far he has lived inside of Romano for 20 years.


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» Ziamichi Spirit Powers: (Put their powers here)

Persuasion: Narcissus has the ability to influence others opinions when he talks to them. The higher the tier of the target and the bigger the change in opinion the harder it is to influence someone. The influence itself is very minimal and he can only make people doubt what they know and if he keeps at it he can change what people think.
Intelligence: Narcissus is very intelligent and knowledgeable when it comes to demons .


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» Unique Traits:
Mirror Teleport: Thanks to Narcissus' extreme selfishness this lets him teleport through reflective surfaces with great ease. This only works on objects that are large enought for romano to fit through and he can specify a location to come out through if he doesnt know where the final location is the teleport will leave him at the largest reflective surface near within a 10 mile radius from the desired destination.

Unique Traits:
Romano has access to Narcissus' Intelligence ability and very minor parts of Persuasuion, Mirror Teleport and his ability to sense spirits and monsters.

Forms: Narcissus can take over when Romano uses 80% of his energy to ensure that his host doest die.

Drawbacks: Narcissus doesn't let Romano use his abilities for free. He thinks that because he awakened the powers inside Romano that Romano has to pay him back in some sort of way and that is by hurting Romano when he uses his natural abilities. It could be possible that Narcissus hasnt unlocked all of Romano's potential because if he did he would be destroyed.

Control: 8. Romano and Narcissus have come to an agreement. They have agreed that since they inhabit the same body but it was originally Romano's that Romano is the one that will control it most of the time but Narcissus can take over when needed or when he wants to do so. This interaction made Romano control when Narcissus can come out but there are still cracks for him to get out and take control.

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NOTE: Ziamichi's will have three to four skill sheets possibly. One for general skills, one for racial skills, one for the host's skill and possibly one for the spirit's skills if they are a different race.

Click here for skill sheet
Ziamichi General

» Ziamichi Host Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved. And yes, the Host can sometimes be stronger then the spirit.)

» Ziamichi Spirit Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of Ziamichi's. Don't do anything to this section, as staff will determine how strong your Ziamichi Class is from tier once approved.)

Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills For Host
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Host
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Host
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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General Skills For Spirit
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Spirit
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sync-Rate: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills For Spirit
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Romano Stellare [2-1]   Tue May 21, 2013 3:27 pm

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Comments/Notes: Alright a few issues I have noticed. First is the personality of both Romano and Narcissus. Can you expand a tad more you fit whiten the minimal need for it, however it feels very lacking and I can not do a will sheet. Try to go off more about his likes and dislikes Since it sounds like he brave smart, yet lonely because of his gifts, which you can expand a lot more into. What is his passion?

as for Narcissus side. Is redundant, you can do the same as I said above his passion his dream, what does he do when talking, habits etc etc .

Now on to powers.

"His power do drain his energy bit by bit but the farther away an object is from Earth the more energy the ability will need to be used. " You could of used a different system for his powers such as being themed around the planets, thus making it easier for him to use, but also still lets you use a different kind of power compared to others

"This power grants Romano the ability to jump extremely high and increased agility and reflexes. He gains a silver spear as his weapon. The first effect can be carried over to other abilities. The ability looks like little wings on his shoes or feet.
Special Attack: Mercurial Crash: Romano Jumps high in the air and starts falling down with the spear in front of him. As he comes down he is cloaked in very sharp energy that causes a very small explosion when he hits the ground."

You could expand on this a bit more, how high is the new jump is it more like flight now? how sharp is this kick, how strong is the blast? What is the weakness to it, is there a time limit?


"Venus: "Oh beautiful goddess show me your inner darkness"
This power grants Romano the ability to create clouds of acid and make him seem like less of a threat if they are weaker than him (tier wise). He gains a 7 foot long silver whip. He is not affected by this acid and his whip is also coated in the acid. It has a pH of 1 the same as Hydrochloric acid.
Special Attack Heart Eraser: Romano spins his whip around to create thick heart shaped clouds of highly corrosive gas. This gas can instantly eat through many things except its one enemy glass or sand. It can eat through steel in a matter of seconds. The damage done by it varies by the tier of the person. If the person is above his tier it does moderate damage, if it is under him it does grater damage."

The wording on this is a bit confusing, you can make this work by explain what creates the gas, is it the whip, does holding the whip make you immune to it the gas, And go into detail about what can stop it, and how it effects people other than high or low damage scale since it makes it seem like its a upper move to use on people.


"Moon: "Oh heavenly huntress shine your radiance upon these evil souls."
This power grants Romano the ability to control ambient and his own reiatsu as a weapon. He can create blasts of hardened reiatsu that are extremely sharp. His weapon is a silver bow. Much like a quincy his arrows are made of reiatsu but they are solid.
Special Attack Lunar Radiance: Romano gather alot of reiatsu in his bow and shoots a huge arrow to the sky. The next post hundred's of arrows rain down from the sky. The amount of arrows varies by the amount of ambient reiatsu. If it is high 700 arrows, if it is medium 400-600 if it is low 0 - 300. "

Quincy arrows are solid, however a issue here that it doesn't really make him different from a Quincy. So i would word it around better, and expand on how different his arrows based around the moon are compared to others, maybe add a little gravity element.

Sun: "Oh blazing powerhouse of fire let your heat eradicate those that you have created." This power lets Romano control fire. The fire created in a brilliant Yellow-Orange. He can control and make this fire to a limited extent since it burns hot enough to melt steel. He cant make more fire than 3 times his size (no more than 18 cubic feet). He has no weapon in this state.
Special Attack Solar Flare: A flaming aura surrounds Romano and then it is sent out in all directions in a 50 foot radius sphere.

How strong is this flame, how does the heat effect people, it feels weaker than it should be. Were does the fire come from

Neptune: "Oh drowning heavens rain down they blessed water." This power lets Romano control and create limited amounts of water. The water is a dark blue. He cant make or control more than three times his size of water (no more than 18 cubic feet). His weapon is a trident. This water can take any shape that Romano wants and can be frozen by him.
Special Attack: Blessed drops: Countless drops of highly pressurized from around Romano and start forming bigger and bigger orbs of water. They are then thrown at the opponent from all sides and when the hit things they explode releasing all the pressure in them.

Ah water, however you do the a range and a radius for his Blessed drops, also explain how and why the pressure explodes. Does his water have any special traits such as healing, etc. Were does the water come from.

Jupiter: "Oh king of the skies, crash down your heavenly judgement."
This power lets Romano control electricity. The electricity is a radiant white. He can make shapes with the electricity as if it were liquid water. His weapons are two Chakrams.These are very sharp and are electrified and return back to Romano after he throws them.
Special Attack Lightning Fury: Romano charges his chakrams full of electricity and then throws them towards the sky when they collide with eachother they create an electrical dischrage with a 25 foot radius sphere. This also sends out an EMP that makes electrical objects stop working within a 50 foot radius sphere.

Like the last two, what does it do, how strong is this compared to a normal lightning bolt, how sharp, what happens if the weapon breaks , were does the element come from.

Mars: "Oh red star in the sky protect and heal those that call upon you"
This power gives Romano extra strength. He can lift thinks 3 times his own weight. His weapon is a hammer the same size as Romano. He can also create shields of red energy as strong as quartz. These can be used while he is using other powers.
Special Attack Healing Arena: A spherical area with a 25 foot radius forms around Romano. those inside are healed if Romano wishes for them to be healed and acts as a barrier from things that are outside. The strength of the barrier is only 1.5X the strength of his regular barriers and it lasts for 2 posts after it is summoned. The healing is very limited and can only heal to the point of fixing medium cuts and broken bones ( but not those things exclusively)

This power theme kind of clashes with it self, first you say it grants him 3x strength not bad, the shields as well not bad defense and power means. However a healing ring? You need to expand in it, since if it heals all inside that he wish's and doesn't seem to have a drawback or no time limit

The limits on power stage two are rather intense to be usable. But before i go into what needs to be fxxed in those. please fix what i have asked so far
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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Romano Stellare [2-1]   Tue May 21, 2013 7:02 pm

Edited first round of powers and personality for romano. Will work on history and Narcissus after all powers have been fixed.
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Subject Post 4PostSubject: Re: Romano Stellare [2-1]   Wed May 22, 2013 5:00 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: advance
  • Mental Deduction: Adapt
  • Pain Endurance: Advance
  • Focus: Adapt


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Subject Post 5PostSubject: Re: Romano Stellare [2-1]   Wed Jul 23, 2014 1:14 am



「ARCHIVING」
Its been over a month, Archiving for inactivity; you know how to get it back <3
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Subject Post 6PostSubject: Re: Romano Stellare [2-1]   Sun Apr 17, 2016 10:30 am



✧EVERYTHING LOOKS GOOD TO ME✦


I'm going to be moving this character back to approved under the policy stated here:

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Scenario 2: If you are unarchiving a character, but you were active with the character in thread and earned their upgrades ICly, then we will not demote your tier. Instead, we will provide leniency and simply advise that you update your application to match the standards we have for 2016.

So update this character application when you get a chance to make it look nicer and more expanded when you have a chance.



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Subject Post 7PostSubject: Re: Romano Stellare [2-1]   Sun Apr 17, 2016 11:18 am

General Skills For Host
Durability: Advanced
General Speed: Adept
Strength: Beginner
Weapon Skill:Adept


Ziamichi Skills For Host
Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Advanced
Control Over Spirit: Adept
Seal Strength: Adept
Sync-Rate: Beginner

General Skills For Spirit
Durability: Advanced
General Speed: Adept
Strength: Adept
Weapon Skill: Beginner


Ziamichi Skills For Spirit
Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Advanced
Control Over Spirit: Adept
Seal Strength: Adept
Sync-Rate: Beginner


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