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|Subject Post 1Subject: Hadriel Duran Version 2 [APPROVED 3-5] Wed Jun 26, 2013 2:26 pm|| |
» Name: Hadriel Duran
» Titles: None, all of her titles are stripped since she was no longer associated with Hell after she lost her master, TelcinVohlis and was abandoned by Mr. Caveman. She was once the Succubus Queen before she was expelled from Hell by Queen Mana for refusing to show loyalty to her and Shadow Fall.
» Age: Appears to be in her mid-twenties.
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Rogue, Resident of Karakura Central
» Shifter Appearance: Given to her disconnection from Hell, she can’t maintain her true appearance as she is forced to conserve her energy while finding different ways to regain energy in form of a human after her soul stone in Hell was smashed by Queen Mana’s soldiers. She no longer looking like a red haired vixen with brilliant green eyes; instead, she became a plain, blond-haired woman with dull hazel eyes. While mortal, but ageless, she no longer could defy the effects of overconsumption and starvation; thus she can get fat and suffer when starving while her body becomes gaunter through that hunger. With a moderately plain-looking medium frame and light tan skin, she stands at five feet, nine inches and weigh lightly, so to the point, Hadriel is not the skinny, endowed woman that she used to be. Her facial features are more rounded than sharp, thus she carries a more innocent look on her face; her eyes are more opened than focused, her mouth and lips are loose than tight, and her nose was rounded and tilted higher than her sharper former; it is very likely that the only way that people would know that she is Hadriel is through her natural aura which retains her demonic origin. Because of her race, she has hard times holding onto jobs and has a low-budget, so she can only afford normal clothes instead of fancier gowns that she adored before. On top of her strange choices if she is still a full-fledged succubus, she replaced her revealing undergarments with a comfortable bra that looks a bit loose, but still gives her mediocre bust some appeal, and a pair of short boxers that contours to her rump and thighs, despite that she still wears panties from time to time. Her usual pair of footwear is pumps, sneakers or sandals of various kinds.
» True Appearance: Used to be free-willed and free of maintenance needs to transform to her demon form, even easier for her to do that over her shifter form, now her demonic soul is unstable enough due to the disconnection from Hell that even transforming to her true form becomes more like maintaining Bankai for beginners. When in her demon form, she appears skinnier and more endowed than her shifter form with large breasts, shapely thighs and a face that is sharp and devilishly charming to unwary individuals, regardless of their race. Her blond hair becomes paler and more tamed, but more radiant when hit with sunlight or moonlight, her eyes turned from dull hazel to illuminating green. She retains her height of five feet, nine inches, but she is as light as a feather. Protruding from her forehead and curled to a wave towards the back over her crown are ivory horns that are uncommon compared to the darker, charring brown horns that are shared by other succubi. She wears a black ball gown with a green silk vest-coat over it while having her entire back exposed down below the belt line, which exposes her thong and the top half of the butt-crack. From her lower-back are a pair of stony, yet fuzzy draconic wings that are three feet taller than she is and spans to over five feet per wing, equaling to ten and a half feet total if including the separation length between the wings. Belted around her waist is a sheathed long sword that is definitely made to execute those who posed a threat to her, but can also be seen as a focusing object for spells as the sword glows blue when pointing at a demonic presence and glows brighter when the source is closer to its aiming line. When in that form, she only has two posts until she becomes too exhausted to maintain her form and revert back to her shifter form.
» Personality: Hadriel was once a high roller of succubi as she desired to dominate those who are beneath her, which are those who would ask for her help or simply desired her company out of vanity and lust. Now disconnected of her powers’ source called Hell, she starts showing weakness as a former full-demon. She began to appear more submissive, but still have some aspect of dominance as she knows that she does not have the power to back up her dominance and if she is being apprehensive for too long, she will see herself as being insecure and lose her self-control. She was used to the fact that she can easily manipulate emotion of unwary people, but without that shield, she began having feelings that she is unsure of herself and at unpredictable moments, thus she is prone to impulsive behaviors. Frequently, she became more curious about things because she does not have easy access to her magic and demonic wits, so she is likely to experiment with things and discover more about what she could do as a human. Being a natural born demon, she has a very hard time understanding humans, so when she speaks, she refer other people as “humans” and activities as “human-things.”
When she turns into her demon form, her personality shows arrogance, glee for pain and the joy of chaos. She becomes cold, wild and manipulative while downright vicious. If one would think she can only lure unwary individuals to sexual killing, they would most likely not expect a fireball-punt from her nighttime speeding fly-by that can clock over two-hundred miles an hour. The moment she transformed will be immediately be followed with her drawing out her long sword because it amplifies her ability’s concentration level, but to Hadriel, it is just awesome for her to draw out her sword and feel like being on par with her more powerful rivals. If she already planted a virus, before she changes back to her more innocent side, she would leave a command that only her demon side would know, so there are chances that Hadriel’s human side would unwittingly cause some chaos by reciting the command out of nowhere due to her spotty memory. When it comes to spotty memory, some of her impulsive behaviors are mainly her hindsight of memory, a side which she cannot remember about, but had a feeling it is related to something in the past.
Experimenting with new things and feelings (she became naturally curious now that she is “powerless.”)
Being dominated by who she admired (she used to be a servant for a long time, she is used to it to the point of seeing it as something romantic.)
Sales and discounts (they are new to her and she likes how much money she still has after all the discounts and sales for things that she needed or wanted.)
Shadow Fall (their soldiers are responsible for Hadriel’s soul stone being destroyed.)
Ideology of Conquest (she believes in TelcinVohlis’s ideology of balancing chaotic events with mutual encounters.)
Being dominating (she used to be that way, but as a human, she feels more insecure when being that way for too long.)
» History Hadriel was spawned from the depths of Lake Azrael through a demon summoning ritual by whom she believed to be TelcinVohlis, though she could not remember how she could last far longer than other summons. A few months after her spawning, an archduke discovered her and enslaved her, forcing her to work for it. While enslaved, she was taught how to fight because the archduke will be expecting her to fight for it soon, but the plan was changed when it discovered that it can exploit her for more minions with the use of her unique spawning ability, which allows her to give birth to many permanent spawns and bolster a small army for ambitious individuals. After learning how to fight effectively, she wounded the archduke during its tenth time bedding her for more minions and escaped Hell without bearing anymore minions. Hunted by the archduke and her “children,” Hadriel moved around the world almost continuously.
While on Earth, Hadriel’s name was chosen on Hadriel’s own whim as she needed a name to go by. Throughout her traveling, she was trying to understand humans and how to manipulate them to gain dominance, including sex, fetishes and natural chemicals that are within the living beings and unwary spirits. Through her practice, she matures her powers to the point that she is capable of dominating her own kind, self-proclaiming in her arrogance to be the Succubus Queen. More than ten years ago, Hadriel met TelcinVohlis, who persuaded her into servitude with the promise of power and a purpose beyond her racial intentions with a spell that invaded her mind with such promises. Throughout her time as TelcinVohlis’s apprentice, she practiced the demon lord’s magic and watched over Mr. Caveman while he is growing up, but soon, she returned to Hell on a mission with her newfound knowledge of sorcery fueled by the power of Hell.
She was greeted by the furious archduke, who is intending to have her in chains and bound to its service for good. The table was turned the moment that the archduke accused her of using abyssal magic, which was a talented form of demon magic mastered by TelcinVohlis. However, the case was not pursued as the archduke and his soldiers are dropped out of existence through a spell that only TelcinVohlis knew about, but even denied the knowledge to Mana and her royal family. She returned to Lake Azrael to create her domain, where she bred her minions and crafted a soul stone to assure her full immortality, denying herself death. She continued to service TelcinVohlis as a debt while watching over Mr. Caveman’s progressing until TelcinVohlis was destroyed by Foiche Solas, relieving Hadriel of the servitude to TelcinVohlis and onto the service of Mr. Caveman.
A couple of days before the event taken place in Malaysia’s capital city, Hadriel took an opportunity to seal Mr. Caveman away because she wanted to be free after a long time of servitude and the fact that Mr. Caveman is planning on using explosives to finish the job that TelcinVohlis was trying to do, to send Sukai Karakura crashing down and wiping out Karakura City. She used a technique she learned from TelcinVohlis to manipulate Mr. Caveman’s memory and then used a spell called, “Abyssal Cell” to seal him away into the Abyssal Dimension of Karakura Forest. After that, Hadriel left Earth and returned to Hell once more to regain her independence. A day before the Malaysian Invasion, a small group of Shadow Fall minions approached her with an offer that she could not refuse or they will try to kill her. They wanted her to join Shadow Fall and provide her loyalty to Mana, her “Queen Supreme.”
Hadriel scoffed at the idea that the Succubus Queen would kneel to the likes of Mana and refused. The fight ended with Hadriel’s escape, the death of one of Shadow Fall’s ambassadors and later the destruction of Hadriel’s soul stone in Lake Azrael, condemning Hadriel for her treason against the Demon Royalty. Upon returning to Earth, she appeared naked and changed in Karakura Forest; she is disconnected from the source of her power (Hell) and is now a mortal, ageless human woman with noticeable flaws. Shortly after her arrival, she meets a man who tossed her a duffle bag of clothes and took her to be registered as a Citizen of Karakura Central. Due to her poor budget and frequently being fired from jobs due to her race, Hadriel struggles to adapt to her new lifestyle.
» Natural Abilities: She has an unstable demonic soul, which prevents her from transforming and maintaining her demon form with ease and should she try, it will sap half of her strength and can only last her two posts after the post of transformation. Using demonic spells and summoning can also be taxing on her strength, but they remained the same strength as before. Until she reconnects her soul with Hell, she cannot use her adjustable states. She can still use shape-shifting, but only to do minor adjustments to her body because using it once for that will render her exhausted and hungry, but should she fatten herself up with enough food and drinks, she can used the stored up energy to do the same without becoming exhausted and hungry, but for only once per time she used her excessively stored energy amount. Possibly from her immunity to acid, she can get drunk, but cannot reach the level of alcohol-poisoning that it would be lethal for her. She retains her ability to contain more content within herself, thus allowing her to expand to extraordinary sizes while having innate control of how she could contain it, thus it is possible for her to swallow a bomb and have it detonated within her and expel the pressure out before it causes her to grow too big for the space; cartoony, but practical in a strange way.
» Demon Abilities: When she is in her demon form, she can ignore costs for demonic magic and skill based abilities as for two rounds, she has the ability to manipulate the reishi in the air and the reiatsu from people. Due to the area effect, most would see it as a wind ability that can redirect reishi and reiatsu-based abilities away from her or against their allies. After two posts of manipulating the spiritual energy field, she can infect individuals with a spiritual virus that can change the temperature in certain parts of the individuals’ body to produce heat-induced chemical imbalances, which to spirits can cause fevers or minor illnesses like colds and minor exhaustion, but for the living, it can produce chemical substances related to adrenaline, hormones and even ecstasy to manipulate erratic emotion, an internal illusion of desire, fear or other wants or needs. Addictions can only happen if the virus was affecting the individual for too long (over three threads.) After using that ability, she is reverted to her human form, exhausted and hungry for something to eat and drink. Effects may vary and will be negotiated with players of the intended targets as the player of Hadriel is required to initially allow other players to choose their own erratic emotions or sicknesses once per thread should they consent to being affected or reject it within plausible grounds of reason. Za Koa Skills become beginner level due to her unstable soul while all demon skills except for Demon Magic are only usable in the demon form. Shadow Movement is utilized by teleporting to a shaded area, regardless if her previous location is well-lit, but when flying, she can be significantly fast during nighttime as a passive affected by Shadow Movement. Akuma Kyodo can only affect how hard her wings can be against attacks because as her wings are stony by appearance minus the fuzziness, it can be treated as a solid shield that can deflect any energy-based attacks, including Death Energy, but physical attacks can still hurt her wings and potentially prevent her from flying by making enough tears into her wings; Akuma Kyodo can also affect how fast she can regenerate while her wings can regenerate two times faster than her body in demon form.
- Za Koa Skill: (forced Beginner due to disconnection from Hell)
- Demon Magic: (Can be used in either forms)
- Shadow Movement: (Only in demon form)
- Akuma Kyōdo: (Only in demon form)
- General Speed:
- Weapon Skill:
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Hadriel Duran Version 2 [APPROVED 3-5] Wed Jul 10, 2013 10:21 am|| |
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