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Subject Post 11PostSubject: Re: Nistelkov [Approved, 0-3]   Sat Sep 06, 2014 2:50 am

Archived due to member inactivity. Just post here if you want it back.

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Subject Post 12PostSubject: Re: Nistelkov [Approved, 0-3]   Sun May 31, 2015 9:49 pm

please pull this character out of archive.

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Subject Post 13PostSubject: Re: Nistelkov [Approved, 0-3]   Sun May 31, 2015 10:19 pm

Will do. The next time you request an un-archiving please be sure to do it in the staff request thread, not the app itself. Thank you.

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Subject Post 14PostSubject: Re: Nistelkov [Approved, 0-3]   Thu Nov 05, 2015 11:44 pm



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Archive Due to Inactivity!

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Subject Post 15PostSubject: Re: Nistelkov [Approved, 0-3]   Sat Dec 09, 2017 7:30 pm

[adm]Moving this to unchecked, as this needs to be reviewed again.[/adm]
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Subject Post 16PostSubject: Re: Nistelkov [Approved, 0-3]   Mon Dec 11, 2017 12:19 am

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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
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Stripping Seal

This is simply too powerful for no true drawback. This should be removed.

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Temperature control: This is a subset of Nis's abilities, and one that he often uses to confuse and make his opponents wonder what his abilities are. While this will never be as strong as a pure fire or ice user of his own level and skill, it is often good enough to fight off those under him, and he can often do it on a much larger scale then most pure fire or ice users. Nis is often seen using one half of this ability to create heat to light his cigaretees, but that is not even close to the limit of what Nis is capable of doing as he could easily set the building he is in on fire with a mere thought by increasing the heat in one area while weakening the air around that fire to allow it to spread hundreds of times faster. This also goes the very same with the cold, as Nis is often seen chilling his beers by simply touching them and removing the kinetic energy of the atoms to freeze it, so in theory it is much easier for Nis to freeze something then it is for him to burn it.
This is too powerful and too different when compared to the rest of his Zanpakutou's abilities. Set a limit on the distance of what he can change the heat of.

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Kinetic Energy Absorption: This is one of Nis's most infamous, though not fully understood abilities, as from the point of view of everyone else it simply seems like that Nis is an unstoppable monster that seems to be able to take a insane number of hits without so much as a scratch on him. This is simply not the case, as how his abilities work that he absorbs a total of seventy-five percent of the total kinetic energy that he is hit with, which is upgraded massively to nearly eighty percent when he is holding completely still. This energy is then stored within Nis's own body for later use, either though his Zanpaktous storage or his own seals store which he then uses to push forth the rest of his abilities.
The absorbtion percentages needs to be reduced to 50% and 75% respectively.

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Kinetic Energy Emission: This is Nis's most well known ability, but it is often confused with his skill in Hand to Hand Combat, which more often than not Nis does not have to use this ability in order to get the job done that is needed. Nis has the ability, by either using his own reiastu or stored kinetic energy, to create a large amount of effects. One of those effects is increasing the power of one of his punches or another object by hundreds if not thousands of times depending on how much energy he puts into it. Another one of the more common uses for it is creating a force field made fully out of kinetic energy, which is completely invisible and nearly undetectable to those who are not looking for it and the strength of it all depends on how much KE Nis puts into it.
This just needs drawbacks overall.

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Kinetic Energy Steal: This is one of Nis's capture abilities, as he simply robs his opponent of all his bodies- non vital kinetic energy leaving him unable to move and unable to do anything else. This makes it more effective then any Bakudo as there is no amount of strength or spiritual pressure that can break out of it, but this has a very serious down side as Nis has to be touching you the entire time for it to work. This is also subject to the strength of the person, as it would be easier for Nis to do this to a child then it would be for him to do it to a Captain, this means that he has to hold on to that person longer then normal for the effects to happen. This effect also stops if Nis ever lets go of the body, making this a nearly impossible move to do in anything but a one on one fight.

This effect should not be immediate. Have it take one round of posting to take effect.

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Kinetic Energy Absorption: In this form, Nis's ability to absorb and take in energy is increased majorly, as he is now able to take in nearly 90% of the energy and then store it within his body to release later. This makes him more able to control the force and generate it easier with less energy.
Change that percentage to 80%

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Fast Charging: In this form, Nis is capable of charging even large objects, about the size of a small car in mere moments and sending them flying. This also increases his normal charge ability massively, as he can now charge smaller objects instantly and with more power then before.
This requires more explanation. There is not a charge ability mentioned before, so that would need clarification.
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Kinetic Energy Delivery: This is one of Nis's most dangerous abilities as it allows him to use his spiritual control to make the kinetic energy more effective then normal. This would allow him to use nearly half of the kinetic energy as before to make the same result, which can save Nis alot of energy and other things.
This just requires more explanation and more drawbacks.
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Subject Post 17PostSubject: Re: Nistelkov [Approved, 0-3]   Mon Dec 11, 2017 12:59 pm

Hello,


Fixed the issues but you can move him into denied or back into Archives. I am looking back over the standards and I don't think he will make it for the status he would be in now.

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