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Yuu Doragonraion [Tier 1-1|Spiritual Human] Galatea_manga




A Hero Will Rise -- Future World Music -- UHCM -- Pride of the Lion
Power of Infinity -- Sonic Symphony -- UHCM -- Occult of the Dragon
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moving to unchecked due to request.
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Name: Drakonlev Blik (ДраконЛев Блик "Dragon-Lion's Glare")
Type: Gaze
Primary Property: Slight manipulation of target's body part's trajectory path.
Secondary Property: Cancels out eye-based ability if in eye-contact and active.
Method: Locking sight on a target's body part or on target's eyes if aware of eye techniques.
Benefit: Defense against eye techniques and last resort act of evasion.
Drawback: Target becomes more resistant with each consecutive use within the same thread.
Description: (INACTIVE UNTIL ACQUISITION CONFIRMED BY STAFF) Usually when used, the target would "hear" a sound as a warning that she is using her gaze technique; thus they have a reason that they can be better prepared against it later on, but not all would notice that all the time as the sound is brief and would be drowned out in a chaotic battlefield both physically and mentally. Despite its ability to divert attacks while it is in motion, she cannot use it against projectiles that are already in motion, so she has to make a last second manipulation of the target to make it look like she diverted attacks. Her further limitations involve her target being more capable of resisting it with each consecutive uses on the same target in the same thread due to conditioning, and with it, she can only affect those who are using their strength at level of advanced or below, but she can also affect those who are master or grand-master if they held back their strength to that degree or below. She has a limited use for it starting with 1 use per thread, but her limit of use increases with each first day of the month passing after she unlocked this gaze ability. Using it again after using up the uses in the same thread will cause migraines, which makes her less likely to tolerate pain and to focus due to her being distracted by her head throbbing.

You state that she is "only" able to affect those who have a strength level of advanced or less then you go on and state you can affect master and grandmasters if they are holding their strenght back to that degree. so what determines them holding back their strength to this degree? also these means you can control anyone. this confuses me "her limit use goes up with each first day of the month passing after unlocking this ability" so after gaining this the usage will end up just going up? honestly i think you will need to add a post count to this.


Name: Reserved Mimicry
Type: Mimic
Primary Property: Allows Yuu to copy one ability.
Secondary Property: Allows Yuu to keep the ability permanently.
Method: Grapple
Benefit: Allows Yuu to acquire a chosen ability.
Drawback: Replaces itself with the ability permanently, regardless of passive or active nature.
Description: Only when in glow stage of either one of the two reiatsu, Yuu can reach out and grab hold of someone before linking with the target. The process takes 10 posts to complete and when linked, the target can still mentally fight back by entering their inner world while outside forces can still attack Yuu without having her fighting back and the same with the target. If Yuu manages to outlast 10 posts undefeated in the inner world, all denizens will fall into a sleep and Yuu can access their memory or the soul body to acquire an ability that is either bodily or spiritually. She cannot copy core racial abilities like the use of Releases or Racial Skills, but she can copy peripheral abilities like the Demon's Unique Ability, The Shinigami's Shikai Ability or the Superhuman's Pure Ability. Given to Yuu's excellence in combat practices and craftsmanship, having the ability would spark an inquiry on what she really wanted. As final note; if she failed, she keeps this ability, but cannot use it for the thread as she will be very exhausted when she is ejected from the target's inner world, plus enough willpower can force the inner self to wake back up to continue the fight even when time is up.

this ability you need to add that it requires the other person's permission since you are copying their character's ability. also is this a one time use ability or what? also how much is enough willpower to continue the fight even when time is over? as i was told by other staff this will possibly require admin checking


• Sacred Release Powers: Generally, the reiatsu's radius is increased two-folds of its original full release as Yuu's reiryoku reservoir is lightly being tapped into, which boosts her reiatsu greater than intended. Regardless of which reiatsu, she can only sustain it for 100 posts versus throughout the thread. If she is in one form of reiatsu, she has to reseal herself to the point of being not powered before she could change the type while the remaining timer will drop down by 6 posts if she switches, the total amount of posts she has to take to power down, change and rise back up. If her time is up, she cannot use it again until New Year's Eve as she needs that much rest to recover her deep reservoir of reiryoku that she spent on the power. She can still use her Glow and Full Reiatsu stages even when she cannot use Sacred Release Powers.

alright the big issue with this is that it is something that can not easily be kept track of and as a result if an issue arises it can not easily checked to see if it has been properly used. if it was thread count and a limited number of posts in as limited number of threads that would work much better to be much easier to keep track of. since 100 posts for a whole year isnt something that can be kept track of so easily.

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Sun Feb 23, 2014 5:43 pm
Dragon-Lion's Glare
--Added sentence to expand a bit on how a master or grand-master of Strength could hold their strength back.

Reserved Mimicry
--Explained the purpose in its own spoiler.

Sacred Release Powers
--Added Spoiler, "Meta-Game Factor for Sacred Release Powers"
--Added agreement terms for Staff within said spoiler.

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Name: Drakonlev Blik (ДраконЛев Блик "Dragon-Lion's Glare")
Type: Gaze
Primary Property: Slight manipulation of target's body part's trajectory path.
Secondary Property: Cancels out eye-based ability if in eye-contact and active.
Method: Locking sight on a target's body part or on target's eyes if aware of eye techniques.
Benefit: Defense against eye techniques and last resort act of evasion.
Drawback: Target becomes more resistant with each consecutive use within the same thread.
Description: (INACTIVE UNTIL ACQUISITION CONFIRMED BY STAFF) Usually when used, the target would "hear" a sound as a warning that she is using her gaze technique; thus they have a reason that they can be better prepared against it later on, but not all would notice that all the time as the sound is brief and would be drowned out in a chaotic battlefield both physically and mentally. Despite its ability to divert attacks while it is in motion, she cannot use it against projectiles that are already in motion, so she has to make a last second manipulation of the target to make it look like she diverted attacks. Her further limitations involve her target being more capable of resisting it with each immediate and consecutive uses on the same target in the same thread due to conditioning, and with it, she can only affect those who are using their strength at level of advanced or below, but she can also affect those who are master or grand-master if they held back their strength to that degree or below willingly or by unforeseeable constraints, which can be used by her clever opponents to lull Yuu into a false sense of apprehension and trick her to use up her gaze technique. However, she has a chance of spotting that out and not use it. She has a limited use for it starting with 1 use per thread, but her limit of use increases with each first day of the month passing after she unlocked this gaze ability. Using it again after using up the uses in the same thread will cause migraines, which makes her less likely to tolerate pain and to focus due to her being distracted by her head throbbing.

two issues with this ability first it needs its own limit for usage no real world time. second remove the part about masters and grandmasters holding back their strength as this doesn't really make much sense.

for your scared release i still stick to what i said before it is something that still can not be kept track of easily and a limit needs to be made for either number of threads it can be used for or how many posts it lasts with in a thread.
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Wed Feb 26, 2014 2:52 pm
Fixed for now.

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Thu Feb 27, 2014 10:24 pm

Regardless of which reiatsu, she can only sustain it for a long period in a single thread

please state how long she can maintain this forum.


She has a limited use for it starting with 1 use per thread, but her limit of use increases with each first day of the month passing after she unlocked this gaze ability.

Please just give this ability a simple usage instead of trying to have it grow over x amount of time or whatever this can be taken advantage of.
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Fri Feb 28, 2014 8:47 am
Fixed.

However, for Dragon-Lion's Glare; I did not use the month according to your recent checking.
UHCM wrote:She has a limited use for it starting with 1 use per thread, but her limit of use increases with each thread she is involved in after the thread she acquired the ability.
But I changed it to,
UHCM wrote:She has a limited use for it starting with 20 uses per thread.

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Mon Mar 03, 2014 11:22 pm

Name: Drakonlev Blik (ДраконЛев Блик "Dragon-Lion's Glare")
Type: Gaze
Primary Property: Slight manipulation of target's body part's trajectory path.
Secondary Property: Cancels out eye-based ability if in eye-contact and active.
Method: Locking sight on a target's body part or on target's eyes if aware of eye techniques.
Benefit: Defense against eye techniques and last resort act of evasion.
Drawback: Target becomes more resistant with each consecutive use within the same thread.
Description: (INACTIVE UNTIL ACQUISITION CONFIRMED BY STAFF) Usually when used, the target would "hear" a sound as a warning that she is using her gaze technique; thus they have a reason that they can be better prepared against it later on, but not all would notice that all the time as the sound is brief and would be drowned out in a chaotic battlefield both physically and mentally. Despite its ability to divert attacks while it is in motion, she cannot use it against projectiles that are already in motion, so she has to make a last second manipulation of the target to make it look like she diverted attacks. Her further limitations involve her target being more capable of resisting it with each immediate and consecutive uses on the same target in the same thread due to conditioning, and with it, she can only affect those who are using their strength at level of advanced or below. However, she has a chance of spotting that out and not use it. She has a limited use for it starting with 20 uses per thread. Using it again after using up the uses in the same thread will cause migraines, which makes her less likely to tolerate pain and to focus due to her being distracted by her head throbbing.

okay add one thing state how resistant one becomes as they get affected by this ability.
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