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Subject Post 22PostSubject: Re: Sting Chikara [Approved: Tier 0-3+]   Sting Chikara [Approved: Tier 0-3+] - Page 3 EmptyMon Mar 01, 2021 3:14 pm

@Rawk wrote:
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Electro Defense:
To what degree does this ability hold out? Does it have limits? It should definitely have them written out.

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Electric Current Armor: ...The ECA induces attacks. Spiritual abilities are adsorbed onto the lightning armor; they are then shifted to Stings rear alongside the flow of the current, prior to being released.
Is this just immunity to spiritual abilities on top of all the other stuff? If it is, that's too powerful without some serious drawback.

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Te no shihai ni te (手の支配に手)
I'm having trouble parsing exactly what this does. It could use some clarification.

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Be gone:
This ability is definitely too universal as it stands. Currently it seems as though just being slower than Sting means you're totally at his mercy, it definitely needs some serious reworking.

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Velocity Control:
This needs some limitations on its effectiveness, currently it's just unilaterally powerful with no real drawback.

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Augmented Punch:
How much does it increase? It says the maximum is increased, not the minimum, so it should never hit a point where the simple contact would shatter bones.

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Carbon based skin density manipulation:
Diamond level durability increases at such a rapid speed is a bit much. Pare back the durability or the speed of its reaction.

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Destructo:
I don't really see how this relates to the rest of the Ress powerset outside the ability to coat them in carbon with punches, it's hard to give this a proper approval therein.

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Carbon Burial:
Everything that happens without the final strike is a bit much considering the effects the ability already has.

Hello -

With Electro Defense and Electric Current Armor the weakness is quite obvious in that the network redistributes pressure/energy, thus you increase pressure and energy and you over-come the defence. While I don't understand the necessity to build in work arounds into my abilities that can be reference from an OOC perspective to gain an advantage, I have added a further limitation to these 2 techniques.

"Be gone" - As mentioned in the techniques description "It’s rather easy to dodge especially with Sonido or Flash Step" and is additionally only used to remove an opponent who is incapable of moving, unless there has been a massive shift in the power scale in my absence I don't understand the necessity to seriously rework this.

"Te no shihai ni te" - Literally translates to Hand to Hand Control, its an explanation of his fighting style and why he favours Hakuda/Hand to Hand.

"Velocity Control" - Principles of Physics still apply, as with any technique of spiritual nature, the characters spritual energy influences the velocity of molecules, the easiest way to over come it is to release greater spiritual energy, if you would like I can detail that in the in the technique but I feel as if I may as well tell everyone I fight how to circumvent all of my abilities wouldn't you agree?

"Augmented Punch" - Amended. Added some clarification on its capacity with a bit more background.

"Destructo" - No idea why I had that, removed.

"Carbon Burial:" - Could you elaborate on this one? I've increased the carbon spread duration to 3 posts. But for mild contact with the carbon the spread takes 35 post which I believe is a reasonable tradeoff for effectively being turned to carbon.
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