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The Cat
The Cat
Experienced Member
Joined : 2014-06-28
Posts : 552

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Rachael Lorelei (Human)(Approved 3-5) Left_bar_bleue24000/10000Rachael Lorelei (Human)(Approved 3-5) Empty_bar_bleue  (24000/10000)
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Sun Jul 06, 2014 9:25 pm
The Spiritual Human Template

Basic Information
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• Name: Rachael Lorelei
• Titles: Bitch, Bitchface, Bitchy McBitch
• Age: 19
• Gender: Female
• Affiliation/Rank: Vanguard Member

• Appearance Description: Rachael is a tall, thin girl with an attractive body that she would rather not flaunt around, as per her personal preference. The only thing that's lacking is her chest, honestly (C-cup at most). Her legs are plush but not abnormally fat, her face is well rounded and quite cute, and her general figure is quite curvy in all the right places. There are times when she wishes her bust was bigger, and times when she would rather it stay just as it is, but all that is usually dependant on the situation. Her hair is long and blonde, with her bangs cut neatly above her eyes. Her hair doesn't take any particular style, as Rachael is too lazy and unmotivated to try any particular style.

Often times, Rachael wears what looks to be a school outfit which consists of a white dress shirt underneath a blue blazer, with a blue bow around her neck. Her skirt is cut low so it stops just above her knees, and underneath she wears black skin tight shorts so no one gets an upskirt view of her panties. Her thigh high socks are black, and she wears loafers that are surprisingly capable for combat, thanks to a few extra straps and added material on the bottom for friction.

The two final pieces of Rachael's appearance are her dog ears and tail. Normally, when Rachael goes out, she'll hide her tail between her legs and underneath her skirt, while wearing a headband that keeps her ears pressed to her head. These are results of DNA mixing while Rachael was still in her mother's womb.

• Appearance Picture:Rachael Lorelei (Human)(Approved 3-5) Doglady_zps6c0e14e8

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Personality

• Personality: To put it very simply and bluntly, Rachael is a bitch. She is not pleasant to be around at all except for under very very few circumstances. Having grown up alone in a test chamber, WHILE still being taught about the outside world, practically tortured, and almost having to kill your parents as a test tends to have some pretty damn negative effects on one's psyche and behavior. Rachael often looks down upon others, not as if she were higher than them on some hierarchical level, but as if all humans are utter scum that are better off dead. Rachael also includes herself in this group, as she knows she's no better than humans. In fact, she believes herself to be the lowest of the low. This isn't because of a lack of self-confidence, but is rather because of her great self-confidence. She knows her place in the world, to some degree, but she's still confident in her abilities and powers. Occasionally she's confident to the point of arrogance and stubbornness, leading to her untimely mistakes most of the time.

One of the most notable things that Rachael likes is chocolate. Yes, chocolate. She finds great delight in the sweet confection to almost no end. Eating until she is sick is a common event for her, and she does it almost regularly. She's surprised her powers aren't based around chocolate, actually, and she'll even joke to herself about it here and there. Another thing Rachael likes is nature and animals, as they don't do anything wrong unless provoked, so it's not their fault. With humans, almost everything they do is wrong (at least to Rachael). Whenever Rachael sees animals or nature being abused she gets livid and almost goes rampant. Almost. She tends to keep onto the few shreds of humanity she has left and just ignore it to the best of her ability, but she can't deny it makes her even more bitter the more she sees it.


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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers

• Natural Attributes: Rachael is surprisingly good at both acrobatics, and being a lazy bitch. Her physical strength and speed without reiatsu surpasses most people's due to her animalistic mutation. Her senses are also incredibly heightened, with a few added abilities here and there, such as night vision.

• Powers:
Power I:

• Pure Abilities:

  • Aura Sensitivity: Rachael is sensitive to other people's reiatsu, and is much more skilled in detecting and locating a person through their reiatsu than some other people. She doesn't specialize in it, so she's not the best, but she's above average at it. Even if someone were suppressing their reiatsu, if they let even the tiniest bit slip away, Rachael would know almost instantly and could find them with minimal effort.

  • Enhanced Abilities: Rachael's physical abilities are enhanced greatly due to her aura, giving her super strength, super speed, and a couple other things. For her tier (whatever it is at the time), she'll be above average in terms of ability, but like her aura sensitivity, she wouldn't be as good as someone who specializes in a specific front unless she too specialized in that ability. For example, if someone focused on making themselves physically stronger most of the time, unless she focused her aura into her arms (leaving the rest of her exposed), then she wouldn't be as strong as them. This goes for other abilities as well. This isn't limited to strength or speed, however, as it could also effect things like precision and flexibility and such as well.

  • Enhanced Senses: Rachael can see far distances and read words from incredible distances away because of her aura, hear things not many other people should be able to hear, smell things from possibly miles away, taste things more strongly, and is even more sensitive to touch things (although this doesn't mean she feels more (she doesn't feel pain more, for example) she's just more sensitive).

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Sacred Release

• Sacred Release Appearance: Rachael's eyes glow red.

• Sacred Release Powers: Rachael becomes more sensitive and skilled with her aura, making it easier to manipulate and use her abilities and powers. A side effect of this is actually her ability to read people's emotion. Rather than just being able to read emotion, though, she can feel it as well, but without it influencing her. If someone were hostile towards her, she would feel it, but due to emotional barriers (and her aura) she can completely bypass the influence of feeling another person's hostility and not feel hostile in return (although due to her personality, she'd feel hostile in return without a doubt, the example is just that she isn't influenced by what she feels from another person). However, the "feeling another person's emotion" part only comes into play when Rachael is within 10 meters of a person. Otherwise, she can read a person's emotion by watching the color of their aura change. Red means anger, for example, blue means sorrow, yellow may mean happiness, purple may mean calm/seriousness, so on so forth.

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Ascended Sacred State

•Ascended Sacred State Appearance: She dun haff this yet.

• Ascended Sacred State Powers: Noooooope
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Background History

• Background: Rachael hasn't exactly had the happiest (or saddest) life, as she was born straight into a testing facility, where her very own parents experimented on her and many other children in sick, twisted ways. The reason Rachael has her doge parts, is because canine DNA (from a shiba inu) was grafted into her while she was still in her mother's womb, and so she came out with little stumps on her head and tailbone that eventually developed into her ears and tail (which function exactly like real doge ears/tail). After she was born, she was stuffed in a glass encasement that was filled with liquid reiatsu and left there to develop for a year. Due to other things being connected to her, several tubes and wires and whatnot, she was able to develop normally like any other child. She was fed breast milk that was extracted from her mother, and food was injected into her to keep her from starving or dying from lack of nutrition. Meanwhile, blood was taken from her monthly, and she was constantly drugged to stay asleep. It wasn't until her first birthday that she was let out of her tube and into the real world to develop. She showed signs of somewhat enhanced intelligence and capability, which made her parents very happy, but she wasn't as good as later test subjects. Still, her parents took time out of their oh so busy schedule to actually take care of their daughter like real parents. By the age of five, Rachael was a blissfully ignorant and happy child who had absolutely no idea there was a world outside of her 5x5 meter box. Fresh air was pumped into her box and she was exposed to people who had reiatsu almost constantly, to the point where she was producing reiatsu of her own by the age of five. The reason it took so long was because the other people's reiatsu weren't very powerful, and as such, didn't exactly influence her to start developing her own until years later. The liquid reiatsu her parents had gathered was forcefully taken from an ex-lieutenant Shinigami. Said Shinigami died afterwards, as he was killed by Rachael's parents.

When Rachael was ten, she was finally exposed to the other test subjects, all of which had known each other their entire lives. Except for one... there was a single child that was taken from the outside world, and he begun to tell the kids about it. Rachael's parents kept lying to her, telling her no such thing existed, and so she would deny the existence of it whenever it was brought up. Yet the single child would keep talking about it, to the point where the other kids slowly started to believe him. This lasted for a good few months, until a certain day when a specific test was made on all the children. There were ten, in this particular group, and they were kept in a cell for about five hours a day before being separated into individual cells. Said cells were soundproofed, with speakers in the ceiling, and every wall and square inch of floor was padded so the kids wouldn't hurt themselves. Rachael's parents would come in and give her toys and food and play with her like real parents should, and the most harmful thing they did to her by the age of 12 was extract small amounts of her blood every month or two. By the age of 13 though, things started to change... Rachael hit puberty, and then on her thirteenth birthday, she was put in a cell with all the familiar faces of the other kids. They were undergoing strange changes much like her (puberty), and one day, they were subjected to a strange test.

One day, without any warning whatsoever, the wall of the group cell lowered to reveal a glass case holding some strange creature. It was oddly shaped, but was highly reminiscent of a canine with a massive white mask and huge fangs. Its claws were almost the size of the children themselves, and they could all do nothing but sit and watch as it tried to break free from its prison. For a good five minutes, it failed to break through while every kid hid in the corner, scared for their lives. Eventually, the glass shattered, and the scientists and parents watching started to panic. Some burst into the cell, guns blazing while the kids sat in the room with no idea as to what was going on. The creature merely ate the parents and scientists that burst into the room, until only Rachael was left. It reached the cowering inu girl as she tried her best to curl up into nothing in the corner, and just before it reached her, its head was split clean in half. Her father had saved her, a sword in his hand, and her mother came rushing into the room to hug her and make sure she was safe.

Time skip to age 19, present time, Rachael lives in Karakura town with her parents, and she has a basic understanding of the world around her. It was such a drastic change from the blissfully happy world of her cell to the cold, uncaring outside world, that it took a bit of a toll on Rachael's psyche and personality. She was forced to hide her tail and ears while she went to school, but that didn't last long, and so she was homeschooled instead. Now she just does whatever she wants, and her parents hardly see her. Their little girl has grown up into something they didn't expect, and she may even be more powerful than they ever hoped to be. Their experiments worked, albeit hardly, but just what exactly has that done to their once adorable little child...?
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See Skill Sheet for More Information

General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


Human Reiatsu Sheet
  • Power Control: Adept
  • Energy Usage/Regeneration: Adept
  • Energy Resistance/Endurance: Beginner
  • Physical Augmentation: Beginner


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Roleplay Sample

• Roleplay Sample: Already did one :V


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Hayuko
Hayuko
Bearer Of Hell
Joined : 2010-06-19
Posts : 714
Age : 28
Location : United States

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Rachael Lorelei (Human)(Approved 3-5) Left_bar_bleue15/100Rachael Lorelei (Human)(Approved 3-5) Empty_bar_bleue  (15/100)
Tiers:

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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


Comments/Notes: I see nothing wrong with this, just know when your developing your powers in the future to run it by staff again; and that your enhanced abillities are "Enchanced" relative to your tier and skills; but your approved! Have fun!
Tier: 3-5
Pockeh
Pockeh
Metal as Fuck
Joined : 2010-12-11
Posts : 3387
Age : 28
Location : Where all sinners congregate

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Rachael Lorelei (Human)(Approved 3-5) Left_bar_bleue44400/999999Rachael Lorelei (Human)(Approved 3-5) Empty_bar_bleue  (44400/999999)
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Archived due to member inactivity. Just post here if you want it back.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Tue Nov 18, 2014 9:26 pm
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