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Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Basicinfo_zpsc1udqi6y


» Name: Vegeta Asthavon
» Titles: Prince Vegeta, Prince of All Demons
» Height: 5'5"
» Weight: 123 pounds/56kg
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Shadow Fall

» Age: Vegeta's Origin age spans over thousands of years if you are to count his past lives, however as physical being Vegeta has lived for near two hundred years. Being birthed precisely as his father sacrificed himself in order to have a heir. His physical age appearance remains to that of a thirty year old human.

» Shifter Appearance Written: The Danava spirit within him being the Demon race once known as "Saiyans", a race of demons that were killed of by a Leader and his men; thousands of years ago. The original form of a Saiyan was always known to be a Great Ape. A colossal creature that was able to level realms with relative ease due to their high spiritual power and physical attributes. However, since the race was long eradicated their abilities have been lost in the transit of time. The tail that is wrapped upon the human-form of the Demons is now cut at an early age and maintained to ensure they do not return this form again.

Long ago, Saiyans were garbed with armor and clothing that was made through spiritual energy and grew as the user transformed into the Great Ape. Their eyes become entirely red as their spiritual pressure emits a maroon close to that of blood. These Great Apes hold their user's natural colored hair when they transform. Their size is multiplied by 100 and their weight stays within proportion, though has never been recorded.

» Shifter Appearance Picture:
Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Taro-the-great-apesmall_zpsvnasjlhb

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Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Personality_zpskebzlsir

» Personality:

Proud

Pride is Vegeta's main point when it comes to his personality. His abilities and origin as a Danava are based upon it. There is nothing that Vegeta takes on without some sort of pride involved. He is never ashamed of his actions, and finds little to no regret in anything he has done in his past. He sees it to be the man he is today and without it, he would not be the same proud Demon he is. His character is built around the concept and as such he is what follows.

Charismatic

Being the proud Demon that he is, he cannot help but spur his pride unto others. When Vegeta speaks it digs deep, his words affect those around him whether it be to rally them up, or to shut them down. His words, when harsh, sting. Kind words, though they are rarely spoken, are sentimental and full of meaning and truth.

Conflicted

Being alone for most of his younger years, he has a sense of what is wrong and what is right. Although, this is true he still learns from his mistakes on a day to day basis, but doesn't entirely understand the wrong he has committed until it explained to him deeply, or he has put in enough thought. Though he does not stray from his pride and regret anything he says or does.

Determined

Vegeta is nothing, but determined. His training and his quest to be the strongest Demon to exist keeps himself busy on his downtime. He is constantly striving to achieve his goals and will do anything to accomplish them.

Arrogant

Proud, yes, although he is also arrogant due to this. He does not take other people's words into consideration and constantly shuns good thought. This is, unfortunately, and downfall to his pride. He does not allow things that are outside of what he already knows into consideration and is stubborn to think anything other than what he does.

Deep Down

Although all the things above seem to make Vegeta look like a terrible person, deep down he is rather sympathetic when he needs to be. He may not say, or do, the nicest things or treat everything with the proper respect. However, he does care for those that are close to him and ideas that mean a lot to him, and will defend them with all of his might in order to protect them.

Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] History_zps2tvigwc8

» History:

Demise of the Saiyans

Tens of thousands of years ago the Saiyans, a sub-race of demons, hid among the human race. The Saiyans had sworn themselves to Earth claiming to be their saviors, and answering to all spiritual danger within the realm. While the Saiyans had given their word to the planet Earth, their were slaved by the Demon-race, though not many knew of such.

When the Saiyans came into existence their souls were bound to their leader. The leader was always known as the Origin of Pride, this leader held diplomatic ties with the demons. However, the Origin of Pride could be a poison of sorts and too much pride has been known to break a man. Which is exactly what happened. After a few hundred years the Origin of Pride wished for the Saiyans to be more involved with Demonic politics. They wished to help the Demon realm in their endeavors. The Demons refused, telling the Saiyans their allegiance to the Humans was too strong and would only result in conflict between the realms. The Origin of Pride became furious releasing his powers and killing a few of the organization's leaders before being slaughtered himself.

After the events took place a genocide was placed on the Saiyan race in order to find the new Origin of Pride, their mission was to eliminate the Origin of Pride completely destroying its life cycle. While the Demons failed to find the Origin of Pride, not expecting it to go to the bastard child of the Origin of Pride, they executed nearly all of the Saiyan race with the exception of a few refugees.

Thus, the Saiyan race was exterminated... However, the Origin of Pride would live on.

Birth of the Last Saiyan

As time progressed, those that survived the genocide were hunted and killed one by one, until the only surviving Saiyan was a man known as Vegeta. He called himself to be a King, but never pronounced what, being aware of what his future would be if he did. It wasn't but two hundred or so years ago that he would come across a female that intrigued him so. Mana Asthavon, now known as the Queen of Demons, there was a evil that brewed within her that King Vegeta yearned to keep by his side. Through his efforts of trying to wed and bed the woman she would come to tell him that she would bare his child and provide him an heir, however the child would forever be at her will. The King wished for an eternity with the woman, but he would fall short to the deal that was at hand. It was that day, the Origin of Pride would find his only vulnerability to his Origin to be love.

As the child grew, the King could feel his power slowly dwindling away as his love for the woman grew stronger. However, knowing that he was unable to obtain her ached him inside and diminished his power. As she was placed into labor, a chaotic scene that is, the King was pale white and lacked all strength. It caused those that attended the birth confusion. Even the King himself could not understand what it was that was happening. As the child was brought to life it was taken from the King.

Mana knew who King Vegeta was and what it was he stood for. Not only this, but she knew the one true weakness of a man's pride before he had shown himself. This was her plan from the beginning, to take the Origin of Pride out of the grasps of the Saiyans and eliminate the last living soul. She would then take his heir and have it raised to be a soldier for her own cause. While she killed the King Vegeta himself, she would not kill the Saiyan lineage. As when the child was birthed a tail would be seen sprouting from his vertebrate. As such, Mana saw the failure in her efforts, however she was not disappointed. She knew that what she had was much more valuable than saying the Saiyan race was forever gone. However, the boy would never come to know what the Saiyans were.

The New Origin of Pride

Two hundred years later, Vegeta(named after his father) would become known as the Prince of Demons. As he grew up, he would learn about his powers and abilities and become one with his Origin and speak with his past lives. However, it would still remain a mystery to him about his true lineage...




Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Naturaldemon_zpsfed8zlwe

» Natural Demon Traits:


Shadow Movement: This is what some MIGHT call the Demon's Answer to flash step: Shadow Movement. It allows them to move at quick burst of speeds on most occasions to allow them to travel very far distances in short amount of times, that is for certain. Though, this is where some similarities come to an end. Unlike most other races, Demon's get many nifty benefits then just Super Speed. Take this for example: from the seals on a demon's legs and feet that generate insane amounts of energy from all of the sources of power they collect; it will be able to give yourself temporary boost of intense speed called "Shadow Burst". Shadow Burst is a period of time where your demon will double their speed on average if they are at least adept. It will transition into how fast their attacks are created or launched, the demon's reaction time to increase the odds of evading, countering or noticing a person, object or anything else within a vicinity that has a prense in order to do something about it, it increases their mental awareness to more alert levels and it even goes into their natural powers.


Akuma Kyodo: Thanks to the full body seal most demon's have on their bodies from birth, Akuma Kyodo gives most Demon's a layer of defensive skin that is similar to an Arrancar's Hierro. This will be general defense, though if have a high Za Koa Skill, you can temporarily double your defense. Masters can do it for ten post, Advanced for seven, adept for four and beginners for two. All come with a three post cooldown. But that's where the similarities end, and the differences begin. What makes a demon's Akuma Kyodo: so different? Well, for instance, this layer of skin is not just applied physically like Arrancar's are or any other races natural defense. What makes a demon's defense stands out is that it applies to magic, spiritual attacks, their environments, how resistant they are to poisons or toxins and even how much their mental state improves.

You see, thanks to having so much magic being pumped into their bodies, their defense is MUCH more wide spread then any Shinigami, Arrancar or even Iramasha. Basically, the higher your defense is, the most attacks, barriers or ANYTHING in general; the more resilient you are to anything offensive being thrown at you. So a demon's Akuma Kyodo: is not something to scoff at, ignore or consider the same.


Kage Chōkyō-shi: Kage Chōkyō-shi is the ability for most demons with adept Za Koa users to travel through different dimensions, travel throughout the battlefield or even use it for defense. By channeling Za Koa's energy in addition to the various seals throughout their body in addition to their Shadow Movement, they are able to create many different dimensional holes in the area's around them; each of them being able to range from a small vicinity such as a few inches, to the size of a city block depending on their Za Koa skill. These can lead to other realms; while there is also the possibility it can be used to shield against attacks if they are not more powerful than the demon and be used on the offensive by attempting to slash the opponents attack in half by creating one of those opening in the center of their assault.

Although, it's also worth noting that this is mostly a passive skill to allow demon's to travel through different areas on the site; such as moving back and forth through the Soul Society, Living Realm and so forth. Those with advanced and Master in Za Koa Skill will begin to see ways to utilize it in battle; such as creating waves of blackness meant to consume limited attacks. Even more than that, the few of these people who do manage to master it will only be able to use it a limited amount of times in battle in association with their energy. So if one were to try and use it more than two or three times per post, they'd tire themselves out.

Za Koa Skill: Za Koa skill is how much skill your character possess to manipulate the energy from the core. Typically, this should be your strongest asset when it comes to the skill sheet. The higher your mastery of this ability, the more techniques you are able to create, use and share. However, this has many more uses then that.

Za Koa's Influence: For example, an advanced Za Koa Skill user at two tier is capable of spreading this technique across an average battlefield in order to taint the surrounding vicinity around them in order to gain the upper hand in combat. These advantages include that all of their stats are typically doubled if the influence is not sealed away or fought with magic. So, going back to our two tier demon, he would be able to obtain a doubled increased in his abilities, powers, speed, endurance, reaction time, mental thinking, knowledge and so on and so forth. Users whom are Master in this skill can usually get triple benefits, and Grand Masters quadruple.

Along with those enhancement boosters, another advantage of Za Koa's Influence is that it can also alter the area around a demon in order to give them the upper hand. For example, our two tier demon will be able to dim the area around him into darkness in order to make himself even more formidable as demon's are naturally inclined to become more useful in the shadow's, being able to generate various toxins in the air in order to gradually wear someone down, create harsh acid rains, for the terrain they are on, turn an ocean-type battlefield into pure fire and things of this nature.

Knowledge Of Environment: Another trait gained from spreading Za Koa's influence throughout any given area is that typically most demon's are given knowledge of their surrounding vicinity. For example, if our two tier demon had performed this within Karakura Central, it would be able to detect various hidden sources in the immediate fighting area such as hidden barriers, seals , spirit beings within the area and things of this nature. On a master level, this would allow some demon's to even detect various elements within in a being. This can be from a persons Zanpukto Spirit, to scanning JUST how much energy they have in total left in them, searching for any unusual traits about their body such as abnormal defense or offense and things of this nature that CAN be detected. This knowledge ability, however, only gives you the knowledge to beat something. Actually beating it, however, is another story.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.


Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Origin%20abilities_zpsgc7vrq35

» Origin Name: Pride

» Origin Power: Last of the Saiyans

» Origin Abilities:

Strength in Defeat

When Vegeta is pushed beyond his limits and almost put into submission, he is able to call out to his ancestors of the Saiyan decent. Doing this will allow him to gather energy from those that have held the Origin of Pride before him. Being pushed beyond his limits will allow him to access a pool of spiritual energy that will grant him a rejuvenated state for a short duration as he tethers his Demon Soul to his past lives. In addition to a rejuvenated state, he will also be able to perform in an advanced state that is equal to that of 1% of his power which will become permanent. This only triggers once a thread and cannot be triggered by willingly letting himself lose to his opponent. If Vegeta is defeated while in his Saiyan form he will be reduced back to his Basic state and the buff will then be applied. This buff is stackable with the buffs provided from each Super Saiyan stage, however only the origin's buff will become permanent with the basic form. For clarification, if the Super Saiyan buffs and Strength in Defeat buffs are used together, only the Strength in Defeat buff will be applied forever: not the Saiyan buffs.

If Vegeta is to die completely and be unable to be granted the Strength in Defeat buff, he will be reanimated as a Demon in Hell and will be unable to gain access to his Origin Powers until he has met with his body once again. If his body is to be completely destroyed with death he will have to harvest enough energy to reanimate his body using the spiritual pressure that has been dispersed upon the world.

When Vegeta dies his spiritual pressure compresses and turns into seven circular balls that are scattered upon the realm that he has lost his body in. When these balls are all gathered and embued with an other's spiritual pressure Vegeta will be able to be summoned once again. However, if this does happen Vegeta will gain a buff similar to Strength in Defeat. Vegeta likes to call this a Saiyan's Revenge to those that think they can get rid of them forever. This buff will give him a boost in tier. However, all seven balls, also known as Dragonballs, must be summoned at the same time and within the Demon Realm.

Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Atma_zpsjemfirg6

» Atma Vatou Name: Big Bang Attack

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: Vegeta uses Death Energy to produce a large scale orb attack produced from his hand. If and when it does make contact with the target, it will inflict multiple hits when it makes contact. Once inside of the attack, the target will be stunned as they are impaled by the attack then knocked back. During this time that the attack is produced, Vegeta is able to move freely. This attack cannot trace to the opponent, and travels in a specified trajectory(the path that his hand is facing). This attack takes a few seconds to be charged and produced, so canceling the ability is possible by attacking him. Any damage done to Vegeta while he is producing this attack is doubled and will also knock him back as well as the enemy as the energy disperses from his hand prematurely and implodes due to the unstable nature of the Death Energy. The hit radius of the orb is two and a half feet, and easily dodged, however it does travel at a high speed.

If this ability is used within a Super Saiyan state it will spread upon impact inflicting all that are within the hit radius(15 feet). The higher the state the stronger the attack, simply put.


» Atma Vatou Name: Galick Gun/Cannon

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: Vegeta uses Death Energy to channel a beam from both of his hands placed together, wrist to wrist. Similar to Big Bang Attack the attack will inflict multiple hits when landed, and will only cause the opponent to stagger after the attacks have been completed. This attack also does not trace the opponent and is sent in the same trajectory his hand is, just as Big Bang Attack is. This Atma Vatou is Vegeta's most diverse ability as it has several different ways of being used. The hit radius of this ability is two feet and is channeled over a short period of time, depending on how much power is put into the attack. This ability will fatigue Vegeta as any other ability and cannot be channeled for a duration that will one hit the opponent, unless the opponent is significantly weaker than him.

When Vegeta enters his released states this ability becomes known as "Galick Cannon" the hit radius is doubled/tripled as well as the damage.


Double Galick Gun: The implied effects of the ability are as Galick Gun, however the main difference is that this attack is able to be fired from both hands, and typically aimed at two opponents or an opponent that has a high velocity. The attack doesn't necessarily have to be fired at the same time, but usually is. The damage inflicted is half that of Galick Gun as well as the hit box for the ability.

Galick Beam: This ability is on a much smaller scale, as the attack is produced from the finger tips making a total of five beams. This ability is used mainly when trying to hit vital points of the target. As it is a highly condensed version and is used to pierce the body of its target. The radius of these attacks is only one inch, meaning it is difficult to land. However, the strength in the five beams is twice that of a normal Galick Gun and will fatigue Vegeta more than a normal blast.

Galick Blazer: This attack is similar to that of Big Bang Attack, it just lacks in the strength of other abilities. This attack is used mainly to stagger the foe in order to give his ally a chance to strike a fatal wound. This is a support ability and is used strategically instead of brutally.

Final Galick Cannon: This ability can only be used in a released state. Similar to a normal Galick Cannon, just this is a last resort of sorts. After taking a substantial amount of damage Vegeta's pride rises, not letting the smell of defeat clog his nostrils. Vegeta uses this pride to produce a large amount of Death Energy through his Origin and is able to produce a blast with a radius of 20 feet at a distance of one mile. Separating himself from his enemy and cratering everything that is in the blast's path. This blast is equal to ten times the normal damage of a Galick Gun and will most likely take not only Vegeta to his knees, but all that reside within the hit box. This ability will send Vegeta out of his released form and into an unconscious state, giving him an immunity debuff to all healing abilities for a long period of time. This being said, it is best for an ally to bring Vegeta out of the battle for this duration and to safety as he will no longer be able to fight for the remaining duration of the battle, most likely.


» Atma Vatou Name: Hellzone Grenade

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: Vegeta sends out of a flurry of up to 20 Death Energy spheres to a specified target. These spheres trace the enemy's reiatsu or spiritual energy and will follow them up to a distance of one mile. Once Vegeta signals the spheres to close in on the enemy by closing his fist the orbs will shoot in toward the target at a rapid speed impaling them with blunt damage and vanishing most likely knocking the target back, causing them to stagger. It is possible for one to flash step out of this ability with ease, however it will have to be timed properly. If one orb is touched by the target the rest of the orbs will shoot to that damage to inflict the damage without Vegeta having to prompt them. If one orb touches another or multiple they will implode and emit a small amount of damage to anything within 2 feet of the contacted area.


» Atma Vatou Name: Final Flash

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: Throwing his hands to his sides, Vegeta will call out the incantation of his ability as he normally does. Death Energy will build within his palms and will then be combined into to one large scale attack that outweighs the damage to that of Galick Gun and Big Bang Attack. This ability regulates damaged based on how much damage Vegeta has already received and the amount of drive he still has to finish the fight. In most cases this beam will be fired up to 500 feet and will be approximately 80 feet in diameter. As all of his abilities do, this ability will severely fatigue Vegeta and cannot be used more than once within a thread in addition to all other Final abilities.


» Atma Vatou Name: Final Impact

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: Using his index finger, middle finger, and thumb Vegeta gathers Death Energy based on how much damage has been taken and his drive to win the fight. The more damage taken the more powerful the attack will be. Vegeta condenses Death Energy similar to that of Galick Beam, however only from three points. Making the potency of the single beam attack much more powerful. The diameter of the beam is 1 foot and has a range of 200 feet. This ability is considered to be a "one shot kill" if landed, however the small hit box it has makes it hard to do so and must be used circumstantially. This ability, as other Final abilities, can only be used once a thread.


» Atma Vatou Name: Final Explosion

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: This ability is Vegeta's End-game. Vegeta will gather all remaining Death Energy that resides within him. Once he has reached his limit, he then self-detonates himself emitting a high powered blast to a three mile radius. This dome that is created around him travels at a slow rate, making it able to dodge. However he would not use this ability just willy-nilly. Just as his other abilities, he would have to use this strategically and sacrifice his own life in order to execute the attack. This attack will kill Vegeta in the process and most likely any other opponent or ally that is within the hit box. Those that survive this attack will take a substantial amount of damage and most likely put them out of the fight.


» Atma Vatou Name: Super Saiyan

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: Vegeta gains a boost to all General skills as well as Determination. In addition, Vegeta will be allowed to use Cannon abilities as well as gain one level in tier.


» Atma Vatou Name: Super Saiyan 2

» Atma Vatou Appearance:


» Atma Vatou Abilities: Vegeta gains a boost to all General skills as well as Determination, including the buff that is recieved from Super Saiyan. This will also allow him to use Cannon abilities as well as two additional tiers from his base form.



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» Aliṅgana State Appearance:(Super Saiyan 3)
Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Vegeta_SSJ3_rendersmall_zpscngfr1as


» Aliṅgana State Abilities: Vegeta gains a boost to all General skills as well as Determination, including the buff that is recieved from Super Saiyan and Super Saiyan 2. This will also allow him to use Cannon abilities as well as three additional tiers from his base form.

» Unnata Release Appearance:(Super Saiyan 4)
Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Vegeta_SSJ4_Transmall_zpscvisyo1w

» Unnata Release Powers:

» Unnata Release Abilities: Vegeta gains a boost to all General skills as well as Determination, including the buff that is recieved from Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan 2, and Super Saiyan 3. In total, the specified skills will move up half a level. Therefore, if he were to have Adept strength he would now be halfway to Advanced, etc. This will also allow him to use Cannon abilities as well as four additional tiers from his base form.


Vegeta the Davana of Pride [1-3, 1-2, 1-1, 0-5, 0-4] Skillsheet_zpsdhi1ki0t

Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner












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Alright, this was requested by CPK to be moved back into the active character section. Therefore, I will be moving this character and hope to see it active by CPK. Good luck.




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[mod]MOVING TO INACTIVE CHARACTERS DUE TO INACTIVITY[/mod]


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