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♕ Annabel Erobern♕
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Basic Information
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☨ Name: Annabel Erobern
☨ Titles: Pure One
☨ Age: 76 years, but appear as 8
☨ Gender: Female
☨ Affiliation/Rank: Little Princess Of Erobern Family

☨ True Appearance Writing: Annabel is a bit taller, then regularly one would be at age of 8, making her one meter, forty centimetres tall. Her body built is quite thin, as the girl is a bit underweight. The girls nails are a bit too long too, almost turning sharp at the end. As strange, as it may seem, they are kept coloured, so they would suit the girls outfits. Her hair are long, pass the waste, and curls up at the tips. The colour varies from black to dark blue or violet and it mostly just depends in what kind of light you are looking at them.
The girls skin is pale, fare and seems as fragile, as the thinnest parchment. All her veins and blood vessels are well seen(talking about those near ones skin) and on touch her skin feels really soft and frail, as the blood vessels are felt very well. On top of that, her skin has a weird property of illuminating in dark. Actually, she is doing it all the time, but in dark it is well seen and may seem creepy for few.
But surely, the most noticeable feature in her are the girls eyes. They are big as a child of her age would, with long, black lashes. What is strange, the fact, that her pupils and rainbow of the eyes had completely merged and spread through the whole eye. Annabel has no whites and in dark it seems, that they are just two, empty pits. What else, when the girl is hungry, angry or using her powers, the eyes actually do turn completely black, with a red circle in each of her eye. In the states mentioned before, her fangs can also be very well seen coming out from her mouth.

In clothing
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Personality
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☨ Personality:
Annabel will want to control anything, that happens in her world. Mom will need to give her, what she desires. Sister will need to act, as she wants to. Dad will give her as much love, as she will demand and all family will be under her little palm. Well, that is as she sees it, at least. Is it true, probably not, but Annabel doesn't know that and good thing she doesn't.

When she doesn't get, what wanted or, if people don't act, as she would see it fitting. Or, if world wouldn't work, as she would see it right, the girl can make such a tantrum, that one wants to close his ears, shut his eyes and die. And sometimes it actually happens. The girl in her anger can take not one, but tens and dozens of lifes, just to let her rage to go somewhere. But it won't go as a mad monster just destroying anything in her way. No, if she will decide to let her frustration really out, the girl will methodically find ways how to torture one the most. Be it slow death of one they love or some emotional trauma, she will look for this weak spot to use. And, if there will be no to find, the girl will physically cause pain so long for a person, he wish, that he would die. And then the girl would give him a eternal life...Of suffering.

As a good trait, she is academical. Even after her mind was stuck at age of six, she was able to learn and putting it together with her childish curiosity, want to please mother, open mind and urge to be the best, she was a incredibly quick learner. Maybe this was one of the main reasons why she is actually so capable, when using her powers, knowing that the little one haven't had a single fight to use these abilities.

Then she is sweet to those she like. The girls love is easy to get and she will never let harm be done to those dear to her. Family will be in the first place, no mater what and even her dolls will be treated with pleasant affections, if they had satisfied her needs. And even after she had been angered, if one survives her “punishment" the little lady will once again be nice and sweet.
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Background History
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☨ History
Like any birth, Annabels coming to existence was a miracle to start with. She was the fruit, what comes, if two people love each other enough. The first memory she has of them, is more of a feeling, then anything else. It was the warmness of love, gentle skin of her mothers arms and a rough kiss on her forehead from father. Then there is the affection of others. They made her feel safe...Loved...Important. You can say, that from very birth started her growth into what she was now.

Her first years passed as any newborn would. She played, learned about the world around were spoiled by the mother and father. They had servants, money and so she grew more and more in the thought, that everything and everyone must belong and obey to her whims. Then came the four year step, when the girl started to learn the hierarchy of Erobern. First comes Mommy, then Daddy, after him is sister and her, and then everyone else. But even with this, she found a way how to control mostly all people around her. The key action was to listen, what Circa told her. If she behaved, her mother was on her side. And somehow everyone did, what Mommy told them. And....Everyone did, what Annabel told them.

Then came her sixth birthday, that changed everything. Like always, it was a big celebration for everyone. Cake, presents and so were being prepared and so. Even those, who wasn't too found by the girl, knew that the feast was just worth all the trouble. What was strange in that day, the little birthday girl wasn't coming out of her room. No one had went to check on her that day, so a servant went in to check on her...And his headless body burst just out of the room and directly in the wall. From the place Annabel stepped out, both eyes colored in ink blue color, one having a rose head shaped pupil in it. The girl had sharp, long and black claws, from mouth dripping black Icker. Her hair looked like soaked in the thing, dripping stuff on the floor and sizzling it. Even Annabels stance was beast-like and the only sound coming out from her mouth was a growl and roar.

It took quite a time to constrain her, but in the end it was done and Annabel was put in a place, where not her or anyone else would get hurt. So, what happened, someone could ask. As it seemed, until then, Icker in the girls body was just collecting itself in one place, not making any effect of her body or soul. Until then she had no powers, whatsoever and was completely like a powerless human. But then, on that day, the collected Icker just burst through all her body, pulling from her genetic code also the power she shouldn't have at that age, Emperor’s Eye. The power put together was so great, her mind and soul was on a brick of crashing. To prevent it, the girls mind went to a coma like sleep, leaving Icker as one to fill in for her. It resulted in girl to transform into a monster.

How the girl spent the next five years, she has no memories. But one day the girl just woke up, saw her mother and started to talk as she just would woke up, asking about when they will celebrate her birthday and so. Her appearance was as in that day, seeing that the girl hadn't aged a day. Later on they understood, that the girl was unable to change her body at all. What else, not only her physical form, her mind also had been stuck at the level it was in that faithful day.

But time pass and while from one point she acted like a child, the girl had also traits that could be given only to a grown up. She was able to learn, to advance and develop. She learned to lie, to betray and kill. Annabel became quite a actress, when needed and her childish mind just helped to polish these skills. Her love for family members only grew and grew. One of them was a families bound Alex.

First she spoke to him, one year after she “woke up". In that time her Doll collection was quite small. The girl only had three. By Dolls, it was meant persons, that had made a contract with Erobern family to be Annabel's companions in any way she wanted. Though, they became her human size Dolls. In later years she would start recruiting them in multiple different ways on her own.
So, in that moment she had only three, but wanted more to make a real princess tea party. The little girl just went to the male, ask him how he was doing and said, that she would want for him to play with her. It ended in the guy dressing up as a girl. And it was the only time. This became a regular game. Not only that, she became better and better in making the male look like a girl by every time. Both became close friends. Alex thought her how to read, how to play write and so on and on. He would listen to her and give the girl good advice. And then he just disappeared.

Without playing and spending time with Alex, Annabel also seriously studied other things, what a proper lady should know...And maybe few things they shouldn't know. The girl also practised her powers, how to call upon them and how to use them. The reason was to show her mother how big of Mommies girl she was. While powers inherited from Circa was easier to master, the fathers side was something else. Something much harder and in the end the could only scratch the surface of surface for the ability.

In that way passed the next 40 years. Now she had became quite a lady. Annabel knows how to torture, kill, lie and lead someone as she wants. Her Doll amount had increased drastically, making her Mommy to grant the girl quite amount of houses free rooms. Even part of lower basements had been sacrificed to this little mistress and she is just growing and growing the mass of her followers. No one had stopped her yet. Still, she is childish, spoiled, sweet and nice. Annabel can be monster for ones and best friends for others. It all depends on how you threat her and her family. Blood is thicker then water, but Icker is the thickest.
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Powers
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☨ Natural Abilities:
  • Za Koa Skill: Za Koa skill is how much skill your character possess to manipulate the energy from the core. Typically, this should be your strongest asset when it comes to the skill sheet. The higher your mastery of this ability, the more techniques you are able to create, use and share. However, this has many more uses then that.

  • Za Koa's Influence: For example, an advanced Za Koa Skill user at two tier is capable of spreading this technique across an average battlefield in order to taint the surrounding vicinity around them in order to gain the upper hand in combat. These advantages include that all of their stats are typically doubled if the influence is not sealed away or fought with magic. So, going back to our two tier demon, he would be able to obtain a doubled increased in his abilities, powers, speed, endurance, reaction time, mental thinking, knowledge and so on and so forth. Users whom are Master in this skill can usually get triple benefits, and Grand Masters quadruple.

    Along with those enhancement boosters, another advantage of Za Koa's Influence is that it can also alter the area around a demon in order to give them the upper hand. For example, our two tier demon will be able to dim the area around him into darkness in order to make himself even more formidable as demon's are naturally inclined to become more useful in the shadow's, being able to generate various toxins in the air in order to gradually wear someone down, create harsh acid rains, for the terrain they are on, turn an ocean-type battlefield into pure fire and things of this nature.

    While being in her Za Koa Influence field, her Illusions become stronger on those, who are in it. That means, while usually she can fool ones sight, smell and hearing, in the field she can also trick ones nerves, making a person feel, as being stabbed by a sword, even if it isn't true and so, as she can also fool with ones sensing abilities, making one believe, that she has a tremendous power or, that she has almost no power at all. While this perk doesn't ask for additional energy to be spent, it puts on her some mental strain, so she must not hold a five sense Illusion longer, then five posts, with a 2 post cooldown. If kept longer, it can even lead to conscious losing. The reason for this boost, is because the girls Icker in small amount is fused with the field, entering ones body and effecting it.

  • Reaitsu Drain: This ability goes hand and hand with Za Koa's Influence. With this technique, our two tier can constrain the flow of reishi and reiatsu within an area in order to make opponents somewhat weaker as reiatsu is energy in use, this can also lead to canceling out attack on some levels, overpowering attacks if there is a major gap in power and for advanced users and up being able to control the reiatsu they constrain. However, please note, reaitsu drain does NOT mean you will simply go around consuming energy until you level up.

    The energy you collect, for intents and purposes, will only be able to be utilized for one thread if you are on adept level or lower, while advanced will be able to keep it for two threads, Masters being be able to retain it for three threads and Grand Masters for four threads. This means that during that thread or threads, it's benefits will only qualify there (This means that if you make ANY new thread with your character following the events of where you consumed energy, it will count). In addition to that, this does not always mean you get a tier increase as only those on Master level are able to obtain TEMPORARY boost in their tier if they are able to consume enough power. (I.E. someone like Mana or Abaddon performing this on a large scale such as Karakura Central or the Gotei 13; to give you a measurement of how much power you need to collect with Reaitsu Drain and skill needed to gain that temp tier boost.)

    With all of that stated, the main benefits of this Reaitsu is that it is used to increase anything on a demon that deals with power. For instance, a demon could have FAR faster attacks then before if reaitsu drain was performed successful, their attacks would have much more stopping force and it may even have additional benefits. Another example would be their spells being further increased with all of the extra energy being generated within them from the drain. One final example is that it can also be broken down into energy for strength to increase their physical offensive power, increase their defense and advance their durability. So, with that said, these are examples of how reaitsu drained is used.

  • Black Inferno Blast: Black Inferno is a massive burst of destructive energy a demon can unleash if they have Adept or higher on Za Koa. It starts by gathering energy from Za Koa along with the Demon's Blood and any type of darkness. From there, it will form into a ball of darkness that can be used to unleash serious damage upon anything it hits; resulting in a black explosion that is similar to a Cero in destruction and can be broken down like a Bala as well. Though, unlike a Cero or Bala, The Black Inferno Blast does a lot more then just simply explode. When it explodes, if trapped within the blast, the opponent will begin to feel extreme amounts of heat generating from their skin; so hot, in fact, some believe they are actually on fire from the strain on a person's will. However, this does more then that. That's simply the sign of a dangerous demon parasite entering a person's body. If a direct contact is made or even partial contact, there will be a strong rush of parasites, demon magic and Za Koa's force entering a person's body. From that point, over the course of five post if there was a direct hit or three for a indirect, this will begin to heavily tax an opponent. It will force them to drain extreme amounts of energy until they are somewhat weakened, slowed or damaged if they are unable to extract it from there bodies.

    Along with that, if they get hit enough with Black Inferno Blast they even run the risk of dying if it begins to suck the life energy out of them if there is nothing else to extract. The effects also vary from level to level. Adept Za Koa users will be able to do all of the above, while the higher you go, the more quickly, effective and longer the effects will last along with doubling in strength for each skill increase. Therefore, it is highly wise to stay on your toes when a demon opponent is firing this Black Inferno Blast. It could be your last time doing so if you fail to separate this from a regular energy type attack.

    On top of all that, Annabel had managed to modify the blast, adding her own Icker, so, making it even more dangerous. If it would hit a target and Icker could enter ones body, along with the parasites, the persons body quite quickly would start to rot and receive additional damage. Not only that, but while the Icker infests ones body(the duration is the same, as Black Inferno Blast), all Annabels Domination and Illusion powers effect the target stronger.

  • Kage Chōkyō-shi: Kage Chōkyō-shi is the ability for most demons with adept Za Koa users to travel through different dimensions, travel throughout the battlefield or even use it for defense. By channeling Za Koa's energy in addition to the various seals throughout their body in addition to their Shadow Movement, they are able to create many different dimensional holes in the area's around them; each of them being able to range from a small vicinity such as a few inches, to the size of a city block depending on their Za Koa skill. These can lead to other realms; while there is also the possibility it can be used to shield against attacks if they are not more powerful than the demon and be used on the offensive by attempting to slash the opponents attack in half by creating one of those opening in the center of their assault.

    Although, it's also worth noting that this is mostly a passive skill to allow demon's to travel through different areas on the site; such as moving back and forth through the Soul Society, Living Realm and so forth. Those with advanced and Master in Za Koa Skill will begin to see ways to utilize it in battle; such as creating waves of blackness meant to consume limited attacks. Even more than that, the few of these people who do manage to master it will only be able to use it a limited amount of times in battle in association with their energy. So if one were to try and use it more than two or three times per post, they'd tire themselves out.

  • Shadow Movement: In addition of the powers one has, using the Shadow Movement, the youngest daughter in Erobern family had learned how to combine Za Koa Influence, Demon Magic and once again Icker to be able controlling shadows in 400 meter radius. This manipulation means, that she can forge objects and even creatures from them, giving also various abilities to the creations. Of course, the more powerful object, the more time and power it requires to make one. To make it more clearer, she could shoot numerous chains at a target to constrain him/her with ease, while forging a sword, that burns in black fire would take a post or so.

  • Other General Demon abilities: Annabel possesses all Demon natural traits and abilities. To please her mother, she demanded for someone, who would teach her everything a powerful Demon should know. What else, thanks to her child-like mind, she had kept the kids ability to learn and adapt fast, reaching quite good results in almost every aspect, with exception of two.

    First, as many could imagine, is her physical strength. From one point she can be called strong, if fought. Her punches and kicks could be even called deadly, because of the concentrated strength in the muscles, but what she lacks, is stamina. Her body has relatively none, if compared to those, who are really close type fighters, and even if she can be dangerous, she tire out fast. So, she avoids close confrontations.

    Another thing, worth mentioning, is her inability to use Body Manipulation. Thanks to the drawback of the Icker, she has only the forms, that is her releases and nothing more.


☨ Unique Abilities:
  • Budding Corruption: After acts of Sin where contact with another individual occurs, women of the Erobern family are able to slowly implant a seed of corruption into the individual [this can be spiritual or physical, depending on the female] which will slowly receive triggers from the Icker within the woman as to taunt the one infected into being more relaxed and close to the woman before them. This is one of the techniques which makes Erobern women so good at what they do.

    For Annabel it works slower, taking sometimes years for one to be taken effected, but when this happens, then ones life is changed for ever and even longer. The person will become oppssest over her, wanting nothing more, then just to serve his/her “Princess". If one is effected like that, then it takes several weeks and really strong willpower to brake free from the grasp of her Icker. So, even if her trait isn't effective in short run, in long one it is quite dangerous.

  • Healing Corruption: The Corruption of one's heart is what beats through the Erobern bloodline. Corruption and darkness filling their veins at all times and thus slowly changing the way they heal and adapt. Those of the Erobern family cannot be harmed by Icker and instead can heal from it. The pure corrupted source serves to replenish their beings and accelerate the healing process in the best way for any demon or 'evil' being. The corruption can work in different ways from individual to individual for how well it heals.

  • Scent of Sin: Just like the males, women in the Erobern family are able to detect others that are corrupted. This ability can help them to build more of the Icker within themselves for whatever purposes or even finding a place to sit and heal in short bursts in a state of being in severe trouble. With them having this ability to find others, it makes it also possible for them to emit an aura of Sin which tends to attract more people than not. If someone is of a higher tier, of course this lure has no effect but those below should be careful.

  • Hostess of Icker: Those females who have this trait are carriers of the Icker curse and thus are individuals which can use its power. Of course the draw back of this feature is that the Icker itself is slowly eating away the humanity of the being and replacing it with the embodiment of corruption which they can be. For the time being, the Hostess is a mere vessel and will remain such for many years. But with this, they will trade their humanity for the power of the Icker.

    Annabel holds something one can call as two containers of Icker. One is which she can gain access and use, but the other ones is much larger, always full and becomes larger and larger by every time she uses any Icker related ability or goes in her first release state. The second “tank" isn't in her access and only gives a bit of its container, when she goes in her first release. Those, like Circa and Lilith, can sense the second tank in her and the fact, that it contains right now twenty times more power, then the girl in her release.

  • Mind Of Icker: Annabel has a permanent link with every member of family, that holds in himself some amount of Icker. This link is in telepathic level and she can use it to talk with other people, just like through a phone. What makes her able to do it is still a mystery, but she can, if focusing on one person, appear as a hologram next to the person, in the same time seeing as through her eyes. While this ability is almost impossible to negate, one will always have a buzzing feeling in his head, when Annabel will be watching [Ability will be used only with the other member permission in the thread]

  • Rose Kiss: If she plants a kiss on any part of persons body, a red rose tattoo appears in the place. While this mark is on the person, he becomes stronger, faster and his over all power raises by three times. Also, the marks barer will become tempted to perform one or another Deadly Sins Of Hell. Not only that, the marked person will absorb all “unpurenes" he/she will come across. And all this time the red rose mark will color more and more blue, because of the Icker, that is collecting in it. While usually the substance isn't strong enough to kill someone, the weakest ones may die. When the rose had become completely blue, the marked persons had a irresistible urge to travel and...Meet Annabel.

    It will always happens in a rose garden, hidden deeply in underground, one of countless rooms she had taken rights to call hers. This garden is a huge labyrinth, made of giant bushes, that holds blue roses. Only servants, Annabel and the Marked Ones know how to reach the centre. If one would try, he may feel the corruption inside these flowers and maybe from that could deduct that the plants themselves are made of pure Icker. When the Marked One finds himself in the labyrinths centre, there always will be Annabel waiting, in her little dress, wearing a small, decorative hat and sipping tea or drawing something. There the Marked One would drop to his knees, stare at her with admiration and uncover the place, where the rose mark would be located. She would kiss the mark one more time and it would just fade back to red color, but a new flower would bloom in the garden. After that, the marked one has a choice, become the servent of Eroberns and Annabel or return wandering in the world, committing Sins and returning again to let out the Icker collected. The places name, “Garden Of Hell".

  • Rose Licht: One of Annabel’s basic powers is to create Illusions of some degree. If there is many ways how to make them quite powerful, then in base conditions, this power can only fool three senses, sight, smell and hearing. To be caught in her Illusion, one first need to look in her eyes. After that, she can use the Illusions as she wants. She can effect a peoples in 500 meter radius.

  • Rose Will: This ability is her base Dominance power. She can manipulate with matter and humans minds, by pushing down their existence with her own. For matter it works, as she can form various objects from one matter and, if put her mind to it, turn one matter to another. While simple things doesn't take much, more complicated or many at same time, can exhaust her. The radius of her Domination is 200 meters. If talking about ones mind, she can make one loose his/her will to fight. Think, that it is pointless to battle her and such emotions. She can also make people feel energetic, full with battle spirit and so. All depends on what she wants to do with your mind. For her power to Dominate mind would have effect, her will needs to be in the same or higher level, then the targets. Right now she can sadly only Dominate one mind at the time.

  • Rose Bush: This simple name holds behind itself a strong Dominance ability. The little girl bites her palm and lets it bleed a bit on the ground, before the wound closes. From that place a bush, full of red roses, forms, making everything in 1 km radius look in a reddish, sparkling light. Not only that, a sprout of a blue rose appears on the top of the bush, but it had not yet bloomed.

    In this field Annabel can easily fool all senses, even the supernatural. If someone would have a sense she doesn't know about, then she would need to learn about it, before she would be able to fool it. What else, one could tell, that something is a illusion, if he/she would have extremely sensitive smell and so, but it would be needed to be at extreme levels.

    Though this isn't everything, why one should be careful in this field. While one of her aspects is to mess with creatures mind, another aspect is her Dominance, she spreads not only on ones mind, as many could imagine, but to matter, time and reality itself. It doesn't work on too large scale, but enough to make one regret picking a fight with her. Make a single attack in any strength, she can bend the reality, so the attack would miss. While it is a single attack she needs to concentrate at one moment, everything is fine and the girl is untouchable. The problems would start, if the Demon girl would need to avoid two attacks made at the same time, from two different persons or places. If so, it would require her to bend two realities at the same time. If so, after ten times she used this power in a thread, the girls mind would be under a strain, making almost all her powers useless.
    Dominating matter is more easier. She can make the surrounding to serve for her, making walls from earth and so on. Even weak energy attacks and things, like, electricity, can be Dominated and it doesn't even take much of her energy.
    Time Domination maybe is the hardest of them all. At this power level she can only make individual objects, like a fire ball or anything that small to do simple things like stop for a period of few seconds or go faster, skipping some and make a surprise attack. Like reality dominating, Annabel needs to concentrate to effect one attack and using on multiple at once would react to extremely fast exhaustion.

    After ten posts, if the bush isn't destroyed, the blue rose head opens, sending a sickening sweet aroma in the area. All girls injuries closes and her energy reserves are filled. The air is then filled with Icker, making everyone in the field three times weaker, then usually. Of course, this part doesn't work on those, who are immune to Icker or those kind of substances. She can create two bushes in a thread.

  • Emperor's Eye(Only inheritable through Akakotei's genetic lineage) As the child of Akakotei, Annabel had the possibility to inherit this ability. No one was sure, if she actually will, but upon her sixth birthday, when the Icker in her body took complete control and became active, it pulled out with force the Emperor's Eye, making it active. It made a dramatic effect on the girl in her first years, turning her more of a beast, then anything else. Only when the Icker and the side effect of the Eye calmed down, the girl returned to her senses. But still, the permanent effect of this overload is that she can't use any body manipulation abilities, as her mind is stuck in a weird semi-child mind set.

    When activating the Eye, her right eye pupil will turn into the shape of rose and resonate weird, red light. The control of her spiritual power and the power output all together will be more controlled by her and she gains the ability to use Clairvoyance. The duration of the Eye, if the girl doesn't want to exhaust herself quickly, is 7 posts.
    • Clairvoyance: The name of this power is less the power to see the future and more the granting of the analytical and ocular ability to see the movement's of the opponent to their minuet details. A shifting of the leg even the slightest breathing pattern is given input in the mind of the user, with this information the user can predict with intense accuracy the move of their opponents. Even faking moves or physical blows with feints is something that comes into the eye of the user, their power of deduction allows them full up to date input of all the movements and actions of their enemy as if the fighter in front of them was moving slower than normal. This power does have a weakness however, it is needed that the user has the enemy in their line of sight to be effective at all to start, even with the enhanced vision that these eyes grant the user not being able to see their opponent makes the power considerably limited in its effectiveness. Moreover for the inexperienced the constant flow of information and detail being shown to them can cause sensory overload making the power of the Emperor's eye a curse more than a boon.

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Adjustable Demon State
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☨Verwöhnt Rose Prinzessin Appearance:
Appearance:

☨ Verwöhnt Rose Prinzessin Benefits: This form releases fully all the Icker from the first tank, so raising her power two tier levels up from the base. With this rush of Icker in her body, all wounds from before are healed. She keeps all powers mentioned before and makes them slightly more powerful(2 times), when used. All her general skills, as well as mental and physical stamina are boosted five times. To enter it Annabel needs to be in active combat around 15 posts or be in near death situation, or her emotions of victory needs to take over her mind.
  • Rose Licht: Annabel now has no need for eye contact, as she can make everyone in 700 meter radius see her Illusions. Not only that, she can now fool nerves, making the Illusions so real, that a person can loose consciousness, if “damaged" in heart and so.
  • Rose Will: Her Dominance over matter now grows so large she can cover a small city, if needed. The girl can manipulate with large masses, like buildings, and can even redirect medium strength energy attacks, tho’, it is still tasking to do too many things at once and the further the object is from her, the more concentration it asks to be manipulated.
    A persons mind she can now Dominate at the extend, that she can give up to three word commands to the target and, if his will isn't Grandmaster, he/she needs to obey. They can try to resist, but it puts one in enormous mental and physical strain. She can now Dominate up to five targets at once, but can use the ability only once in a post. What else, these commands can't be life-threatening, like, kill yourself, or, jump off the bridge.
    On top of that, she can now also Dominate reality to the level before mentioned in “Rose Bush".
  • Mind Of Icker: In this state Annabel can use the link she has with those carrying Icker to ask for assistance. It means, if the other side agrees, she can receive Icker and energy from them to be able fighting even longer. (That means, that the person needs to make one post in the thread and she can gain from one person power once a thread. As well, as the fact, that she can use this ability max. 3 times in one thread.)
  • Petal Wind: Pair of giant bat wings sprout out of her back, each being two times bigger, then her. From them massive amount of rose petals flew out, creating a dome of 1km in radius and 200 meters in height. In there everything looks like being shone by red light and small, black sparkles could be seen flowing in the air. The rose in the middle of her crown would start to slowly color blue.

    In this field Annabel can easily fool all senses, even the supernatural. Now her Illusions seem as real, as they could get. If she knows how it feels, tastes and so, or, if the target knows it, she can create this Illusion so well, that ones mind and body believes it to the extension of actually dying, if the Illusion does that. But that actually is in rare cases, because only those with strong imagination can think of actually how would death feel. Not only that, this death is fake, so can't be reversed by any usual resurrection ability, but can be negated, if one brakes the Illusion, set on mind. Though, to do that, one would need to have very powerful will. The limit for causing “deaths" is one person per tier level, counting from 4-1. That means, if, for example, she would have 3-4, the girl could cause two “deaths". If overused, she would start to get minor mental issues.

    But this isn't everything, why one should be careful in this field. While one of her aspects is to mess with creatures mind, another aspect is her Dominance, she spreads not only on ones mind, as many could imagine, but to matter, time and reality itself. In this version it works on larger scale then before and allows to easily dominate in a small war. Make a five attacks in any strength, she can bend the reality, so the attack would miss and get even redirected at the opponent. While those are these attacks she needs to concentrate at one moment, everything is fine and the girl is untouchable. The problems would start, if the Demon girl would need to avoid seven attacks and more. It would take extra mental stamina to keep avoiding and redirecting them, so in time(after 15 attempts or so in a thread) she would be exhausted mentally and unable to use any of her abilities. Now her powers work to the extend, that she can try to Dominate a persons reality, changing a certain aspect of them, if she has the knowledge on how they received this effect. Example would be, if one would have had a resistance against ice, thanks to eating a magical apple in past. She could take this event out of his reality, so taking away their resistance. Though, the drawback for this power is that she must concentrate at the person for five posts for it to take effect. If in that time the girls is disturbed in any way (a hit, push, mind attack etc.) she will loose 20% of her power, as she did never had it. It is a once in thread ability.

    Dominating matter is more easier. She can make the surrounding to serve for her, making walls from earth and so on. She can change the matters properties in reasonable boundaries of her knowledge and can Dominate over energy attacks up to Tier 2. Any form of natural energy can be taken over, if the girl knows, how to use it.

    When Dominating Time, she can now do as much, as effect a small village, reaching in the past of a year. Still, she can't effect living beings and have almost no power over future. The limit at once is three targets to be effected by Time Dominance and more would summon fast mental exhaustion. The easiest way to escape this ability is to get out of her view. While not tested, time travel to past is possible, but for the current moment wouldn't be even tried. When planning to do actually something of that kind of nature, I will contact staff.

    After fifteen posts the rose will turn blue, sending a sickening sweet aroma in the area. All girls injuries closes and her energy reserves are filled. The air is then filled with Icker, making everyone in the field seven times weaker, then usually. Of course, this part doesn't work on those, who are immune to Icker or those kind of substances. All over all, this ability is active up to 40 posts, if she doesn't enter great mental strain.

  • The Tainted Empresses Eye: In this form two of the strongest bloodlines combine, creating something, that could go terrifying in the future. Being the most unstable power of them all, Annabel keeps the already existing Emperor's Eye passive ability and gains two new ones.
    • Blood Of Ruler: When activating the eye, Annabel's right eye pupil shapes in form of rose head and colors ink blue, with red lining, that glows. The ocular ability pulls out some of the Icker storing from the second tank, to the first one, creating a burst of power, that makes her 40% stronger, then in her current state. She can hold this state as long, as she wants, but, if longer held, the drawback will be more sever. If she keeps the eye active more, then 5 posts, after deactivating it, her boost will disappear and her complete strength will drop 20% of the one she had, before entering it for the rest of thread. If kept longer, then 10 posts, she will be stuck in the power state she was in before activating the eye. If kept activated longer, then 15 posts she will die. The eye automatically turns off, when there is no Icker left in the second tank. So, one thread. If she had broke the 15 post boundary, to survive, the girl would need to committee large number of Sins every day for her to keep the Eye active for 24 hours. To measure it, she would need to slaughter or have sex with a average of 300 people a day, to keep this power from deactivating in next 24 hours.
    • Implanted Death: Only by looking at a person, Annabel can implant Icker in their body at a amount to make one four to two times weaker for three posts or, if the persons falls in the correct category, receive enough Icker to heal very serious damage and receive a little power boost for three posts. She can use this ability up to three times at a post for not to effect the whole eyes allowed maximum. Every three overuses in a post takes one post away from the 15 post line.

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Skill-Sheet
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Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Alright, I'm coming through WIP Applications and I'm asking some questions about applications that have been here for over two weeks. When it comes to Annabel, are you planning on finishing this character, or is it finished already? The reason I ask this is because there is no tag in the post that says what the status of this application is and I haven't seen an update post in this thread that declares the status of this character. Therefore, fill me in when you see this. If there isn't a reply, then I will move this to old WIP in three days.




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I need to get this app reviewed by Circa, before I can put it as finished! And till it isn't done, I can't put it for official reviewing ^,^'
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Alright! I decided to let staff review it and deal with Circa, if she doesn't like something, afterwards. So, tagging the app as [FINISHED]!
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Gonna go ahead and move this to unapproved as I believe I don't have the position to grade it. I'll notify staff in the wip checking thread of its completion! o/

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Sat Apr 25, 2015 6:31 pm
Nix -

Your character's appearance is currently claimed.

Remilia Scarlet - Touhou - JJ - Sunshine Asthavon

Please discuss with the claim owner for a share or find a different appearance.

Thanks!

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Sun Apr 26, 2015 12:51 am
Done! I apologize for this mistake ^,^' Won't happen again!
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Tue Apr 28, 2015 3:29 pm
Greetings, I will be checking over your application, and there do appear tp be a few problems:

Starting out with your natural Demon abilities, which are majorly just copy-pasted from the Demon general information... It's a lot of words that don't really tell me much about your character. I don't care that you copy-pasted, but I do care that it lacks detail regardong your character's usage. What I want to see is more on what makes her versions special, and just how proficient she is with each. I see ranges on what demons can do, but not how Annabel does specifically. Specify that.

Also, what you have down for shadow movement and what shadow movement are are two different things. Shadow Movement is specifically a Demon's high speed movement. What you described is a form of shadow power that needs its own section.

Rose Kiss, Rose Licht, Rose Will, Rose Bush
You need to limit yourself. You are giving your character mind control abilities, illusions, and space-time manipulation to the utmost degree, and those are the sites most sketchy abilities to have. What you have is simply not acceptable; you need to implement limitations in how potent these powers are, and give Annabel more faults than you have. Mind Control is a huge.offender, as you're taking the will of another character away from their owner, which isnt as fun as you may think. Illusions are difficult to really counter for if they work, they render an enemy helpless. And then I don't believe I have to explain to you how manipulating space and time itself is ridiculous on top of that. Come up with some major hindrances for ALL of these powers, or else I will do that for you.

Additionally, you need to narrow the capability of these powers so that you cannot 'do it all.' I don't feel comfortable allowing you to create any illusion you wish; build a theme. Make it so your illusions have to do with so-and-so. Annabel seems to have this rosegarden thing going, so perhaps her illusions involve plantlife/gardens. For the Rose Bush power and its reality bending stuff... It's just way too versatile. I think you need to take out some of its abilities, specifically being able to manipulate the reality of another character while they are in that field.

Verwohnt Rose Prinzessin
So this form is basically all the broken powers above, but basically with the very necessary drawbacks removed. I'm going to have to say no. To the whole thing. I don't feel comfortable at all approving such ridiculous power, and if there's a problem with that, then circumvent me and go to Frost. Otherwise, you need to completely change this form. Your above Rose Powers are not getting any stronger than before so you need to come up with something else. I cannot say what, but it should not have to do with illusions, mind control, or space-time manipulation.

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Wed Apr 29, 2015 6:15 am

TO THE OBLIVION YOU GO!!!

Quite simple, with my brain not being able to generate enough new ideas for the powers, as well, as the fact, that I had already wasted too much time on this character and my brain just don't have enough stamina for me to re-build all her powers, I will just send her to archived and never speak again....


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