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Nix Shraik
Nix Shraik
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Age : 27
Location : Latvia, Riga

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|Music Author: Luca Turilli |Song: Virus|

❅Basic Information❅


❅ Name: Dustian Shraik
❅ Titles: Dust, "Derek Crain", "Henrich Sage", "Simon Drake Oleander"
❅ Gender: Male
❅ Appearance Age: 23
❅ Age: 288 years old, being born in 2126, July 17
❅ Affiliation/Rank: Seeker and Speaker of "Sabers"

❅ Appearance Description: Dustian is six foot two, standing as a tall, well built man. With straight back, hard muscles and wide shoulders he always seems sure of himself in every aspect of life. It doesn't make him seem arrogant, as his face expression never shoves this aspect of himself. In stead you can almost always see him curious, happy, sad, offended or angry. The most simple and generic emotions a human being could have, but they are enough to express what he needs. Not to mention that he can also control his face muscles as needed, so nothing unnecessary wouldn't appear.

If observing the males facial features, that they can be called charming, if not even beautiful. With slim lines, long lashes, but sharp curves, he holds a face every actor would want to have. It is a bit tanned and with the males gold eye color fits very well together. His lips are thin and the nose a bit pointy at the tip. When excited, Dustian has a bad habit of licking his lips and then a person could see that his tongue is a bit too red, as well, as narrow and almost resembles snakes. Ash grey hair are neatly cut along his head, giving the head a nice profile.

In matter of clothing it can go from a multiple part kimono, the main color being grey, to a casual shirt and sweat pants. When on formal meeting he will probably wear a suit, while in more casual days live with some quite plain clothing. Because in start he wore glasses it had become one of his habits to wear them every time the guy is thinking or feeling nervous. When communicating with people and not wishing for them to recognize the male he wears his "Sabers" mask. A white sad theater mask, with smiling eyes and a black snowflakes on the left cheek.
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❅Personality❅


Simple Joe: When interacting with people on street, in the store or non-job related business, Dust is a quite simple man, with a bit dry humor, simple view of life and simple emotion expressions. If something makes him sad, he looks sad. If something makes him angry, he shows it. One could very well read him and that is what makes it so easy to deal with the male. He likes to rest time to time, go to a good, or bad, movie, enjoy the company of others, have some alone time and so on and on. He dreams of love. Of finding the one and only that would make his world go upside down. He wants to keep being successful at job and have a good relationship with his bosses. Dustian leads his life by these simple rules, which, if obeyed, makes the male feel at ease. Though while in work these rules doesn't apply that much.

Zero Fucks Given: Because of the nature of his job he was forced to ignore people, circumstances and other things, making him just not care. As his loyalty was always quite strong to those he swore it, the male always fulfilled "Sabers" tasks without a doubt in his heart. Of course, that meant that sometimes the male was forced to do few things he didn't quite enjoy, as killing, lying, betraying and such. To get over them and not go mad because of these things Dustian pushed himself to become immune to any guilt, to any sadness or anger. He just pushed himself to not care, which was a something of a painful mental training, his willpower against the his own heart. Sometimes it seemed he would loose, sometimes it seemed he will win, but the first 60 years were just pure horror in that case. Though, in the end he got over it and now, no matter what. He needs to blow up a old people home, kill a small child or lie to his best friend, he will do it without a twitch of regret. He just wouldn't care.

Midnight Thinker: Dustians mind is open to the world and its mechanisms. As being the projects "Shraik" one of many results the place he grew up in was naturally the vault of "Sabers" knowledge, Heaven. It was the home of Seeker branch, whose specialty was naturally inventing and researching. Living in that kind of environment his mind quickly started to absorb what he saw. Then the young boys curiosity let him from early age to learn things others understood only in the second part of their lives. Later it became a trait of Dust's personality to ask many questions, seek answers to them and the never ending urge to improve. It all was put together with great amount of hard work and in the end one gets enough results.

At the moment, while not being a active member of Seekers, Dust still is working and thinkering at his free time. Not only that, his previous way of life had made the male quite a snooper, who will want to learn about everything that seems even bit interesting. This curiosity can be seen in different moments, be it going to a caffe with a friend or fighting a powerful enemy. Even, if we are thinking fight wise, Dustian will be even more curious in the fight even if it would cost him the victory. It is because he believes the most greatest knowledge is hidden under the layer of defeat. When one goes through it, great prizes awaits in the other side.

Plain killer: Dustian sees no beauty in death. He sees no meaning in killing, but if it needs to be done, he will do it. This has been his job for few centuries already and nothing had changed. There had been times when blood was demanded to be shed and then he couldn't afford to chicken out. True, the first dozen times were hard, when he though that it would be better just to take his life and end this nightmare, but by oppressing, removing these sick thoughts with sheer willpower Dustian managed to live with it.

Now he can kill easily, if needed. You can't say that the man enjoys it, but you couldn't say that he disliked it. Dust had came to understanding it is just how it's supposed to be and nor he, nor someone else could do anything about it. As simple, as that. Though, there are times when someone had gotten themselves at his bad side. In these cases Dustian becomes more brutal, more cruel, but also less skilled in battle. While with a cool head it is very well seen how skilled is Dust at what he does, but when he heats up this cool melts, making him a bit careless and easy to predict opponent.

Amused Manipulator: What else Dustian had learned over the years is that it is quite funny for him to see others being controlled and they don't even suspect it. He enjoys seeing countries and governments being controlled and influenced just by few "Sabers" puppets and that of course created that time a question, could he do the same? As you can imagine the male took no time at all to test what was he capable off. The "Sabers" only motivated this desire of his and gave the young boy that time a teacher who would show him exactly how this thing was done.

Now, after many years, it had developed into skill, making him understand how to push his own will and desires on others. Sometimes it demands the use of brains. Other times it demands a bit brute force. Again, there are people that need to be shown just who is the dominant one. And then there is those with who he needs just to push some buttons and he will do what needed. Big masses are even easier, as they are always ready to follow someone with the slightest leadership skills and act as dumb sheep. Yes, manipulating with others for Shraik was as amusing, as for others circus or a funny film. Though, the fun was a bit ruined if someone died in the process.

❅History❅


Hidden Info:

-Past depends on each case differently-

❅Skills and Abilities❅


❅Thick Reiatsu Armor: When releasing his own Reiatsu it doesn't effect large areas. There are multiple reasons why this is so. First, because of the Shraiks natural body trait which makes his body so it would waste as little energy, as possible. This is the reason why so many Shraiks are almost impossible to sense when regarding soul power. Second, the reiatsu that is radiated is so concentrated it doesn't radiate far from the male, as well, as it also tries to blend with the surrounding energy. People two minor tiers above can sense this energy when up close and, if their focus is Advance and up can sense it from distance up to 50 meters.

The main goal for it is to create a thick layer of energy around his body. Visually it is invisible, but when needed it can serve as Hierro, protecting from attacks. The durability of this defense is tied with Dustians tier. The following rules and conditions is for him to be able keeping a constant defense and not feeling strain. If wished and desired, Dust can add additional energy to boost his shield, but then after some time it will take a toll to his body.
  • Tier 3-4 till 3-1: He can sustain 5 posts of rapid attacks with someone of Advanced strength or energy attacks of Tier 3-1. All attacks in strength and power above mentioned can be sustained for 5 posts, before Dusts defense is turned useless. When against GrandMaster or 0-4 Tier it takes only 2 posts. All attacks that are in strength of Adept and below are completely nullified, as well, as energy attacks of Tier 3 and below.
  • Tier 2-5 till 2-2: He can sustain 7 posts of rapid attacks with someone of Advanced strength or energy attacks of Tier 2-2. All attacks in strength and power above mentioned can be sustained for 5 posts, before Dusts defense is turned useless. When against GrandMaster or 0-3 Tier it takes only 2 posts. All attacks that are in strength of Adept and below are completely nullified, as well, as energy attacks of Tier 3 and below.
  • Tier 2-1 till 1-2: He can now sustain 9 posts of rapid attacks from Advance level strength and power till 1-2. Anything above can be sustained for 6 posts. O tier power and GrandMaster strength for 3 posts. Those below are nullified.
  • Till 0-3: The strength limit is now Master, power level till tier 0-3 and it can be kept for max of 10 posts or rapid attacks. If anything stronger then this time is reduced to 7 posts.
  • Tier 0-3 and up: Upon reaching the highest point of power Dustian Shraik can defend against strength of GrandMaster and power even of tier 0-1 for 13 posts. At this level those with strength Master and Tier 1-3 till 0-4 can break through his defense, though it would demand around 15 posts of rapid attacks.

In general this defense completely protects from piercing, slash and any kind of conditional damage, like burns or electricity. The minus though is that it absorbs only around 40% of strength of the attack. That means he will still feel the impacts, receive damage from them and can easily be sent flying, if Dust doesn't resist with his own strength. These traits are what can call his defense similar to a enhanced armor. A attack can only fully reach him when the Thick Reiatsu Armor is fully destroyed.
P.S. These duration's apply if Dustian has full power and isn't tired. Extensive use of other powerful techniques shortens the time of the power.

❅Adaptive Body(Shraik Trait): As almost all Shraiks, Dusts bodies cell structure is somehow different from what a regular human should have. In Dustians case it is the fact that his body can be widely manipulated in different ways, as well, as it can adapt to almost any situation, if given the time. This is the reason why you can find him in small rooms with insane heat inside. Why every day he drinks various different poisons that seemingly make the male weaker. Why he let himself be beaten to almost death and go through days and weeks of long healing process. It is all for his body to become stronger. More durable and resistant to all these ways of him being harmed. He had done this more then 200 years and there isn't a day he wouldn't spend trying somehow to better himself. This is why he had gained additional feats in time:
  • Heat and Fire Resistance: While definitely not one of his strongest traits, the male can survive heat much stronger then any human or supernatural being could without specializing in it. This resistance doesn't take any Reishi, as it is purely a physical ability, but in so takes quite longer to recover if overcome by heat of 500 in Celsius.
  • Cold Immunity: Well, here he has reached the peak. Thanks to the fact that his body is constantly radiating cold, as well, as that Dust constantly raises the line when cold can effect him after 288 years the guy has just become completely immune to it. In so it means he can go completely naked in criotank and come out fresh as a pickle. Though, if the temperature drops below 1000 degrees negative in Celsius the male will become a bit sleepy and slower.
  • Electricity Resistance: When it comes to electricity or lightning the his body does everything it can for him to receive less damage. It means if someone would strike the guy with lightning bolt or any kind of electricity Dust will scream, dance as a puppet and be damaged by the force, though first, the damage will be only 1/10 of what the electricity regularly does and second, he bypasses the paralyze what usually follows after that kind of attack. This is explained by Dustians body ejecting the energy as fast, as possible. Though, in constant flow of it this resistance can be negated.
  • Poison and Toxin Resistance: Amazing feat Dustian had reached, if being invaded by a harmful toxin, poison, disease and so forth his body will start to generate anti-bodies in minutes. This is thanks to his unstable cell structure, enhanced brain and a bit good old Reishi. All them together creates immunity which will be able to deal with most harmful things in the males body.


❅Weapon Proficiency: Over the course of more then 200 years Dustian had been thought to handle with almost any weapon there has been created. Starting from a katana, which he prefers the most, ending to high density molecular cannon, he knows how to use them all. It took endless hours, days, months and years, constant knowledge re-newel, but the fruits of this training was that afterwards Dust was capable to defend himself upon almost any situation. It also helped to choose the best weapon for missions and surprise his enemy in versatility, if needed.

❅Kidō: While not thought in the Shinigami academy it didn't mean "Sabers" allowed the male to slack in any aspect of his. Over the years the group had enough run away Shinigamies, black sheep of Soul Society and in general had gathered data for enough Kidō to Dustian use. This allowed him to learn how to use these "spells" and fight more efficiently in a battle. Because of the natural Shraiks trait of Energy Conservation Dust has no limit regarding the numbers a Shinigami usually has. Though, like his half-brother Nix, it comes with a drawback that the male has a specialization of Kidō he is actually good at. For Dustian those would be Bakadō and Healing Kidō.

❅Energy Conservation(Shraik Trait): Only the best of the best genes are used for creating Shraiks and in so their bodies had developed a interesting ability. Even if one isn't trained in using energy abilities, his body will act to most efficiently use energy, making abilities that cost one, for example, 10% of his energy, for Shraik to cost only around 5%. This comes from the fact that each cell of the artificial human holds ten times more power then a regular human upon birth, as well, as the fact that their bodies are programmed to save energy. Though, the drawback of this perk is that it is much harder for Shraiks to really go all out, as their bodies scream that they are empty much faster, then it is in reality. This drawback can be overcome with high willpower and training.

❅Fast Learner(Shraik Trait): Shraiks know no childhood, as they are genetically pushed to maturate in a year, after which these boys and girls are thought in multiple things a perfect soldier should need to know. After this they are put in one of four branches and thought further, in making them a valuable asset. This means their minds, bodies and souls are constantly pushed to the limits, in seeing how far they can go. This gives Shraiks a perk that allows them to more quickly learn new things and upgrade. This perk should be better stated upon making upgrade threads.

❅Physical Mantel(Shraik Trait): All Shraiks are born human, but thanks to the experiments conducted "Sabers" managed to create also Shinigamies. While these factory duplicates has all the abilities one of them would have the minus is that they still have a physical, living body. This body is similar to one humans has, with a difference that they more easily manage to live with increased amounts of Reishi in them and can without any problems for long time reside in places such as Soul Society. Though, it pays back a bit to durability, though again, these bodies are much simpler to heal.

❅Zanpakutō❅


❅ Reiatsu Color: Grey

❅ Zanpakutô Spirit Name(At the moment): Korikusarihebi no Hana - Frozen Viper Flower

❅ Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:
Image and Description:

❅ Inner World: It is a vast, beautiful mansion, with a huge garden in front of it and in the back. While everything in this garden and around it seems full of life in the same time the fact needs to be stated that everything in this inner world is frozen solid. This cold, which the mansion itself radiates, is takes away the ability to breath or speak, as the persons longs and inner organs would freeze solid upon his/her first breath. Though, in the same time this fact wouldn't kill anyone, as it would look like death has no control over the inner world of Dustian Shraik. When regarding to talking, one can easily speak through using telepathy which everyone gains upon entering this frozen land.

❅ Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : Dustians Zanpakutō when sealed is in the form of a wooden training sword. It is constantly covered in thin layer of ice and radiates white smoke-like substance when being held in its masters hands.

❅ Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: When matter without a soul contacts Dustians body or sword it in few seconds turns into pure, crystal white ice. To state it clearly, the object doesn't freeze, but instead a alchemical reactions happens which turns the soul-less matter into ice. Upon turning into ice the matter will lose all its old properties, gain those of a real ice, as well, as additional traits stated below. While effective, Dust can only turn mass similar to a family bus in one go into ice. When regarding negating, a person can simply infuse enough of his energy in the object to disrupt the alchemical process. Though, to do that the person must at least be in the power of a one minor tier below Dust or up. Additionally Dustian had noticed it takes much more time to freeze something that contains large amount of energy. Example could be a power plant.
  • Charge: The ice created by this ability is charged with the energy what was left after changing the matters structure, as well, as a bit of Dustians own power. There is a certain resonance which is directed by the males Zanpakutō spirit. Upon this sound being released near the created ice, it will explode as a charged Cero from Adjucha level Hollow. The sound is usually made by Dustian snapping his fingers, but can also be created by his voice or other tools that can manipulate sound.


❅ Release: Crawl high and low, Korihana!

❅ Shikai Description: Upon releasing his Zanpakutō, Dusts clothe, skin, eyes and the wooden sword covers in thin, white and transparent layer of ice. A ice flower blooms in the middle of his chest and then his sword too lights up in blinding, white color. After a second or so this light shatters like glass, revealing that now the males Zanpakutō actually looks like a real katana. Now it has a snow-white blade, grey handle and a white rope tied across the handle in diamond shaped pattern. A thick, white mist radiates out from the white blade.

❅ Shikai Abilities: When activating his Shikai Dustian starts to generate a mist that has the same effect, as his sealed ability. This mist travels in speed one level lower then Dusts General Speed and can fully cover a territory of 2 km in radius over the period of 4 posts. Though, if Dust more concentrates on individual mist projectiles then tries covering big areas, he can launch his projectiles as far, as his eyes can see. The male can manipulate the created mists movements and form, as well, as what to transform into ice and what not. Dust still can't effect beings with souls, as well, as he can't freeze objects that are in close contact of a creature with soul. Those would mostly be clothe or armor.
Rage Mode:

❅ Bankai Description: Upon activating his Bankai Dusts body is surrounded in thick, heavy white fog. This fog will grow bigger and bigger, taking more and more space. When it will create a dome 2 km in radius, as well, as 500 meters in height the fog will solidify and shatter into millions of small snow flakes. Everything that was in the radius of the fog will be now covered in thick layer of ice, as well, as the temperature had dropped 1000 degrees below zero for that moment.

Dustians own body now looks like a white ice statue. He stands in the middle of a giant ice lotus flower and above his head seven swords, similar to his own Zanpakutō in Shikai state, floats . When seeing the moment to fit the frozen ground will collapse, as seven giant ice dragon heads will merge from land below. These dragon heads will have long, snake-like necks and over all similar features of snakes. When looking further, one may see a typical dragons body made from ice with seven tails. Dust is in the middle of this body and, if needed, can alter its shape and form. When completely out this body is as large, as the dome created when activating the Bankai in start.

❅ Bankai Abilities: Without the dramatic increase in energy, upon entering in Bankai Dusts bodies durability raises to Master, though his whole body becomes immobile. Dustian can't communicate, but can mentally control his Bankai. The seven swords can be used as mediums to utilize Kidō. These swords has also durability of Master and strength of Advance.

The snake dragon is a mobile creature that moves in speed of Adept and has strength and durability of Master. Each head can fire two blasts of a blue ray, similar to Cero Obsucras, in one post. This ray will not only create destruction, but also create immense amounts of ice afterwards. The beast body constantly generates the mist of Dustians Shikai. At the next post all damage done to the dragons body in the previous one will be fixed as nothing would have happened. To permanently destroy this beast there are three options. One, wait for Dustians Bankai to run out of energy, second, destroy Dustians body or third, destroy the seven swords, in so pulling him out of Bankai. Upon destroying one sword, the person destroys permanently one of the dragons heads. Upon destroying all of the swords Dustians Bankai is destroyed.

The two biggest drawbacks to his Bankai is that it is twice as short, as usually a Bankai would be, as well, as in this form Dustian can see only through the eyes of the dragon heads and through his swords. The dragons eyes are quite bad and unable to see small objects, like people, and the swords can't move further then 50 meters away from the males body, so he can't use them to spy what is going on the ground. In such, he won't use it when fighting together with a party of allies.


❅Belongings and Resources❅


Items Name: Seekers Interface
Where did acquire it: Link
Items Description: This item is a massive implant in ones brains. Very easy to know if one has it, the users temple nerves will shine through the skin in the color of the persons energy. A long, shining line will also stretch from the center of ones head, down the spine and will end in the tail bone. A circle of light is also located in the place of soul chain.
Upon receiving the Interface one will be connected with "Saber", the system that stores all information "Sabers" had gathered in the years. At first only a bit, their minds will be slowly adjusted to larger and larger amounts of information, not only storing them in the persons brain, but also making him understand it. This process will lead to ones Mental Deduction jumping to Advance and, if already in that state, to Master. There is no limits on the knowledge the user receives, as if he/she plans on using the info to betray "Sabers", the network he is connected to will ensure it won't happen.
But this is only one of many perks of the Interface. Those with 2-5 and above have enough energy for the mechanical brain to invade their energy stream and bodies, creating something of a root system inside themselves. It allows one having a complete control of their own bodies, in so removing feeling of pain or tiredness at all. It doesn't mean now that they are invincible. It just means that they can go for longer periods of time, as feeling of pain and strain of body is one thing that doesn't allow living beings to go all out. Of course the drawback is that in one moment, if not monitoring their status, the user can just collapse and even die from overdoing it.
When it comes to inner energy circulation upon being able to control it the computer in persons brains will do all the work so the energy usage would be most efficient. It can lead to one going up by a minor tier, when reaching this stage and a boost in skills like Cero/Bala, Soul Sorcery, Kido etc.
When it comes to the Interface itself in ones brains the device not only boosts ones Mental Deduction, but also Focus, as he can now easily concentrate on many things in the same time and even think multiple things at once, while not getting confused. Though this also makes the person more cold and emotionless.
-Additional Powers: (There are those who learned how to combine their own powers with the Implant and in so created new abilities. This is limited to three, as the implant isn't meant for that kind of usage)

Items Name: XO33-HUT (2 pieces)
Where did acquire it: Link
Items Description: In appearance this gun seems like a regular blaster gun which can be acquired even by civilians. It comes in different colors and shapes, but basically is the main hand-gun for most "Sabers" operatives. It is light, made from a special fusion between different metals only found near the core of Earth. It is easy to take apart, each part then looking like a simple household device.
The fire-power of XO33-HUT is 20 shots a post. Each shot is in the strength of standard Tier 3-1 Bala. What makes this weapon so handy is that it absorbs the energy in the environment cause of artificially made Soul Gem in it. Because of the same gem, if a person has Soul Sorcery spells, Kidō or any other kind of spells they can infuse the next 20 shots with this spell. They can even feed the gun with their own energy to make the bullets more stronger. Though in that case constant bullet buffing can cause the gun to brake down after 5 posts in the row.

Items Name: Singer
Where did acquire it: Link
Items Description: Pair of gloves, made from quite warm and durable material used in army clothing these gloves are enchanted with magic. Regarding appearance they are dark blue with small symbols sewed in them. Red gems had been worked in where usually a person would have knuckle bones and the line where should locate the wrist one could see that is decorated with silver thread.

Without their expensive appearance the magic put on these gloves allows Dustian to have minor scale sound manipulation. First, the male can choose a sound he produces and make it been able to hear in any place where his own Reishi is located. What it means is, if he would snap his fingers this sound could also be heard at the place where he had left his Zanpakutō. Additionally, he can mute sounds he makes from people he doesn't want to be heard or boost the sound he produces to levels of overly loud music. Though this can be counteracted if one releases even a bit of his spiritual energy. In so even a Tier 4-5 can counteract it. On further note people with Mental Deduction or Focus of Advance and up could easily spot that there is a muting spell on them by a light ringing in their ears.

This item require really minor amount of energy to be used, though the limit of usage per post is 12 times. If it is overdone there is a possibility of the glove to start burning from the too large amount of energy in it. Regarding durability, if not protected, this glove can easily be destroyed as any fabric.

Items Name: Mask Of Faces
Where did acquire it: Link
Items Description: Each "Sabers" member has a mask that hides their identity as well, as serve as a sign that they are a member of the group. This exact mask is made for Dustian Shraik. Like every "Sabers" mask it has access to their main system, though the clearance level differs with each rank in the group. The mask attaches to the face using thousands of little wires in size of humans nerves and through them connects with the persons brain. With it the wearer in question can see his health level, amount of energy he/she has, as well, as surf internet and watch movies. It has quite developed hacking system which allows to break in computers and such. Though, this ability heavily balances on the users own Mental Deduction. The higher it is, more complicated systems it can hack. Also, to hack something the person needs to be in the wireless zone or hold in his hands the object of desire to hack.

The power Dustians mask alone has is to change its appearance to fit the mans purpose. Because the object is made of millions of small Nano-bot they can reshape themselves into different faces. The connection with his brain allows for following face muscles so nothing would seem off. To remind, restriction is just face, not hair or body, so alone this ability is far from perfect disguise. Also, if someone utilizes sensing abilities they could feel that the energy between Dustian and his fake "face" is different. In its original appearance, picture above, the eye and mouth place emits white light.

Items Name: Cleansing Pendant
Where did acquire it: Link
Items Description: This item is a small silver colored pendant in a shape of a skull. The skull can come in different forms, but it will always be in silver color, if not remodeled by the owner. What this item does, it simply makes the user attacks, be it any kind, projectile or melee, to cleanse the creature in question like a Shinigamies sword does. It can't for obvious reasons perform the painless cleansing, but also doesn't erase the being from existence, if being a Hollow and not killed by a Shinigami. It also works on Quincies, in so nulling their existence deleting effect they usually have. Upon cleansing a being the skull shines in the color of users Reiatsu, but it isn't mandatory for one to actually posses Reiatsu.

Items Name: Sky-Scraper
Where did acquire it: Link
Items Description: Something crafted personally by one of the "Sabers" founders, a Sword Freak, this weapon is 90 cm long sword, black in color with the same modern design. The blades sharp part is made from blue, pure energy while the back of the sword is made from the same black metal as the rest of the weapon. Like most of "Sabers" weaponry, this too is much lighter then it would seem, but having acceptable durability.
The swords energy blade is a fusion between Quincies Seele Schneider and a laser scalpel which are quite popular in surgeries in 25th century. The cutting potential of this weapon is that in the right hands(General Speed and Focus at Advanced) it has the precision even to cut in half objects small as bullets. Otherwise it is simply on par with well made katana. Thanks to the information from Seele Schneider the energy blade, when connecting with other energy constructions as shields and barriers, can loosen the bonds between energy particles and make the construct more unstable and frail. Though, for this to take actual effect it would require around 7 posts of constant attacks. The drawback to this sword is while it is durable enough for physical attacks, energy strikes as Bala, Cero and such can easily damage it after few strikes if they reach the black metal part of the weapon.
Also another major drawback then would be the energy consumption this weapon has. Individually it has a artificial Soul Gem that regenerates energy from the surrounding. While not useful directly in battle as the regeneration rate is really slow, it removes the need of purchasing batteries for the sword. In total the will work for 5 posts before being depleted from power. A person can connect his own energy with the Soul Gen to fuel the sword.
Tier 5: 3 posts
Tier 4: 4 posts
Tier 3: 6 posts
Tier 2: 9 posts
Tier 1: 12 posts
Tier 0-5; 0-4: 15 posts
Tier 0-3; 0-2; 0-1: 20; 25; 30
Like any object whose power core is the artificial Soul Gem, the person can through channel his/her spell like abilities through the blade.

❅Skills❅


General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Adept
  • Kidō: -Refer To Kidō skill in app-
  • Zanjutsu: Advanced
  • Hakuda: Adept


Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept




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Fri Aug 28, 2015 9:54 am
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Alright, since Kakeru hasn't gotten to this yet, I'm going to go ahead and move this to unchecked to make sure staff knows it is reviewable. After I'm done with another character, I'll probably just review this myself.




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  • History is of appropriate length [X]
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  • Willpower/Determination: N/A
  • Mental Deduction: N/A
  • Pain Endurance: N/A
  • Focus:  N/A


  • Comments/Notes:
    ❅Thick Reiatsu: When releasing his own Reiatsu it doesn't effect large areas and is almost undetectable, except those of 0-3 Tier and above, but what it does is create a thick layer of energy around his body. Visually it is invisible, but when needed it can serve as Hierro, protecting from attacks up to Master strength or energy attacks on par with Cero Obscuras. This protection layer can sustain rapid attacks for seven posts, before getting cracks. If that continues for two more posts the defense will completely fall apart, creating a sudden feeling of strain, even if the male isn't tired actually. This feeling will last for two more posts, making it harder to fight. The field can be set on back after two more posts. If the attacks aren't rapid and has at least a pause of a post Dustian can sustain this field for as long, as he has some energy left in his body.

    Why is it almost undetectable? You've stated no reason for that to be the case. Explain that and allow counterplay.

    Also, I'd work this off of tier based on how effective and how long it last. So for each different tier level I'd want you to give me its durability and how long it sustain itself. Going from lowest to highest on the higher end of the tier spectrum.


    ❅ Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: When sealed, Dustians body and sword releases presence similar to Reiatsu, though it is almost nothing like that. When matter without a soul contacts Dustians body or sword it instantly turns into pure, crystal white ice. To state it clearly, the object doesn't freeze, but instead a alchemical reactions happens which turns the soul-less matter into ice. Upon turning into ice the matter will lose all its old properties, gain those of a real ice, as well, as additional traits stated below.

    How is this presence not reaitsu and why? You need some kind of energy as a medium to induce these effects I'm assuming.

    Furthermore, I'd rather not have it be instant. Instead, just have it occur quickly or within the span of a post. The reason for that is because I'm imagning something like a knife cutting it and then the opponent having no time to think of something. Even a small gap of time is fine. Additionally, are there any ways to counter it or fight back against it? Maybe reverse its effects? What about limits? Range of effect?


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kay, since Nix apparently poofed or something, I'm moving this into WIP for now until he comes back and contacts me about this character.




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Thu Sep 17, 2015 12:36 pm
So, I'm determent to finish this guy! So...I did the fixes and waiting for your orders ^,^


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Application Checklist

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  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills


  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes:
❅Thick Reiatsu: When releasing his own Reiatsu it doesn't effect large areas and is almost undetectable, except those of 0-3 Tier and above. There are multiple reasons why this is so. First, because of the Shraiks natural body trait which makes his body so it would waste as little energy, as possible. This is the reason why so many Shraiks are almost impossible to sense when regarding soul power. Second, the reiatsu that is radiated is so concentrated it doesn't radiate far from the male, as well, as it also tries to blend with the surrounding energy.

The main goal for it is to create a thick layer of energy around his body. Visually it is invisible, but when needed it can serve as Hierro, protecting from attacks. The durability of this defense is tied with Dustians tier. The following rules and conditions is for him to be able keeping a constant defense and not feeling strain. If wished and desired, Dust can add additional energy to boost his shield, but then after some time it will take toll to his body.

Tier 2-5 till 2-2: He can sustain 7 posts of rapid attacks with someone of Advanced strength or energy attacks of Tier 2-2. All attacks in strength and power above mentioned can be sustained for 5 posts, before Dusts defense is turned useless. When against GrandMaster or 0-3 Tier it takes only 2 posts. All attacks that are in strength of Adept and below are completely nullified, as well, as energy attacks of Tier 3 and below.
Tier 2-1 till 1-2: He can now sustain 12 posts of rapid attacks from Advance level strength and power till 1-2. Anything above can be sustained for 7 posts. O tier power and GrandMaster strength for 3 posts. Those below are nullified.
Till 0-3: The strength limit is now Master, power level till tier 0-3 and it can be kept for max of 17 posts or rapid attacks. If anything stronger then this time is reduced to 10 posts.
Tier 0-3 and up: Upon reaching the highest point of power Dustian Shraik can defend against strength of GrandMaster and power even of tier 0-1 for 17 posts. At this level those with strength Master and Tier 1-3 till 0-4 can break through his defense, though it would demand around 30 posts of rapid attacks.

Hey Nix, some error that need to be address; The numbers for those duration periods are way to high cause honestly most combat threads don't extend pass twelve post. I recommend bring those numbers down to something applicable in that time frame. I also think you need to explain if he takes normal body damage with this defense followed by does this drain his durability while active, and finally does this defense completely negate an attack or stops a certain portion of it and can a attack fully break it and how strong does that attack have to be. I also see you fixed how the thick energy is explained but you didn't let us know how someone can sense it. I'd recommend anyone above advance focus can easily since the aura within a certain area of distance.

When sealed, Dustians body and sword releases presence similar to Dustians reiatsu in the form of white mist.. When matter without a soul contacts Dustians body or sword it in few seconds turns into pure, crystal white ice. To state it clearly, the object doesn't freeze, but instead a alchemical reactions happens which turns the soul-less matter into ice. Upon turning into ice the matter will lose all its old properties, gain those of a real ice, as well, as additional traits stated below. While effective, Dust can only turn mass similar to a family bus in one go into ice. When regarding negating, a person can simply infuse enough of his energy in the object to disrupt the alchemical process. Though, to do that the person must at least be in the power of a one minor tier below Dust or up. Additionally Dustian had noticed it takes much more time to freeze something that contains large amount of energy. Example could be a power plant.

I've read over this but it doesn't seem you made the explanation frost asked for. You might have missed it or forgot to put it, make sure you update that, bud.

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Fri Sep 18, 2015 2:52 am
Done-ish!


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Application Checklist

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  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills


  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes:

Tier: 3-2+


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