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- Name: Jigoku No Bureizu
- Titles: The Infernal Falcon
- Gender: Male
- Age Of Death: 21
- Age: 241
- Affiliation/Rank: Korikku, 2305

- Appearance Picture:
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-Reiatsu Color: Orange

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- Personality:

Enigmatic:
Jigoku doesn't come along easily, it's very hard to understand who he is through conversation due to his ill state of mind. Not only this, but his speech isn't exactly the best either. He stutters a lot and slurs his words, and speaking to him for too long will frustrate him, usually causing a rampage.

Maniacal:
Mad isn't exactly the best way to describe this feature of his. He's not exactly the stereotypical, "evil-doer" he doesn't like torture, due to his severe impatience, but yet he loves to watch his enemies fall. Especially other hollows, weak or strong, he doesn't care. It's survival of the fittest out here and so far he's been one of the fittest to survive.

Egotistical:
He seems to see himself as the most badass hollow to walk Hueco Mundo. Though his stature isn't exactly large he believes just the way he goes about his day-to-day life can't be beat. He often speaks of when he becomes a Vasto Lorde he'll one day become King of Hueco Mundo.

Impetuous:
Not the brightest when it comes to his actions. He finds himself in immeasurable amounts of trouble due to this trait. For example, on occasions he will travel to the world of the living and and hunt souls other spiritual beings instead of feeding on hollows back in Hueco Mundo. He says they are all tasteless, but humans. They're full of flavor.

Arbitrator:
"I make decision, roun here." He often says, or something to that extent, he doesn't take kindly to taking orders from anyone else but himself. However he does have respect for one person, that being the man that has helped him succeed to what he is today, Domri Orijinaru.

Megalomaniac:
In addition to being infactuated by his own image he is practically just an overall fan of himself. He sees it as the only way to advance in his power is to be obsessed with it.

Ambitious:
His every living moment is played toward getting stronger, his devotion toward becoming more powerful is undying and even in an unevenly matched fight he is not one to stay on the ground.

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- Hollow type:
Adjuchas

- Hollow Power:

念力放火
Nenriki hōka(Agnikinesis):
Basically fire manipulation, he doesn't wield any weapons except for his claws and talons. He is able to blast fire from his hands and feet, but it takes a substantial amount of power to continuously produce blasts.

地獄の幻影
Jigoku no Gen'ei(Infernal Apparition):
He blasts out a blaze of heat in the surrounding area and then strikes from a distance controlling the dense hot air into solid hits, that can be blocked, but it's not wise because a nice smokescreen in combination with this ability and you won't be able to know what his next attack will be.(10 post recharge)

サンズ同情
Sanzu Dōjō(The Sun's Pity):
Being able to control fire and heat substances around him if he comes in contact with an enemy he is able to substantially lower the target's core body heat. Making the target shiver even in the hottest conditions until he lets go. Leaving them cold and clammy decreasing their resistance to fire damage to a minimum. (Effects last 3 posts, recharges after 12 posts)

コアの復讐
Koa no Fukushū(The Core's Revenge):
After charging his reiatsu, Jigoku is able to encase himself in a fiery blaze making his movement speed, strength, and defense substantially increase.(5 Post Duration)

コアフィナーレ
Koafināre(The Core's Finale):
As a finishing blow when in the Koa no Fukushū state Jigoku is able to make one last attempt before he is defeated. Taking all of the fire that is in his body he releases it with an abundance of reiatsu, bringing him to his knees in exhaustion. The radius blows up to 100 meters in all directions and reaches temperatures of up to 1500 degrees Fahrenheit.(Once per thread, but only used in dire situations to save him from death.)

虚閃 (セロ
Cero(Zero):
Through building up his reiatsu to his mouth he is able to make a large fiery cero blast.


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- Background:

Human:
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Born prematurely as last resort to keep him alive after his mother had overdose on different types of ecstasy in attempts to rid herself of the burden. Jigoku was born an orphan. He lived in an orphanage and struggled to get along with the other boys and girls, never really fitting in. He was teased often due to his red hair and scrawny stature, not to mention how short he was. He felt insignificant, and these feelings would remain the same for many years to come.

As he grew up and started attending school, he still continued to get bullied, however he didn't let this reflect on his grades. Studying was the only thing that he could do with his time, because none of the other orphans would let him use anything. He was an outcast at such a young age, and learned to deal with it rather quick. He would keep to himself and when he did get a chance to play with something he would just talk to it, as he had nobody else to talk to. These conversations typically led to tears and dismal thoughts.

One day after getting off the bus he figured he would go walk around for a little and explore the town, be a rebel. Something he didn't do very often, because of his fear of punishment. With the burst of courage he went to the park where he met some kids that actually liked him, it was fantastic. He had never experienced anything like this, it was possibly the greatest day of his life... which would come to a sudden end.

Gleefully skipping back to the orphanage from his great time in the park. He closed his eyes as he began to skip across the street humming a melody he had heard before. Not looking one way or the other to check for cars. He figured that nothing could go wrong on this glorious day. Well, he was wrong as a semi came trucking down the street, he couldn't hear it until it was too late to react. The semi driver wasn't even aware that he had hit anyone, Jigoku slid down the grill of the truck and flailed onto the street. His whole body was left astray, as he laid on the cold asphalt bleeding to death. One lonely teardrop fell from his face and splashed to the pavement as his heart stopped beating and his lungs stopped raising.

Shinigami:
After being a plus soul for about seven months walking around the park that he had spent the best day of his life at. He just wanted to play again, and wanted to enjoy himself. There was no doing that in this state, nobody was able to see him. Some kids would glance his way and see the chain hanging from his chest and run screaming.

Finally, a shinigami was alerted about his presence and swooped in. He was afraid of the man that draped himself in a black kimono and carried a sword, but he turned out to be extremely friendly. The two played together at the park for the rest of the afternoon and then performed the Konso that he would pass on. Although he just wanted to stay and play with the Shinigami forever, that's what he wanted to be when he grew up.

Upon coming to the soul society he was stranded in the streets of Rukongai, just like it was at the orphanage. This time, however, he was able to find someone to play with him. Although, he was tired of playing and wanted to train and become a shinigami like the other man. He and his friend trained diligently every day to obtain the potential they needed to attend the academy.

It wasn't but twenty years until he took the entrance exam, passing his first try. Even in his early years in the academy he excelled far more than the others, but he wanted to be stronger, that's all he ever wanted was to be stronger, then nobody could bully him or take his kindness for a weakness.

He graduated the shinigami academy and was assigned to the 11th division to the 18th seat. Which was a great accomplishment for him, since the 11th division was known for their great brute strength and pride.

After years he had been through many perilous battles and nearly always came out victorious, taking out adjuchas level hollows, thousands of menos and gillians and even defeating Quincy within Karakura Town. Though he was able to accomplish these feats he still wanted to obtain more power.

One day walking home to the barracks one of his division's seated members called him over asking him if he wanted real power. Of course, he would listen and promptly accept the offer. Soon enough he was deep within Hueco Mundo, but he wondered why nobody tried to attack them, as if this was an often occurrence. He approached a hole in the ground where they entered into an underground fortress, that stretched for miles. A young boy walked up to him and greeted him extending his hand asking Ji to come with him. The man's name was Domri and he wasn't a young boy he was actually a 1000 year old shinigami that became part hollow and created this organization, the Kurikku. This group was a perfect fir for Jigoku, they had a policy to never be alone and they granted him with hollow powers. There had to be a catch, though, and there was. There was a possibility that the transformation would fail. Willing to take the risk, he accepted the offer...

Though he was strong, he wasn't strong enough to tame the hollow within him letting it consume him and take over his body. He had became a Menos Hollow, unsatisfied with the results and unable to control his feelings and actions he raged off into Hueco Mundo to hunt the Shinigami who brought him here.

Hollow:
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After a while he was able to think clearly, but not speak clearly. He had lost his ability to speak at all with the hollowfication and it made him look stupid in the eyes of others. He was mute most of the time, except for when he was alone and unbothered, which was easy for him to do being able to fly. Which not many hollows were capable of. He began to practice his speech when he wasn't busy devouring the souls of other Hollows or going to Karakura Town to feed on the, oh so, tasty humans.

After being trapped in this form of a hollow for many years he was approached again by the same Shinigami, enraged he began to blast fire from his mouth to kill the shinigami and then picked him up with his talons soaring far into the sky letting go of him. He began to charge up a fiery cero blast as he was tackled by another member of the Kurikku. They told him that they would one come back for him and help him become stronger. So they did.

They brought Jigoku to prime hollow feeding spots where he battled over twenty menos in order to obtain his next level of power. Gillian.

Gillian:
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Being the most strong willed and minded, Jigoku was able to have full control of the Gillian and was stronger than most other gillians giving him the upper hand when it came to feeding on his own.

It didn't take much longer for him to continue evolving with the help of the Kurikku. Soon enough he compressed his size and became an adjuchas, he then decided that it would be wise to side and join with these people. They gave him the number 2305, being his original date he joined, and assigned him to be a Damage dealer.

Adjuchas:

Upon becoming an adjuchas he was told that he would have to begin to feed more regularly on other hollows in order to maintain his state. If not, he would become a gillian once more and would have little to no chance to be able to become an Adjuchas again.

Since being a part of the Kurikku he has been a part of some large operations including a large scale attack/feeding frenzy for the hollows in Rukongai. Special operations within Karakura Town in order to find plus souls, but Shinigami always got in the way, and Jigoku being the damage of the group he would be the one to kill them. Tasks such as these had begun to be easier and easier, all though he wasn't able to go toe-to-toe with a captain level shinigami, but he still trains day-to-day in order to reach the level of Vasto Lorde.



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General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Advanced
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Acid Skill: Adept
  • Garganta : Adept
  • Cero/Bala: Adept
  • Regeneration: Beginner


Will Skills[/b]
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept





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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [O]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination:
  • Mental Deduction:
  • Pain Endurance:
  • Focus:


Comments/Notes:

Luke von Fabre, the image you are presently using for the human form, is claimed. I'm aware you're never going to be using it but it still may not be utilized in the app.

There also seems to be some confusion with the hollow hierarchy. Hollows are first divided in to two classes, normal hollows and then Menos. Inside the Menos classification, are Gillian, Adjuchas, and Vasto Lorde. The jump from a normal hollow to a Menos happens when thousands of hollows effectively glue themselves together to become one entity and they enter in to the Gillian form. From there they may gain self-awareness through one soul gaining control of the mass of souls and from there they consume hollows to go from Gillian, to Adjuchas, so on. Menos itself is not a form of being but is the classification for Gillians, Adjuchas, and Vasto Lordes.

サンズ同情
Sanzu Dōjō(The Sun's Pity):
Being able to control fire and heat substances around him if he comes in contact with an enemy he is able to remove all heat within their bodies making the target shiver even in the hottest conditions until he lets go. Leaving them cold and clammy decreasing their resistance to fire damage to a minimum. (Effects last 3 posts, recharges after 12 posts)
This isn't what you're going for, I know, but please change "remove all heat" to "Drastically lowers their body temperature." Removing all heat would cause their blood to freeze and they would immediately die from that alone, not to mention everything else that would instantly kill them due to "all heat" being evicted from their body.

Koa no Fukushū(The Core's Revenge):
After charging his reiatsu, Jigoku is able to encase himself in a fiery blaze making his movement speed, strength, and defense substantially increase.(Once Per Thread)
Oh em gee, Super Saiyan Blaziken! Requires a 5 post duration. "Once per thread." means all of nothing if its indefinite.

コアフィナーレ
Koafināre(The Core's Finale):
As a finishing blow when in the Koa no Fukushū state Jigoku is able to make one last attempt before he is defeated. Taking all of the fire that is in his body he releases it with an abundance of reiatsu, bringing him to his knees in exhaustion. The radius blows up to 100 meters in all directions and reaches temperatures of up to 6000 degrees Fahrenheit, which is three-fifths of the Earth's inner core temperature.(Once per thread, but only used in dire situations to save him from death.)
Yeah...no...since we insist on using actual measurements you're gonna need to drop that 6000 down to 1500. It's still hot enough that it will burn through every metal modern humanity has been able to make without...you know, encroaching on the Earth's core in temperature and igniting everything in a mile radius through sheer residual heat.

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Thu Nov 28, 2013 9:28 am
I made adjustments accordingly. As far as the becoming Hollow evolution chain goes:



And as for the cores temperature, I changed it of course, but the Earth's inner core is actually 6000 Kelvin... not 6000 degrees Fahrenheit.


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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: remove the reference to the Earth's Core. then you're golden.
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