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|Subject Post 1Subject: Kamui Shiyong Fri Apr 22, 2016 2:01 am|| |
» Name Of Character:
Kamui Cruor» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t14311-kamui-cruor-approved-0-3#91409» Upgrading:
Adding Shiyong ability
Xíngróngcí: Kamui’s Shiyong is...weird...which given the owner shouldn’t come as even the most remote of surprises and his particular Chi ability draws heavily on both his Sugiuran Roots and his Patriarchal history. As such, Kamui’s Shiyong draws from his Fuuinjutsu and ridiculous mixed breed energy reserves to do something truly...well...round about for a being of his magnitude. Instead of a giant death laser or an impenetrable wall of walliness, Kamui uses the power of words to handle his opponent or, more specifically, adjectives.
The ability comes in two parts. The first part is the application. First, Kamui needs to apply the word to an opponent. The word will manifest as written language, usually of whatever Kamui was feeling linguistically inclined to on that certain day, along the surface of an object or, more specifically, a target noun. There are currently three ways for Kamui to apply a seal to an object. The first and probably most obvious is drawing the word itself, either in ink, in pencil, in blood, carving it with a knife, the method does not especially matter but Kamui is capable of drawing the appropriate symbols and triggering the Xingrongci through them.
The other two options are a little more flexible and less time consuming, but carry their own problems. Kamui is capable of mentally creating the written word on whatever object he can place his palm against. The Cruor will visualize the seal he wishes to employ and upon placing his palm upon an object, that symbol will be etched into the object. Words applied in this fashion will last for five posts. The final method allows Kamui to etch one of the symbols into an object he is looking at by visualising the seal and forcibly imposing it upon the object. This requires the man’s Chi, or at least the residual left behind from his chi, to be inside the object. Consequently he can only apply a seal through line of sight if his Chi had coursed through the object at some time three posts or less prior to the application. These words themselves are impossible to remove without either cancelling the Chi used in their creation or physically destroying the object they are placed upon, unfortunately they will only last two posts before dissipating of their own accord.
Once Kamui has successfully applied the power though, the effects that can take place are limited to the extent of written language and his own energy capacities, making for a very flexible power. For instance, Kamui could write the word “Blue” on to an object and the object would become blue. However, there are limitations to this ability and just what Kamui is able to accomplish. For instance, the ability itself does require energy. The adjective applied to an object needs a proportional amount of energy to the effect Kamui is trying to produce. For instance, writing the word “Dead” on a Kitten and having it die would be a rather simple matter, writing the same word on a 0 tier would require a considerably larger amount of energy, energy that no living being really has. As such, while Kamui is afforded a lot of flexibility with this ability, the scale to which he can perform these tasks is limited and requires more creativity than raw power. In addition, Kamui is only able to write adjectives at this time which greatly limits the effects he is able to impart on to an object and for words that can possess multiple forms, Kamui only has access to the adjective tense.» Why:
Chi Rework» Extra:
Kamui should be 0-2 so extra go go
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Kamui Shiyong Fri Apr 22, 2016 2:11 am|| |
This is pretty fair and balanced in terms of usage and power. Going stamp this with my seal of approval if no one objects. (Save for the 0-2. )