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Mirja Eeola
Mirja Eeola
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Thu Sep 15, 2016 2:29 pm
Kami no Kuma Beowulf is a bankai centered around versitility via transformation, and physical enhancement at a cost. There are Five Rings to unlock, each granting greater power for Mirja, and allowing her to draw on Beowulf's power more completely.


Mirja Eeola's Awesome Bankai [The Rings of Beowulf] QerxJ3c

» Name Of Character: Mirja Eeola
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t16312-mirja-eeolaapproved-2-1

» Upgrading: Mirja Eeola Bankai. [First Ring]


Bankai name: Kami no Kuma Beowulf [God of Bears, Beowulf]

Bankai Apperance: The First Ring of Kami no Kuma Beowulf, the Ring of Begining, is pretty underwhelming. There is only a limited change in apperance from her Shikai to her First Ring bankai. The gauntlets and greaves make a return, as well as an addition of a white-gold exo-skeleton that covered Mirja's body. Much like Mirja herself, the Bankai lacks flair and is easy to underestimate until it is brought into action.

Bankai Abilities: Much like her shikai release being in two parts, Mirja's Bankai starts up slow, the progression scaling with Mirja's own physical and spiritual enhancements as she can withstand each Ring. The First Ring grants Mirja a basic, but dramatic increases in her physical power, easily dwarving the power that she recieves from her fully released Shikai.

» Why: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t16519-cake-or-death-solo#107304

» Extra: Llama Overlords.




Mirja Eeola's Awesome Bankai [The Rings of Beowulf] QerxJ3c

» Name Of Character: Mirja Eeola
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t16312-mirja-eeolaapproved-2-1

» Upgrading: Mirja Eeola Bankai. [Second Ring]


Bankai name: Kami no Kuma Beowulf [God of Bears, Beowulf]

Bankai Apperance: The Second Ring of Kami no Kuma, The Ring of Versitility is actually in several parts. Each appearance is detailed in the Abilities below. However, the one similarity is the white-gold colouration.

Bankai Abilities: The Second Ring is the form where Beowulf comes into it's own as a Bankai. Allowing several more forms to be unlocked, Mirja can morph her Bankai to most situations. She retains a variant of her first form, God of Bone, but recieves further physical enhancement from it, as well as the following;

God of Claws: The small claws on the ends of Beowulf's gauntlets grow out to thrice their size, and the edges become incredibly sharp, allowing Mirja to claws through most things without much problem, when her immense strength is brought to bare, and they look pretty intimidating as well. This is most helpful when she needs something that cuts, more than it crushes. It is the least overt transformation, being merely clawed gloves, without even the usual exo-skeleton.


God of Steel: A highly defensive, endurance form, this technique makes Beowulf resemble a suit of high-tech plate armour, mimicking Mirja herself in it's durability and weight. This reduces her speed by quite a bit, but also increases her defensive capabilites tremendously, allowing her to survive blows that would put holes in her, were she without the protection of the suit. The unique part about this form is the syncronization is the highest out of all the forms, literally taking several layers of Mirja's skin to meld with the armour plates. This makes regeneration after damage easier due to the inclusion of Mirja's living tissue. But hurts like holy hell. The speed reduction and lack of any offensive capabilities makes this form one designed merely to outlast the enemy, rather than do anything proactive to beat the enemy.



God of Fire: An advanced form of God of Bone, this injects needles into Mirja's body, and induces an Adrenaline Rush by stimulating her glands, pushing her bodily functioned far above what they would normally operate at, and making her a Juggernaught of Death. However, the downside is the adrenal crash after the body had absorbed the adrenline [3 posts, an additional 3 posts for every Ring beyond the Second that Mirja has unlocked], causing her to become breathless, and possible unconsciousness due to her inability to breath properly. If she manages to regulate her breathing, then she still has to deal with the exhaustion from acting above what her body could safely handle. Also, needles really hurt, which is another downside of this form. The density and strength of her bones and muscles prevent her from tearing them in use, but her body as a whole will feel lethalgic and difficult to uterlize after this form has run it's course, making it a form to overwhelm, rather than an Ace-in-the-hole









» Why: N/A

» Extra: Llama Overlords.





Mirja Eeola's Awesome Bankai [The Rings of Beowulf] QerxJ3c

» Name Of Character: Mirja Eeola
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t16312-mirja-eeolaapproved-2-1

» Upgrading: Mirja Eeola Bankai. [Third Ring]


Bankai name: Kami no Kuma Beowulf [God of Bears, Beowulf]

Bankai Apperance: The Third Ring of Kami no Kuma Beowulf, the Ring of Sacrifice, has two forms. The Form of Focused Destruction, and The Form of Wide-Spread Destruction. These two forms give it the name Mirja prefers because Ring of Sacrifice is to morbid; Ring Of Destruction.

Bankai Abilities: Ursa Drive: Appearing to combine God of Steel, God of Bone, and God of Fire, while also increasing the base power and strain of each form, Ursa Drive is dangerous to Mirja's well-being, and requires a passcode like a Shikai release to uterlize. 'Crush the Dream, Spread the Light, Conquer the World!'. Once unlocked, Mirja's physical power becomes astronomically enhanced, as well as granting her the power needed to uterlize God Of Steel without a reduction in speed, capable of blood-curdling feats of raw, brute strength and durability. This is a double-edged sword, however, since she burns through her endurance at a rate that she can not govern or gauge after the useage of this. The adrenals are even more potent than in the base God of Fire technique, and so she can tear muscles and break bones if she pushes herself to far.


Great God of Destruction: An extensive morphing sees Beowulf take the form of a massive jet engine-esque cannon, arrayed on Mirja's arm. It is extremely bulky, and heavy, even for Mirja's monsterous strength, and so needs her second arm to stabalize it, leaving her defenseless.

The Turbine that makes up the main body sucks a vast degree of air into the cannon, which then spins at a massive rate of revolutions. The unfortunate side-effect of this is that it totally shreads her arm, snapping the bone and splitting the skin, making her bleed profuiously into the turbine. All this pays off in a gigantic blast of compressed air kept coherent in a casing of Reiatsu from the front end of the cannon, laying abosulte waste to absolutely anything in front of her, the blast tinted crimson between her blood and Beowulf's black Reiatsu. After firing, the cannon falls apart, and Mirja is left with a small Cestus on the hand that has just been devestated, making the bankai useless until sealed and re-released, generally after the arm is repaired. It's massive hitbox can be rendered useless by the fact that it takes a fair amount of time to spin up, allowing the target to dodge out of the way. Trapped targets, or stationary/linear targets are the best things to his with this attack.

» Why: N/A

» Extra: Llama Overlords.





Mirja Eeola's Awesome Bankai [The Rings of Beowulf] QerxJ3c

» Name Of Character: Mirja Eeola
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t16312-mirja-eeolaapproved-2-1

» Upgrading: Mirja Eeola Bankai. [Fourth Ring]


Bankai name: Kami no Kuma Beowulf [God of Bears, Beowulf]

Bankai Apperance: The Fourth Ring of Kami no Kuma Beowulf, the Ring of Warping, is a Ring that features both previously seen forms with new takes, and totally new forms with incredible power. They are all considered 'Illegal Moves' by Mirja, since the power of herself and Beowulf reach the penultimate level at this Ring, and allow for things that are generally considered against the laws of physics. Each form has a limit of four posts [six posts when the Fifth Ring is unlocked], since the mantaining puts a very large physical strain on Mirja.

Bankai Abilities: Illegal Move - Feather Plate: This technique takes Mirja's God Of Steel technique, and turns the weight of it to be less than a feather. While still hurting because it still takes her skin to create this form, it does not weight her down in the slightest, allowing her to keep her speed and benefit from it's durability.


Illegal Move - Distain of The Materium: Another take on Mirja's God Of Steel technique. This creates a suit of armour, with interesting internal devices. It has an air-recirculation device, and Mirja sees through Beowulf's eyes rather than her own. The need of this comes from the fact that the armour is enviromentally sealed, making it air-tight and rendering Mirja immune to any air-based attacks, or anything based around the temprature [certain extremes still apply, however]

Illegal Move: Vorpal Claws - This technique takes God Of Claws, and gives the claws an edge of infinte width, allowing it to be sharp enough to cut through any matieral it comes across. The claws are also edged with spiritual particles that allow it to cut through barriers of a non-physical nature.


Illegal Move: Nova Screamer - This technique makes an entirely new form, looking like a metal glove with a gleaming circle in the middle of it. The glove has an incredible vaccum capability, allowing it to absorb a massive amount of air from the surrounding area in seconds - this can also function to remove pollutants from the air, as an unorthodox usage, but this can not power the Nova Screamer - and compress it into a chamber in the gauntlet. Within the neigh-miraculous micro-machines that inhabit the gauntlet, the oxygen is seperated from the rest, and then fed into a chamber. Once the process is complete, it is extruded out of the gauntlet, and a spark is introduced, creating a concentrated explosion, similar to a shotgun, but with a lot more boom.


Illegal Move - The Many Armed God: Mirja's most crazy form, this turns Beowulf into two pairs of arms attached to her upper back and shoulders. These arms, not part of Mirja's body, possess the majority of Beowulf's incalculable might, and can be used to overwhelm things that Mirja's own colossal power can not. Able to deal a flurry of blows, and deflect shots with much greater ease and speed than Mirja with only two arms, this form is the pinnacle of this ring's close quarter combat.

» Why: N/A

» Extra: Llama Overlords.




Kami no Kuma Beowulf is a bankai centered around versitility via transformation, and physical enhancement at a cost. There are Five Rings to unlock, each granting greater power for Mirja, and allowing her to draw on Beowulf's power more completely.


Mirja Eeola's Awesome Bankai [The Rings of Beowulf] QerxJ3c

» Name Of Character: Mirja Eeola
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t16312-mirja-eeolaapproved-2-1

» Upgrading: Mirja Eeola Bankai. [Fifth Ring]


Bankai name: Kami no Kuma Beowulf [God of Bears, Beowulf]

Bankai Apperance: The Fifth Ring of Kami no Kuma Beowulf, the Ring of Conquest, is beautiful. Unlike the other forms, it take the apperance of a metalic looking dress. Covering her in a stately fashion, it could be mistaken for armour at a glance, but closer inspection makes it obvious that the covering is much more decorative than most armour. Dainty white ball gloves, with an apperance somewhere between metal and satin, adorn her hands, and also let off the same shining light.

However, overshadowing this, is a large pair of skeletal wings that strech from Mirja's back, splayed ominously, as if they belonged to Death Itself. Sixteen gems are studded in the joints of the wings, and they light up as the form is held. The first power of this form, before anything else, is it's intimidating and overwhelming appearance. Fit for an Empress, and gleaming with light, even in the darkest underground caves.

Bankai Abilities: Beowulf and Mirja's power merge with this form, such that the force of her Reiatsu exceeds the density of her Reiryoku, and so she a field of Spiritual Pressure so thick and heavy, that it mimics Mirja's body. This form allows all of Beowulf's power to come to the forefront. However, to dump it all on her at once would be too dangerous, so every five seconds, it doubles her strength as Beowulf grants her even more. The dress is saturated with Mirja's Reiatsu, and formed formed from her own skin like God Of Steel, and allows unparalleled defensive protection. The gloves absorb the kinetic recoil of each punch, and so aid Mirja in protecting her against herself, as well as allowing her to mimic her Shikai powers and absorb light photons. These photons can then be compressed and shot from her finger as heat beams, enhanced by her Reiatsu to burn through most physical objects and some spiritual objects.

However, the physical toll it takes to maintain this form is momentous. Mirja can safely maintain the form for four posts, at which point she can push it to another three. However, if she pushes, then at the end of the three posts her Zanpaktou sealed herself, and Mirja passes out on the spot, comotosed for an indefinate period of time. Medical treatment can help at this point, but her body has been so drained of it's energies that very little can make a proper impact, until she recovers properly.


» Why: N/A

» Extra: Llama Overlords.



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Mon Sep 19, 2016 1:11 am

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This Bankai feels a bit -- brief. I feel you could add more detail to it if you wanted. You could describe new techniques, talk about the theme of the bankai, describe it's abilities more and so on.


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Mirja Eeola
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Mon Sep 19, 2016 6:12 am
It's brief because it's only the First of Four Rings. 2-1 bankais are meant to be pretty scant, right?
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Mon Sep 26, 2016 12:36 pm

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I'll approve both rings for now. When she goes up two more tiers, she'll unlock the next four and then the last ring at around 1-3 tier.


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