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IM SORRY IM SUCH A BURDEN



ALESSIA RYZHAKOV





BASICS









• Name:
Alessia Rhyzhakov
• Age:
203
• Gender:
female
• Branch/Position:
None currently
• Race:
Demon Iramasha

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• Personality:

Innocent:
The main way to define Alessia is truly by the girls innocents. She truly matches her current appearance her personality being almost childlike and ignorant to the monstrosities of the world. The girl always tries to see the good in everyone's hearts and wants to love life despite all that she has within, even to the point of her previous attempts at suicide. She is often seen as someone who has been sheltered away from evil for the most part and when she comes face to face with things that breed hate she still manages to find good qualities over their darkness. To this extent the girl can be quite dim witted sometimes being unaccustomed to the way of things and only learning it all for the first time. Alessia also has a tendency to come across a bit shy at first glance but opens up slowly to those she considers her friends. However to gain this girls favor isn't really easy a fact most learn very quickly when they try to put on the "motherly" act for her, she tends to think this is just people acting strange and not being what they truly are a fact that makes her often times see them as scary and people who are trying to get close to hurt her a factor she probably takes from her early life.

protective:
Alessia is a girl that is beyond protective, though she has a tendency to run from battle rather than fighting when it comes to someone she likes and is friends with telling her to fight or needing help the girl will always come forth. She despite the powers she does have always considers fighting as bad and doesn't really want to hurt others, but when it comes to helping those she likes or being loyal to those who are her friends or friends allies she will step up to the plate and show just what she is made of, a factor that can end in disaster due to her ideal of making sure any who harm her or those she likes are hurt right back in turn. thanks to this little personality quirk Alyssa is a very loyal person and those who gain her favor aren't going to just be left alone in the middle of a fight by her, she will sit back but running away and letting her buddies get hurt definitely isn't like this girl.

Happy:
given time one may notice that this girl is one who seemingly cant contain a smile. Its near impossible to see her angry sure but upset is a very different matter. The girl is filled with anxiety and fear, but also a sadness within her that she tries to hold all on her own. Despite her odd times of throwing tantrums or crying out of fear she will quickly try to return a small sad smile to her face, even if she still has tears rolling down her face she wants to try and be someone who doesn't make others sad because of her sadness. Alessia is easily entertained and drawn to laughter and emotions such as admiration quite easily maybe this is due to her past with confinement and sadness breeding a want for emotions like these. The girl also tends to be unbelievably humble and finds the best things about any situation or person, even if it boils down to just the distraction of their prettiness.

Brokenly Playful:
As old as she is Alyssa never really grew fond of growing in maturity, the girl loved games and loved to joke around and enjoy little moments. When it comes to her tendencies she tends to remain as sort of childish which to some ends up coming off as quite the cute and her attitude towards being playful and trying to make friends, though when it comes to people trying to do something like hit on her the girl may be to scared of the things of her past to ever want something like this, it frightens her to an extent and can end with her breaking down almost to an extent the girl is unsure what the ideas of love is something she feels she cant really understand, creating quite the dint in her playful meter.

Cowardly:
The girl in the purest sense of the word is afraid of nearly everything. the dark scary things that send chills down ones spine would send her crying for her friends, she is someone who is easily scared and though she calms very quickly she can be frightened to the point of being unable to move. because of her tendency to be a bit of a coward she dislikes fighting and thinks that all the scary things in life though sometimes necessary to faced should be avoided when unneeded.

Broken:
Alessia could quite literally be considered a broken girl. The past she suffered through has left the girl scared inside and out, she has tried multiple times to end herself but each and everyone only seemed to cut away at what she was and never kill it. The girl is what one may consider to be an existential victim of abuse, being shut down inside a little to the point small things scare her and break her down. She is scared of being alone more than anything else, her mind and the voices insider are something she is scared of maybe because as a child she came to fear the screams around her thinking it was all in her head ... hell maybe they were.


APPEARANCE







• Appearance:
there are few words to describe Alessia's appearance, one of the very few would be innocent. the girl always seems to have a innocent and almost sheltered look to her as if she is unknowing of any wrongs in the world. With her long red spiky hair has never really needed to worry about her looks in fact she hates the idea of worrying about them as it takes away from real problems, to this extent it seems she naturally has her looks not needing to spend any time at all trying to fix herself up something showing with her hair and the frazzled-ness of it. However in an odd phenomenon it seems something of a small bit of naturalism works as it strikes down to her pale white skin never has it ever had a single blemish not even simple sunburn regardless of how long she spends in the sun. among this odd occurrence however there's something even more striking about the girl something that just seems to draw one in and almost reflect back like she is looking into their soul, the dark red eyes that seemed to look past all the bad and all the wrongs and just draw true innocents to the world.

The clothes she wears just seem to match the girls intrigue. Mainly seen in a sweater of a tanned sort of color accompanied by a small black skirt with matching knee high stockings and black undershirt that seemingly sit bellow even hid by this sweater of hers, Alessia has no real wonder for the idea of dressing extravagantly, for to her clothes are just another thing to have and is there to cover her scars alone. Though in terms of the clothes she wears Alyssa doesn't really care this way or the next as her thoughts usually tend those those she is around and less to herself, meaning a rip and a tear wont stop her for she may be worried about herself but others are something more important than her in the girls eyes.

• Appearance Age:
18-19
• Height:
5'8
• Weight:
65kg


BACKGROUND







• Background:
Born among the dark Alessia was from birth something that nothing good ever came from. The girls very family hated what she was, a killer that was born in blood before she could even walk. Alessia's mother died giving birth to the girl, leaving her in a family full of hate and loathing. Her father was a proud man broken apart by the loss of his wife. He could never stand to look in Alessia's eyes as she grew, for they reminded him of his wife so much it cut at him. Relying on others the girl grew up not knowing a mother or fathers love, those around her too seemed to shun the girl growing up she knew no real love and around the time she was set to turn ten things would become worse. One day the girl ended up slipping through the ice she and the other children played on, yet as she hit on the glassy encasing that covered over her escape it looked like no-one would come … then he was there. Her father smashed his boot through the ice before dragging her out. His cries and shaking speaking only 2 words to the girl two of the last words she’d ever here from her father “I’m sorry.”

Her father killed himself the next day, Alessia awoke to find the man had hung himself while she slept. People came and took her from her home, dragging her crying from this scene taking her to someplace new. The girl ended up in foster care, a loving younger couple took the girl in, at first sight they seemed so perfect taking in multiple children to give them a home until they decided to leave. Alessia was among eight other children when coming into this home yet she always wondered if this was what she sought and wanted from her fathers for all those years … was this parental love?

She walked in upon her foster parent, these “loving” people exchanging money with a man before dragging Alessia to the basement where awaited several men. They were grabbing her from all sides as they forced her down pinning her to the ground as her father share not a wink towards her, the girls screams fell on death ears as these monsters beat the girl driving their kicks into the child. Broken bones and blood spewing forth the girls arm still reached for those whose care she was put into, crying as her vocal chords stopped working, the pressure of one of their boots collapsing one of her lungs. She grasped for his foot and like the darkness he was he kicked it away looking down on her with a hate speaking only the words "don't touch me."

These monsters broke her, ripped everything she was apart evil that tortured a girl not even ten tearing at her like a pack of wolves, and as they tore her clothes from her they’d not take the final thing from her as easily. The man who cut at her clothes laughing at this girls who's eyes filled with so much blood she couldn't even keep them open found himself gargling choking on his own blood as the mans own organs began to explode none truly knew what was happening. The blue was all Alessia saw as she plead to it all she heard was this one who was her savior whispering "i wont ever leave you." into her ear, Alessia was no longer alone. The blood enveloped the world around her as she passed out shaking as she entered shock.

But she awoke, and not where one might expect, she walked along the ice feilds of Russia bare foot the clothes on her back gone, frost bite encasing over half her right arm and blood trailing in the white. The girl didn't know how she had come to this point but she broke down screaming to the ice bellow as much as her destroyed lungs would allow before throwing up blood, and as it came forth she collapsed passing out once more. Where she awoke this time however, even she did not know. A room of white the walls closing in around her as screams, mumbling, singing and pure voices shot to the frightened girl, the only thing that calmed them was the same girl with that blue hair jumping on her that brimming smile bringing her a little hope.

Her wounds had been tended to the healing capabilities of this facility was immense, a sort of sanctuary for those gifted to the program. Children not much older than Alessia herself playing within a court yard as men in white coats watched, but Alessia couldn't be one of them. She watched on shyly denying the requests to join them playing, for even now in a place that from the outside seemed so perfect Alessia was even more alone. A fact reiterated as it all seemed to fade away and only the tests were real anymore. The men in lab coats ran test after test testing her mental capabilities and the powers which she held. For this was not some sort of hospital for those taken by loneliness ... this was a lab and these children were the rats which they would play god with. Alessia was torn apart and put back together more times than she could count everything cut away at her, children going missing, psychiatric tests that just made her mind break as they pushed ideas into her head, even going so far as to literally torture the girl, pouring salt into her wounds after each time they broke her apart.

The testing continued for years everything building as she was broken down and made even more hurt than ever before. But she never lost herself she took solace in something so small as the world around her, hearing the birds sing of a morning before tests she could almost picture something peaceful. She learnt to embrace the quiet and the noise and see something beautiful within, no matter how much pain she endured she kept trying to come back… that was until the day her heart stopped beating. These men believed the torture had killed the girl tearing her open and performing an autopsy they decided that this subject was not to be found, and their decision lead to what came next.

Hurled into the ice water buried under the sleet Alessias heart began pounding as her eyes opened, the girl clawed at the ice hitting it as the water invade her lungs, but this time no-one would save her. The girl was crying not wanting to die not wanting it all to be over, and then she did it … she depressurised the entire mass of water and sent the ice crushing outwards in a mass explosion. Did she mean to do this? No but the girl was saved because of it. She crawled to the edge of the water climbing to the shore as she vomit up the water encasing her lungs … the girl was free …. But her mind was not.

Everything seemed so big outside those walls she was encased in, she found herself longing for the confinement for everything outside was so loud so amassed, it was beautiful …. But she didn’t deserve this beauty. The girl wandered forth till her legs once more succumb to frost bite and her feet were ripped apart, but the girl didn’t cry about this she just trailed forth unable to listen to the loudness around her … for the fire was all she saw.

The girl stood in the light of the place she had been confined for so many years, burning to ash as doctors and men who tore her apart bodies littered the ground, people slaughtered, some may invoke they deserved it… but not her. She ran tears running down her eyes as she screamed forth her fist connecting with one of the two beastly individuals in front of hers chest, the smaller man who stood trying to quell his friend before she came. Her fist touching to his chest as it lost all power slipping as she broke down crying, even if this place had taken everything from her it was all she had and she knew not how to be without it.

Azure Iramasha the man who took her from the confines of Russia and the metal cell she longed for to a home in karakura, a place so open that it seemed to go on forever. Alessia found herself some ights throwing up from sheer panic of all that around her unable to stop the fear off, she even began sleeping within a cupboard trying to confine herself back to her box, but they wouldn’t let her sink into the hole. She was constantly dragged out made to face this world before her, she didn’t complain mainly for she never truly talked to anyone she bottled everything within her up. They brought her to begin using her powers trying to teach her to control her chaos energy, the girls instability proved to be the biggest problem however for when they tried to teach her she did take to the practice like a person who had used it all her life, but that was the problem.

The girl in her very first session showed more control over her own chaos energy than any of her fellow iramasha in the room, even capable of using her own chaos energy to infect the substances they were manipulating with their chaos energy and make it impossible to even move, a funny scene to watch as they tried to help her. The girl kept on with her secrecy hiding in plain sight while her people tried to teach her of her powers, a subject she became spectacular at, but behind her strength was a cowardly girl broken by fear, prone to panic attacks and so alone she simply sat in her bed at night rocking back and forth listening for the whispers that never came, the world around her was loud and each noise was beautiful but she wanted to hear the things that would break her.

The girl ended up trying to hang herself, she spasm there her vision going black all before she fell, the rope had snapped and as she lay there crying breath wheezing out she wanted to just end it all. Readjusting to life outside was beyond difficult to the girl she found herself fascinated by the smallest things everything was a new experience or something to question or be feared. Some of the vanguard looking after her saw the girl as odd by this time, she was often confrontational with things never seeing a true line until she had crossed it at which point she found herself at odds against herself again. Twice more she tried to hang herself once being interrupted during, all the questions they asked just made her retreat more into her shell, the third time however she didn’t even make it to tying the noose round her neck. Azure Iramasha the man who had liberated her and brought her here came to her seeing the noose he didn’t try to stop her but he gave her something to strive for instead, he wante her to help him to drive away that pain inside and becoming the one protecting the weak and broken not just watching as more where ripped apart like her. And with that he left leaving one thing, a small music player and headphones stating she would need to find the sound she would emit to the world like he had.

Alessia sat there for so long before putting on those headphones and listening to the simple song, even now she can’t remember what it was … but it was beautiful to her and as she broke down in tears she lay her fist into the table no longer lacking any strength, no longer unwavering and broken and intent to die … she was a coward and cried at so much, but she didn’t want to be alone anymore.



SEISHIN BUKI




BABY BLUE







• Seishin Buki Name:
actual name Unknown has been known to take the aliases "baby, blue, baby blue, sky blue, the blue power ranger, the rower (in honor of the greatest man alive) and anything else relating to seemingly water........ also likes the name hoe though doesn't really understand what it means

• Seishin Buki Appearance:
This seishin Buki is quite literally something entirely different to what one may expect of the shy little girl that is Alessia. The appearance of Blue is quite a unique look for the girl, having an appearance that outright just shows off her outgoing personality, be it the deep purple hue of her hair or her natural happy go lucky smile that never seems to go away.Thee form of her Buki is within that of a small girl, this is a manifestation of Alessias need for companionship creating the idealistic "companion" for herself. Even gifting her with the powers of her own form by using the girl as a vessel for Alessias original power base, sealing half her actual powers away inside blue in order for her to maintain control, by doing this she has made it so that Blue is capable of manipulating the powers within her though this is not actually the girl doing such acts but the subconscious of Alessia who wields the energy stored within blue to manipulate these said techniques without even realizing she is doing so.

• Seishin Buki Abilities:

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ABILITIES AND POWERS








• Powers:

Pressure manipulation -
The basis for all of Alessia's abilities, this is defined by the girls innate ability to warp the particles in the very atmosphere around her, this enables her to literally change the pressure caused by collisions, be it a simple punch where she could enhance the pressure to overbearing levels even implanting huge amounts of pressure in to any object she touches or within her circle of influence making it so she could turn a hit from a baseball bat into something capable of leveling a mediums sized house, or simply using this power to reduce the impacting pressure of an attack intended to hit her, this technique has numerous uses. The main impact of this move is the ideal of changing the pressure of the very atmosphere around her in her effect field, an area with a radius of effect around her in a three meter zone, acting as a sort of bubble in which control extends to massive levels so great she could use her pressure to degrade the very oxygen molecules in the air, however she can exert external force on the area outside her bubble the pressure capable of being changed however is nothing compared to her feats within her zone of effect being on example only able to weaken the oxygen particles in this outside field which ranges for about fifteen meters in radius. Though if she evokes pressure onto another thing she touches she can manipulate the pressure exerted by the atmosphere itself on certain object from a massive hundred meter distance allowing despite a massive distance her to be able to continuously exert pressure onto said object alone due to her focus being solely concentrated however when passing this hundred meter mark all pressure he has on said object will dissipate and her infection of it will degrade completely making her have to touch it again to start manipulating pressure on it once more. this is done by her chaos energy infecting the particles touching her body and whilst spreading forth morphing it to the girls will, this means that to use this technique one must be in contact with the substance which they wish to change the pressure of, meaning they wouldn't be able to stop the pressure of say someone hitting a person outside her feilds of effect from her, however she would be able to stop the pressure if she were subject to the attack or she could at least lower the impact if they were within her fifteen meter field of effect or stop it completely if they where within her 3 meter field, this means that this whilst a very strong offensive move it is also very determent on the girls natural defensive abilities. It has been said that this in theory could be one of the ultimate defenses around as it can shift the pressure in almost any attack rendering it little more than a bugs touch to her be it elemental, energy or just physical it is all affected, however the downfall to this perfect defense is pretty simple in the way she can only use her pressure shifting on one thing at a time meaning she couldn't attack whilst defending and if someone were to launch a barrage of attacks against her inevitably one would slip through.

Piezoelectric generation/control -
A technique based from Alessia's powers, this unique ability is one that stems from her pressure manipulation and puts it to use in a brand new way, conducting and creating electricity from pure pressure. This is done by her ability to compressing particles and literally squeezing the electrons within, this allows the exerting pressure to destabilize charged particles and essentially create electricity. through this technique baby is able to literally create and control electricity via her pressure manipulation acting as a sort of guide for the energy. This power is one that enables her to take her pressure control to a brand new level due to her charging of electrons the girl can then specifically control the exerting pressure to create even plasma through the changing of the atomic structure, the girls control over this energy however is only to a small extent compared to that of electric users, though she can generate and partially control she couldn't do things such as form other objects from it or stabilize the electricity once it is created, therefore she cant stop the electricity once she has made it. Another huge downfall of this technique is the girl is still very vulnerable to her own energy making it so that her own weapon is one that is a double edged sword.

Water pressure manipulation -
despite the name of this technique the whole concept behind Alessia's move is to control the pressure exhorted by all liquids, to this point she could in turn the amount of force acting on something by a said liquid to lengths so great it could break bones upon impact or even crush a car under its pure weight, the opposite also applies in the idea of reducing the pressure would almost enable one super speed. however Alessia also has found another use besides these simply things, by manipulating both blood and body water pressure, if the girl is able to infect another person with her blood or her "water" she is able to control the very pressure of her enemies blood, the reason it has to be infected with her own blood or her water is due to the fact that she can only control the pressure of liquids that are of a certain cellar structure one unique to her alone whilst inside the body, outside however she has complete control. when infected however she could control the pressure that the inner fluids create meaning by making it thick enough she could make things like blood clots occur creating inner problems for her enemies systems meaning they could very well die if untreated, or she could thin their bloods pressure to a huge length making it seem almost as though their very blood is being drained beneath them this could cause, with the right amount of lowering, elite dizziness and huge fatigue as though one were bleeding out with eventually can yet again be fatal. However within their own systems Alessia has a way of using this power to literally help them, by decreasing the pressure of water in their systems they could become swifter and much much more agile whereas the opposing factor of high pressure would cause a sort of monster level defence making the body extremely durable.

Hydrogen peroxide emission -
Alessia's special and most frequently used power, this technique enables her to literally expel a chemical compound much like water from her body this compound? hydrogen peroxide or H2O2 a substance with varying qualities from being highly explosive at its highest concentration to a very effective antiseptic when diluted. this is a very oily, watery substance that could in fact be very closely compared to water depending on its strength. The girl is capable of letting this substance seep out of her very skin forming gallons worth from a minuscule portion of Alessia's own body water, the downfall of this being that the more she uses the much more effect it takes on her body. A good thing about this though is if she is capable of taking in vast amounts of water she would be able to have an vast near inexhaustible energy source, however due to the limit this substance can travel (up to about 2 kms at max) and her intolerance for pure water and need for sea water it makes her chances of taking over the world quite hard unless things come at hr in her natural domain.

Hydrogen peroxide control -
Alessia's length of control over her innate chemical compound is immense she seemingly has full control over every aspect of her generated formula, this allows her to not only change the very core essence enabling her to change it from solid to gas to liquid within seconds but also to control the purity of the substance. By doing this she is able to literally create the purest form of the substance enabling different levels of effect that vary including the peroxides special attribute of high combustion rate meaning she could in turn cause massive explosions by controlling the inner electrons to cause a spark and generate the reaction, in turn she is also able to use the other basic elements of hydrogen peroxide one such example would be the ideal of forming it into a sort of bleaching / cleansing agent acting as a sort of acid to any contaminated cells including those within the human genome if concentrated high enough. She can also seemingly control this as though it were just another part of her seemingly being capable of controlling the direction as well as form the substance takes by shifting cells within the mass of the chemical compound thus morphing it as she wishes.

• Chaos Moves:

Chaos Blast (Also Known as Ranmyaku Blast):
This is the Iramasha's own version of the cero. It is a blast of either angel, demon or both (when used by hybrids) that is gathered from inside of their body and shot out in a massive wave or sphere. When used in a wave, it's faster, but not as strong. When used as a sphere, it is much stronger, but slower. Another thing to note is that when a Angel Iramasha uses Chaos Blast the blast is typically white or blue, while when a demon fires it the blast is typically black or bright red. If your a hybrid, it's both. However, some Iramasha's have customized their own Chaos Blast's to fit their needs.

Chaos Burst:
Chaos Burst is essentially a fighting style that increases the speed of a users punches or kick's in order to create devastating blows to anything that they happen to hit. By summoning a decent amount of Inner or Outer Chaos Energy, an Iramasha can make use of Chaos Burst in order to make each of their hits have an immense amount of swiftness and impact force that it can blow through an Arrancar's Hierro, shatter barrier's in stronger opponents or even outright blow through someone's defenses if they aren't on guard when this attack is occurring. Potentially, this technique can even be used to fight on par with both speed and physical based opponents as they are essentially getting the benefits of speed, with the devastating force of a physical user in one sharp blow. This can be used as often as an Iramasha wishes, though they should keep note of how much energy they drain from using this much like Chaos Impact and other similar techniques.

Chaos Deflect:
Chaos Deflect is a move where the user's physical strength is summoned to the surface and mixed together with Inner and Outer Chaos Energy in order to effectively reflect or redirect attack's. One of the most common fashions of how Chaos Deflect is used is that it is often summoned in either of the user's hands, curled into a fist and makes use of a punch that has the capacity to redirect attacks back at an opponent or redirect them to avoid them making any damage on the user. This means it can be applied to almost any limb on their body or any part, for that matter. However, there is a more advanced version of this for Iramasha who are further along in their Chaos Energy. Starting at advanced or master level, most people who use Chaos Energy Deflect can summon their overall strength in order to create a "wave" of Chaos Deflect that is spread from every single pore in their body in a complete three sixty sphere.

Chaos Link:
Chaos Link is a technique where advanced and master users of Chaos Energy can enter someone's mind in order to read their memories and past experiences. They can also share their memories with the person they linked with. However, the link can only happen if the other person accepts. There is no way to perform Chaos Link against someone's will.

Inner Chaos Release:
This is most likely one of the most powerful techniques Chaos Fighting Style has to offer and is one that is highly respected and feared in the Iramasha Clan. Inner Chaos Release begins by the user actively attempting to unleash any type of restraint they might have on their Inner Chaos Energy. So, typically they will take a widen stance and tighten each of their fist as they begin to harness whatever amount of Chaos Energy they desire to put into this technique. So, it should be noted that the minimum amount of Inner Chaos Energy that is allowed to activate this technique is roughly twenty five percent. And thusly, after a sufficient amount of energy is collected, the user will begin to see massive increases in their overall physical strength. At the lowest level, which is about a quarter of Inner Chaos Release's total power, the user will see their physical offensive capacities, defensive skills, endurance, stamina and overall durability increase by twenty five times.


DEMONIC RELEASE








• Demonic Release Appearance:
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• Demonic Release Abilities:

Atmospheric Pressure:
This is one of the main abilities of Alessia’s demonic release by harnessing her chaos energy into the very atmosphere around her the girl is capable of controlling the atmospheric pressure within a two hundred meter radius allowing her the capability to take control of the density of the very clouds and steam within the atmosphere above her, though she is incapable off changing the atmospheric pressure within the confines of around her and manipulates it within the single way of altering the weather because of this. The girl can cause mass molecular degradation and changing the chemical structure to certain lengths allowing her a control over the weather itself, by controlling such things within the atmosphere as the collision of hydrogen atoms allowing her to cause mass collisions and cause massive rain storms. To this extent the girl can also change the composition of the clouds to allow things such as hail and sleet to occur through manipulation of the compounds and adjusting it to the weather. She in this same aspect could change the climate and temperatures of such to inhospitable levels capable of tearing apart skin with mass heat and causing frostbite from intense cold. The girl’s level of control extends to the ideal of manipulating storms and the atmospheric content, allowing a generation of mass amounts of storms and the capability to form such things as lightning that she has complete control of or hail the size of cars and other occurrences that would cause massive amounts of damage from this given technique. The girl has through her chaos energy and the manipulation of the barometric pressure and molecules composition been given the means to control multiple different elements associated with the weather and the atmosphere including meteorological patterns, creating rain, wind, hail, lightning, snow, sleet, and fog and even temperature changes.

Mass spatial pressure burst:
One could see this technique as a sort of compression of Alessias own spatial pressure generation being used in the way of forming massive harnessed blasts of pure pressure. Using the ability one could increase the selected pressure around their very hands and allow each strike to crush through opponents and tear through the very molecules of their intended targets. The main process of this technique is centered around not actually creating the pressure herself but rather using the kinetic energy and force others apply through physical attacks upon her person allowing her chaos energy to surround her in a sort of mass pressure field which absorbs all impact before storing it and using the energy within to manipulate the molecules of the oxygen around her and increase the pressure without having to ascend to her further forms, by doing this she is capable for three posts of having a sort of mass barrier capable of stopping any brute attacks upon her and store said energy to be released at a her whim, however a problem involved in this is that whilst her barrier is up she is incapable of attacking using any of her natural abilities due to the focus needed to sustain the barrier, after the barrier has been brought down the girl is also unable to reuse it for two posts due to the cool down rate her chaos energy needs to re-establish the barrier, the biggest problem with this technique however is that energy based attacks will still be completely capable of breaking through her barrier and able to rip her to shreds due to her natural defenses against such things being much weaker whilst her chaos energy is focused within the barrier and unable to take away any impact power of the energy.


HELL EVOLUTION






• Hell Evolution State Appearance:
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• Hell Evolution State Abilities:

Oxygen pressure manipulation:


Mass depressurisation (event only):






SKILLS


• Class Title: The Pressure Devil

• Class Traits:
N/A


• Skills:

(DO NOT FILL THIS OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!)

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Chaos Energy Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chaos Warp: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Sat Sep 19, 2015 3:55 pm
This seishin Buki is quite literally something entirely different to what one may expect of the shy little girl that is Alessia. The appearance of Blue is quite a unique look for the girl, having an appearance that outright just shows off her outgoing personality, be it the deep purple hue of her hair or her natural happy go lucky smile that never seems to go away

This...did not say anything. If I was describing...say...a knife, and described it as "IT IS HAPPY AND A LITTLE BIT MEAN DEPENDING ON THE WIELDERS ASTROLOGICAL SIGN" and ended it right there, no one would have any idea I was talking about a knife. I can only assume her Seishun Buki is a guitar based on the picture...the flavor text is fine but flavor text without actually defining what the Seishun Buki is...is silly. If the Seishun Buki is the guitar, define that. If it's the girl itself, define that.


Pressure manipulation -
The basis for all of baby's abilities, this is defined by the seshin bukis innate ability to warp the particles in the very atmosphere around her, this enables her to literally change the pressure caused by collisions, be it a simple punch where she could enhance the pressure to overbearing levels even implanting huge amounts of pressure in to any object she touches making it so she could turn a hit from a baseball bat into something capable of leveling a mediums sized house, or simply using this power to reduce the impacting pressure of an attack intended to hit her, this technique has numerous uses. The main impact of this move is the ideal of changing the pressure of the very atmosphere around her, this is done by her chaos energy infecting the particles touching her body and morphing it to the girls will, this means that to use this technique one must be in contact with the substance which they wish to change the pressure of, meaning they wouldn't be able to stop the pressure of say someone hitting a person 10 ft from her, however she would be able to stop the pressure if she were subject to the attack, this means that this whilst a very strong offensive move is also very determent on the girls natural defensive abilities. It has been said that this in theory could be one of the ultimate defenses around as it can shift the pressure in almost any attack rendering it little more than a bugs touch to her be it elemental, energy or just physical it is all affected, however the downfall to this perfect defense is pretty simple in the way she can only use her pressure shifting on one thing at a time meaning she couldn't attack whilst defending and if someone were to launch a barrage of attacks against her inevitably one would slip through.

For applications of this, she cannot change the pressure of something hitting someone else, but what is the range of her manipulating the pressure of something that doesn't already have a prominent external source put on it? Right now, without a strict range applied, this ability can go one of two ways. The former, is that, since she is only technically touching a few air particles against her skin at any given point in time, this attack is nearly useless offensively, there's not enough pressure for her to manipulate in an actual damaging capacity against the kind of creatures on this site. The alternative is that it operates on a far broader spectrum that considers the atmosphere as a singular entity...in which case she can just instantly crush anything she's looking at on a whim. One is pointless, one is blatantly overpowered. So this either needs to be better defined if you don't want to add a hard radius/range in addition to defining this as some kind of projectile...or you need to add a hard cap to the range and define her influence on a space as some form of projectile.

Piezoelectric generation/control -
A technique based from babys powers, this unique ability is one that stems from her pressure manipulation and puts it to use in a brand new way, conducting and creating electricity from pure pressure. This is done by her seshin bukis ability compressing particles and literally squeezing the electrons within, this allows the exerting pressure to destabilize charged particles and essentially create electricity. through this technique baby is able to literally create and control electricity via her pressure manipulation acting as a sort of guide for the energy. This power is one that enables her to take her pressure control to a brand new level due to her charging of electrons the girl can then specifically control the exerting pressure to create even plasma through the changing of the atomic structure, the girls control over this energy however is only to a small extent compared to that of electric users, though she can generate and partially control she couldn't do things such as form other objects from it or stabilize the electricity once it is created, therefore she cant stop the electricity once she has made it. Another huge downfall of this technique is the girl is still very vulnerable to her own energy making it so that her own weapon is one that is a double edged sword.

All issues with this will most likely be remedied when the prior questions are answered. But can you explain to me what these Pressure Abilities have to do with the Salt Based abilities Alessia seems to revolve around. The two have very little to do with one another and S.Bukis are not supposed to be independent power sets. So you'll either need to explain to me how these two correlate and what I'm missing or you're going to have to rework this app.

Sodium Manipulation:
Alessia in its most base form is capable of manipulating the sodium within the world around her, having a control of the element itself that is to the peak of ones potential. The girl has the ability to infect the world around her within a massive hundred meter radius with her chaos energy infecting the core molecular basis of the world to expose the sodium from the environment around her, meaning that simplistic things such as salt and any form of sodium rich content can provide her with even more fuel to use for her powers. she can on certain levels even take the sodium content from the soil itself due to the abundance, her capabilities even make her able to take the salt from the very air if in rich areas such as near oceans and such, though this level of control is quite an intense move and requires her to expand further chaos energy towards it. The girl is able to also manipulate the basis of the compound of the sodium content she takes from her environment much like her own sodium, this allows her to form the chemical into different basis's such as its alkali metal form allowing her a strong durable metal which she can shift the form of allowing her creation of weaponry itself. she is able to also manipulate the atomic structure and create liquid solid and gaseous states of the chemical compound, capable of even creating a gaseous state of sodium which acts as a sort of invisible force able to tear apart the skin and even act as a sort of shielding due to the fact that within this gas is an enriched form of sodium particles of small crystalline like grains moving at speeds faster than the eye itself can process, this however doesn't mean that she can use this at such speed the gas itself vibrates at this speed but the manipulation speed itself would depend on her own speed and the capability of her chaos energy control. The amount of sodium she could control at one time itself also depends on her reserves of chaos energy making her at current capable of feats quite incredible able to make tides of sodium itself but to do things some are capable of with their own elements may prove to much for her, if she was able to manipulate her chaos energy to its peak point she could level buildings unfortunately this would deplete her completely making her pass out from sheer loss of energy and if further pushed she could even die.

"Cannot manipulate the Sodium inherent to the bodies of spiritually aware beings." Add that line and this is fine.

Water pressure manipulation -
despite the name of this technique the whole concept behind Alessia's move is to control the pressure exhorted by all liquids, to this point she could in turn the amount of force acting on something by a said liquid to lengths so great it could break bones upon impact or even crush a car under its pure weight, the opposite also applies in the idea of reducing the pressure would almost enable one super speed. however Alessia also has found another use besides these simply things, by manipulating both blood and body water pressure, if the girl is able to infect another person with her blood or her "water" she is able to control the very pressure of her enemies blood, the reason it has to be infected with her own blood or her water is due to the fact that she can only control the pressure of liquids that are of a certain cellar structure one unique to her alone whilst inside the body, outside however she has complete control. when infected however she could control the pressure that the inner fluids create meaning by making it thick enough she could make things like blood clots occur creating inner problems for her enemies systems meaning they could very well die if untreated, or she could thin their bloods pressure to a huge length making it seem almost as though their very blood is being drained beneath them this could cause, with the right amount of lowering, elite dizziness and huge fatigue as though one were bleeding out with eventually can yet again be fatal. However within their own systems Alessia has a way of using this power to literally help them, by decreasing the pressure of water in their systems they could become swifter and much much more agile whereas the opposing factor of high pressure would cause a sort of monster level defence making the body extremely durable.

So...this feels like it'd fall under the Seishun Buki...as this has nothing at all to do with Salt. This extends to the other two abilities as well, I don't really know what the theme of this character is supposed to be here.

Atmospheric Pressure:
This is one of the main abilities of Alessia’s demonic release by harnessing her chaos energy into the very atmosphere around her the girl is capable of controlling the atmospheric pressure within a two hundred meter radius allowing her the capability to take control of the density of the very clouds and steam within the atmosphere above her. The girl can cause mass molecular degradation and changing the chemical structure to certain lengths allowing her a control over the weather itself, by controlling such things within the atmosphere as the collision of hydrogen atoms allowing her to cause mass collisions and cause massive rain storms. To this extent the girl can also change the composition of the clouds to allow things such as hail and sleet to occur through manipulation of the compounds and adjusting it to the weather. She in this same aspect could change the climate and temperatures of such to inhospitable levels capable of tearing apart skin with mass heat and causing frostbite from intense cold. The girl’s level of control extends to the ideal of manipulating storms and the atmospheric content, allowing a generation of mass amounts of storms and the capability to form such things as lightning that she has complete control of or hail the size of cars and other occurrences that would cause massive amounts of damage from this given technique. The girl has through her chaos energy and the manipulation of the barometric pressure and molecules composition been given the means to control multiple different elements associated with the weather and the atmosphere including meteorological patterns, creating rain, wind, hail, lightning, snow, sleet, and fog and even temperature changes.

If this ability is used specifically for weather manipulation, I'm fine with it. If you try to use this ability to manipulate the pressure around someone's head to pop their heads like a pimple, we'll revisit this and pee all over it.




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Sat Sep 19, 2015 10:31 pm
aight addressed all the shite here, the sodium manip however has been moved to the seishins abilities. it does now however correlate to the girl as she uses the pressure around her and within her to manipulate this chemical compound which is only linked through personal reference to salt so hopefully its good now. The pressure manip has been fixed up to establish ranges and shit she can manipulate and extents of shit ect. Also established things you asked on the atmospheric pressure and salt powers as well as fixing the appearance description of her seishin has also been fixed so hopefully all is better now. if any problems or things i missed just hit me up with em and ill change it



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Sun Sep 20, 2015 9:23 pm
From a mechanical standpoint, outside of obviously policing the extent these abilities are capable of for abuse, I don't have much an issues with the abilities themselves. As I'm not as well versed in the Iramasha as say...Blade is however I was going to let him take over the check from here on as everything that stuck out to me as problematic has been taken care of.

I still am not sure what Sodium's connection to the rest of her pressure abilities is however, but if Blade doesn't take issue with it then it's not an issue.
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  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
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  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Master
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: After discussing things with Lio and having something edited, I'll be approving this app as of now. Anyone with any questions can message me through Skype.
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