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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Henrex
Henrex
Tor'uk
Joined : 2016-01-20
Posts : 4404
Age : 23

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished Left_bar_bleue419100/999999Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished Empty_bar_bleue  (419100/999999)
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Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished Empty Re: Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished

Fri Mar 24, 2017 1:23 pm
[adm]Moving to unchecked, since both the user and the tag in the title says that this is finished.[/adm]
Henrex
Henrex
Tor'uk
Joined : 2016-01-20
Posts : 4404
Age : 23

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished Left_bar_bleue419100/999999Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished Empty_bar_bleue  (419100/999999)
Tiers:

Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished Empty Re: Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished

Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:01 pm
Kadaj Asthavon [NPC] Finished 31ee83ea0c54fe042fdb4a21771d9ce146230870_hq

There's so much wrong with this, I don't even know where to begin with this giant mess. I suppose the easiest way to start would be with the name and history. Kade, ANY and ALL things related to Asthavons MUST go by Frost first, before going ahead and creating the character. The second easiest thing to point out about this would be the release forms. Hybrids do NOT get both release stages of their dual races. That is broken, and a blatant power-grab to me. You would either get one release set, or none at all. The next thing to say about this would be the unique abilities section, which 99% of it you copied and pasted from Tyrael's app. I'm fine with characters gaining family, or hereditary traits, but copying the ENTIRETY of their ability section over to another character is a no-go. Something else regarding the copy-pasting is that everything outside of Resurreccion is copied from Anastasia's application. I can tell that by the number of "her" parts in the app, instead of "him".

Actually, not even outside of Ress, there's even some mentions of Annie IN the Ress. Now, time to wrap this up. One of the final points that I will be making is that staff as a whole does not trust you with a Hybrid application, and will most likely not approve you with one. To finalize this, as of today, staff has decided to ban you from creating applications for a month. The reason for this is the constant amount of character creation you've done, well as the constant repeating of the same thing over and over again, and each time you expect a different result. As of such, staff is punishing you for this continuous amount of insolence and ignorance. This is not to be argued. So...

DENIED.
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