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Enter The Hollow
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I. Basic Information


» Name: Miia Serpe
» Nicknames: Guerrero Manipuladora
» Age: 600
» Gender: Female
» Race: Gillian
» Association: None

» Appearance Written:
Miia is a Hollow that appears to be the shape of a serpentine like being. Her eyes glow a dim cerulean as she has a slim and light body. Her body is covered in sparkling red scales as she by all means is a snake in form with one special exception; she has human characteristics. Her tail is long and the end is a sharp tip used for stabbing and attacking her enemies. It almost looks like as if the tip of the tail is made from metal of some sort. She'll often extendd her body to make her seem more threatening than she really is. Her scales are also along the center of her body what make them up are sharp and appear to be made from crystalline material.


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II. Personality


» Personality:

Miia is a Hollow who is trying to figure out how life is going to work out for her. It's a bit complicated being a snake and all, but she hopes that life will improve. She enjoys having fun and is sort of a wanderer looking to see how much the world has changed. She is generally a kind and friendly Hollow that enjoys having company and is an excellent house guest...if she had a home anyways. Sometimes she is a bit comical although when it comes to battle she is serious. After all, this is her life on the line after all. Not too many people ever stop to consider what it's like to be hunted by armies of black robe wearing Shinigami wanting to slay her just because.

Usually one of the ways that one will be able to realize that she is upset is when she ceases to talk to people. However, she is never the type to hold grudges for long. She normally forgives people when they give a heart felt apology and perhaps offers to show her or teach her something new about the world. She is absolutely thrilled when she sees something she hasn't heard or seen before. She loves travel and exploration and with it the new sights. She still to this day remembers that time she got caught in a "Cellphie" Whatever it was, she hoped she looked representable.

She enjoys talking to people and assuming one doesn't try to kill her for absolutely no reason, she will find it a pleasure to have people around. Normally even if they pick a fight with her, she will try to reason with them. Upon seeing there is no choice, she will try and kill most of the time before devouring them. She tends to find just leaving the body is a waste of food even if she is eating a dead person. She absolutely detests Hollows and enjoys having a good time among the world of the living and occasionally the spiritual world as well. Whatever the case, she typically is a person who tries to avoid conflicts and is actually rather knowledgeable about the working the workings of Reiatsu and races from her experiences and her curiosities. 

The snake Hollow absolutely is pleasured by being out on a nice warm day. Nothing could possibly make her day more except for maybe something nice like a back massage...even though she doesn't have a back to enjoy. She is a very formal woman who tends to enjoy learning about others more than others learning about her. Her life stories are a little bit rough and her time as a Hollow has been even rougher as she had often been attacked and forced to try and survive. She is honestly quite lonely most of her time. Traveling and what not is more of a distraction to make her forget her isolation and segregation.


» Dislikes:
Eating the Souls of the Innocent or Humans:

When the woman had transformed into a Hollow, she despised eating the souls of living humans or rather humans in general. She will not normally eat the souls of humans including pluses and or Shinigami unless provoked or if starving beyond the point of reason. She as a Hollow had maintained quite a bit of her humanity and logical thinking and lacks the evil mentality nor immediate drive of evolution. There will be a select few exceptions to this such as when eating the soul of a human that she finds impure.

Hollows: She dislikes being around her fellow kind and thus tends to devour her fellow Hollow. She find's their mindlessness and destructive habits something that is despicable. She often disposes Hollow as she herself find's their so called hunger something they should be able to control and limit. Often a time she has seen many Hollow quarrel and fight among themselves only to end up being killed in the end due to their own greed or ambitions.

Arrogance/Recklessness:As a Hollow, she had often been hunted by Shinigami who have seen her as a monster. They had tried to slay her simply for her existence claiming she was a beast. She hates people who believe that they are higher or better than others and those that rush into violence due to assumption. She as a logical being believes that people should go beyond what they see and should experience things for themselves. Even from her fellow Hollow kind had she been branded as a weakling to be devoured. In the end, they had been the ones to fall.

Being a Snake: She felt like a wild animal at times and had felt degraded that she had manifested into such a beast. Being so large had been something worrisome as well as she never planned on reaching such a height.

Never Sleeping:As a Hollow, she had never found the need for sleep as she had never been able to close her eyes anyways. She had wandered endlessly as she wished she could have bliss unconsciousness so that she may experience of rest that she had lost. How she wishes that she could sleep in a nice warm bed with a heat pad and a plushy to hug. Regardless, she had been forced to always stay alert due to the endless amounts of predators and such.

Cold Weather: Being a cold blooded reptilian in spirit seemed to reflect on her ability to be able to maintain heat. It doesn't drain her very much, but she doesn't like to be cold anyways. During the Winter, she likes to stay anyplace warm and heated. It just makes her feel nice and comforted as she now has a nice relaxing place to rest. 

III. History


» History:
A woman whom had been born during the times before the French Revolution. She had been a young lady born into nobility as the nation had been going through poverty and starvation. Times were fine for the aristocracy, but the common folk had suffered from not even being able to eat bread. It was a horrible time to Renée Serpe'. She hated to see the people of the land live like that while she lived in grandeur. Unlike many nobles, she had cared more for the people and had often shared her wealth amongst the poor. It was the Christian thing to do, but also she hated to see how thin they were.

As she reached maturity near her eighteenth birthdsy, things had only gotten worse and worse in France. The people were restless and had grown to believe that revolution was the only way for change. Miia had a beau at this time whom had courted her from time to time. Charles Zi Retropet was was a handsome man whom she believed she was going to marry one day. It had never come to be like that. Revolution had struck.

A revolution had broken across the land as Miia had been shot four times via musket. It seemed her kindness and hospitality had been all for naught. She had died seen as another person who cared for nothing but money and power. She had never been able to pass on as the Shinigami had never found her. She had been wandering around France for for some time...until she had been attacked by masked monsters. 

They feasted on her agony and it was at that moment she had transformed. When she had come to, there laid only partially devoured corpses of Hollow. She had went into into a frenzy and had murdered them all. However, she had retained her human intelligence and mentality. She had been disgusted by her actions, but it was then she had found her dislike for hollow. Many were beasts with only the urge to satisfy the emptiness in their hearts. 

In the days to come, she had realized that she had an unnatural hunger that would build up now and again. She would only sate this hunger by eating other Hollow. She refused to eat plus and normal human beings if she could help it. She had been getting accustomed to her new body as she had to adapt to survive. The constant feeling of being hunted by her fellow Hollow and never being able to rest had frustrated her. She had decided France was no longer an ideal place to stay, and so she traveled the world for several centuries.

Shinigami she had met had called her a monster, a being that needed to be "purified." She had been attacked by Kido, blades, and even through bare hands. She had gotten tough and learned the way to survival. As time went by, she had grown to large height and weight as she fed on the spiritual monsters amongst her. It was a fateful night in a cave in the wilderness she had discovered her future friend. 

Rocko the Philosopher Hollow. It was a interesting meeting as they had sat around a roaring fire as they talked philosophy and life. Rocko was much like her as he saw murder as something that was needed. He had no real interest in evolution or sating a never ending hunger. They had talked often from that night as he had explained what Hollow were to the best of his ability. Renée Serpe had also been given her alias by her friend. 

Time went on yet again as Miia had began to follow humans to see how much life had changed. She was fascinated by how humans had developed in three centuries. Their U-Tube Videos and their Vijeo Games. The social norms and falls of hierarchies. Miia had wanted to know more and live a quiet life until she could perhaps one day move on from purgatory to become a human again. Little did she know how impossible that was and how religion was so flawed.

IV. Equipment


» Equipment: [If your hollow has any equipment? Put it here. If they don't, skip this section.]

V. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills


»  Racial Abilities:

Acidic Touch: A rather passive and simple ability for all Hollows. In essence, this is the first form of defense for a normal Hollow, that if someone were to touch their skin they would be singed and their hands would be eroded and burnt as if acid was poured onto it. It is said this is extremely painful, and actually capable of letting the Hollow's Reiatsu into the victim's body. 

Acidic Cero: Just like any cero the user uses whatever body part to fire a beam of condensed energy, however in this case utilizing the hollows Acidic Touch and incorporating it into her saliva allows for a unique variation of cero that makes it a force to be reckoned with. Miia can fire the cero from her mouth and once she's gathered enough energy it would fire in a green beam of destructive power; it has the chance to slowly insert hollow reiatsu into the victims body with an added bonus of causing temporary paralysis and even blindness.



Garganta: Literally translating to "throat" in spanish and "Black cavity" in Japanese, Garganta is the method in which all Hollows use to travel between different realms. When in use, a black rift literally tears open the fabric of space and opens into a black rift of Darkness. The most common usage is to travel from Hueco Mundo to the living realm, but users whom are more adept at this can even use it in fights to actually open rifts of darkness to absorb attacks, and open a rift elsewhere to shoot it back at them. It highly depends on the skill of the user, as often even Vizards have been shown to open garganta during battle. Normal hollows only use this as a method of transportation, though. Many of the reasons Garganta is a very powerful tool is for it's utility and mass transportation which can hold endless numbers of "foot soldiers" or people within it. 

Negacion: As previously mentioned under "gillian", Negacion is the technique in which Hollows can rescue or "extract" allies from a battle. The name literally translates to Negation in Spanish. Causing a garganta from the sky, a ray of light will shoot down onto the targets, as a few moments pass they will be dragged up and into the rift. This is usually done by Gillian whom are massive in size and can be commanded by other Hollow for easy "extraction" from dangerous areas. 

High-Speed regeneration: Generally self explanatory, some Hollows are capable of having the ability to regenerate their bodies at their own will. However this is usually quite limited to the cutting off of limbs. This is usually more commonly found in Arrancar, however some Hollow's have learned to reform their bodies from damage. It is said that if they have taken drastic damage to organs and vitals, however, they cannot regenerate these easily (or not at all, depending on the Hollow), which allows them still very vulnerable. This is shown by Ulquiorra whom sacrificed even more raw power for the ability to regenerate his body. 

VI. Powers


»  Hollow Power:
Acidic Spit
This allows Miia to fire a glob of green corrosive spit from her throat. This spit is an acid that delivers strong burns on skin and causes heavy irritation if not washed off. It will blind if made contact in the eyes and will leave harsh burn marks if not treated immediately. Miia is immune to this acid and may freely touch it. This acid moves at the speed equivalent to a Bala. Upon hitting an open or exposed wound, the acid will cause not only burns and skin irritations but possible infection which will lead to heavy nausea and fever symptoms.

When used multiple times, the burns become more intense to the point of skin burning and melting. It will take three times of getting hit by this acid for skin to melt. When using this technique apon stone or wood, it will start to dissolve from the acidity. Within two posts of hitting an open wound, the infection will occur as well as the nausea and heavy fever symptoms. The infection will burn and will make skin easier to tear into than it normally is.

In terms of drawbacks it has plenty
such as the spit itself beinf easily identified by the bright green color and therefore may easily be spotted. and the technique may be blocked as the acid is a simple glob projectile of acid spit, not a wave or a overly large scale attack.

Those with Resistance to poison may allow the delaying of the heavy fever symptoms and nausea but the infection remains as it is. Sometimes those who are resistant to poison will allow the attack to double the number of posts it takes for the nausea and fever symptoms to hit and so forth doubling each time for each point in this skill.

Snake-Biology:
Miia is part of the Solenoglyphous family which includes has its own unique characteristics compared to other members of the snake family. For instance Solenoglyphous snakes can open their mouths almost 180 degrees, and the fangs swing into a position to allow them to penetrate deep into the prey. Making it deadly against opponents smaller and more feeble than her however its greatest downside is its lack of acidic's toxicity...despite that however it's made up by the fact that it allows her to inject large amounts of venom into her enemies.

Camoflague:
Generally, vipers are nocturnal and due to their size they often appear sluggish compared to others, however this is simply because she relies on the use of her enviorment to blend in almost making her invisible to the naked eye. Its also used as a means of protection, this makss her more inclined to blend in a surrounding brush, rocks or ground cover when being approached by a enemy than to slither away. This is used by reiryoku energy and more can be used for trade off of better invisibility. Lasts until Miia attacks her opponent and has a post cooldown of 3

Shedding Hierro:
Whenever Miia is damaged and is in need of a new skin she begins to molt meaning when her old skin is outgrowing she will rub against rough surfaces to shed her skin. However if the skin is shed intact, each scale is unwrapped on the top and bottom side of the scale which almost doubles the length of the shed skin. While Miia is in the process of shedding the skin over her eye, the eye may become milky. This impairs the vision of Miia and may result in aggressive behavior.

This ability is basically her equivalent of Heirro and is subjectable to all the benefits and detriments of having it...such as being unable to move while this process is happening and subjectable to attacks

Consume Prey:
After eating an opponent, the user will feel extremely sluggish. For one post, the user is not able to move from their location. Then, the user will have their speed cut in half for another two posts.

When Miaa is eating somebody whole that doesn't mean they can't fight back. Assuming she eats them alive. She can still possibly be attacked from the inside out, and sharp items tend to hurt.

Scale Volley:
This allows Miia to fling their tail to launch scales with sharpness equal to that of a shard of glass. The scales that are lost are quickly replaced and these small precise scales fly like bullets as they look like sharp needles.

The drawback to this ability is that its not very accurate and is able to be blown away by a gust of wind or whatever defenses the enemy has at there disposal.

Cooldown of 1-5 posts depending on how many scales she has fired.

5-10 Scales: 1 post CD

15-20 Scales: 3 post CD

25-30 Scales: 5 post cooldown



Spiky Tail:
This technique simply allows the user to create spikes along their tail to swing along at enemies with. The spikes go in every direction along the tail as it appears to look like like a spiked ball, the drawbacks however is that it can easily get stuck on many surfaces such as walls, cars, etc, and finally that the spikes themselves can be removed if the opponent has a higher strength stat.

Cooldown of 3 posts.

I. Skill Sheet


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Hollow Skills
  • Acid Skill: Adept
  • Garganta : Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Adept
  • Regeneration: Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Adept


[Click the Spoiler for details on each skill section]

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VIII. Role Play Sample


»  Roleplay Sample: [Please show us how you role play by either posting a previous post from another site or creating a new one. We do this so we know your RP skill. If you already have an accepted, you need not do another RP sample]

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Last edited by MWD on Thu Jul 05, 2018 2:33 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Fri Jun 15, 2018 10:03 am
Age: Goddamnit MWD, stop forgetting that we're 400 years into the future. Miia can't be from the French Revolution Era and still be 300 years old.

Camouflage: Doesn't Miia have sparkling red scales? Try adding something like her scales can change colour to match the environment when she goes into hiding. If she can't do this naturally, maybe have it performed through control of her reiryoku to change it.

« Application Checklist »
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  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
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  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
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  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
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Will Skills
[list][*]Willpower/Determination: Beginner
Mental Deduction: Advanced
Pain Endurance: Beginner
Focus: Adept

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[b][u]Will Skills[/u][/b]
[list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b] Beginner
[b]Mental Deduction:[/b] Advanced
[b]Pain Endurance:[/b] Beginner
[b]Focus:[/b] Adept [/list]

  • Comments/Notes: You know, I had serious doubts and questions as to how she became a hollow at all, but i'll let it pass. This makes sense more or less, even though much of her persona defies every fibre in a hollow's being.

    Tier:4-4 When fixed.



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Fri Jun 15, 2018 3:34 pm
Edited my hollows age and gave her camoflauge a post cooldown and duration.



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