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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Chao
Chao
Queen Of The Sands
Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 3408
Age : 30

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Platinum Points:
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Mon Jan 22, 2018 11:29 am
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THE SUEKI TEMPLATE

Sueki Profile
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I. Basic Information


» Name: Victoria Dawn
» Titles: N/A
» Age: 16
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Affiliated with the people of Orbis Cruento and the Sueki race. She lives with her grandmother and uncle. Victoria has no ties outside of this.

I. Appearance


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Victoria looks very simple and doesn't have an appearance that stands out. She is still 16 and so her body is still developing. She stands at just over 5'0 which isn't very impressive. Her hair is long and has grown beyond her waist but dons a dull, white/gray colour that doesn't stand out much.

If anything does stand out, Victorias eyes are bright red. Her grandmother always tells her that she has her mothers eyes even if she cannot remember who her mother is. She doesn't often use many expressions beyond her straight face but she is occasionally seen pouting and frowning though nobody is sure if she knows how to smile.

Her skin is rather pasty with very little colour to it which isn't helped by the wsy she is forced to wear additional clothing when going out as if to hide her appearance from strangers. Even on a moderately warm day she will still wear a jacket and hat. At times, Victoria has been known to tie her hair up into a ponytails but that is usually only when her grandmother styles her hair for her.

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I. Personality Traits


Unusual
Victoria is easily described as a child that is still looking for her own way to stand out and feel unique. She has a lot of trouble communicating her thoughts and isn't sure how to express her feelings.

Not only does she still have a lot to learn, but she cannot simply ask for the information. Victoria is stricken with a strong sense of paranoia and anxiety thanks to her uncle's advice on life. She has been told to not trust anyone at face value. This means that Victoria has no real friends outside of her current family.

She is very quiet and has been taught to not talk out of line and not speak unless spoken to. Thanks to this strict view on life, she has always had an interest in the lives of those with freedom. Without guardians that watch her every move. She want's to learn but has to fight herself to do so.

With next to no real powers and without having her Sueki bloodline in effect yet, Victoria can only be seen as a wasteful runt of the race. She understands why some people cannot stand the sight of her but she swears she has an affinity for blood so it must be coming along soon.

One day, Victoria will show her people that she isn't useless. She will maybe even one day be able to speak properly without shaking and choking on her words. maybe even to the nobles and royalty of Sueki kind.

Victoria's unusual. Will be expanded upon in future updates

I. Natural Abilities & Skills


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Victoria is nothing compared to the people around her. The girls physical ability matches that of a healthy teenager if not slightly stronger. She has decent endurance for a simple person and can sense energy within a close vicinity around her no farther than 100 ft.

Victorias power will be expanded upon in future updates

I. Racial Abilities


Unusual
Victoria is not able to use any of her Sueki abilities. She has no idea why as a lot of people her age have already figured it out. Due to this, she finds it hard to even try. She also hasn't gained a desire to feed on blood yet.

I. Bloodline


Unusual
Victoria has no redeeming physical features that show what bloodline she is a part of. Some question that maybe she has not attained her power yet or that she is from a new bloodline that looks reasonably normal. There has been no way to confirm these theories however.

I. Umbra State


Unusual
Victoria has struggled to understand the concept of the Umbra state considering she already struggles understanding what energy is and feels like.

I. Character History


There is not much to know about Victoria as of yet. All she knows of her life is that she has always lived in Orbis Cruento with the Sueki. She knows that she herself is a Sueki as her uncle had confirmed it several times. The strange thing is how she can only recall certain snippets of her past. She remembers sleeping a lot, being very sick through most of her early teenage years but having no recollection of her childhood.

Many doctors have claimed that Victoria suffers from amnesia and as she grows she may regain her knowledge.

Victorias history will be expanded upon in future updates

I. Skill Sheet


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Sueki Skills
  • Blood Rite Affinity: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Umbra Control: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Dependencies: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Bloodline Affinity: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


END OF THE UNUSUAL
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The Gotei 13 Advocate
Joined : 2012-05-29
Posts : 3132
Age : 31
Location : Dumbfuck State

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Victoria Dawn [Approved; 5-5] Left_bar_bleue1570/100Victoria Dawn [Approved; 5-5] Empty_bar_bleue  (1570/100)
Tiers:

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Sat Jan 27, 2018 6:21 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


Comments/Notes: I personally don't see anything wrong with this. Congrats on being the first app I've checked since my return. Thanks for keeping it simple. <3
Tier: 5-5
Sage
Sage
Lord of the Understream
Lord of the Understream
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Joined : 2013-11-04
Posts : 2340

Member Info
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Tue Jun 19, 2018 7:31 pm
[mod]With no notice and no post in the mandatory activity check, this is getting archived. If you're back, just throw an unarchival request in #staffhelp and it'll get put back.[/mod]


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