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» Name Of Character: Kyoraku Shunsui
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t18507-kyoraku-shunsui-approved-0-4-absentee

» Upgrading: Tier to 0-3, 0-3++ in Bankai, 0-2 in Shikokai, adding Shikokai.

» Why:

Tier: I haven't put in an upgrade for Shunsui in the entire time I've had him, so I think it's about due now. He's been in multiple high level events, and is forwarding site plot. In addition, he's in a position which almost necessitates a higher level of power than he currently has. Threads included below. Oh, one last thing. He's lower tier than some other canon characters despite the fact that he was initially stronger, and his history is mainly about his time after the end of the series, while those character's histories are almost entirely focused on their time during the series.

Shikokai: The only reason I haven't put in for this up until now is because it was difficult to imagine what I wanted to do with it. Having resolved that issue, I don't think it's a stretch of the imagination to say that Shunsui would possess it. Below I will write a summary of Shunsui's entire Zanpakuto, and then expand upon the Shikokai.

Shikai - Children's games become reality. The children play in the forest, as the hours go by.

Bankai - Children listen to stories that their young ears are perhaps not ready for, as day turns to dusk.

Shikokai - Night has fallen. The children sleep. On the outside all is well, yet how do their young minds fare?

Katen Kyōkotsu: Osoroshioni

Reality fades away and is replaced by nightmare. Shunsui and his opponent enter an area which is entirely unaffected by anything happening around them, and are equally unable to effect, or even sense the surroundings that were previously before them. All becomes devoid of light or shadow, and the only things that are visible to either of them are each other. While within this nightmare, both Shunsui and his opponent are afflicted by all but unbearable pain. Their strength and stamina are drained as time goes on. Every inch of their bodies is constantly bombarded with winds that act as razors. Their internal organs are crushed, and burned with a fire that simply won't end. All damage they inflict upon each other is amplified ten fold, and time passes thousands of times more quickly. Their limbs slowly begin to rot away, and their mind is beset by illusions of heinous acts and incomprehensible terror. They can no longer breathe, and their lungs burn as if coated with acid, but they do not die. No, they will never die, not while they exist with this world of nightmares.

(This lasts for six posts. Keep in mind that Shunsui has the option to not enable this affect, in which case he simply gains the normal benefits of a Shikokai, namely increased speed, energy, etc. Mainly etc.)

» Extra:

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t18521-northern-raid-assault-of-the-hollows

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t18732p10-kings-advent-gotei-shinigami-open

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t19980-when-the-levee-breaks-ww4-start-event (bit short, but still shows his ability.)

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t19787-the-booze-2-electric-boogaloo (not so much a combat thread, but there is a bit of sparring involved)

I believe there are more, but I couldn't locate them.

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Tue Jul 16, 2019 3:17 pm
Overall this is fine, but there are a couple things about the Shikokai that aren't as fleshed out as they should be.

Shunsui and his opponent enter an area which is entirely unaffected by anything happening around them, and are equally unable to effect, or even sense the surroundings that were previously before them.

Do they just disappear entirely to an outside viewer? Is it some incorporeal state?

Their strength and stamina are drained as time goes on.

To what degree?

Shunsui has the option to not enable this affect, in which case he simply gains the normal benefits of a Shikokai

I can't really approve this, such a powerful Shikokai's greatest balancing aspect is the situational nature of it. Being able to simply go "I just want the good part" seems sort of counter to the whole idea, plus I'm not sure that's even really how a release would work.
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Sat Jul 27, 2019 2:17 am
Katen Kyōkotsu: Osoroshioni

Reality fades away and is replaced by nightmare. Shunsui and his opponent enter an area which is entirely unaffected by anything happening around them, and are equally unable to effect, or even sense the surroundings that were previously before them. They leave the realm of the living, and enter a land of nightmare which is completely separate from any other. In short, they enter a realm which is entirely unable to be affected by any outside influence. All becomes devoid of light or shadow, and the only things that are visible to either of them are each other. While within this nightmare, both Shunsui and his opponent are afflicted by all but unbearable pain. Their strength and stamina are drained by an extraordinary amount as time goes on. When this has run its course, both of the fighters are left with but ten percent of their original ability. Every inch of their bodies is constantly bombarded with winds that act as razors. Their internal organs are crushed, and burned with a fire that simply won't end. All damage they inflict upon each other is amplified ten fold, and time passes thousands of times more quickly. Their limbs slowly begin to rot away, and their mind is beset by illusions of heinous acts and incomprehensible terror. They can no longer breathe, and their lungs burn as if coated with acid, but they do not die. No, they will never die, not while they exist with this world of nightmares.

(This lasts for six posts. For five posts after this ability ends neither combatant will die from the wounds sustained. If the wounds are not treated within that time it is almost certain that both of them will perish.)
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