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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Takehiko Big Upgrade (Done)   Takehiko Big Upgrade (Done) EmptyWed Feb 05, 2020 11:59 pm

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» Name Of Character: Takehiko Kuchiki
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t19959-takehiko-kuchiki-approved-3-1-shinigami?highlight=Takehiko

» Upgrading: Tier and Zanjutsu and Kido, Zanjutsu to Advanced if Possible and Kido to Elite.


Enhancement Kido: This is a technique further obtained from Captain Unohana. By training and understanding it Takehiko figured out to do it. But decided to add something special to it as his personal space. Takehiko is can cast it and control the level. This means he can pick what level of Enhancement he gains. By selecting Kido Levels he can perform. he can increase his physical potential by that much. This is seen by how his body glows when using it. A glimmer is seen when he activates anything above twenty. On the lower end from 5-10, he is only circulating his blood flow quicker. Takehiko uses this most often to enhance his Swordsmanship and Flashstep Prowess. As his Kido style already has something that affects Kido. This Physical Enhancement Kido burns energy as one would expect but requires no incantation or posture. Takehiko's managed to forgo those by creating a form for him.. This provides him with multiple and longer usage of the weapon. By increasing his blood production rate. It must be noted that he must be capable of using the Kido number. Meaning if his skill doesn't meet the requirement. It is impossible to do so. Thus concludes one of his more simple yet effective Kido techniques. Each enhancement lasts three posts. With only one enhancement at a time. This has a three post-Cool Down after he's used it.

Blood Kido: Being unable to rely on the power that Akuma gave him. Takehiko began to realize he could both taint and empower his Kido. By using his blood as the catalyst. Though this is a type of sacrificial Kido and requires a price to be used. The user needing to spend Blood and energy to create powerful techniques. What happens to the Kido when influenced by this style of Kido is an increase in potency. By decent amount making the spells more effective in the long run. Though Takehiko's only begun experimenting with this and another. He's been focused on developing his skills further. Defending others requires him to come up with a difference-maker. he discovered.

So how this works to clear up poor writing. Is that due to Takehiko's Zanpakuto power he is able to channel Kido through it? This consumes blood depending on the level of Kido. This means sacrifice is required in order to use this in any function. Coming out to the price of Blood.



» Why:


Info: This thread was Takehiko's first realization in an attempt to trust Akuma. The two came together through this deception became clearer later. It must be noted that while a social thread and recovery thread. It made Takehiko have some hope for the further in any case. And try furthering the Hollow skills he gained.

1:Anger is a Frame of Mind


Info: This thread was another social one with Takehiko playing the part of the fool. Still naive to the nature of his hollow. And blissfully unaware of the darkness looming. His advice to his friend Laskt showing some wisdom. Though still lacking greatly in the fields he should have been practicing.

2:After War Training


Info: Beginning his training with the ruthless Captain Shinryu. Takehiko got a crash course in what he did wrong. Making mistakes he'd made a thousand times before. Coming at this the wrong way over and over again. Pushing his life to its finale, though he discovered his Zanpakuto's true name here.


3: A strange addiction

Info: Takehiko after realizing he was an idiot. Something the world and others had found out already. Began to think about it but went to Ulv now. His desire to have the Hollow burned out of him. Understanding he failed Akuma and learning from it.

4:Negativity Burned Away


Info:This was the game-changer for much of Takehiko's growth. Abalia helped him reaffirm things but changed his outlook. Making him see what he'd been blind to this time. Becoming aware of the sins of his family but of himself. He would use this chance to go back to the Academy and grow his knowledge and experience. Taking tests he'd failed prior thanks all to her.

5:Requested Guidance


Info:While largely a social thread Takehiko began his quest to understand what a Captain was here. Trying to change his outlook and behavior as Vice-Captain. Showing his maturity beginning to come forward more as time carried on.

6: A Summoning

Info: Just coping with emptiness inside of him from losing his Hollow. Takehiko became the first to make this choice due to his failures. But didn't quickly embrace what was done thus this small solo thread.

7:Retaking the Past


Info: He showed some results of his training but also the nagging of his lost Spirit. Takehiko showing a lack of emotion and a somewhat less of himself. Growing less as a person and more a cold-blooded person. Having a match with Keiko where he allowed instinct to overrun him. Trying to find something to care about when facing Keiko but unable to do so. This would later help him reclaim his emotions he'd buried under his guilt.

8: Back to School


Info: Returning finally to train with Captain Shinryu again. Takehiko began learning and pushing himself hard once more. At first, there were difficulties but his Hoho had gained much greater prowess here. Studying and developing beneath the watchful gaze of Captain Shinryu. This thread also lets him discover the important thing he missed. That the spirit within him was enough. That his Zanpakuto could fill any void he just had to let her. Thus improving his Zanjutsu skills and growing further. Trying to push his limits as the time wore on. Getting more used to his Shikai from this training and movement in general.

9: Fragments of the Past


Info: A display of him using his healing skills to rescue his cousin. Though he considers it a failure himself, he does notice problems after the fact and quickly adapts to save her. Though considers his Kaido having failed entirely in this regard. Also that he failed to realize that the women had done as instructed but nothing worked on Keiko.

10:Black Medicine:

Info: A simple social thread informing his Captain-Commander of the situation.

11: Medical Reports

Info: A solo thread imbarking on his training and education further. Takehiko grew his mind more, studying further because of Keiko. Trying to sharpen his other skills outside of just power.

12: Medical Science and You

Info: This thread was largely Rukia looking after his nephew. Providing guidance to him both on taking care of himself. To especially take care of others like Keiko. He'd been known for working himself to the bone.

13:Over Working is Working


Info: Takehiko showed some medical skill but also excellent deductive reasoning. Able to figure out that a hollow creature was likely inside of his relative. Without going too far into it, he was also able to show his devotion to Keiko and the family.

14:The Doctor is In

Info:This thread was where at least he met his own Captain. Striking a chord between her and himself. Discovering from her questions that he could better obtain his Kido skills. Developing them further and providing his inspiration to a previously mentioned skill. That is largely done through the stage Captain Unohana set.

15:The duo of the Second Private Takehiko

Info: While Takehiko did marvel at the skills and lectures he was able to take. This finished out his studies within the Academy. Allowing him to accomplish high scores unlike he'd done prior. Becoming one of the better students they'd had; Though it took him a second attempt to do so. Even tinkering with minor inventions.

16:A Scientist is born

Info: A simple thread where Takehiko much like his Aunt attempted to mend things. Going to the family of Kaien Shiba or his brother especially to do his best. Though at first left shunned with his efforts. He made it clear that his peers were important to him. Enough to put everything on the line for them.


17:Past Tensions


» Extra: [Anything extra to add?]


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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Takehiko Big Upgrade (Done)   Takehiko Big Upgrade (Done) EmptyWed Feb 26, 2020 9:45 pm

[mod]Denying the Tier, Zanjutsu, and partially the Kido request. Kido is already at advanced.

Enhancement Kido - Would not enhance Swordsmanship. Would not be 1-99, 1-35 at most, especially at his current rank in Kido. The enhancement to Hoho would be minimal, not even a full rank unless using kido from 30+. Why does Kido help with using a zanpakuto? The rationale of magic enhances one's skills with a sword does not make sense. Please add a cooldown to this as well, since you've given it a duration. Would recommend 3 posts as well.

Hadō Physical Enhancement - This isn't a thing. If you want to specify a sub-type of Enhancement then you may do so, just make sure it's not connected with Hadō because it can't. You keep saying that you'll explod if you don't know how to use Hadō but never really gave a situation where that would apply. What's stopping you from just never writing that your character explodes? Set a limit: anything higher than 25 would cause self-damage and anything higher than 30 will cause you to explode. This would make a decent drawback since you already need Advanced as you've stated but talk about it's difficulty multiple times already, making me assume that it's a difficult technique for soemone even at advanced.

Blood Kido - You mention it has a price, but what is the price. Does it hurt him? Please clearly state how it hurts him and what kind of damage it would deal to him. Also, it would not be much stronger than Hollowfied Kido as this seems like a replacement to it than just an upgrade of the previous ability that he can no longer use, in fact it would be weaker since he is trying to recreate an ability given to him by his hollow that he no longer has. Please remove that section entirely, especially since you will not have Hollowfied Kido anymore so there is no reason to compare the two.

Blood Enhancement - This sounds like something any shinigami can do by just using more of their spiritual power. Besides that:
Why does it increase his Hoho and his Zanjutsu? Those are completely unrelated to the effects.
Where do the nutrients come from? How does he convert energy into nutrients, is he a plant?
That being said, this would be a vizard or hollow thing, not something he can just do, especially without the aid of his zanpakuto as you have not mentioned how he's able to just freely control his blood like it's a genetic trait he has.
Finally, he enchance his body with the blood that is already in his body? Please clarify.

Blood Step - He can already do this, he has Advanced Hoho. Flash stepping in rapid sucession isn't something needs it's own technique. Besides that, you just say he can move farther than before, but don't give an example of neither how far he can go now nor how far we would be able to go with this ability

You may notice that I left out Rakshasa Chains, Shin no Ippo, and Goddess Tear. That's because you write them as they are Kido, explain them as if they are Kido, and give them ranks like Kido. We have a kido section for apping, this is not it. Please move these to the Custom Kido section so they can be looked at and put in there upon approval. Also as an overall final note, since he is no longer a vizard, please remove all mentions of a hollow and hollow related abilities as they are no longer relevant.[/mod]

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Takehiko Big Upgrade (Done)   Takehiko Big Upgrade (Done) EmptyWed Feb 26, 2020 11:10 pm

[mod]Enhanement Kido - Kido would not help him use a sword, no matter how you look at it or word it. Either he enhances himself or he puts the kido into the sword, not both.

Blood Kido - Would not be stronger, as I stated previously. As I said, would definetly weaker since he used his hollow as a crutch and the hollow is no longer with him.
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[mod]Blood Kido is approved but will be examined closely by staff, mainly me, to make sure it is not abused or does something it was not written to do.

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