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Nenka Fotia

"I won't forgive them! I'll use this power to save the world.."



I. Basic Information


» Name: Nenka Fotia
» Titles: The Reapers Heir
» Age: 19
» Gender: Male
» Sexuality: Pansexual

» Affiliation/Rank: Unaffiliated.

» Physical Appearance Image:
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I. Personality Traits


» Personality:

Overview

A broad overview of Nenka is that he is ambitious and hopes to be able to use the power he came across by chance in order to change and save the world for better, as well as save his hometown from the constant attackers that have plagued it for many years. However, seeing all of his friends die and witnessing brutual murders and scenes of destruction from a young age has had a considerable impact on him.

Additionally, he is always keen to meet new people and make new friends, but then becomes very clingy in the fear that they would meet the same fate as old friends. He has biases towards certain races that have attacked his city the most but in general tries to be accepting of everyone no matter their creed or political view. Its only when they try to attack "innocent people" that he'll respond with force.

He doesn't understand the broad geopolitical landscape currently present in the earth and sees things in a very "good or bad" way, not understanding the nuanced greys of morality that exist in the world. He can very easily be provoked into a fight because he has no regard for his well being.

Immaturity

As a young adult only 19 years old, Nenka's view on a lot of matters can be seen as pretty immature, as if he doesn't understand the universe or world at large and only knows of the way of life he led in his home city. A lot of his ideals about being heroic and saving people from harm also can easily be seen as immaturity as in reality, such things are very difficult to accomplish.

He has a tendency to reject views that aren't line with his own and not listen to the opinions of others and only learns the extremely hard way. In the past this would mean near death experiences from trying to save people. However, this won't stop him from trying to play hero and throw himself into harms way as ultimately he holds little value for his life.

Nenka sees the world in a very black and white manner; only distinguishing between good guys and bad guys. This is a result of his immaturity, accumulating in his beliefs that certain races are more prone to be evil than others such as demons, hollows etc and others lean more towards being good such as the shinigami. However as we all know, the race has no bearing on a person. Even though he would always denounce the thought of being a racist, his life experiences have made him unconsciously biased in this manner and he has yet to learn of the politically nuanced universe he lives in, where not everything is as it seems.

Another manifestation of his immaturity is his emotional states. Nenka is not the greatest at handling his emotions, due to the many extreme events he has endured through his upbringing and teenage life. He will frequently have depressive bouts which borderlines on suicidal thoughts, or extreme outbursts at anger.

This can be exploited by other people, who could trigger him to have all kinds of negative intrusive thoughts, or make him angry to the point he foregoes all rational thought. This presents a huge barrier for him in combat as he will cease to strategise and start seeing red and fight in a berserker style with no regards to what his opponent can do if his emotional state is pushed far enough.

Hero of Justice

Another defining trait of Nenka is his desire to be a hero. A hero that has the power to save innocent people from harm and protect cities from attacks. This idealism and ideology was born out of his rebellious nature as a kid. Rather than sit back and allow his city and friends to slowly die, he wanted to fight back and be the person to save everything.

As he grew up and went through more hardship, his ideals only consumed him further as now he wishes to apply this to the whole world, not understanding the geopolitics of the world or the grey area of morality that many combatants and organisations lie in. This ideal to die a hero is born from Nenka's survivor guilt as most of his friends were wiped out as they trained to fight and resist the attackers on their city. He would have much rather died himself than see all of his friends die.

With that, Nenka's desire to be a hero isn't just fuelled by some goodie two shoes ideals, its fuelled by something darker. He genuinely feels bad for existing and believes dying as a hero is the only way he could relieve himself of this guilt. This means he will throw himself without a second thought into life threatening situations if its to save another person from harm.


Mental State

Nenka has been subject to a lot of extreme events through his short life that had adversely impacted his mental well being due to witnessing constant attacks as a child and being subject to that fear of dying very early on, to seeing all of his friends he was close to get brutally murdered. The consequences of this contribute to his fragile emotions. While these could be chalked down to immaturity as stated earlier, the reality is that his mental state fuels these negative emotions significantly.

He suffers from extreme depressive episodes were he thinks about taking his own life to extreme anger outbursts for no clear reason and has frequent nightmares about what happened to his friends.

Seeing such brutal imagery so young has a profound consequence on his psyche. It could be said he suffers from symptoms consistent with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) with consistent flashbacks/reliving traumatic events in his life.

When such episodes occur, it can either completely paralyse from acting or at worst cause him to go berserk at everything on sight which given his powers, could have consequences for the people around him, the environment and the retaliation could mean grave consequences for him also, such as getting himself injured or killed.

In spite of all this however, Nenka tries his best to treat everyone kindly as his lack of any real companions or friends at this stage means that he is quite eager to meet some more. Another consequence of losing his friends is that he feels a lot of loneliness and thus finds himself bonding with anyone he meets relatively easy out of a need for friendship.

However, another consequence of his life experience is that he has a fear of being abandoned or that his friends will suffer the same fate as his past ones which can result in him being unnecessarily clingy or protective of any new friends he makes, to the point it becomes creepy or overbearing.

In order to control all of this, Nenka often will isolate himself from other people during poor mental health episodes in order to control it, as well as sometimes taking medications to reduce the overwhelming feelings he gets.


I. Character History


» History

Most would agree that within this day in age, we very much live in troubled times. Nenka is what he is now as a result of these troubled times. Living within Japan, Saburo City, it was fair to say he did not grow up within a safe environment. Attacks and fights within this city were frequent. His parents tried to raise him as normally as possible, but it was hard to ignore the carnage he witnessed and had to survive as a kid growing up.

It seemed he had some some soft of gift. He was very spiritually aware and the spirits and such that engaged in combat and war around these parts were as real as any flesh and blood human to him. As a child however, with what he witnessed - he considered it a curse almost. He was powerless to stop anything that was happening and could only bear witness.

It didn't just end there. It started to truly hit home as the early friends Nenka made in his life found their lives being taken from them cruelly and unfairly. This was the reality for many children in this area, as a matter of fact. While most wallowed in despair, Nenka was different. He felt an urge of rebellion. The desire to fight back. He inspired his fellow peers as teenagers to start training themselves to be able to fight back and watch over each other.

As they were all spiritually aware, to some extent they would have the power to at least stand in the way of those who threatened their home. They trained their bodies to have strength and tried to learn from some of the more experienced members of the town to make use of the spiritual power they possessed. Right now though, they weren't nearly strong enough and they would tragically pay the priceless for their lack of power in the next series of events.

Even though they had trained and had accepted this as part of their fate for perusing this path - the peers Nenka had began to perish in battle as a result of their inexperience. Up until now, Nenka had never actually fought. He had trained his body and spiritual power, but it was his friends he chose to ally with taking the fall, instead of him. He felt an immense survivors guilt when he had made it his ambition to stop this from happening.

With him as the only original crew member left, he had to carry on the wishes of his dead allies and save the city from the perils it faced. With the anger at the attackers and monsters in the city, his training started to elevate him beyond what a human could do. It was at this point, he could be considered supernatural. However, the test of this supernatural ability came as he found himself confronted with a demon wreaking havoc. With no allies to back him up, and a ever increasing death toll in this particular instance, he chose to enter the fray and try and fend them off.

This backfired horribly for Renka as he was almost killed and was saved in the last minute, inches from death from a more experienced combatant in the city. It was a wide array of conflicting emotions. He wanted to relieve his survivors guilt and die alongside everyone else, he was frustrated at the fact he had to be saved when he had spent all his teenage years up until this point training his supernatural abilities to try and be strong enough to defend his city. Either way, he was still alive.

He took a few months to fully recover, at which point we now enter the present day, 2420. This is where his destiny would completely change. After all that he had been through, with the deaths of his friends and having distanced himself from his family in order to ensure their safety, in case anyone ever tried to get revenge on him, he went soul searching in the vast Karakura Forest, to muse over his next moves on how to gain more power, in a vastly more peaceful setting. Little did he know however, it was going to come to him, rather than be sought out.

He was near a significant mountain. Not knowing what was happening at the peak. A powerful vizard named Poliro Tensol had thrust a blade into himself, thus killing himself. However, he did not consider how much power he still had in his last moments, or he simply didn't care. This man had many years of combat experience and a spiritual power that when fully unleashed, was monstrous and could be felt by an entire state. With his death, that power sought to redistribute itself as it was unleashed.

Near the epicentre of this almighty spiritual pressure explosion, Renka found himself pinned to the ground unable to move himself. As this power roared out from the peak, Renka found the strength to resist and stood. All of that power and spirit had found a new home. Poliros leftover spirit began to take a hold within Renka, as he found the power now filling him. It was simple - the released power from Poliros death had now taken host in him.

Unable to control himself, he felt himself burst with fire as his entire body combusted into flames so hot the colours distorted into a purpleish green. This was no longer a regular fire - Renka's whole soul had been set alight as he heard something he thought might have been a passing voice.

"Despite this power, I achieved nothing. Achieve what I couldn't in my place, Flame Reaper."


He wasn't sure quite what it was, but he passed out from this overwhelming transformation. When he woke up, he felt a power like never before. He didn't know how this had happened, or who had passed away, or what a "flame reaper" was. It sounded cool to his young adult mind though, but he figured if this power was passed down to him, it was more suiting to call himself.. the Heir to the Reaper.

He hoped now, with this new found power, he can save his city from the evil forces that would see it wiped out, and save the world. To become a hero of justice, was his ultimate goal. However, this young man had a lot to learn about the struggles, the contradictions of being a "hero." and would learn that the world is not as black and white as he thought it was. This is the story of a young adult with dreams of heroism. Renka Fotia, The Heir to The Reaper.

I. Equipment


» Equipment: N/A

I. Natural Abilities & Skills


» Natural Skills:

Spiritual Awareness

As a supernatural human, Nenka has always possessed the ability to interact and perceive the supernatural with no difficulty since a young age. Since gaining the spirit and energy of Poliro, he has now developed the ability to sense spiritual energy. If it is a powerful being, he would be able to sense them from a considerable distance of 10 miles. For weaker beings, this range is reduced since the signature is lesser to a mile. This allows him also gauge the strength of any opponent he may come across roughly speaking.

Hand to Hand Combat

Ever since being a young teen, Nenka has trained with the defenders of his city alongside his former friends in hand to hand combat. Broadly speaking, he follows the Hakuda style of hand to hand combat as the defenders of his city were experienced shinigami. However, he hasn't had a lot of combat experience outside of his training.

Swordsmanship

In the same vein as his hand to hand combat, he was also taught the foundation of Zanjutsu, the shinigami's sword style. However, he is untested in this area in a real fight. However, during the course of his training which took place over 7 years, he was starting to be able to clash blow for blow with experienced Shinigami that had hundreds of years of experience - a scary improvement rate.

Archery

Protecting his town was a more traditional bow and arrow Quincy who also imparted the fundamentals of archery. Nenka makes use of this when he creates a fire bow to shoot flaming arrows at his opponents. He is quite perceptive and able to focus on the specific place he wants to fire at. As a supernatural human, his precision and steadiness goes beyond what regular humans could achieve.

Fire Resistance

Having obtained the power of Poliro, Nenka can resist fire both naturally and spiritually created. He does not suffer burns or feel a "hot" sensation when using his own fire. Unless the opposing fire somehow reaches his internal organs, it is very unlikely that Nenka would be phased from fire based attacks. It is possible he could be damaged by it, since this resistance mainly applies to his own fire, but it would be extremely difficult.

I. Other Supernatural Abilities


» Powers:

Flame Creation

A power that originally belonged to the Flame Reaper, when Nenka acquired his energy and spirit, he obtained this staple ability. Flame Creation allows Nenka to substitute fuel in the fire triangle - using his own spiritual power to create fire from nothing. However, using his own power to create fire does mean that every time he does create it, spiritual energy is used. This eventually means that if he runs out of energy, he will not be able to create any more flames.

His fire burns extremely hot and as a spiritual fire, he is able to control how hot or cold it is. As it is fuelled by spiritual power, it cannot be put out easily by any conventional means. Physics bending and ice/water based ablities could hamper the effectiveness of Nenka's flames, but it would take a very powerful user of these elements to stop the flames entirely, someone many tiers above him. The heat of Nenka's flame can be felt from up to a mile away.

It is unknown just how hot Nenka's fire can burn, but the majority physical matter such as steel/metals/concrete burns down within seconds and living matter can straight up be incinerated if not adequately protected. As the fire is spiritually based, the spiritual energy of a person can significantly reduce the harm, but even someone with high level reaitsu risks extreme burns, the flesh being destroyed, and the destruction of blood vessels and nerves in the body melting.

He can use his flames defensively to "melt" attacks of a spiritual or elemental nature. Attacks such as Cero, Kidos and attacks based on lighting, water, etc can be defended against. Against a weaker opponent, he would be able to completely negate these types of attacks while against much stronger foes, he would at least be able to reduce the power of the attack before it connected and not completely negate it.

Using this ability, Nenka can create any type of weapon he can imagine. Swords, guns, bows, axes, etc. In theory, he could create any type of construct with flames if he imagined it, but he has a limit to its size - no bigger than a two story house roughly in size. He is also unable to create anything too complex - only shapes. So while he could create something that looks like say, a house, it would only be shaped like one.

Finally, the last facet to this ability is that he is able to destabilise his fire to create an explosion. The power of this explosion will vary on the size of the fire construct detonated, and the current form Nenka is in. If he uses his full power, it is possible the destruction could be as wide as a city block.

I. Spirit Release


» Spirit Release Appearance:
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» Spirit Release Overview:

Renka begins to tap into the spirit of Poliro and takes on a new form by gaining a armour suit compromised of solidified fire. As a result, his spiritual power and overall strength has an increase.

» Spirit Release Powers:

Overall Power Increase

Entering his first release, Nenka gains an overall noticeable power spike in all facets. His fire's average temperature increases considerably, gaining more melting power meaning even fire resistant matter would start to have trouble completely dulling the flames. The consequence of this is that people not used to the heat of his fire will sweat much more and may suffer fatigue and dehydration which can dull their fighting abilities potentially.

His speed and strength are also increased, being able to make much more powerful strikes that can launch someone through, and destroy small buildings. While he does have a raw power upgrade, his technique is still untested/lacking in a real battle. His speed now allows him to be much more agile and flexible in combat, as well as move at very fast speeds way beyond human limits.

Solidified Fire

In this form, Renka is able to diverse his abilities by turning his fire into solid matter by condensing the spiritual energy until it takes a solidified form. This allows him to have a more physical attack against someone who might be more resistant to fire - the temperature of these solid flames will still be the same as if they were not solid.

The solid matter can be broken with a strong focused attack with enough power to strike through solid matters with ease. If the solidified fire is broken, it will revert to a gaseous state.

Flame Armour

As part of his release, he uses his solidified fire ability to generate armour made of solid fire. This means that touching the armour with bare hands without protection can result in severe burns or even losing the hand entirely.

In terms of protection, it can be compared to something like an Arrancar Hierro - focused precise strikes are required to break through. However, it varies depending on the strength of an opponent. Someone powerful, sereval tiers above Renka would not meet too much resistance while someone around Renkas tier would have to focus their attacks. Below his tier, they would need to put a lot of force into their blows to break through.

In any case, this provides suitable battle armour for Nenka as it allows him some protection from physical damage even if it is broken through.

Flame Step

As a human, Nenka doesn't have the natural ability to perform a movement that is so fast it is beyond eyesight/regular perception like shinigami do with Shunpo, or Arrancars with Sonido etc. However, once he begins to really use Poliro's power in this stage, he gains the ability to perform an ability mimicking these latter mentioned: Using the power of flame, he performs one quick teleport like motion, disappearing into any fire he created and reappearing quickly from a different fire within less than a second. However, he cannot consistently use this as it draining to do it all of the time, so he prefers to use acrobatics and regular movements to try and fight. This also hinges on him having flames in the area to move to as he is limited by where his flames are.

I. Limit Break Release


» Limit Break Release Appearance:

Spoiler:

» Limit Break Release Description:

In this form, Nenka tries to use as much of Poliro's power and spirit as possible, and the result is that he begins to morph into a almost demon looking entity with his hair turning into a blazing purple, his body's colour turning into a pitch black.

His raw power becomes extremely potent at this stage, but he cannot control it easily meaning he could end up hurting/killing people in the crossfire if he enters this stage. It is likely he could do significant damage to a large city in this form due to the dragon formation he takes.

However, this form damages his body as he is not able to maintain the level of power he is using, meaning he could suffer more severe mental effects, or feel like his entire body is going to break. If he stays in this form too long, he will eventually be unable to maintain it and drop out of it back to his base state extremely exhausted and unable to fight. Thus, he has a 6 post limit maximum in this form.

» Limit Break Release Powers:

Further Power Increase

At this stage, Nenka's fire becomes a serious threat as it will start to melt even fire resistant bodies and substances and will melt anything without fire protection with relative ease in a matter of seconds.

A human without any protection or spritual power would be turned into ashes very quickly or mortally burned. Trying to use all the spiritual power he can, Nenka's spiritual power becomes very high and would be very noticeable to those in the region.

His strength and speed increase even further, standing out even amongst the superpowered humans. At this point, the temperatures would mean that anything combustible near Nenka would catch fire as he loses control. He would be able to control the new fires created as a result, which could result in a very lethal wildfire effect in the right conditions such as a forest. His strength in this state would allow him to easily rampage through a city and destroy large buildings.

Enhanced Solid Fire

At this stage, his solidified matter becomes tougher and harder to break, requiring a lot of might from lower tiers and more effort from the higher tier combatants.

Enhanced Flame Step

His flame step ability becomes much more potent at this stage as it is likely Nenka will spread a lot of fire at this point, allowing him a lot of mobility to move extremely fast and at this point is on par with a shunpo, sonido, etc in terms of speed.

Heat of Condemnation

This is Nenka's strongest ability as of right now. If he uses it, he will use up all of his power and revert back to base form with no energy to spare. He will fly up into the air and then, use all the energy he possibly can to create a massive beam of fire, shooting a nonstop stream of flames for two posts until he is unable to produce any more fire, at which point he would have likely incinerated everything in his general radius. This ability poses a serious risk to the environment and anyone caught in it, but he would be unable to fight if the opponent survived.

In general, being caught in this stream for long enough would definitely mean death for the majority of characters without a high level of reaitsu protection or fire protection, and powerless humans would likely get turned into ash instantly.

The primary drawback is that the stream requires so much power, he is not able to move around freely with it too much as he must put all his concentration into projecting the fire beam. This means agile characters could potentially dodge it but it does have a wide area of effect up to 130 yards wide.

I. Skill Sheet


General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Adept


High-Spec Human Sheet
  • Power Control: Beginner
  • Physical Augmentation: Adept
  • Spiritual Adaptation: Adept
  • Mediumship: Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


END OF THE HUMAN APPLICATION


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[adm]Flame Creation:

-"The only way this fire can be stopped is with powerful physics bending or ice powers at absolute zero level."

That's way too strong a trait, I'd say remove this. It can be harder to put out, but requiring something that extreme is too much.

Flame Armor:

-"Someone powerful in the 0-1 tier would not need a lot of effort to break through, while 2+ tiers might need to focus and put more strength into their blows."

This should scale with his own power, not just be flat, and 0-1 should never be used as an example in something like this.[/adm]
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THROUGH THE POWER INVESTED IN ME...
« Application Checklist »
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]



« Final Verdict »

  • Comments/Notes: The biggest problem I have with this app is that this power is not balanced. You have this incredibly versatile and, in your own words, "burns extremely hot" while also burning things from concrete to spiritual attacks all at the cost of.....

    Energy! Which is super vague and not helpful at all.

    Also, you wouldn't be able to have two separate release but yet have Beginner Power Control. Also also, with that level in Power Control, he would hurt himself, with his own fire so making armor out of it would just burn him alive.

    Another point: you keep putting super vague powerups to the point that I can't tell what they do. He gets flame step which makes him fast, but then it gets enhanced which makes him "extremely fast". How fast is that? It burns extremely hot? Yeah, how hot is that? Is there a limit? Can he burn a hole through the sun? This is too vague for any for of combat because you can just say "Actually he's moving too fast" or "He burns through it". Along with that, Arrancar Hierro works on a spectrum. Beginner Hierro is different than Master Hierro so saying his armor is as tough as Hierro without giving a specific skill means that it could be as tough as Untrained.

    If you're dead set on Beginner then you will need to:
    - Reduce Limit Break's post duration to 1. It's a second release so you even having at this level is highly unlikely, but do to the custom nature of High-Specs I think it's passable with this incredibly short duration.
    - Lock Heart of Condemnation until a higher level is achieved.
    - He has to be susceptible to his own flames. This comes back around to the point I made earlier, but there is no downside to his fire creation at the moment yet it can do basically everything. Even with a strong fire user in Canon like Yamamoto, his fire burned indiscriminately and would even affect allies.

    Consider these notes and then let us know when edits have been made!
  • Tier: N/A




« Final Final Verdict, Hazard »

  • Overall: N/A
  • Power: N/A
  • Influence: N/A
  • Resources: N/A



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