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|Subject Post 1Subject: Yoshitsune's Growth Sun Jan 24, 2021 5:48 pm|| |
» Name Of Character:
Yoshitsune Kobayashi» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t21515-yoshitsune-kobayashi-tier-1-4-hazard-rank-b-race-vizard?highlight=Yoshitsune» Upgrading:
So a couple of things are being done here, I'm seeking a Master in Hollow Control as he's shown himself to be doing both is widely regarded as a specialist in it. I'd like to raise his tier if possible as well, as well as his unlocked Bankai which I'll write out below for grading. Name:
Heaven Chaining, Star PiercingAppearance:
A black Shiahksho forms around his body from head to toe, with small shackles on his wrists and ankles. His Zanpakuto turns into a black blade with a purple hue around it. This color and change to his gear and outfit come down to the power set his Zanpakuto allows. The appearance is that of a regular katana. As it condenses all the power and strength of the Bankai into this form. He does suffer injuries from the intensity of being focused. Powers:
His outfit allows him to move without resistance from gravity, though he doesn't float away as some would expect. This is allowing him to use high-speed combat. But the drawing point of his Bankai is the sword. His sword is using a high-density graviton focus that makes his swings and blows much much heavier. The consideration or best statement would be, it's like a lightweight being hit by a heavyweight.
Or a Welterweight taking blows from heavyweight may more accurate. The attacks and blows from his sword are monstrous but don't pose a weight on his body. This does equal out to damage done to his body while in the form though. As the fight goes on this will wear and tear on him, even to the point of breaking his bones.
The intensity and weight from the sword that is given off do affect him though not in a swinging sense. More in the sense it hurts his body to continue using it. He can wield it without issue for three posts, after that he'll begin breaking bones in parts of his body while fighting. » Why: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t21642-the-word-is-bankai#141801https://www.platinumhearts.net/t21456-guilty-pleasurehttps://www.platinumhearts.net/t21623-reaching-outhttps://www.platinumhearts.net/t21426-broken-causes-new-dreamshttps://www.platinumhearts.net/t21499-one-lump-or-twohttps://www.platinumhearts.net/t21459-the-festival-of-politics-and-russia» Extra:
If I'm not quite there yet for the Master, let me know what I can to progress it, please.
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Yoshitsune's Growth Mon Feb 01, 2021 1:26 am|| |
[mod]After reviewing this most of the content in this upgrade, while great, doesn't correlate well enough to justify any of the upgrades requested at this time. That being said it is a good start, and I encourage you to keep working towards your goals. For now though, unfortunately, I'm going to have to deny this upgrade.[/mod]