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Subject Post 1PostSubject: Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F]   Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F] EmptySat Jun 12, 2021 9:14 am

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Enter The Shinigami
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I. Basic Information


» Name: Yamiya Ankoku
» Alias: Damned Red Eyes, Yami.
» Age: 24
» Gender: Male
» Association: Shinigami
» Appearance Written: He has black hair a beautiful face with two ruby red eyes, small lips in to a slightly muscular body. He costantly covers his neck with bandages to hide a deep carved hollow wound. 1.76 high, 84kg.

» Appearance Image:

Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F] 84505610
Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F] 8c975010

I. Personality


» Personality: Unlike the others his apperance are very unwelcoming and his red eyes give off bad chills. Yamiya feels lonely and he really hates Shinigamis, that's why he hate himself too. He doesn't get along easily with the others and likes to spice the things up from time to time. It's his own way to interact with other students, other than be silent and listen to the instructors. He doesn't see anyone as an opponent neither he can swing his asauchi properly, his hands trembles when there's a fight and he can't get past his memories of that day. That's why he would be yelled and scolded at. Yami is particularly scared of his own power but he has the will to continue training telling himself that once again someday he is going to have something to protect and he needs to be stronger than that.


Loves: Spicy food, sparring or brawling.
Hates: His own eyes, shinigami, hollows, little kids.

P.S. I'm gonna change it as further development of the character is needed to refine his personality and traits

I. History


» History: Yamiya was a happy and cheerful boy with puffy red cheeks, he did what he could to find his place and a family in the Rukongai poor north district. But was always really unwelcomed by everybody because of his poor attitude, who would lead people to throw things at him and shoo him away. Arisu Amenagawa was his first friend, the two of them would go around playing, causing a lot of mess with stupid pranks. But they were really unlucky and where found out by a weird Shinigami with black hair and a scar along his face named Zankoku. He abducted them and went in a mission carrying the two Plus Souls with him for the purpose of using them as a bait for a big Hollow catch with his group. And it worked out pretty well, the hollows where lured by the two Plus Souls in an old place and killed off by the Shinigami. After a couple of catch Arisu had become strange, he would stare at Zankoku in a weird way smiling on his way and when approached by the Shinigami itself it revealed a huge mass of teeth that bited his higher up in half leaving only the two legs standing still for just a moment. The other Shinigami's where in shock along with Yamiya that didn't notice his friend was turned in such a monster. The Adjuchas would than reveal himself as the whole body of Arisu was consumed. The disgusting mostruosity with 10 long slim hands and a smiling long mask. Started to split his teeths in two revealing two tongues that like a spiked whip hitted and grabbed the others, meanwhile Yamiya was still frozen in fear grabbed by the slim hand of the Hollow; watching as the entity ate slowly. But he couldn't accept what had happened to him and his friend for his own stupidity and far more he couldn't forgive the hollow in front of him. While hold the boy started grinding his teeth in an outrage burst of reiatsu, looking at the Hollow with his red ruby eyes. 'The desire of a weapon to cut the largest enemies' his soul suddenly screamed, while the boy was grabbing a Red thread in his inner world. He could hear but didn't see nor understand what the shadow was saying to him. The moment later was a fight between the two of them. The Adjuchas would try to strangle him with all his power while Yami would try to cut his mask resulting in a war of screams which had seen him victorious. The moment all ended he stood immobile for a moment, the moment he did move his whole body was in pain and literally felt like exploding from the inside out. The Shinigami sent to investigate found him inconscious and in a pool of his own blood with a black hollow mark on his neck. When Yami woke up, he had lost his Shinigami powers because he unconsciously sealed them away and was able to return to his Rukongai district once been analyzed. For some reasons the hollow mark on his neck wouldn't vanish even after being healed and the only explaination would be that it had become part of his shinigami powers as a seal of reiatsu. After that moment six years had passed, meanwhile his body grew up and Yami enrolled in the Shinōreijutsuin to properly overcome it's limits and learn the way of a Shinigami. Four years after during a sparring his sword became far more heavier resulting in him losing and falling in his depression. The conflicts with his inner self and the sword resulted in him not able to wield it again until he fought someone way stronger than him.

I. Equipment


» Equipment: Asauchi (shape: Norimitsu Ōdachi). The uniform of the Academy is similar to the standard Shinigami shihakushō uniform, but with a different color scheme. Blue Shitagi (under skirt) + white kosode (shirt) with blue stripes and the simbol of the academy. Casual outfits consists in simple and always tattered black clothes which he doesn't really change and clean bandages around his neck.

I. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills


» Racial Abilities: [N/A]

I. Sealed Powers


» Zanpakutô Name: [N/A]

» Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: [N/A]

» Inner World: [N/A]

» Zanpakutô Appearance: [N/A]

» Sealed Zanpakutô Power: [N/A]

I. Shikai


» Shikai Release Phrase: [N/A]

» Shikai Release Action: [N/A]

» Shikai Appearance: [N/A]

» Shikai Abilities: [N/A]

I. Bankai


» Bankai Release Phrase: [N/A]

» Bankai Release Action: [N/A]

» Bankai Appearance: [N/A]

» Bankai Abilities: [N/A]

I. Shikokai


(To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it.

General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Beginner
  • Martial Skill: Beginner


Shinigami Skills
  • Hoho: Untrained
  • Kidō: Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Beginner
  • Hakuda: Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


I. Role Play Sample


» Roleplay Sample: *A light and slow sigh came out of Yami while he grabs his sword and let his back slide along the wall until it gets to the ground. "Arisu.. it was all my fault.." his own hands where covered in bandages and blood from his training and once again he tried to recall that power meaninglessly. A very slow and cold caress long the shape of the blade would be followed by silent tears on it*

"You're not worth. Where's the boy that wanted to cut everything down, the one to hate the very life itself for that cruel fate. The one who could scream in my name ------- .. You're shameless. How could you wield me like that? Shredding tears on my blade. Do you even know how cold they are? How cold your spirit is now? You can't even control your reiatsu anymore. Yet you still want to hear my voice once more. Your spirit is broken yet you still want to hold me once again. I'm not that nice.. kid"

*Just like that Yami have fallen asleep in his room and everyday the pain in his soul would grow stronger with his bad temper meanwhile he trains to become a Shinigami. Not knowing where the problem was and forcing himself to train harder until the day he had to challenge someone much stronger than him who beated some sense in him*

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Subject Post 2PostSubject: Re: Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F]   Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F] EmptyTue Jun 15, 2021 11:26 pm

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Personality: Gonna need more here. At least ten sentences as a minimum.

History: The contents of the history are fine, though I would specify that the weapon is an asauchi, not quite a zanpakuto just yet since he's still training. Otherwise, I'm just gonna need more from you about the character's history. Maybe explain what the difficult part of his peaceful life was, or more depth as to why he's been having trouble in the academy. You mention a conflict with himself--write down an idea of what that conflict is, rather than just nebulously mentioning it.

Will Skills: I'd ask that you change the Willpower/Determination to Beginner. With a more fleshed out personality and history, depending on the contents this could change, but until then it should be dropped down.

RP Sample: We're still going to need one. Try to go off a prompt for yourself if necessary. I'd give you one myself, but being able to start a thread is a pretty important to an RP site, and sometimes that requires thinking up a scenario to have your entry post be about. You could ask for some examples in the discord if you're really at a loss, and someone might spitball some your way.

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [o]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in [X]
  • RP Sample Present [O]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]


Hazard Ranks
  • Overall: F
    Power: F
  • Influence: F
  • Resources: F

Comments/Notes: By the way, you don't put your tier down in your character app title. The staff member grading will determine the character's tier.
Tier: [/mod]

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Subject Post 3PostSubject: Re: Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F]   Yamiya Ankoku [Approved, 5-3; Shinigami] [Hazard Rank F] EmptySun Jun 20, 2021 10:07 pm

[mod]
Application Checklist

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in [X]
  • RP Sample Present [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Hazard Ranks
  • Overall: F
    Power: F
  • Influence: F
  • Resources: F

Comments/Notes: I liked the history.
Tier: 5-3[/mod]

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