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Mon Apr 04, 2022 9:42 pm


I. Basic Information


» Name: Canguro
» Age: Newborn
» Gender: Female
» Race: Hollow

» Association: None

» Appearance Written: Kangaroo turned Hollow. Where there would be brown-blonde fur is the sickly violet and maroon shades of a hollow, eyes filled with yellow apparitions of fury. Multiple scars cross her body, a memoriam from a past life. Canguro's mask bites underneath her jaw, uniting across the back of her skull; blank eyes staring backwards. This takes place of one of her ears, the other carrying smoldering embers in her passive state. Fairly large in size, Canguro dwarfs a living kangaroo, standing four meters tall. An equally massive tail accompanies her, the tip of which is blackened in soot.

» Appearance Image:

[Spirit Class 8 | Hazard E] Canguro 9E65K1k

» Purpose: A conflict for lower scale combatants, monster of the week style. Plan is to resolve within a single thread of combat, one and done - if further narrative is reached for thread partner via reoccurring threat, I could see them being reused one additional time.

II. Personality


» Personality: There is no person, much less personality, inhabiting Canguro. There is, however, one long cord of emotion - an all consuming rage.

III. History


» History: An angry death. Fighting, thrashing, the will to fight flickering till it went. A trail of smoke, and nothing more. Stuffed into a bag. Left to rot. Resentment filled the discarded soul till it overflowed; pouring out a hole in their chest. Rage took its place, and rebuilt into a new being. Discarding the flesh to raze it all. Instinct leads the creature to step forward, clawing towards the air as space twists. The scent of prey follows, and she steps forward, through the kumon.

IV. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills


» High-Speed Regeneration: Generally, Canguro has a rather slow ability to regenerate, helping to aide in her collection of scars. It should be recognized, however, that her regeneration rate is enhanced with her own ability - Tezcatlipoca, scaling as her physical ability would.

» Toxic Burn: Canguro's aura - in its default state - does not possess the acidic quality of a hollow, possessing a rather repressed reiryoku. Instead, the properties are transferred to the flames produced by her abilities; allowing it to burn in any situation, rather than act as true fire. This makes it capable of being resisted more easily by those with substantial reiryoku, but more stubborn to conventional means of removing fire.

» Berserker's Soul: A primitive mind, Canguro will, eventually, gain more sentience from the consumption of other hollows and humans. Before then, she is primal. When backed into a corner; the less of her there is, the higher her limits become.

» Canguro Patear: A standing kick performed by Canguro rolling backwards onto her tail, kicking forwards with both feet. The speed and force of this blow is above that of which she should be capable - physically. Any damage done to souls/spiritual beings would be far more mitigated, as the attack temporarily snuffs the enhancing power of Tezcatlipoca as it is used.

V. Powers


» Tezcatlipoca: Canguro's abilities feast off her rage, growing in strength the more pissed off she gets. Condensed reiatsu is formed within her inner ear and the end of her tail, the flames sparking miniature suns in sparks - becoming more numerous as it empowers. These flames can burn targets, leaving a lasting burn from the hollow's aura. However, its true strength is that of augmentation, the height and volume of flame produced showing a correlative change to her physical abilities and limitations. The cost of reiryoku from this is not minimal, becoming more difficult to maintain at the highest levels.
    » The First Sun: The fire burns, sparking with fluorescent yellow stars as Canguro exerts herself. Overall a 20% increase in physical output, her reiryoku causes a noticeable heat. [Requires in-combat post length of 0 or more. Can last 6 posts.]

    » The Second Sun: A step-up in output, twin sparks fly from the flames with minimal action. Overall a 40% increase in physical output, her reiryoku becomes uncomfortable for spiritually aware species, comparable to a heatwave. [Requires in-combat post length of 2 or more. Can last 5 posts.]

    » The Third Sun: A noticeable burst of rage envelops Canguro, the sparks flying innumerous in the trails of fire. Overall a 70% boost in physical output, her reiryoku starts causing nearby targets to spark into flame, similar to the a rain of matches - unless left unattended, easily put out. Jaguar increases this output to 95% temporarily. [Requires in-combat post length of 4 or more. Can last 4 posts.]

    » The Fourth Sun: The sparks shrink, noticeably lagging longer in the air before dissapearing. In a change of pace, Canguro's reiryoku condenses, further applying the acidic burn of her aura to physical attacks. This results in an overall physical output increase of 110%, becoming actively harder to defend against. Touching the floating sparks can light anything on fire, although its heat can be fairly easily quenched. Jaguar increases this output to 135% temporarily, causing the sparks to explode when making contact. [Requires in-combat post length of 6 or more. Can last 3 posts.]

    » The Fifth Sun: Immutable, inescapable rage. Canguro seethes, reiryoku shrinking further as the flames shriek in ferocity. Her aura all but disappears, skin tight - a suit of destruction. Where there was once fire is now a shower of exploding sparks, trailing a fiery napalm-like trail of acidic flames. This increases Canguro's overall physical output by 150%, rising to a peak of 175% during Jaguar, although it will prematurely end the effects of Tezcatlipoca, and preventing regeneration for an extended period of time following. [Requires in-combat post length of 8 or more. Can last 2 posts.]


» Jaguar: An attack born of absolute hatred, Jaguar requires Canguro to be in possession of the Third Sun or higher. Enforcing herself with an enormous amount of reiatsu, the flames of Tezcatlipoca explode. The fire envelops Canguro's entire body, momentarily allowing for a tackle at massively enhanced speed and power, burning through with the acidity and heat of her aura. This drastically lowers her output immediately afterwards, prematurely ending Tezcatlipoca.

» Weak Point: As with many Hollow, the construction of Canguro's body is noticeably weak at one point - her one remaining ear. Where most hollow's weak points function where they can be killed the easiest, this causes fault in Canguro's abilities, rendering her no control of her own spiritual pressure. While this will not kill her, it will cripple her usage of Tezcatlipoca, and, for an extended time, her regeneration.

Skill Sheet


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Adept
  • Strength: Adept
  • Martial Skill: Beginner


Hollow Skills
  • Evolution Stage: Beginner
  • Hollow Power: Adept
  • Mask Protection: Adept
  • Cero: Untrained


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner



Last edited by Snake on Wed Oct 26, 2022 10:36 pm; edited 13 times in total
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Thu Sep 15, 2022 1:35 pm
[mod]Your history is not sufficient enough to justify the power and extent these abilities and skills present as. Either make the history longer or tone the abilities and skills down. A proper check will be conducted once this is corrected.[/mod]
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Thu Sep 15, 2022 2:15 pm
Overall post requirement for Suns increased, durations lowered, and amplification numbers lowered. Hollow Power shifted to adept - regeneration has been tweaked to be weaker as the ability advances as well. Removed across the first several suns in regards to setting people on fire. Added a small blurb of history. Lowered efficacy of patear.
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Thu Sep 15, 2022 2:38 pm
[mod]The history you have presented still does not work with the powers and skills. What you have down right now would be a hollow with far more simple abilities than what you have provided. Either flesh the history out, or tone down the powers and skills.[/mod]
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Thu Sep 15, 2022 2:49 pm
Fourth and Fifth suns locked behind progression. I see the possibility of this character dying in their first thread as higher than most, so I don't want to work on much of a backstory. I will however cut until it is approved.
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Wed Oct 26, 2022 10:17 pm
[mod]High-Speed Regeneration
- The healing rate affected by Tezcatlipoca is not mentioned nor scaled in the actual ability. Remove ‘In her peak, what would take a day to heal now takes minutes.’ from here.

Tezcatlipoca
- The post counts for these abilities are longer than actual fight threads end up being. Make the maximum duration of effectiveness 6 posts and work down from there.

Jaguar

- Either needs to completely shut down Tezcatlipoca upon use for a burst of power, or can’t apply any augments to it at all.

Martial Skill
- If she’s this primal animal behaving on instinct, how does she have Adept Martial Skill? Knock it down to Beginner.[/mod]
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Wed Oct 26, 2022 10:36 pm
Changes made.
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Tue Nov 01, 2022 6:54 pm
[mod]

Approved.

Hazard Rankings
  • Power: D
  • Influence: F
  • Resources: F


Comments/Notes: Jagaroo

Tier: 4-5
Hazard Rating: E[/mod]
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