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Taibaruto Haru Empty Taibaruto Haru

Mon Oct 03, 2022 11:12 am
Vizard Profile

I. Basic Information

» Name: Tybalt Harr (or Taibaruto Haru)
» Titles: N/A
» Appearance Age: Early 30’s
» True Age: 25
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Lone Wolf

» Appearance Description: Taibaruto has black hair that is asymmetric, with light blue streaks, and a dark Turquoise eye color, which reflects in his power color. Taibaruto’s has almond-shaped wide eyes, to add to the friendliness factor. His nose is slightly bulbous at then base, which turns into a slight point at the tip. He has wide lips and his smile is very friendly. In his human appearance, he can be seen wearing typical clothes of the 22nd century, which will most likely be a T-shirt and jeans, or a button-up shirt tucked into jeans.

» Appearance Picture: (If you have one, link a picture of your character.)

I. Personality

» Personality: Taibaruto is usually a very friendly, generous, and outgoing person. He has a generally friendly personality. He was a good friend to many people in life. Many of these friends would often brag about his generosity and friendliness. His one and only weakness is his anger, and this he tends to keep refrained, to prevent losing control and hurting innocent people in the process. However, if someone were to threaten his family or close friends, he would become extremely protective of them, even to the point of death. He lives by the saying, “”Greater love has no one than this: to lay down one’s life for one’s friends.”
‭‭John‬ ‭15‬:‭13‬”. He wishes only the best for himself and his loved ones and friends, and if they were put in danger, whoever put them in that kind of danger better prepare for the fight of their life.

» Likes: His wife/family, any friends he may have, and “panem et circenses”, or “food and entertainment”.

» Dislikes: People who think they’re better than everyone else, people who are bullies, smartalecks, or just plain rude unnecessarily.

I. History

» History:

Taibaruto’s life was simple enough. Him and his wife were simple housewife and hardworking husband. They were preparing to have children, until a hollow attacked them and killed Taibaruto. Taibaruto was sent to the Soul Society by (Insert random Soul Reapers name here) and thus arrived in the soul society, and (Insert random Soul Reapers name here) killed the hollow and saved his wife, however, his wife harbored resentment for being the sole survivor. After she finally passed away, her spirit turned into a hollow within days of her death. After some of Taibaruto’s training, he went on a training mission, and got bit by the hollow version of his wife, which left a part of her personality in him. After quite some time had passed, he learned of this fragment of a hollow living within him, which would occasionally come out during emotional moments, usually when he was either angry or sad, when thinking of his wife. He left the main city of the Soul Society for a very long time, after a few incidents happened where he caused accidental damage to the nearby buildings and surroundings. He trained in the woods by himself, brutally sometimes, to make sure he wasn’t a danger to himself or others. After some had basically forgotten his existence, he returned, with more power than he had before he’d left, as well as basic control over this newfound power he possessed.

I. Natural Abilities

» Natural Abilities: In life, Taibaruto had higher-than-average strength compared to most normal humans. This carried over in to his afterlife as well, giving him even higher-than-average strength than most Shinigami.

I. Racial Abilities

» Racial Abilities: (You can put any customized racial skills/abilities/techniques in here. These can range from shunpo, kido, zanjutsu and anything else you want to add. Feel free to skip it if you don't want to fill it out.)

I. Sealed Zanpakutō

» Zanpakutō Name: Vengeful Spirit

» Zanpakutō Release command: “Unleash, Vengeful Spirit.”

» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Vengeful Spirit is cloaked and hooded with a black leather trench coat, nothing seen but glowing white eyes and a wicked smile underneath. Underneath his trench coat, he is wrapped in steel bands around his arms and torso, and chains wrapped around his arms and wrists, and is consumed in fire. In his final form, he sheds his coat and he reveals his metal bands, which almost seem like they have fused to whatever skin is showing.

» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: Vengeful Spirit has a deep hatred of those who would do wrong to innocent people. He has no remorse and can seem as if he has little to no regard for anyone who gets in his way, even by accident.

» Inner World: Taibaruto’s inner world is a forest that has been burned in a wildfire, with a small, tranquil forest, with streams and rivers, carefully preserved by the fragment of his hollowfied wife living within him.

» Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: In it’s sealed state; it appears to be a regular sized Zanpakutō

» Sealed Zanpakutô Powers: When sealed, Vengeful Spirit will allow Taibaruto to manipulate fire, which is usually a reflection of his blue-turquoise color. It does tend to become more red when he becomes angry, and once in rage, is bright red.

I. Shikai

» Shikai Release Phrase: “Rise, Vengeful Spirit.”

» Shikai Release Actions: Just before entering Shikai, Taibaruto grips his Zanpakutô, and twists the handle, thus splitting the singular blade into two.

» Shikai Appearance: Taibaruto wears an outfit similar in appearance to his Zanpakutô’s original appearance, wearing a black leather trenchcoat and hood. Taibaruto’s torso and arms down to his hands are also covered in metal bands, and chains attached to his forearms, which are attached to his blades,
Baabeddo ando Burisu (Barbed and Bliss). However, in both Shikai and Bankai he only uses two Baabeddo blades.

» Shikai Abilities: In Shikai, he has the ability to not only manipulate fire, but even coat his blades in fire, to deal bonus damage to his opponents. In this stage, he can swing his swords by the chains as a ranged attack, grabbing foes and pulling them toward him. Baabeddo also deals extremely lacerative and serrated damage to his opponents. Burisu is also very sharp, able to slice off most limbs without much trouble.

I. Bankai

» Bankai Name: Spirit of Vengeance

» Bankai Release Phrase: “Rise from the Depths, Spirit of Vengeance, and Wreak Havoc.”

» Bankai Release Actions: Taibaruto puts both Barbed blades together, forming one large blade that looks almost impossible to wield.

» Bankai Appearance: In this form, Taibaruto’s cloak disappears, and reveals his metal torso and arms, while the hood he donned from his Shikai disappears. His eyes are now solid white, made of flames, and he also has sharpened teeth, courtesy to his Zanpakutō spirit.

» Bankai Abilities: With Taibaruto’s Zanpakutô damage is not only increased, but he can combine the two swords into one sword, and also is able to use it as a ranged weapon. He can also rain literal hellfire from the sky. His blades are now constantly coated in fire, and cannot be extinguished by normal means. They are so hot they can even burn underwater, and when it’s raining, the rain evaporates in a 5-foot radius all around him in a sphere.

I. Inner Hollow/Mask

» Inner Hollow Name: Kurisutiina Haru

» Inner Hollow Description: Taibaruto’s Inner Hollow is a fragment of his wife’s personality. She turned into a hollow after having lost her husband in a “freak accident”. In her main form, she is mostly human looking, with the pale white skin of all hollows. She has a horn, similar in shape to a unicorn, as well as hair and a tail in rainbow colors, and wings that have said rainbow of colors along her feathers and the top part of her wings.

» Inner Hollow Personality: Kurisutiina, despite being a hollow, is very calm and happy, unless startled or provoked. She kept most of her human traits, despite the fact that she is only a fragment of the real Kurisutiina. She tries to avoid fighting unless absolutely necessary.

» Inner Hollow Powers: Kurisutiina has extreme strength and speed due to her hollowification. In full power, she can send shockwaves with a stamp of her foot. She shoots her Cero out of her unicorn horn, when provoked. She also has an ear piercing screech that would vaporize most humans, and will deafen most other creatures. However, she prefers to focus on defense. Kurisutiina can form a shield of pure Riatsu to defend against both physical and magical attacks. She also naturally has armor plates covering her entire body. Her wings also allow her and Taibaruto to fly.

» Hollow Mask Appearance: Taibaruto’s Hollow Mask is shaped similarly to a horse, with sharpened teeth, and a single horn protruding from the forehead. There is also rainbow markings covering the face.

» Vizard Powers: When Taibaruto puts on his mask, he becomes extremely strong and fast, sometimes destroying the landscape unintentionally. His blades become two Burisu in this form, which are extremely sharp, able to cut through bone.

I. Resurrección

[NOTE: This form is for 0-3 and up. Refer to the racial specs for more information]

» Resurrección Release Phrase: Come, Midnight Death

» Resurrección Release Actions: (What kind of action does your character perform to transform into their Resurrección state? This is also optional.)

» Resurrección Appearance: In this form, both the Zanpakutô and the Hollow half of Taibaruto combine, to form a dark Unicorn-Centaur hybrid, with a completely black body, a white hollow hole, and red colorings where the rainbow colorings were formerly. The metal bands now also only cover his arms, where the chains are attached to his sword and shield rather than both individual swords.

» Resurrección Abilities: In this form, Taibaruto has access to all of his abilities, and rather than holding just his blades, he holds the combined form of both blades, which also extends them to be the length of a long blade, and he also holds a shield, which is excellent for both offensive and defensive capabilities. Chains are attached to both the hilt of his blade as well as the handle of the shield, with barbed wire and spikes around the half of the edge of the shield, and the other half of the shield is a razor sharp edge, just like his Burisu.

I. Equipment/Other Resources

» Equipment: Taibaruto has an iPod/mp3 player of 22nd century making, however he has lots of very 21st century music. He calls himself, “old fashioned”.

I. PhantomTech

» PhantomTech: (Does your character have a PhantomTech brain installed? If so, you'll be able to qualify for upgrade at the Cybermind or add other Cybernetic parts to your character to make them stronger. Click here for more information about Phantom Tech)

» Phantom Tech Abilities: (What can your character do with his or her's add-ons? This applies to any upgrades your character has gotten from places like The Cybermind as well.)

» Phantom Tech Powers: (This refers to things outside of Add-ons unlike Abilities. What Phantom Tech Powers are, in a sense, is basically what kind of power did your character gain from having a Cyberbrain? For example, Shadin Yuudeshi gained Imaginary Computation with his Cybernetic upgrades and has the ability to bring tangible things into existence with his computers Quantum Calculations.)

I. Skill Sheet

(To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it)

General Skills
• Durability: Adept
• General Speed: Adept
• Strength: Advanced
• Martial Skill: Adept

Shinigami Skills
• Hoho: Adept
• Kidō: Adept
• Zanjutsu: Adept
• Hakuda: Adept

Vizard Skills
• Power Augmentation: Adept
• Cero: Adept
• Mask Protection: Adept
• Hollow Control: Adept

Hollow Skills
• Acid Skill: Beginner
• Garganta : Beginner
• Cero/Bala: Adept
• Regeneration: Adept

Will Skills
• Willpower/Determination: Advanced
• Mental Deduction: Adept
• Focus: Adept

I. Roleplay Sample

» Role Play Sample: As Taibaruto faced his opponent, his blue eyes dashed a hint of red, rage just below the surface, ready to reveal itself in a moments notice. He withdrew his Zanpakutô from its sheath, and said,

“Unleash, Vengeful Spirit.”

Instantly, his blade was ablaze, a blue fire surrounding the blade all the way to the hilt of his Zanpakutô.

“My Vengeance is served hot. Hope you are ready to be burned.”

Taibaruto declared this to his opponent, Zanpakutô held and ready to strike, at a moments notice.

Last edited by MrHarrPrime on Mon Dec 26, 2022 11:23 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Taibaruto Haru Empty Re: Taibaruto Haru

Wed Oct 05, 2022 4:47 pm
[mod]Unfortunately this character does not meet the minimum requirements laid out in the Character Template (Which should have been written out in the Vizard Template you used for the character).
Vizard Template
At present the following sections need to be increased to meet standards:

Personality: At least 2 Paragraphs
History: Needs to include 5 paragraphs minimum outlining their human life, death, becoming a shinigami, and how they became a Vizard.

These are all abilities which require a certain skill in Zanjutsu/Hollow Control/Power Augmentation in order to utilize, which are absent with the character as you've written them (All skills are Untrained).
IF you wanted them to have access to these abilities, you would need to consult the Shinigami and Vizard Racial Specs in order to determine what skills they need to accomplish them, and would need to further buff their history to explain this increase in skills.

At present, if you can meet the baseline requirements for the Application template, this character could certainly be approved with the Skill Sheet you have written out, but you would simply need to remove the Shikai/Bankai/Resureccion abilities and probably save them somewhere until your character has reached a level where they can be utilized.
Additionally, I would recommend that you take a look into the Vizard Specs specifically as having certain Vizard skills at Untrained would be a detriment to the character and should be considered before leaving them at Untrained as it may limit the capacity with which they would be able to interact with other characters safely.
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