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Thu Nov 10, 2022 5:39 pm
» Character: Lukas Ätherisch

» Upgrading: Spirit Weapon

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» Upgrading: Tier, 3-4 -> 3-2

» Why: Burst claim, Spirit Weapon from Advanced to Elite, and being affected by Rita's Asset Aura here after burning through his Quincy powers in the Ichigo Attack.

» Extra: "Fuck Ichigo."


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Thu Dec 08, 2022 8:10 am
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Original wrote:» Geisterstich Ausführen: An assassination technique refined from Geisterstich, it requires Lukas' full attention - and even more importantly, to be at point blank range of his opponent. Placing his fist onto the target, Geisterklinge is drawn together from every possible point on it's blade, in an attempt to instantaneously form the blade inside of the intended target. The reishi and focus required for this is not particularly manageable for the majority of combat situations, making it suitable for stealth, or a finisher on a weakened/restrained target.

» Geisterschnitt: So long as Lukas can maintain his focus and his spirit weapon, the blade can bypass defensive measures within its full length. Disappearing as it would contact a barrier, armor, or even layers of spiritual pressure - should the defensive measure be within the size of Ahnengeist, the blade will reappear on the opposite end. Focusing further, this technique can be returned to its roots as an assassination technique, attacking an opponents internal organs without leaving a scratch on the outside.

---This one is a bit of a difficult handling for the simple reason that it's pretty much just a passive guaranteed anti-durability if he can get in there. We do have examples of negation-type powers that do cancel out defences or breach into this realm but none of them are a passive attribute with no real drawbacks. It was balanced previously through his need to commit his full attention rather than general focus, leaving him susceptible to counterattack or surprise and to be within their reach whereas now he has the benefit of range (the length of the sword) and it not requiring nearly as much focus to be commited to it.

--There should be caveats to things like these and while I can imagine this attribute, some situations come to mind where this will be difficult to unpack. A barrier cast by a high-level kido user of greater spiritual power than him being bypassed does not make much sense, why a being of powerful reiatsu does not just destablise the reishi and reiryoku that makes up blade's shape before it hits for example. Physical contact was a much easier justification as to why it could bypass these things due to already being in the process of touching.

--Overall, I would like to see this ability be fleshed out a little more with more specifics to how it functions and an appropriate set-up to have this function whether it be he activates it for x amount of time before some downtime, he must prepare for x amount of time before being able to ready his special defence-ignoring attack etc.

» Tollwütiger Geist: An extension of Lukas's single minded blut. By coursing extensive reishi through his arm and into the weapon, his blut can be applied to Ahnengeist's edge, amplifying the next blow delivered. Largely impractical with his other abilities, this application of blut is only useful for overcoming defenses otherwise too capable for the application of Geisterschnitt. A heavy draw on his spiritual pressure, he can only feasibly use this technique once per thread. This is incompatible with any techniques that charge or manifest in the weapon's core.

---Lukas currently has adept blut, in order to express Blut outside of the body an individual requires Elite due to the amount of difficulty there is for a character to turn the technique, which has the premise of absorbing reishi to flood into the circulatory system and enhance the user's body, into one that is forced outside of it. This should be adjusted to not utilise blut as its basis or removed and submitted when Lukas has reached the appropriate skill level of blut.

» Geistertreffen: A technique born of Lukas' reishi absorption when channeled into his spirit weapon. When not manifested with, or charging reishi for Eindringlicher, the hollow core of Ahnengeist can be used to take in opposing energy attacks. While not an exact science, it should be assumed anyone a tier higher could create an attack too large to be taken into the housing, and shatter the spirit weapon in functionality until manifested again - assuming Lukas survives the damage. By opening the blade's core, and then closing it around an attack, the energy can be launched back in the form of a modified Eindringlicher; matching the output of the attack used for its source.

--Does this count towards the amount of times that he can use Eindringlicher per thread? Reading these two abilities, it feels like Geistertreffen should be the one with the cool-down and limit per thread over its foundation move as it reads as the more specialised and difficult to perform one.
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Mon Jan 16, 2023 10:40 am
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Sun Jan 22, 2023 11:07 am
Added more detail involving the function of Geisterschnitt, notably its ability to be read against assuming opponents, along with more stringent focus requirements.

Tollwütiger has been reworked entirely.

Eindringlicher has some more clarification in its distinction from the parent technique of Spukender, along with some more additions to Geistereffen. My logic behind the latter having no limit being included somewhat - the idea being that with it relying on him trying to tank an attack and not overestimating his ability to 'catch' it having an inherent risk where the arrows are otherwise a freebie. It was also intended to show the scale of his reishi absorption as opposed to his other quincy abilities, being the most developed (until now).
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Mon Jan 23, 2023 8:47 am
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So long as Lukas can maintain uninterrupted focus and his spirit weapon, the blade can bypass defensive measures within its full length.
--- Just one last thing Snake and we'll get it over the line, I'd like you to add a 2 post cool-down if his focus is broken between being able to reestablish his focus ie, the interruption into the refocusing next post. Sort of like a build-up to getting back into the self-suggested mindset before the effect takes effect again. This only affects Geisterschnitt and he can still use his other spirit weapon abilities naturally. That's all.[/mod]

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