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Tue Nov 26, 2024 10:07 am
UPGRADE INCOMING

I. Upgrade Information

» Character Name: Saint Ajora
» Character Application: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t23135-spirit-class-7-saint-ajora#158605

» Upgrade Details:

Ajora Retaining Advanced Kido, Advanced or Elite Mental Deduction, Advanced or Adept Focus

Fixing up the following abilities to no longer include scaling.

Parpadeo: (Flicker)
A high speed technique which has come naturally to Ajora. Unknowingly, it is an adaptation of Sonido to her new plus form, wrapping her body in an envelope of her reiryoku to mask her presence before propelling herself at high speeds toward a destination. Like most high-speed techniques, she needs to be braced against a surface to initiate the technique.

Custom Kido that I kinda sorta had her do but forgot during her last upgrade are as Follows:

Destructive Art Level Fifty Six, Seikahashira 聖火柱 (Pillar of Sacred Flames)

A Hadō spell which conjures a fast-moving narrow pillar of white flames towards a target. Upon closing in on the target, this pillar undergoes an explosive expansion of height and width, capable of catching enemies off guard as a result of the sudden increase in power and intensity.

Destructive Art Level Forty Three, Tasogarehonō 黄昏炎 (Twilight Flame)

A Hadō spell which collects into a narrow beam of white flames, creating a trail of superheated material which bursts into a vertical column of white flames shortly after. This attack is often initially mistaken as simply a cutting beam of reiryoku, and the followup of the explosion can catch enemies off guard when an attack that seemingly missed hits them upon detonation.



I. Supporting Material



The Following threads support Ajora's Advanced Kido skill.
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t24291p20-under-recover-ajora-mirai?highlight=ajora
Modification of Shitotsu Sansen potentially beyond the bounds of Adept, Page 3 2nd post.
Analysis of Mirai (Mental Deduction/Focus)

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t24203p10-moving-on-upajora-hiroe?highlight=ajora
Page 1, x post, Custom level
Page 2, 2nd post Fusion of Seki and Shakkaho
Page 2, post 6 Custom Level 56 Kido.
Page 2 Post 10, Custom Level 43 Kido
General Analysis of Hiroe during their fight, sussing out what her zanpakuto does (Mental Deduction/Focus)

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t23591p10-nowhere-middleof-kaito-ajora?highlight=ajora
Page 2, Post 10, Modification of Hadō 31
General Analysis of Kaito during the fight (Mental Deduction/Focus)



» Summary:

Materials for Ajora's Kido skill. A narrative of custom or consistent modification of Kido (Many of which I kinda forgot she had in her last upgrade >_>
and Development of Underworld Matrix. Shows a considerable understanding and expansion of the art.

Additionally, by merit of this, Ajora's Mental Deduction I'd like to assert that it is at least Advanced if not Elite. Having not only graduated a mere year into the Academy, but also developing a Shikai, Kido and Hoho abilities well beyond a number of her peers. Her talents were such that she was scouted into Fifth Division in her first year of the Academy and performs well above a number of seated officers despite having only joined the academy a short while ago.
No less, during these fights, she shows considerable awareness as a combatant and analyzes her opponents not just in their manner of fighting, but reading them as people in the midst of intense combat. Which I think make a case for her focus as well as Mental Deduction?

Also cleaning up of Parpadeo by removing the scaling.

» Threads:

I. Additional Information

[Anything extra to add?]

END OF UPGRADE
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Tue Nov 26, 2024 8:38 pm
[mod]Fixes and custom kidou are approved.
Kidou will return to Advanced due to unique applications, such as the previous upgrade and what is in the threads.
Mental Deduction will return to Elite due to her graduating Shino Academy in approximately a year's timeframe as well as the evidence presented by the threads.
Focus will not return to Advanced, but it does meet the criteria for Adept.
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