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Training thread for raizene.  Empty Training thread for raizene.

Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:39 pm
Raizene slowly walked onto a dusty cave complex-like system, which slowly widened infront of him. The stalactites and spikes rising from the ground being the only, actual thing that he could cross the abyss like room in. The room just rose and went on forever. Water , which was murky but rusted green, dripping down with a slight pit pit pit of it striking the floor. ''This should be good, Raizene said, while he attached weights to his ankles, holding him down some, enough to make things very interesting for him. He bent down in a crouch, having placed targets on a wall, either side, these making it so that he would have to be accurate with his movements and timing. He needed to get to them all efficiently through the stalactites.

A slight boom occured now with a screech, while the soles of his bare feet launched from the base of the cave entrance. Slowly, his feet now having moved out while his form blurred off. The cavern was around 15 miles long the targets being strone out at the end of each one. This making it so Raizene had a 45 mile relay course filled with traps and slippery footing.

Raizene's feet began to land on the spiked natural cave formations, causing water to spray off them in light debri. This should hurt, but his heavily calloused feet allowed him to run over the stalactites, jumping in a zigzaging blur as he raced down the first loop of the course. His feet were now hopping up as he spun lightly, gracefully spinning over a looming figure which shot up into the air - infront of him now. Slipping almost, he regained his balance. The light pat of his feet, echoing down the cavernous expance, as he continued to run.

The area around him slowly becoming blurry as the walls of the caverns grew. He jumped side to side over the tips of stalactites before he jumped against the wall sliding over a gaping rift between the stalactite. The pieces landed slowly with a light spinning squelching sound. He now burst off in renewed vigor. The first target, now in sight before he lightly spun at the wall. His hand opened and the sleek palm of his hand now spun into the necklace with one bead made from demonic bone with a number 1 burned into it. Now, skidding to a stop on the flat ground under the target he slide the necklace on.

''One target down... three to go.. this will take a while." He sighed while saying in a annoyed tone to himself before taking a slight break until the second target .


Last edited by Shizuo on Wed Sep 14, 2011 7:13 pm; edited 1 time in total
Shizuo
Shizuo
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty Raizene second target- Training. and durability.

Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:56 pm
Raizene, now lifted his head, his palid stark white skin, showing, while his liids opened full, his electric blue eyes, now showing. The ichor in them being luminous while he then launched off, the boom this time getting stronger , slowly getting acustomed to going faster and faster. The feet now, stamping down, with thudding sounds, as his feet, slowly began to bleed, while the stalactites began to shatter, and either grind the tops off. "Well.. lets see where is it.. of shyt turn!" Raizene now exclaimed, his form now gripping a pillar like, natural cave formation, which groaned, slowly, cracking some .But the ancient structure held.

Raizene now, landing on a stalactite, thrust off again, harder, while he had began to zig zag through the stalactites which began to shatter off, and Grind. Sadly now raizene's palid form wsa leaving a blood trail, of his acidic truelly poisionous blood. which slowly , began to erode at the structures, while. He slowly, had heard a dull whistle with his keen hearing .

This whooshing sound, caused him to flip back, his head smashign arost a stalactite, causing it to shatter, as spikes thudded into the cave wall. The black poison slick cast iron poles biting deep into the cave wall. slowly this poison began to erode away ,at the wall sizzling poision dripping down. Before, he had this time had to duck, his form now, Dropping down , as he slid on a daignal slop on the stalactites, .

"Now where is it... where is it.. "Raizene mused, before, he slipped, tumbling ,as he slid his soles of his feet out, to kick onto a stalactite, which caused a slight hardening of the, caluses on his feet, as he landed by the target. This suprising Raizene, as he reached out, Picking the bead up with a 2 -1 on it, his hand undoing the necklase, Raizene's form, exhaling ,sliding the, bead onto the necklase, The slight form, of him slumping, as he exhaled rubbing his temples.
Shizuo
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty Raizene training thread. Third target.

Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:21 pm
Raizene, now, had coughed, looking at his, feet, as the backing of te second bead, and the first. Had began to give of a illustrious glow, the third training now, commensing, as reistu bathed the cavern, causing now, targets, to form ,as it now was pointed straight up. Before dense iron made, of a densened reistu made chain The purpose of this making it so that, he had to use all of his torso muscles aswell as his leg muscles to get up the verticle incline to the top, This is where, now, a single bead was hung on a pendalum which kept spinning slowly, as he now, looked up whistling once.

"Well this will be fun." Raizene sarcastically remarked, before crouching down, his robe bottom ruffling somewhat, new foulds forming in it. before, he had, then Began to launch up, His legs groaning, As the weights durable and dragging weight, caused his ankles to begin to grind and screech some, as it dug into his thick hard bone like skin. Raizene began to pant, the reitsu up here getting harder aswell as he went, . his soles of his feet, slowly, hitting the wall side, as the rough calouses, making a grip like buffer which he used for his advantage.

Raziene, now, as he looked up slowly with his electric blue eyes, now, tearing up some, as he had, thrusted up, As he began to rise up farther, his toes now raw and bloodies, as he had , began to thrust into spine feilds. Which where ment to test his durability in pain, before he clenched his mouth .He now thrusted to the right, before he had looked up, his chin falling back while he saw the plat form. Using a huge force of extertion, a boom occured, as the chains wrattled his form landing on the patform, blood pouring from his soles of his feet, now, slowly He grinned his sparkling white teeth showing.

"Gotcha" he said, threading the third bead into his necklase, now, landing on his rump ,as the chains slowly, dissipated, allowing for him a silent but only breif respite for now, he was resting .This was all raizene cared about.
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty Speed training part 4. part 1 of the 40 trails.

Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:58 am
"Now.. comes the hard part.... " Raizene said groaning, as the land began to rumble, his form now, jumping off, the platform, flipping once, as he had lightly, Allowed , for himself to free fall, as he had lightly, began to speed down into the blackness, before, his hands slammed out , the palms gripping the foundation of a stalactite. Before the groaning under his weight, caused the trajectory of his mass to .Spin once around before, letting go. His form now launching off into the blackened abyss known as the cave complex.

Raizene, now sped up, his feet digging into the rough spiked terrain, this slowly, dug into his feet, causing them to slowly break into the spikes. Which allowed rivets of crimson blood, ran from his feet, the acid slowly, causing holes to form in the bottom of his feet, now, the blackened rings forming now. On the soles of his feet which the hardened white skin showing the burning sulfer like skin.

Raizene, now had flipped down, using the sudden rift opening up infront of him ,as a quick, training course , . The form of him now, sliding down the rough walls, before, raizene, had then panting, slammed into the floor, his electric blue eyes looking at the end of the wall.
There was a huge, chasm it opened into the illustrious moon light, filtering from a slight, hole in the cieling, as now in there, the last challenge, was more of a speed ,and tackicle, challenge, being around 40 more of them to come before it even got close, to getting the final bead, which would be proof he had finished. Raizene knew this was the only was to get out of this cavernous cave complex. "Ah great.... i hate these things some times... they really.. get on my nerves.. " Raizene, groaned, before walking towards the edge of the abyss.
























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Training thread for raizene.  Empty The Desending trial 1/40

Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:08 pm
Raizene, now, could see, light markings and holes forming , these rings being clanking ,and robust. these, seemingly, hanging on strange intervals, spikes jutting out these where strange and different. places, These being, slowly moving out faster and faster depending on when and where, it was and how long that raizene had been falling. So he tucked in his head, Slowly causing his hair to blow aroudn him, in a frenzy while he now , began to kick out, his soles of his feet, now landin on a pole , Lightly, using his feet muscles, he rolled around it, launchign off, as hard as he could.

This caused the spike to bend, as his blurring form continued downwards. The light becomin dull blurs, while Raizene's form , was twirling now, the wind slapping agenst him. "Crapp.. " He exclaimed, his hand reaching out, for ,another spike, while this caused Raizene's form, to flip around , his back bending, While using the cat like, reaction time, this produced to press his feet agenst the spike. Before with a creak of his knees launching off. His, form slowly, having to ignore the throbbing, fire liek pain that was in his legs. And soles of his feet. "... Sometimes i just cant catch a break... " Raizene remarked, Almost longingly, for another respite from this brutally parilous journy.

A light gleam, cause raizene's eye Which his form had to violently, snap back ,into a roll, allowing his knee to catch the pole, while he spun around the violent momentum building up, before he released, launchign back once more down the cavernous abyss which had no end in site. Now, things though had began to get harder, reitsu building up at the seems like they where waiting to expload. Or some dangerous force was down there . Raizene thought pondering with the interesting idea. "I guess ill find out, at the end. " Raizene finally remarked, before his electric blue eyes, strained looking for the bottom , Though He did know he probably was not even a 12th of the way there right now.
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty 2/40 trials.

Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:21 pm
Raizene, Had continued his descent. The increasingly, slick walls made for little comfort aswell making it impossible, for him to actually do hardly any thing but fall, as he was right now. Hoping that he could find something to land onto but nothing came, but there seemed to be targets each one being angled different from the other so that, they made almost like. a Course for him to, run down before he could get out, Raizene's keen hearing had picked up a wail, above him, what ever it was he knew he had to finish this trial before, it got to him. Or he surely would be dead. All the things now, had changed, becoming a blurr, all that was left for him to focus on was instinct. Dodge dash repeat. This is what he needed right now. To be one with the wind and the pull of reitsu around him.

His feet slowly, began to loosen , up, allowing for the muscles, to move unjointed by the minds restraint, The fears of over exertion .Slowly leaving raizene's form, while he had felt this in his sub concious, Now, the burning and creaking had began to go away, as his legs slowly, gotten used to the erratic movements, of the exercise, needing, to move loosly, and fluidly, no locked joints. And move with the reitsu and wind pressures.

Raizene's Form, now, seemingly, had began to straighten out in slow motion, while the lustrious bone had loosened though not in density , or hardness, but in the tightness of the muscles, from the midns over worrying. With a thud, his left foot on the ball of his heel hit the first target, a thud echoing through the abyss while, he had noted this in his sub concious, his form spinning slowly, but surely towards the second target.
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty 2/40 the target course.

Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:28 pm
Raizene, noted the thud where his heel hit home, pivoting off it with a feral and untamed elogance, that came from him using his instinct to move .In which his body was naturally ment to. A groaning from the target now, before, he launched off, A bang following ,as he seemed to skip to the second target. Fluidly Raizene, was now on auto pilot, his leg straightening out, while the other one, being his guiding leg, kicked around in a Airy movement, though being harsh ,as his sole this time, slammed into the second target. Which groaned , louder his legs fluidly, bending, while it launched forward with another bang.

Raizene's silloutte now was flying with dew and drops, of cavern condensation from him, A whoosh now forming around him, it being a dull roar to his ears, while he slowly, began to launch off, towards the next target, being 14 of these to complete before he could actually go into the next part of the trial. This time though, it was harder, as reitsu wals formed a maze going down. Now, Raizene watched, his body quickly takign in the data. Electric blue wild looking feral eyes, looking from side to side, rapidly, taking in every fact. His clarity in his mind was unclouded in this form.

Raizene's electric blue eyes, slowly foud the enterance, desiding the way he would enter without loosing speed, he now had tucked his legs in more, one sticking out, suddenly, it jerked to the side, forcing his body to rotate, curving his projectory, as he now slowly, entered the part of the course, that he now saw. Where not walls, but thousands of hard reitsu condensed poles, these stickign up, making him now have to thread through them to get nere the next target. Though now, it was instinct, his foot jerking out, as it came close to the first of the many poles.
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty 2/40 trials, the forest of poles.

Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:34 pm
Raizene, now, had long stopped thinking of where to go, and what he should do. Now, he was working subconciously, his leg, having hit the first white pole, with a groaning crack in it. The dust flying off, causing a huge disperse in the cloud, while this seemingly, was slowly getting his muscles used to the duress and strain they where under, now, his body tucking in as it jerked around spinnin on the ball of his heel. Like a dancer, or a cloud he moved, Raizene's cloak bottom whipping around ,as he slid through the first of the poles. Now, picking up speed, he kicked out, his body now, going diagonnaly into the second of the poles.

The toe paddings of his foot, now caught the slick surface, the white like pole, sizzling some, this slowly, causing caluses to build, The elegant form of this feral raizene, now Launching off, with a deft booming sensation, The pole shattering partially, While his sillouette, flew down towards the next to the poles. Like a bird.. this is how he now had began to move. Feeling a change in reitsu now abruptly his form had thrown his foot around once, causing his heel to place this time on the opposite side of the third pole.

Raizene's rotating form now, simply, as the water and condensation had sprayed around him, he had began to slide around the pole, his body slowly now begginning to feel the rythm of the poles, and getting used to it. He now flipped towards the next pole. Picking up speed as he went.
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty 2/40 The forest of poles trial

Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:41 pm
Raizene, now ,had become a blurr, his form Pivoting from foot to foot, Dancing between the poles, like a ghost, As this demoon had found out, he could also work on lightning foot work through these movements. Getting two birds with one stone. The electric blue eyes, of raizene now where alight with fun ,and interest, while he just seemed to weave forward his feet launching pole between pole, a hard lime like calus forming now, Raizene's form ,beginning to have felt once more a burning in his legs.Raizene now knew though this was a good thing, and something that definitivly, should be, good for his twisting and bounding form .

Now, slowly, through the weaving of, poles, he began to see them thin the third of the targets, Slowly but surely coming into site. A small ghost of a grin, formed on the palid face of raizene, before he thrusted off, skipping acrost the last of the poles, his form now, speeding off, as it pivoted in a ninty degree swing of his left lower heel. Causing his right sole of his foot, to thrust into the target hitting home.

This impact ,had caused raizene some pain ,The hardened target pressing hard agenst the caluses of his foot, This had though just become more of an inconvienance, than somethign that actually pained him . Slowly, he brought his knee in, getting ready to launch towards the next target. His subconcious moving over time, to gain more facts on the trajectorys, and what not.
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Training thread for raizene.  Empty The 12 targets.. Trial 2/40

Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:58 pm
Raizene ,now had began to pick up speed and durations to his kicks. Slowly now as he pivoted he thrusted off launchign towards the 5th target . Raizene's hair now blowing everywhere. While his electric blue eyes, to look Around the velocity, slowly now surely, picking up, the wet ,cavern walls slowly, picking up Though the watter running down them had began to grow in mass and amount. This worried raizene. His lower lip pulling at his teeth, worrying about the amount of water, This was a problem for him. Since if there was any more water, this ment the bottom of this cavernous drop was surely, without a doubt flooded . If it was, this ment that raizene would have to hold his breath while he swam the depths into the next of the trials, but these would be a hard tast, Since he did'nt even know what was beyond this.. so finally he spoke.. "Where is all this water coming from.. " Raizene thought curiously.

As if to answer his question the roaring he heard earlier, was, the Water above him, which hissed and wailed, as it came crashing down after him "AH CRAP
" raizene said, now ,thrusting out, rushing out, as he picked up ,speed water now flooding around him As he had ran now, picking up even more speed, his feet punching into The targets As he went faster and faster. Not wanting to be, covered and drowned in the water. this drove him faster.

And now, as he thought nothing could get worse. Raizene, felt a cold chill down his spine, as the water, logged area now, collasped, as he had gotten, up, this training exercise, being horribly gone rong. Now it was a matter of survival, And he was in dangerous caverns deep deep down under earth .Though this being a place full of outlawed and tribes of demons hollow, and other spawns of the deep .Who where savage and .. horrible... as they where cruel.
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