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Welcome to The Platinum Hearts Scroller. Here you can find our most recent Of the Year and Of the Season winners. Happy Roleplaying! --- Member of the Year: Locke --- Character of the Year: Alastair Eisfluch --- New Characters of the Year: Mizu Morikawa and Igendai Gyakusuma --- Social Thread of the Year: A Letter for Hymn --- Combat Thread of the Year: Raise Your Spirits --- Member of the Season: Paradigm --- Characters of the Season: Byakuya Kuchiki and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Applications of the Season: Armina Willsaam and Klein Schwarzwotan --- Fight Thread of the Season: Search and Destroy --- Social Thread of the Season: Damage Assessment --- Event Thread of the Season: Midnight Assault
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Blaine
Blaine
Starter Member
Joined : 2011-12-14
Posts : 3

Plague Temna Empty Plague Temna

Wed Dec 14, 2011 12:03 pm
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General Information

Name: Plague Temna
Age: 23
Gender: Male

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Appearance:
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Height: 5'9
Weight: 150lbs

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Powers

Power Development Stage 1 Appearance:
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Chi Abilities

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Chi Powers:
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Awakened Appearance:
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JJ
JJ
Rower of Rock. And Souls.
Joined : 2011-03-03
Posts : 5174
Age : 27
Location : , Location, Location!

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Plague Temna Left_bar_bleue20650/20000Plague Temna Empty_bar_bleue  (20650/20000)
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Plague Temna Empty Re: Plague Temna

Wed Dec 14, 2011 3:33 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Plague Temna Z
Comments/Notes: Looks pretty good. Nice job. Just make sure to play fair and we'll all have fun.
Factors:
You have your power stage 1 and are on the verge of discovering stage 2.
You have awakened state.
Tier: 2-3
HAPPY RPING




Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
- Buddha
Pockeh
Pockeh
Metal as Fuck
Joined : 2010-12-11
Posts : 3387
Age : 28
Location : Where all sinners congregate

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Plague Temna Left_bar_bleue44400/999999Plague Temna Empty_bar_bleue  (44400/999999)
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Plague Temna Empty Re: Plague Temna

Sun Dec 18, 2011 1:35 pm
Plague Temna Phoenix_wright_hold_it


For awakened abilities, you NEED to specify what kind of attacks he can absorb/reflect with the mirrors. Energy? Physical? You can't block ALL attacks, broseph.

You also need to specify how fast the mirrors generate, what his limit of mirrors is, etc. Your wording is extremely vague, imo.


As for the history, it's a bit mixed up and all over the place, tbh. However, this may just be my opinion.

I am holding this app in purgatory until the issues are fixed here. Sorry, JJ, but the RP sample alone isn't enough to justify the tier, or approving it as it is.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Shrine Maiden
November SOTM 2011
Joined : 2011-07-27
Posts : 669
Age : 31
Location : In The White Morning

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Plague Temna Left_bar_bleue28000/100000Plague Temna Empty_bar_bleue  (28000/100000)
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Plague Temna Empty Re: Plague Temna

Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:37 pm
Plague Temna 075

I will be moving this to Inactive WIP because it is passed the two week mark


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Plague Temna Empty Re: Plague Temna

Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:38 am
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Innactive Roleplayer!
So I'm moving this to archives <3
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