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۞Name۞ Trafalgar Law
۞Gender۞Male
۞Age۞ 500
۞Host Race۞ Shinigami
۞Birthplace۞ North Rukongai
۞Organization۞ Soul Society - Squad 1

۞Appearance۞ He wears a blue Kimono that has a symbol similar to a couple markings he wears, his tattoos are not truly that. They are markings from an engagement that he didn't come out unharmed. The fight took much of his strength, when awaking tattoo like symbols could be found on his arms. He wears a hat that has black dots all over it, this hat has been an object since his childhood. He's rarely been seen without it. Often wearing it no matter the price, his nature and style all depend upon the day, he has a large sword that has a fur around the guard that is often carried about by him. This weapon is his Zanpakutō, the markings on his arm come from the spirit within him. As a child he wore this hat around, it's meaning and purpose is unknown to many, his tattoo's and markings weren't present as a child, so it's unknown to what degree they have meaning. His eyes are constantly changing colors, something of a problem he has. Though when they are able to hold to a single color, it's often a rare one. Stopping at the color of a mixture between an almost metallic turquoise, the color is said to stop people from speaking at times. Other colors it commonly taken is, red, yellow, and a dark gold.


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►Personality◄


Joker is Wild۞ His nature in a short note would best be described as always smiling, the grin has remained on his face during the most trying times in his life. Very rarely does he lose that smile that's always on his face, a nickname has been given to him as the man who laughs at death. He is known for having a dark sense of humor that few understand. His joking nature has made him seem somewhat wild despite the laid back nature he has that seems to show more frequently when dealing with people. His methods have always been strange, as though a small gag is in each one. The Joker is indeed wild and running about, it's unknown to what degree he keeps himself. Some of the designs he put on his gear was made to turn heads. He's often playing small practical jokes on enemies and friends as though they are just pawns. However, his jokes never cross a certain line. he keeps a mortality that is almost admirable. For example at one point, during his training he left used a wet bucket atop the door, but that's to short sighted for this man. He had a porn magazine right in front of the teacher's face open on a spread, just so everyone could see the rise it got out of him. In more ways than one.


Doctor۞ A newer practice of his, is that he became a medical practitioner after a while, he'd studied since childhood and is known as a medical genius around the Seireitei. His idol is Senorn a man who thinks outside the box and tries new innovative practices that are quite amazing, Law has found many ways to save lives in the worst circumstances, however his medical nature also carries over to the combat field. He's shown to have a knowledge of bodies that few others could dream of, the practices he's brought forth have shown him to be amazingly talented in this field. However just because he has a surgeons hands, doesn't mean the devil doesn't get to play. His hands haven't shaken in many a years, keeping a very cool personality under his belt when healing and saving lives. He's devoted to the practice of saving life when he decides too, as a doctor he does take that aspect rather seriously and is known to of killed 100 men for trying to stop him from saving a child. He sent their harts back to the leader in a box with a note that read. "Your men were blocking my light, this was their last will and testament. As a manicurist they are fixed and beautiful now enjoy the display."

Blunt۞Well as it would seem, Law is very blunt and open. He'll tell a wounded man to lay down or he'll die. It's not in the most compassionate voice either, Law has shown his skills often and is blunt about most things. However this blunt man is known to be a ruthless political practice among his family and was able to show them all up in a couple moments. Making utter fools out of some wise men, however Law believes that the truth isn't always soft and tender. That sometimes the truth is a bitter sharp thing that if one isn't careful, it will turn you into a million pieces of dead. It has no remorse and neither should you when the time comes. Law is known for another trait in his blunt nature, despite this one goes hand and hand with his other traits. He's known for being blunt and rating things in percentages. Though he doesn't state it out load, he ranks things and keeps a rather low profile about his rankings of each person and where he believes they should be.

Lonely۞ among his traits, this is one that Law tries his best to hide. He often ponders about a life with friends, people who would try and help him no matter what. But Law doesn't believe that it’s possible and finds himself alone at times. Not sure of what he'll do, the man tries his best to appear confident, however inside he's alone and cold. Often feeling as though life gave him the short end of the stick in some areas. When it comes to people who your heart knows and trusts, he hasn't known much other than betrayal and lacks understanding of what real friends are. As a child his parents never really had warmth or kindness, so Law tries his best to show the emotion when he can to people. To prove the mad man has them, but he isn't sure of what it takes to empty himself of the haunting loneliness that he feels. Though he is devoted to making it happen someday, the day it happens will be magical.

Loyal۞ Law despite every quirk in the book the man has, he is extremely loyal to a cause once he finds it. Law however doesn't agree with the morals of the Soul Society at times, thinking that killing one person just because it "might" help the many is a bit extreme. For as much as they want to play god, the truth be it is that they'll never truly surpass the base knowledge that people are different and will act how they chose. Just because someone could do something, doesn't give you the right to lock them up. At least not in the opinion of Law. His loyalty lies in his code, despite Law staying out of somethings he'll often try to keep his mind away from disloyalty. Law has been known to put his comrades before anything else, he'll pick to save someone before chasing down a foe in escape.

Stand Offish۞ This is what some may consider his lazy side of things, he doesn't take positions that he would be more then qualified for, he believes that its up to someone else that well Law isn't cut out for it. He doesn't think that someone like him should take a rank of power. Deep down he tries to avoid this as much as possible, if he were to join the Gotei 13 he would just be a member and not take a seat. Despite pry being able to get a seated position with the greatest of ease, his reasons remain known. He has often said that the new and young should try and take positions like that, though Law isn't very old by most consideration he is rather young and wet behind the ears in some beliefs. He doesn't truly care about what people say, his belief remains that those who desire power may have it. Law has shown a good skill at following orders, no matter how gruesome or dark they may turn out. His stand off to the side nature is rather annoying to many who believe he could be something great. It's unknown still why he won't step up for power, some believe a past mistake has made the man like this. They would be right in that aspect, for Law has had a past where power was his drive for some time. However all things must come to an end, in this aspect his lust for power came to a crashing death.

Likes۞ Law likes pocky on sticks, different flavors and often carries some with him for that purpose. He also enjoys music and seems to be able to play several instruments. He is fond as well of Loyalty and those who display such with valor, he'll step in and help them without any reason. Singing, one thing among many talents the young man sports a voice that is said to be rather impressive even hypnotic by some report. His favorite color is White and black, thus most of the time he wears the hat and is very fond of it.

Dislikes۞ He doesn't like dishonesty, however if the reason is good enough he'll forgive the person and mark it as a reason worth it. He doesn't care for sake, this is odd one of his but Law has shown a general dislike for Sake and beverages similar. Obnoxious people are another large dislike of his, he hates people who boast about their power. He hates vegetables have also earned a place on his shit list, though it may be more childish then anything.


History

Birth of a Prodigy - 1-500۞Law was born on December 25 in the North Rukongai, to Trafalgar Lewis and Unohi. They both were poor people, with no real connections. They ran an modest medical clinic, helping people when they could. Giving all but the clothing from their backs to help people. Law was born into an interestingly normal house, learning and watching how doctors worked. He wasn't sure why, but he'd gained some rather talented skills as a boy. Showing great promise as a medic, his father even once said his son seemed to have the traits to do tricky operations. In his young life, he trained himself rather ruthlessly in swordsmanship and the fine arts. But didn't seem to tribute it to much, he wasn't really a caring person as a boy. He seemed to grow bored very easily, his father and mother tried to help him channel it. By opening a new field of things, Doctor Training, physical training and mental training. Law had no trouble with them, each teacher returned stating that the boy was a prodigy at it. When learning Kidō's his Kidō instructor believed that he would reinvent the art of Kidō. He did just that, showing them all what a boy could really do. He'd built many strange Kidō as a child, along with other things. As a child he did have a slight practical joker streak near the beginning of his 500 year birthday.

Law was joking around with some friends he'd made as a boy, Saiga and Lazi. They were both extremely impressive kids, Law seemed to of taken them to heart as both grew. He'd begun to finally enjoy the warmth of a family and friends. It seemed the once cold child who smiled at even at the death of others, finally came time for his shock. During a training mission with some Kidō, that seemed to of gone wrong. Lazi and Saiga were killed, Law did his best to save them even crying for the first time in his many years alive. They died on the operating table, he couldn't manage to save them. His defeat was something that he just couldn't really bare any more. Law had just finally learned his sword's name, being able to call upon it. He had been looking forward to the saving of his friends so much, he just didn't have the skills yet for it.


Truth be told, Law trained for a 100 years in each art he could, music seemed to capture his attention at the best. He was a well trained Doctor and Musician who seemed to be well without friends now, Law didn't really know what to do next. His mother and father watched him going into a depression, that seemed to last forever almost. It wasn't as simply as somethings had been. Law had loved both of those two, Saiga was his best friend and Lazi was a woman he'd shown a deep connection with. A girl he spent more time with than anyone, he'd experienced friendship for once and now he felt alienated by it. The only thing left to him was a set of hats, they all appeared to be white with black dots, to symbolize their friendship.

December Tragedy - 1000۞ Law spent the first 100 years accepting what he considered an important part of his life being taken from him, he dived into training and became more devoted to it. It seemed that now he knew little of the future that awaited him. But in truth he didn't care about that, the snow was on the ground. He was helping children and developing healing skills that would make his parents proud, he ran an honest practice and was considered quite strong. A gang had tried to hire him to avoid dealing with the Soul Society, Law accepted the offer. He'd been tasked with man things, though many didn't know. Law was a swordsman expert his sword came into play several times, helping him defend them from what he considered an ending most poor. However, a rival gang had heard about Law. Trying to bribe him, they decided to make an example of what happens when one sides with the enemy in North Rukongai. His family mother and father both were killed by a assassin wielding a sword known as Rijekuto. Law lost his temper something that didn't happen often, he went and sought out the killer of his family. First he destroyed every made man and person in the rival family, going far as to cut out their hearts and ship them to his enemy leader.

Of course the leader did exactly what Law had planned, sending his man who'd killed Law's parents into an Ambush. Law released his Zanpakutō and killed him within a couple hours, however something odd had happened. Law's spirit had ended up combining with a being that he didn't even know. Law wasn't sure what was going on, but within his inner world two spirits awaited him. Suxxxicchi wasn't exactly sure why the other was there, it happened to his sword who informed him this was the enemies Zanpakutō. Law was baffled by it but it didn't stop him for long, he sat and spoke for what seemed days with the sword. Convincing it that this was fine, he didn't notice the sword's emergence as he landed the killing blow. Law didn't say sorry or anything like that, he simply said that death was dealt to the man who dealt it.

Law's new powers had come as a bit of a shock, his healing and medical skills were far greater than what they used to be, not to mention the tattoos he wore on his arm's now and his fingers. He started traveling, saving people from disasters while he could. Joining a diverse world that he'd never expected, going from his home of the North Rukongai finally. But before he could leave, only one thing remained. He used his Zanpakutō's power and quickly killed the enemy leader who'd done this to him and Rijekuto. They both claimed a bitter sweet revenge, something they both had been hungering for.



East and South Rukongai - 1000- 1500۞
He spent his time mostly traveling among the other two districts that were less known, however his skills had quickly become rather known. He was know to be very determined when ever he took on a task, for a living though it wasn't much of one. He began fighting, becoming what they called in those parts a fighter for hire. He'd gotten strong, taking a hit wasn't a problem anymore, his defenses were rather famous. But that wasn't the part that people feared about him. His mind was sharp and seemed to know answers before other people could even dream them up, it was in his time here he learned of his hero Senorn. He believed that men who looked beyond the obvious could become more, he tried his best and began studying once more. Not bothering to look for friends, for he feared that loss happening again. Marriage wasn't worth his time, yet someday Law would have to break down and do it. Something about the whole concept was rather misguided. Law's training and studying had paid off a great deal, he trained at the Shino Academy, earning a place in the record books for his brains.

But something was off about this young man, he didn't stay at Shino or transfer into a Division, despite being eligible for a Vice Captain position or higher ranking. His spiritual pressure was absolutely crushing, people often said that he could could easily rattle the most tightly closed people with a little effort. Though it took some amount of pressure to make him really act, he often kept things well under wraps as a he trained and walked through life. He'd finished his last job recently and was merely wandering around South Rukongai when the choice had been made by him. Making the choice to journey finally to West Rukongai to train with a man there. He wanted to put the final touches on things, Law's life had been about training and making jokes out of things that he saw fit. But he wantedt o journey into West Rukongai to put the last touches, some believe it was at this time that Law forgot about his birthday entirely. That the knowledge of it simply ceased to matter to him.

On his birthday of hitting 1500 and one he learned that a group of children had been used for testing out a new poison, his new found powers would finally have a use. He went ot the location, despite having contracted a rather powerful sickness himself, his own inner powers couldn't help him through it, upon arriving he fought with 30 men and won by a hair. He'd been wounded pretty badly, his other spirit had begun to help him heal for a bit. He stopped it to save the children first, the poison infecting them had been fatal if it last over a certain time period and he couldn't afford to let the time go past 3 days, it had been 2 days and 23 hours. He was almost out of time, so deciding to make it quicker. He placed it into his own body, he rested in the rubble deciding to dream of a day where all this would be gone. Where he wouldn't be needed to kill or do anything. Awakening in one of the children's house, they'd rescued him from the fire. Law seemed rather surprised, his hat was even safe. The kids had taken good care of it and him, he thanked the parents before heading off to continue his journey and train.


West Rukongai 1500 - 2000۞
Having finished a dangerous mission where he'd almost died, feeling that the thousand journey's he'd taken had lead him to this point. He came to challenge a known swordsman and tactician to a duel, if he won he would stop his journey. And join the Soul Society, as he wrote this down in his soul. He and the man began their legendary battle in a place where no harm would come to those around them, their duel lasted for a total of 7 days. No victory was decided yet, the duel ended in an absolute draw. Law and the man decided to rest, they knew not one another but by the alias they had made famous. Law was simply called Law, which some believed may of not been his name but a meaning that he stood by. The man he faced was called Crow, another odd name. They fought once again, this time the battle once again took 7 days to end. No victor, Law began to feel as though he and this man were even and doing the same type of training. Both had gotten a mastery with their swords, both practiced moves that held a strangeness to them that others wouldn't understand easily.

Law began to think back to his idol who looked out of the box, he admired that and began to think. That was when he came up with a method that would allow him to seal away his Stamina and reiatsu. Allowing him to fight for longer periods, it took him a couple weeks before he managed it. Finally another duel broke out this time it went on for 8 days, Crow fought hard but finally fell. With this great win, he felt as though he'd made it finally. Law's power finally matched a Captain elite, he'd been dueling one for so long that it had seemed like an eternity. Law pondered what to do now, getting a big grin he decided to knock his power down the day he signed up for Squad One.

Making him seem as though not even worthy of seating, Law believes that he doesn't need a seat to be powerful. But it's doubtful he'll get away with it. When applying for a spot, he proved that his mental status was far above average and should be feared and respected. Law's next big journey is about to begin, welcome to the ride.



Skills

Power Drop۞ This allows him to lower his Spiritual pressure into a range that enemies will under estimate, he has no real issues with this often uses it on friends to avoid being tasked with extra work.

Super Shocker۞ This move requires a contact with the target after he builds up the electrical discharge within his hand, this can be put through his sword similar to Tsuzuri Raiden, however it's far stronger and can be fatal if used at the right moment. This move can only be used every other turn, making it a less used move of his that does cause damage.


Crimson Climax۞ Not his last move but certainly one that he considers useful, this spell was designed to make a blast of red energy come from his hand, he doesn't use it often because it has a 3 turn wait time after it's been used. This move allows him to send a huge expanding blast of energy out at an enemy. This blast is odd in a way that the extending light allows for the blast to cover a large area and cause minor burns to major ones on what it touches.

Energy Storage۞ He's able to Store energy, only once per thread and keep it contained for as long as he desires. If this move is deactivated, the spiritual and stamina energy he puts into a mark on his back over small amounts in time. This often makes him a bit more sleepy and helps him hide his true strength far better, the most noted thing about him when this move is deactivated is that his power seems far greater than it normally does, surprising people to no end with it's strength. However this move may only be done once a thread and has no effect unless the two turn time limit is met to release it.



► The Spirit ◄


Spirit Name۞ Rijekuto

Spirit Appearance۞
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Spirit History۞ The Zanpakutō spirit Rijekuto was once in the hands of a wielder who had no respect for him, the sword was mistreated and abused quite frequently. It's personality was tender and caring despite it's appearance, the weapon was shown little to no love. The wielder had used him simply when desired, growing further and further apart from him. The sword could come out by itself, often trying it's best to avoid the master. Their connection was slowly fading, Rijekuto's master was a man of drinking and other things in the world. One day the two crossed blades with a man, a man wearing a white hat with black dots. He appeared to have a smile on his face s they fought. Rijekuto was trying his best to keep his master from kicking the bucket. Healing what wounds it could and doing everything within it's power to protect him. The blade was unaware of the coming defeat, it had taken on a form, trying it's best to stabilize. Before it was absorbed into the frame of the one who'd struck down it's master. The sword was in the process of coming out on it's own, however when the two joined his soul was preserved.

Spirit Powers۞ Once upon a time Rijekuto could reject energy based attacks back at the enemies and also heal. Now it's powers have been brought down slightly. It's healing strength is still rather powerful, just it's offensive moves have lost their bite.

Reject the Pain۞ This power allows Rijekuto to remove poison and heal an injury of any size or magnitude in 2 posts. This requires focus and precise control over their spiritual energy, Law is able to perform these heals with his hands by laying them on someone and saying Reject the pain, this will allow him to pull poison from someone, sickness can also be removed. However Law doesn't use it to this extent, given he desires to try and keep Rijekuto peaceful. If the injur does require more energy, it will cause the user to expend more of the energy to handle the strain of the sword's powers.

Reject the spell۞ Though this power has been all but lost, by extending his hand he's able to stop Kidō 1-30 no matter the skill and send it back at the person who'd sent it at him originally, this move has a 2 post cool down and won't be usable again on the same Kidō, the weakening of the spirit is noticeable due to the amount of time it took for the spirit and him to understand one another. someone of a higher skill would be able to to be quite immune to this, someone of Tessai's skill for example.



► Zanpakutō Spirit ◄


Zanpakutō Name۞ Suuxicchi

Zanpakutō Appearance۞
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Zanpakutō Personality۞

Cool◄ Suuxicchi is a sword of an odd nature, show a large lack of emotions when the subject doesn't deal with Law, he doesn't seem to care about others at all. The sword keeps a cool and cold appearance, never really showing much care about other people, however for his master and no other,.

Zanpakutō Sealed Powers۞ Sadly Suuxicchi is rather limited on what it can do in it's sealed state, most it's power comes in release form. However it's noted that the Zanpakutō has the power to move objects and toss them in this form, hinting at it's true strength. It may only do it every other post however, limiting it's great strength quite a bit.

Zanpakutō Release Command۞Room

Zanpakutō Shikai Appearance۞ The blade has crosses all the way down it and has grown quite large from it's normal katana shape.It can be seen resting on Law's shoulder
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Zanpakutō Shikai Powers۞


Shikai: The Distance of this room is far greater, it's 100 meters (328 feet). The shikai form of his Zanpakutō's only true power is really simple. He's able to cut people within the room and take body parts off them, this is only done if he does manage to land a hit. He's given full control over the room location and able to dominate the land and enviroment. Things like raising the ground up to form a wall is possible, lifting up something like a ship is quite possible as well. He can also teleport within the space, though at a great cost of energy. Law does tend to avoid this path when using his Zanpakutō, prefering to use it as a last resort. The great the task the more he must focus to perform it. If struck or having his focus broken will make the thing he was doing previously cease. Those outside are uneffected by the matters going on inside the room, Law's powers can sometimes go outside the room. Like if he shot a rock at the speed of light to someone outside of it.

Switch۞ This power is used by saying the command switch, objects and people can be moved around inside his room. Allowing him to change them during attacks. However their are restrictions to how many times he can do this, the first rule is simple. Anyone other than Law can only be switched once a day(One a thread), this includes with objects or other people. Law can switch positions with objects every other turn. Allowing him to move around at an almost instant movement. Objects can be of any size or shape for Law to switch with them, it's a bit harder for smaller ones. Objects may be moved and switched around endlessly, for example. If Law wanted, by hiding behind a tree he could move a larger object in it's place. Something MUST be given to get.

The object must be around the same mass or weight of the object being moved around. To resit being switched around you must coat yourself in a constant Reiatsu shield, it will protect from the effects of it. He can switch almost anything, however large objects like cities and mountains are out of the question. Consider singularly objects the basis for his switch.

Dissect۞ This power will not harm the person physically, it will however cause a bit of moral based damage. He can cut off important objects such as the head, arms and legs. Switching them around, this may only be done however every 3 turns on each person. This effect only lasts 3 turns as well, however if Law has destroyed that body part which is unlikely given his personality. The only real risk of this move is Law injurying the body part he's holding, or the user themselves.

As his tier rises the effects of the Dissection gets better and better, to a point where that it's super efficient. At Tier 5-5 it's very difficult and hard for control at Tier 4 it's much better, but still lacking precision. At tier 3 it's better in precision, but lacking the speed. at Tier 2 it's much faster and almost in full control of it Tier 1 he has full control over it and at the same time it's not at it's limit at 0 Tier it's the best he can control it making short work of the human body and others in a matter of seconds.

To remove a body part, he must cut it off. No damage will be done to the body part, at the end of the 3rd turn it will reconnect to your body unless destroyed. Law's sword doesn't cause damage or bleeding, the injury area even if the limb is taken away. Will not bleed, this is largely due to the effect his sword causes.


Bankai:
His powers grow stronger and faster within his bankai, giving him a far greater amount of power. It requires even less focus now to perform the task. 300 meters (984.252 feet) is the limit of the room in this form. He has gained a far better control over his power to inflict damage, he's able to push things out like the heart of a person and hold on to it. This can be fatal if they are not careful, this power again requires a great deal of focus and not to mention contact with the body of his target at the spot their heart is located. Another power now this one does require the permission of the player, but Law is able to transfer people around. For example he could Mana in Ichigo's body and vice versa if desired. But this requires the permission of the player and does take a large amount of energy. Law does have a far greater amount then most people, his powers are considered highly dangerous

Switch and Dissect۞ His bankai opens up a far larger room than normal, and his amount of control remains about the same if not a bit faster. It's noticed that if he uses his hands things move a bit quicker, twice as much if not. However in this form his bankai adds only one real change, he's able to take pieces he's cut off and replace them with other things such as objects, this however has the same limit as the other. 3 turns before the effect ends, their is a down side however if the person under it isn't careful. If the object and limb remain together for 3 turns and the original piece was destroyed, they may need to have the limb regenerated over time. The object binding isn't permanent, meaning once the object disconnects and the limb is unable to return. No damage through bleeding will be done, the wound is sealed however if the head is removed. Well the user can expect an interesting story for the kids.



Shikokai The distance is now 500 meters (1640.42 feet) the power that he has gained from this is simple, the amount of focus required is almost none now for his powers. Law can use them almost passively, the amount of energy needed to teleport is also reduced to a very low amount allowing him to do even more. Law can distort the space of the room and is able to make more then one of himself within this space. Law's powers are considered at their peak now and are capable of doing a great deal of damage, things are far faster now as well within the raising and movements. Law's power within the room is considered to be almost absolute by some, though the question of what weaknesses it has remains. The Shikokai is something one merely need's to leave and they will be able to do as they please after they escape from it's cruel world.

General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Adept
  • Kidō: Advanced
  • Zanjutsu: Advanced
  • Hakuda: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Advanced
  • Control Over Spirit: Advanced
  • Seal Strength: Adept

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Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:38 pm
Reject the spell۞ Though this power has been all but lost, by extending his hand he's able to stop Kidō 1-30 no matter the skill and send it back at the person who'd sent it at him originally, this move has a 2 post cool down and won't be usable again on the same Kidō, the weakening of the spirit is noticeable due to the amount of time it took for the spirit and him to understand one another.

...You need to add that someone like Tessai's Kidō would overpower his rejection, due to the fact its energy is stronger than the one deflecting it.

Switch۞ This power is used by saying the command switch, objects and people can be moved around inside his room. Allowing him to change them during attacks. However their are restrictions to how many times he can do this, the first rule is simple. Anyone other than Law can only be switched once a day(One a thread), this includes with objects or other people. Law can switch positions with objects every other turn. Allowing him to move around at an almost instant movement. Objects can be of any size or shape for Law to switch with them, it's a bit harder for smaller ones. Objects may be moved and switched around endlessly, for example. If Law wanted, by hiding behind a tree he could move a larger object in it's place. Something MUST be given to get.

First off, you need to say how big an object must be before he cannot switch it. Second, you must say how a person can resist the switching.

Dissect۞ This power will not harm the person physically, it will however cause a bit of moral based damage. He can cut off important objects such as the head, arms and legs. Switching them around, this may only be done however every 3 turns on each person. This effect only lasts 3 turns as well, however if Law has destroyed that body part which is unlikely given his personality. The only real risk of this move is Law injurying the body part he's holding, or the user themselves.

As his tier rises the effects of the Dissection gets better and better, to a point where that it's super efficient. At Tier 5-5 it's very difficult and hard for control at Tier 4 it's much better, but still lacking precision. At tier 3 it's better in precision, but lacking the speed. at Tier 2 it's much faster and almost in full control of it Tier 1 he has full control over it and at the same time it's not at it's limit at 0 Tier it's the best he can control it making short work of the human body and others in a matter of seconds.

Again, what can you do to resist the switching or stop it WHILE YOU ARE IN THE FIELD? How does Law get your body parts? What happens when the three turns are up? How many body parts can he change at once? Etc. I would also change the limits for that and in bankai to only 2 posts that they lose their parts.

Bankai should be treated the same as the edits I have mentioned above.

Tier: 1-3 when fixed





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Thu Aug 02, 2012 1:09 pm
Dissect can also be blocked by erecting a reiatsu around your body, simply keeping your energy high enough will do the job. To remove a body part, he must cut it off. No damage will be done to the body part, at the end of the 3rd turn it will reconnect to your body unless destroyed. Law's sword doesn't cause damage or bleeding, the injury area even if the limb is taken away. Will not bleed, this is largely due to the effect his sword causes.

The object must be around the same mass or weight of the object being moved around. To resit being switched around you must coat yourself in a constant Reiatsu shield, it will protect from the effects of it. He can switch almost anything, however large objects like cities and mountains are out of the question. Consider singularly objects the basis for his switch.

As before one can block this effect by putting up a reiatsu field around themselves, this will cost you alot more energy this time however. If one has a body part switched with an object, such as a barrel or bottle and their real limb no longer exists, that part will simply fall off to the ground at the 3rd turn.

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