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|Subject Post 1Subject: Sorrow: Demon [APPROVED, 3-3] Tue Jan 08, 2013 4:23 pm|| |
☨ Demon Template ☨____________________________________________________
☨ Name: Contristatem Mali
☨ Titles: Sorrow
☨ Age: He is about 460 years of age but appears to be 18
☨ Gender: Male
☨ Affiliation/Rank: No group yet
☨ Shifter Appearance Written: Sorrow stands at 6'0" in height, his body lean yet firm. Like a track runner's body would be, well tuned yet not bulky. His skin tone is a darkened peach, like he lives in an area that experiences all seasons. His nails always trimmed, never to grow long. His face carrying a small amount of freckles and dotted with twin amethyst orbs, the black in the core appearing to have no bottom, like vast wells. His face always has a smile be it a sad one thought, his black hair spiked slightly, only touching his face when matted in sweat from intense battle. Oddly enough he enjoys the current fads, enjoys wearing a tight black v neck t shirt and tan cargo shorts. his shoes are boot deck shoes for the rich whom enjoy sailing on their tiny vessels. His teeth straight and white, appearing a stuck up rich kid.
☨ Shifter Appearance Picture: https://2img.net/h/i124.photobucket.com/albums/p28/daganaric/druid.jpg
☨ True Appearance Written: His torso is bare but his bottom have becomes grabbed in samurai greaves, The over pants being colored a bleach white while the leggings underneath a stark black. His fingers become engulfed in razor sharp claws while the skin on his back turns black and reptilian wings emerge from his shoulder blades. The wings holding no membrane, much like bone but someone he can manage flight with them. His hair now falling down past his shoulders and the same white as his greaves.
☨ True Appearance Picture: none
☨ Personality: Sorrow is a mix of emotions, he actually isn't as sad as his nickname and real name suggest, most of the time he loves being alive and is just as likely to help good people as he is evil. He lives for the thrill of the moment and most view him as insane for it. He loves women, loves them too much. If he see's a good woman being harmed he will kill the attacker, even if they are on the same side. Whenever he is in a war and there's women on both sides he tends to get side tracked but in the end figures they'll kill each other off.
But there are times when his mood is true to his name, For no real reason at all he just does a complete one eighty and his smile fades, his eyes seem to mist over, and his voice catches in his throat. He becomes true to his demon form and kills with little to no regard. He delights in the cries of pain from the ones he harms with this mood and these moods tend to be the reason he is alone. Not that he honestly cares since most demons enjoy being alone.
☨ HistoryHe had been born the spawn of a nazi officer woman and a demon. The Nazi''s had been famous for practicing occult in hopes of gaining power. The reason as to why they tried this was never known. Sorrow was the reason, a leader of Hitler's regime had been mistaken-ling seen by a demon who, on seeing her, lusted for her. He followed her for a year before stealing her right in front of Hitler himself, this was how the paranormal became known to the Nazi's. Not eve a week later the woman returned, her body ravaged and nude while her stomach bulged with child, it was disturbing to see her progressed so far. She died giving birth to Sorrow as did all the doctors who had birthed him and the hospital where he had made his steps into the world. He aged rapidly, reaching adulthood half of a year with the same adult mind. He soon became part of Hitler's inner circle, the truth of his own birth hidden from him. Hitler had managed to make him believe he was a normal human whom had been granted magical powers.
That didn't last, soon Images of his birth and even before came to Sorrow in his dreams, his powers built as well as his rage for Hitler hiding who he truly was. He had never been to his own homeland. He would whisper nightmares into Hitler's dreams every night until Hitler took his own life. Sorrow would vanish after that, hunting all the ex-nazi officers who had known his true birth and had hidden it from him. His finding them was quick but his vengeance was slow for each man. His anger built even after he killed everyman connected with the hiding of who he was, he needed focus though so he went to Japan to hone his inner beast, to cage it. He spent years, countless years studying sword craft, he took to it amazingly in the beginning and soon had it mastered but he wanted to learn more about the ways of the sword and through the sword more about himself.
He killed any man who challenged him, even if it was a spar. That was just the demon in him. Soon word of him grew and none other than his father Zenaki came to clam him and bring him to the world of his people. He went willingly and learned more of himself, embracing the demon side fully. Soon he learned the ways of demon magic and practiced them like his sword work. This practice showing him the other side of himself, after he learned what ti meant to be a demon and felt his father had no more to give him he murdered him.
To this day he roams with no purpose really, nothing keeping him in check, no guiding force.
☨ Natural Abilities: Za Koa comes easily to him as most of his attacks are energy based. He has spent many years honing his ability over the offensive demon spells and defensive, while dabbling in the summoning. As he practices making his demon magics more powerful he practiced making his enemies weaker with the Reaitsu Drain. (I assume this is what is meant but if not I can correct it.) He spent a great many years on earth learning the art of swordfighting in japan after the war as well, his swordsmanship no being well honed.
☨ Unique Abilities:
Imbalance Blade: Sorrow forms a blade that has two edges, the white edge burns the skin of the enemy upon contact like white hot flame(3rd burns appear where the blade hits, the skin bubbles and pulls away from the extreme heat, almost around 500 degrees F) while the black edge freezes the skin like the abyss(almost reaching absolute zero but not quite, almost instantly killing the skin it touches) . It only lasts a certain set of rounds due to it's a projection of his split personality and power. (I will allow the one who approves this app to tell me a decent amount of rounds for this to last.)
Demonic Snare: Chains grow from Sorrows chest as a black hole opens and if they manage to connect to the enemy they, as the name says, snare them. Spikes grow out of the chain if not removed and slowly begin to stab into the enemy's body. The longer the spikes are allowed to grow the more deadly it becomes.
Samurai Aided Blast: Sorrow points his left arm outward wielding katana made of black fluctuating light, a mirror copy of himself steps out of his body only holding the sword in his right hand this time, the tips of the katana's touch as a ball of energy gathers and it then released outward onto the enemy or whatever he is attacking. The orb can be fired when it reaches the size of a basketball but at the same time can keep growing to the size of a sports car. After the blast goes off the mirror copy o Sorrow walks back into the real version.
Adjustable Demon State
☨ Adjustable State Appearance: He has four states, each going by a different name. Caged, Hidden Warrior, Freed Beast, and finally The Demon Blademaster.
Caged: His normal state, no real changes since this is him not attacking nor needing to use any power that would show his true nature. (some fights can be done in this state.)
Hidden Warrior: This is where his hair changes coloring and his body becomes more defined. His arms grow slightly and his speed increases due to his muscles gaining in size. (this is him in a fight of slight interest)
Freed Beast: This is when the claws grow out of his finger tips, or over, and his shoulder blades sprout the muscle void wings, the bone wings that appeared slightly scaled. (this is a fight where he meets one who could be his undoing and he feels challenged.)
The Demon Blademaster: This is when his clothing vanishes only to be replaced by his bare chest and samurai greaves. The metal and wooden covering a bone bleached white while his leggings appear abyssal black. His wooden sandals are also bleach white. (This is a fight for his life, remove all the stops, and go all out to win.)
☨ Adjustable State Benefits:
Caged: Almost undetectable by anyone, only those with powers much greater than his can notice his true side.
Hidden Warrior: Speed and strength boost, half a skill level (ex. beginner to half way to adept) for strength and speed.
Freed Beast: Gains the power of flight as well as another half a skill level (ex. beginner to half way to adept) increase to speed, strength stays stable.
The Demon Blademaster: His true from grants him half a skill level (ex. beginner to half way to adept) increase to durability and a whole sill level increase to weapon skill
- Za Koa Skill: Adept
- Demon Magic: Adept
- Shadow Movement: Adept
- Akuma Kyōdo: Beginner
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Beginner
- Weapon Skill: Adept
[*]Mental Deduction: Beginner
[*]Pain Endurance: Beginner
☨ Role Play Sample: Sorrow sat with his legs fold in upon each other, his katana draped across his lap. His shirt gone and his eyes closed. The moon light glimmered off of his firm body, and showed his tanned skin from his time here in japan. His brow was creased as if he was deep in focus. He heard the paper door slide open ever so slightly, his left hand slid over his katana's handle as his right grabbed the cherry wood of the sheathing. There was a glint of silver light then a faint tug on his arm followed by a gasp and a splash of red life water on the floor boards and his sword arm. His eyes opened as the intruder fell dead to the floor next to him, their own blade hitting the floor with a sharp hissing noise as the metal vibrated. The man gasped like a fish for water as no sound came out of his mouth, his hands fumbling with his stomach as he tried, vainly, to put his guts back into the now deflated stomach cavity. Sorrow stood quietly and exited the tiny room as the dying man's eyes glazed over, the almond lids closing a bit as his body stopped moving. Sorrow walked out into the night, looking back to watch blood seep under the paper door and run down the wooden stair case. He wouldn't return here, tonight was the proof that no one trusted him. Not even his own mentor.......
(again like I said tell me what I need to fix)
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|Subject Post 2Subject: Re: Sorrow: Demon [APPROVED, 3-3] Tue Jan 08, 2013 4:39 pm|| |
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- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
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Comments/Notes: Alright, your boosting things level out at halfway through advanced, and I'll give ya two posts length on that imbalance blade.
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