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» Name: Shizi Lionus
» Titles: The little lion
» Appearance Age: 18
» True Age: 311
» Gender: female
Affiliation/Rank: gotei 13, ex vizard corps

» Appearance Description:

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» Appearance Picture:

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• Personality:

open - Shizi is a quite open person having no real knowledge or care for that matter of "personal boundaries" She shows this in everyday life be it walking around in the nude or smooshing people into her boobs as punishment..... great punishment. She has pride in her body and believes it not right for people not to see all the effort although she does have a strict no touchy policy in which shell bash your brains in if ya try to touch.

Fun loving - Shizi is the life of the party, she loves to make people laugh and loves joking around. She has always been fun to be around always doing something plainly stupid for a joke. Although she does have a fearsome side to her fun, like her brother wolfie she has a tendency to enjoy a good fight being a bit of ruthless at times.

Alcoholic - Shizi is a woman who loves a good drink, from the time she had her first sip at a party with Zin she was hooked she soon became quite the alcoholic, she enjoy pretty much all alcoholic beverages and will constantly drink until shes totally hammered but through all her experiences it seems she has built an immunity to passing out from liquor, she also seems to have quite the drunken demeanor.

Tease - Shizi can be quite the tease using her body to get what she wishes at times, or even just to mess with people. She tends to talk big teasing them about anything but despite this attitude she is quite secluded never even having a boyfriend or being with anyone. it seems the girl does talk a big game but never really backs it up.

Loving - Shizi is quite loving to her comrades she is extremely loyal and puts her friends above all else, Over time she has built up quite a strong relationship with her "brother" Zeda, she often jokes with him and calls him dumb but despite all the jokes she cares deeply for him thinking of him as one of her closest friends.

stern - Shizi is someone who is very strict and makes sure everyone knows it, she at important times becomes very serious and quite scary, she tends to be a little cruel when like this and very tactical. In a battle if shes ever like this it oftentimes means shes getting ready to beat the living shit out of you, excuses the language.

Smart - Despite shizi's outer appearance she isn't quite a bimbo but is actually quite intelligent she takes pride in her intellect often using it to dupe dumb people into helping her do her unwanted jobs. Shizi is always trying to increase her knowledge and in her attempt to gain it would happily go on a mad killing spree for it.

helpful - Shizi can often times be very caring towards others particularly if she knows them, when in need she will never turn down a plea for help. Shizi wishes to assist those who need her even if it costs her life in the process. she believes that if she just leaves someone in trouble she could never forgive herself and for this reason will never leave a friend behind.

positive - if Shizi had learnt 1 thing form Zin it would be to be positive. She is always excited and happy go lucky. She doesn't really let much get to her always trying to be as Positive about the situation as possible, she looks on the bright side of life a lot seeing the glass as half full instead of half empty. this is quite the defining feature as she isn't down very often so when she is it can mean all hell is about to break loose.

Broken -

• Likes: family, Fighting, Jokes, Her rockin bod, drinking, meeting people, friends

• Dislikes: her past before zin, idiots, spoil sports, stuck up people, weaklings, her death
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• History:


Life before death - the early years

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Shizi had always had a normal life, she grew up in a home with her mother. Her parents had been separated before she was born. Shizi was an adventurous sort always wandering off to find something fun to do since she grew up in the illustrious district of town nothing odd really happened. Her mother was a doctor apart of a special research facility called "The 15" she never hear much about her mothers work but she never really cared .... she was happy. But that was all soon to change when her older brother came knocking at the door.

Shizi had always knew she had a brother, in fact she knew she had 2, after all her mom had been quite forthright with her. The eldest brother and the child who was abandoned at birth, the story shocked Shizi she sat there looking to the floor hating herself for being the one they kept. As the man sat there his abrubt questioning and short fuse was something that scared her, but as it was she still couldn't be angry at this man. As the next year or so rolled on shizi began to hang around her brother more and more even occasionally coming down to his gangs hideout to see him, it was however on one of these little trips that it happened. Shizi began her trek home when she was ambushed, though she like her brother had a streak as a maniac she gave up without a fight thanks to the incentive they offered ..... her mother. as the bag was removed she saw her mother sitting beside her, these men nailing her to a cross and began dousing her with gasoline..... she screamed so much yelling profanities to these men of how shed kill them all. however these screams were left to echo through the air the smell of burning meat wafting. But the man who lead this group had enough, shooting some sort of arrow through her heart she lay empty .... she was dead. soon the same fate came to Shizi the man doused her in gasoline and watched her burn. But she dare not give him the satisfaction of her screams she just stood there looking at her brother who was forced to stand there and watch.

As her death came upon her slowly but surely her soul wafted from her body, behind her a person in large black robes stood, and as she stood intent on following this person they walked together towards the light. But she wouldn't end up in heaven, no she would come ... to the soul society. She spent almost a year searching for her mother, but she was no where to be found. Shizi believed that the reapers had left her soul upon earth, and in an attempt to find her followed a small group of shinigamis to the real world. But all she found was the charred corpses of her and her mother still sitting upon these crosses. she sat there staring at these bodies not a word falling from her mouth, and as she waited for seemingly nothing shed find him.


A lost soul - Enter Zin Yuudeshi

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As this girl sat there someone had approached her, his hair was a deep crimson, and as he stood there he stared her in the eyes looking at this vagrant soul. she looked to this man his eyes almost piercing right through her, this man was not the same as all the others with a sigh she rose stating her name with a smile, as her mother had taught her to. But as she looked into the kind eyes of this man she couldn't help but let out a simple statement simply saying "please don't leave me." Zin was a bit surprised at this of course, i mean how often does a random girl just plead for company? Shizi didn't understand why she had said this, maybe it was the mans demeanor seeming not to be that of all the monsters men had proven themselves to be or maybe it wasn't intended for him at all and the emotion in this girl had finally gotten free. but Zin could feel that this girl had been through quite a bit, at this point he took forth indicating for her to follow him, be it the timing or the pure need for company shizi was set to follow.

For over 100 years Zin took in the girl giving her a home she would come to love among the vizards. After awhile she began to accompany Zin every chance she could hoping to find a way to thank him for everything he had done for her. Zin treated her with a sot of respect shizi had never experienced before, with most of the things she did he would end up praising her, a factor that made her even fonder of the man. As she grew and matured Shizi grew a bond with Zin, almost love for the man who saved her from her despair. But Shizi knew she could never be with him after all he was the great Zin Yuudeshi and she was just ... a lionus. after the 100 years of training shizi was truly becoming a woman she tended to act a lot more carefree to her body adapting her current style and current attitude towards things such as boys and the sort.


Briefing before a new chapter - Shizis life

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by this time Shizi began to pull her weight around assisting people where they needed help. She soon joined the front lines of the vizard corps assisting them in their en devours however she could, despite her lack of unimaginable strength. The girl always felt kind of sub par compared to others, despite all this however she still continued on trying to help zin and the others however she could. For a small time shizi returned to the gotei under the title of the 8th division leader, however after a short time she grew weary of this life and returned to her brothers and sisters in the vizard corps.But something was seemingly changing about the girl she was now growing into a woman, she had slowly been maturing slowly but now it was truly noticeable, especially to men. Shizi spent years rejecting men, the reason for this? she didn't want to be hurt again.

Though as it has been said nothing lasts forever, during her years when on a mission shizi encountered a life or death situation in its greatest form. Shizi and a group of vizards were sent out on a routine mission which went array when a rouge iramasha hell bent on destruction came forth, he managed to severely wound several members of her group before shizi could place a barrier along the others to escape at the cost of her own life .... however it wasn't this simple. The man instead of just leaving her a hole through her chest and the life taken from her body decided to test his skills in ancient arts. The man performed an iramasha ritual to alter the dead and bring them back as one of their own ... shizi had become an iramasha. Shizi continued her life from this point wandering helping those in need, her mentality near broken for awhile there trying to understand just how she was alive. So now Shizi was nothing more than a rouge iramasha she grew to try and move on though some scars still lye in her head.

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• Seishin Buki Name: Tokage

• Seishin Buki Appearance:



• Seishin Buki Abilities:

The 8 reptiles - Via her seishin bukis special ability Shizi is capable of literally summoning 8 separate reptiles via her unique gems. These 8 each have a different usage to them allowing them to be put to use in a separate ways, the way she contros these beasts is simply a sort of contract enlisted to those who use the sword, for a few simple drops of blood upon the individual gem one wishes to use they can summon forth these beasts, each being an amalgamation of Shizis soul broken as it is this is truly the only manifestation that seemed capable given her past. These 8 summons all are pacted to shizi making it so she is able to communicate mentally to these beasts and control them with here mere willpower.



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• Powers:

Snakes Fang - Shizi cuts at the air at extreme speeds as she does this the particals in air begin to ward and twist soon becoming plasma. This plasma then latches onto her blade and is then thrown towards the opponent as projectiles made of the substance, in the form of a sort of blade of fang. this has a limited range of 30 m and a set path that is easily avoidable to its slow speed and against another practitioner of plasma user would prove nah useless.

plasma ball - this is Shizis main technique she condenses the air within her hand, warping it into an iodized gas forming a type of sphere, she then continues to throw these balls at her opponents, they do however have a certain path and a limited range, they can only reach up to 50 m before dispersing. But upon contact it causes an explosion with a blast radius of 20 m before dispersing

Plasma cannon - pointing her massive blade at an enemy she allows plasma to form at the tip of the blade. When it has reached a completely unstable level (2 posts). it shoots out in a massive energy beam, it has a radius of 60 m and its width is 20 m long. but if it hits the pure force of this move is enough to destroy and disintegrate substances such as iron, if not protected against it could cause some serious damage.

plasma infusion - Shizi is capable of supercharging her swords ability by infusing it with Plasma energy, this means that gathering plasma energy becomes intertwined with the sword making it almost an energy basted weapon. The main feature of this is its enhanced strength and immense heat generation. the blade is soon enhanced to the level in which it could cut through and melt certain metals,if long enough contact between blades are held (3 posts for her). the most sever downfall of this move is Shizi isn't immune to it herself, being effected by the heat, hence why she wears little to no clothing at times and could be cut in half by her own blade if it came down to it.

Shooting stars - using plasma infused within stars, Shizi manipulates the mass bringing down a sort of rain of plasma each of these stars is hot enough to burn through some of the greatest of defenses. Shizi herself is also vulnerable to this move it able to burn her as well, and the sheer amount of energy required to literally bring stars down upon her and her enemies is quite taxing making it so that within the area of affect she unfortunately has only a real small control of this plasma letting it fall and an inability to fully control it. It also only lasts for 4 turns and then dissipates it also cannot be used more than once in a thread making it a one hit wonder.

EMP - Shizi is able of forcing a strongly charged electro magnetic field towards her opponents in a type of highly charged shock wave, that is capable of disrupting all technologically based items to a certain extent and acts as a sort of wall of pure magnetism pushing against her opponents, This move only has a radius of 20 m and has a charge time of 2 posts before use.

Geomagnetic storm - forcing a disruption in Earths geomagnetic atmosphere allowing a disturbance of a geomagnetic storm. Within this storm high levels of radiation are felt to both user and enemy alike, as posts progress the REMs of radiation increases. after 3 posts alone it skyrockets to a level of 30 REMs enough to cause serious radiation burns upon the flesh. If let active for say 6 posts the radiation alone would probably kill anyone within the sphere, fortunately Shizi can only sustain this move for 4 posts and requires a 3 post charge. The sphere it self encompasses a radius of 20 m but at the center around shizi there is a 3 m safe zone completely void to the effects of this attack.

Electromagnetic field creation - Through extreme work Shizi has managed to combine her plasma abilities with her partial magnetic control, contorting it into an electromagnetic field. these fields supercharge magnetic items to the point of explosion, these fields infect an area and after allowing the field to infect it expands out launching the shrapnel and lightning out in destructive force like an explosion. This move has an effect area of 20 m and a blast radius of 80 m, the structure of the field also means that within this 20 m perimeter before supercharging it is filled with electricity sparking around putting anyone in the field at risk. This move has a 2 post charge due to the strain on shizis concentration to create and during infection she is unable to move.


• Chaos Moves: (What type of Regular or Custom Chaos Moves does your Iramasha know?)

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•Angelic Release/Demonic Release/Hybrid Stage One Appearance: (How does your character look when they ascend into either their Angel, Demon or Hybrid form? One paragraph please)

• Angelic Release/Demonic Release/Hybrid Stage One Abilities: (What abilities does your character upon activation?)

• Awakened Divinity State/Hell Evolution State/Hybrid Stage Two Appearance: (Same as before. Simply state how they look upon ascending into this form)

• Awakened Divinity State/Hell Evolution State/Hybrid Stage Two Abilities: (Same as before. Simply state what they gain from this form)

• Custom Form Appearance (If you have unlocked at least Angel or Demon Form's or have reached 2-3 tier, your character has the ability to create their own unique form. Be sure to tell us how they look in this form)

• Custom Form Abilities: (List any special abilities, techniques or upgrades they get in this form)
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• Class Title:

• Class Traits: (What Class Traits does your character get? Please try to limit this to 2-4 powers or abilities. Also take note that Class Traits they get are based on their Class Title, the path they took to get to this class, personality or even other powers. So for example, if a person was heavily into blood, they could possibly become The Angel Of Blood. Or, if a person's path in life was full of hardship, they could become The Angel of Will.)

• Skills:

(DO NOT FILL THIS OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!)

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Chaos Energy Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chaos Warp: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Chaos Fighting Style: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Gem Creation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner




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Fri Feb 01, 2013 7:02 am
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Wont get ahead of myself here butttttttttt the potential candidate for 8th captain is ready for checking, shall we let the fun begin?



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absolute emptiness - this technique causes the enemy reiatsu or main source of energy to be sealed within its body. this ability is activated when her sword touches the blood of her enemy. it completely shuts down all use of any type of energy within the opponent, unfortunately there are ways to counteract this attack, 1 would be avoiding her drawing your blood ..... obviously. 2. move outside of the moves range, the move only has a radius of 40 m outside of this they are completely free from the effects of this curse, or if they are able to touch Shizi herself all effects are worn off.

With an ability that can shut down basically anyone that gets hit by it, you need more drawbacks and weaknesses to the move. You should specify tier limits and timers or something along those lines. Otherwise, I cannot approve this ability due to how powerful it currently is. When somebody loses reitsu, they can die and if not, they will be incredibly weak. Remember this.


lions Fang - Shizi cuts at the air at extreme speeds as she does this the particals in air begin to ward and twist soon becoming plasma. This plasma then latches onto her blade and is then thrown towards the opponent as projectiles made of the substance. this has a limited range of 30 km and a set path that is easily avoidable to its slow speed and against another practitioner of plasma user would prove nah useless.

This may just be me being picky, but what do these projectiles look like? and isn't 30km a bit.... massive? Like, that's huge for a projectile. That is 18 miles after all.


plasma ball - this is Shizis main technique while in shikai she condenses the air warping it into an iodized gas forming a type of sphere, she then continues to throw these balls at her opponents, they do however have a certain path and a limited range, they can only reach up to 50 km before dispersing. But upon contact it causes an explosion with a blast radius of 20 km before dispersing

Are you throwing these by hand or through the weapon? Also, 20km explosion... Talk about shikai nuke. You dont specify how often this can be used, so i'm presuming this has no limit to how often it can be thrown? I'd allow this if it was a bankai/resserecion ability... I mean, 20km big bang?


geomagnetism manipulation - manipulating the earths magnetic fields shizi is able to control such aspects as gravity making it to a certain point whereas a normal low powered person would collapse under the pressure or lift it it to a lower degree and make it so their is barely any. the downfall of this however is that Shizi is not immune to this so she too is effected by it and the more she pushes it the greater the strain on her body.

Put a range limit on this please.


EMP - Shizi is able of forcing a strongly charged electro magnetic field towards her opponents in a type of highly charged shock wave, that is capable of disrupting all technologically based items to a certain extent and acts as a sort of wall of pure magnetism pushing against her opponents, This move only has a radius of 20 km and has a charge time of 2 posts before use.

Not gunna lie but everything within 8-12 miles just turned off and exploded. lower this please to something much more close to home.
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First of all, i am so sorry about the kilometer shit in there. I accidentally just put in kilometers when i wanted to put in meters so it seems very farking op, i should a looked at that and didn't so I'm really sorry Chao. now moving on with this let me tell ya what i changed for ya. I have completely erased the absolute emptiness shit, it was too difficult and made no sense with a plasma user so .... no. I've also changed all the damn kms to m indicating meters yet again I'm sorry about that chao. edited the description of lions fangs looks and also added the way she throws the plasma balls. So I'm ready for a recheck, and thank you so much for checking this over chao sorry for all the crappiness.



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Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: very nice and thank you for making those modifications so swiftly. Sorry for forgetting to approve this xD
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